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Posted: 16 years ago
first of all, sorry for the late reply,
second, nice title to go with ur lovely story
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Ok Gals below is the Next Part of the Future Track Story Line....😳I hope U All Enjoy reading it !😃

Recap:
PRC cries saying nahi Pundir woh mujhse bahut naraaz hai....aur hona bhi chayeye meine uska itna dil joh dhukaya hai....Pundir again consoles PRC & tells him that he has a yojna for PRC to manaofy Sanyo...He tells PRC everything in his ears & PRC finally smiles & agrees to Pundir's yojna of manofying Sanyo....
Next Part:
PRC after listening goes to do some tayaari for Pundir's plan of action...& he passes by Sanyo's room where he hears Sanyo cries..She continuosly cries holding PRC's Surya locket in her hands...& keeps speaking to herself..hum jaante hai Abbb tum humse pyaar nahi karte.... Iss liye toh humse aisa bartaav kiya....humne uss raat sab kuch kitne pyaar se tumhare liye tayaar kiya tha..aur tum thodi dair bhi nahi humara intezaar kar paye....Saying this she cries even more.....PRC hearing all this recalls how that night Sanyo had decorated thei room & due to the kids getting up from their sleep both PRC & Sanyo couldn't live the Moment & PRC out of his frustration that night went off to sleep .......PRC puts a step forward to calm Sanyo & the remembers Sanyo words to leave her alone .....PRC out of anger & his helplessness & walks out of the Mehel where it is raining very heavily....He 2 cries out loud ...in the heavy rainfall & break down on the floor! A thunder strikes in the sky & the kids who are fast asleep wake up out of fear.....Sanyo breaks from PRC's thoughts & goes to the kids cot to pacify them that their mother is there for them...After a while both kids dose of to sleep again....Sanyo then goes to close her window from where she sees that PRC outside in the rain ..... She sees him drenched completely in water & gets a little concerned for him......PRC still in Sanyo's thoughts.....gets up from the floor...& turns to see Sanyo staring at him....She tells PRC ..Kya tum pagal ho gaye hooo itni baarish mein kyun bheeg rahe hoo....Chalo ander Chalo......PRC is shocked at Sanyo's behaviour..Sanyo holds PRC by his arm & leads him inside the Mehel to his room.....In the room she tells PRC to change & rest....& she begins to leave from the room when PRC sneezes..2 to 3 times....making Sanyo all the even more concerned...She stares at PRC for a while & then tells him that she will get some Hot Haldi Doodh for him & he should change immediately otherwise he will fall sick..& saying this she leaves....PRC smiles at Sanyo's concern as if he had got a ray of hope that Sanyo would forgive him.....After a short while PRC Changes & Sanyo enters with Hot Milk for her hubby..She hand's over PRC the milk ..& begins to leave when this time PRC catches her hand softly & asks for her forgiveness....Sanyo turns around with a tears in her eyes but she manages to get her hand out of PRC's grip & leaves the room without saying anything .....PRC becomes sad at Sanyo's behaviour & says to himself lagta hai ab Sanyo ko manane ke liye .... Pundir ki yojna apnani hi pade gaye mujhe.....Its next morning & Sanyo takes a bath & comes out to her room dressed to her shock....Her room is beautifully decorated with all kinds of flowers ...Some real good jewellery & dresses kept in a Thal ,<Then she notices a sandesh near these gifts...Sanyo picks up the sandesh & starts reading it.... the sandesh says.... "Meri Pyaari Junglee Billi,
Mein jaanta hoon ki mujhse bahut badi galati ho gaye hai....mujhe maaf kar dooo......tum jaante ho nah mein tumhare bagaair ek pal bhi nahi jee sakta...aur jab se tum mujhse bina bole Dilli se gaye ho mein ek pal bhi chaain se jee nahi paayaa..har pal tumhara udaas chera mera aankoon ke saamne tha.....Tumhe pata hai nah mein sab kuch bardaasht kar sakta hoon par meri Sanyo ki aankoon mein aansoon woh bhi meri wajah se ....yeh mein kabhi bardaash nahi kar paanoonga...Sanyo mein mar jaanoonga..... By now Sanyo's eyes is full of tears..She reads the letter futher....Woh kya hai nah tum apna saara waqt Bachho ko de deti hooo aur hume har par aisa lagta tha ki tum sirf un dono se pyaar karti hoo aur humari ahemiyaat tumhare liye tumhari zindagi mein kum ho gaye hai...isse liye humne shayad Tumhare saath aisa Wyavhaar kiya...Par tum apne PRC ko maaf kar dooo nah.....Warna aaj mein apne aap ko humesha ke liye katam kar doonga.....Aaj agar tum mujhse milne Shiv Mandir mein ....Mere diye huye kapdhe aur gehne pehen kar nahi aaye toh mein samajah loonga ki tumne mujhe maaf nahi kiya aur mein wahi pahaad se kuudhkar apni jaan de doonga......Mujhe tumhara intezaar rahega...
