Originally posted by: mehraan
ok if tis has been 4 me....then im really honured megha...one of the most romantic, passionate n memobrable updates of urs!!!i kept on readg numerous times n ididnt find any flaws in it...brilliantly writen...well i will comment in deatail then wat i liked😃Thanks Mehr daer..thank god tumhe pasad aaya!😳😆
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She has a smile on her face & a unique shiness in her eyes which had been missing since she came to Kannauj Mehel after her fight with PRC in Delhi.....She tries getting up when one of her hair strangs gets entangled with PRC's Surya Locket in his neck...
absolutely wonderful....u hve described sanyos state so well... i mean the shiness part....she was glowing wid the happiness n luv her hubby has bought in2 her life...so beautifully written...n her hair gettg entaangled jus speak of the intimacy ! Thanks Mehr !😳😃
tells her yeh pehle baar toh nahi jab hum tum ek ho rahe hai toh phir ghabrahat kis baat ki.....Kya tumhe mujh par bharosa nahi.....Sanyo smiles & says apne aap se bhi jyadaa.....PRC then hold her hand & kisses it says sachhhhhhhhh
awww tis lines r so soothng so caring.....prc will nvr ever ever dream of hurtg his wife n sanyo knos it....the trust is so imp n the way he kisses her hand jus 2 justify his words😃Yes righty said Mehr...he tried his level best to comfort his wife in this part!😳😃
PRC returns after a while in his changed night white dhoti & daushala....wrapped around his upper body.....Sanyo asks him itni dair kaha laga di PRC ....hum kabse tumhara intezaar kar rahe thai..when PRC puts his finger on Sanyo's lips & tells her woh jab mein aa raha tha tab meine yeh gulab ka phool dekha toh mujhe laga ki yeh tumhare baloon mein bahut sajega..isse liye dair ho gaye!
i didnt kno the shawl was called daushala😆😆😆 learned a new hindi word....my my im behosh readg prcs description........how adorable he must hve luked😳 😳... it luked sanyo was mre desperate 2 c her prc...... shes longing 2 c him...😉😉.... i liked the way he brings the gulaab n lovingly puts iton her hair..wat a romantic nite it is...nai?😉 the guy surely knos how 2 mke sanyo his..😳he knos the all the tricks 2 impress sanyo n 2 mke her want him even mre than b4😳Yes Mehr sahi kaha tumne..flurt karne mein aur sanyo ko impress karne mein PRC ka koi jawab nahi dear!
....PRC gradually gets close to Sanyo & says aaj mein tumhe apne app se kahi door nahi jane doonga..itni mushkil se toh tum mere haath aaye ho....aa mein apne dil ka armaan poora karna chahata hoon Sanyo...Saying this he gives a naughty smile at Sanyo.....Mujhe ek aur choti se Junglee Billi Chayeye..Sanyo shocked ..
😳😳😳 prc is 2 naughty.....loved his lines...thy r so passionate...im wonderg even if we nvr got 2 c such scenes in prc if only tis dialogue had been told by him jus 2 sanyo...how wud it b??he luks so manly , so fierce n so romatically passionate... n the last dialogue he wants anoither billi, he surely knos wat he wants...hes all prepared😆 n kisses off sanyo b4 she objects...well smart move maharaj😆😆😆
.my my hes so cute! Yes Definately mehr this was the peak point of their romance in this part!
Sanyo too gets passionate & removes PRC's doushala & starts to feel PRC's muscular arms & body by running her fingers & hands all over it & then she kisses her husband first on his forehead then cheeks & then lips....After a long kiss she puts her head on his uncovered chest & rests for a while......Seeing Sanyo loving him so passionately PRC too gets restless & turns Sanyo back on the bed & kisses her everywhere making Sanyo loose completely in PRC's arms.
whole para well written...me 2 blushng a lot readg tis...no words how 2 describe it...i can feel the heat while readg😳....... especially the goosebumps i had abt readg prcs restlessness ....... such an idyllic nite 4 the lovers! Thanks Mehr!😳😆
he looks in her eyes not even blinking once..Sanyo 2 smiles at him as if she had lived a whole new life with PRC the last night.
prcs stare at sanyo.... he eyes speaks volume!!i liked the way he gives sanyo jitters ...hes so daring n so disturbing even sanyo cant luk straight in his eyes...loved tis description a lot! Thanks again!😆
....PRC smiles & gets up putting his arms around her wife..He asks her kya hua..kya tumne mera tumhare pass aana acha nahi lagata...Sanyo looks sideways at PRC & gives in to PRC 's arms & hits him on his chest & says bahut acha lagta hai Maharaj.....Aaj ke baad hum aapse ek pal ke liye bhi door nahi jaye gaye..Isse tarah aapse pyaar karte rahe gaye...
prcs puttg his arm around sanyo...tis is so sweet...basically even a hug is million times worth living....believe me megha!!!n sanyos answer was so adorable...tats y prc loves her cos she makes him feel special all the time, his love 4 her keeps on growing...hes fond of her day n nite...his affection n caring has no limits....i can go on n on......Yes Mehr u are right buddy sanyo care 7 affection makes PRC draw towards her even more!
thanx megha 4 the fantsatic update...i read it couple of times n im really touched...enjoyed a lot...infact theirs always a magic in ur updates n tis one surely kept me spellbound.....