Tumhara Bigdha Rahees PRC......"
Sanyo is shocked & tensed now after reading the letter ......& starts speaking to herself nahi PRC tum aisa nahi kar sakte agar tumne kuch ho gaya toh hum apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paye gaye aur nah hi jee paye gaye...Hum aa rahe hai PRC ...She quickly dresses herself up & asks her dasi's to pick both the kids up & they all leave for the Shiv Mandir.......As they leave Someone in black clothes along with a few more men in the same dress behind this man follow Sanyo & the kids Sahi Raath..... Sanyo reaches the Shiv mandir & gets down quickly ..She looks all around but doesn't find PRC any where..... Now she gets even more tensed & tears roll down her eyes & she starts blabbering to herself kahin usse kuch ho toh nahi gaya....PRC tum kaha hooo....When she suddenly turns around she sees 2 Men in black dress holding Talwaar on the 2 dasi's neck ....who had been holding Rajkumar Veer & Rajkumari Kushboo in their arms.....all scared....Then she notices a 3rd man dressed in black standing with his back towards Sanyo between the 2 dasi's ......He gives out a big Laugh looking at the scared Dasi's & both the kids cries......He removes his black cloth from his face & turns towards Sanyo....who is shocked at the very site of her kids being in danger.....Sanyo in anger questions this man..& says Tum ....Tumhari himmat kaise huye humare bachho ko haath laga ne ki.....Ghori smirks at Sanyo's guts & says..Maharani Sanyo ko Ghori ka Salaam.....Sanyo looks at him with Disgust...Ghori says .....Humari dil hi kwaahish thai aapse akele mein milne ki.....Sab sach hi kehte hai aap bahut kubsoorat hai.....saying this he starts walking towards Sanyo ..Sanyo tells him off Kabardaar joh ek kadum bhi aage badaya..hum tumhe maar dale gaye...Ghori keeps smirking & keeps walking towards Sanyo....Ghori says lekin aaj kuch bhi jo jaye hum tumhe aur in dono bachho ko zinda nahi choodhe gaye..Maharaj PRC se bahut saare hisaab chutaye karne hai....aur woh sab ek hi baar mein tum teenoo ki maut se ho jaye gaye....Then he raises his sword to kill Sanyo when a hand comes & stops him......Its none other than PRC.....Sanyo looks at PRC all with sacred expressions....PRC pushes ghori away & Pundir & one of Kannauj Sainik kill the men who were holding the 2 Dasi's by slitting their necks from the back.....Tumhari himmat kaise huye Ghori meri Sanyo ko haat lagane ki..Aaj mein tumhe zinda nahi chooduga....A fight breaks out with 2 talwars ...One Talwar held by PRC & the other by Ghori....Both keep fighting & pushing one another turn by turn & they both land up outside the Shiv Mandir...as PRC is about to strike Ghori Tadar Khan.... Ghori's Senapati comes & strikes PRC from the back. with his Talwaar....on his arm...Seeing this Pundir & Kannauj Sainiks run to help PRC ...but by then Ghori & Tadar Khan manage to make an exit from that place....Seeing PRC hurt Sanyo runs & hold's PRC in her arms as PRC falls on the ground due to the injury....Seeing Sanyo dressed in his send clothes PRC has a smile.....& says to Sanyo tumne mujhe maaf kar diya nah.....& Sanyo with teary eyes smiles & nods her head in yes....Pundir & Sanyo help PRC get back to Kannauj Mehel...where the vaid..treats him in Sanyo's room....Jaichand & Nayantara are also present there..Jaichand thanks PRC for saving Sanyo & Kids...when PRC cuts him off saying kya yeh teenoon humare kuch nahi lagte Maharaj..Hum in teenoon se bahut pyaar karte hai .....aur in teenoon ke bagaair nahi jee sakte..Sanyo hearing this lowers her head & begins to sob ....Seeing this PRC raises her head & wipes her tears with his fingers & says Junglee Billi.....all start laughing at what PRC called Sanyo..... after a while they all leave Sanyo & PRC alone with both kids in the room....😳😃
Precap:
Sanyo apologising to PRC for her harsh behaviour towards him......PRC stopping her from saying anything futher..An emotinal moment between the two....PRC playing with both his kids....& telling them how bad a father & husband he is & he asking for their forgiveness to him.....Nayantara taking the Kids away to her bedroom for one night.....PRC & Sanyo coming close to each other once again ......Vaishali returning to Kannauj & meeting up with PRC Sanyo & the kids.... Pundir & Vaishali falling in luv at their very 1st meeting....Pratha & Samar's moments ...PRC Sanyo returning to Delhi with Rajkumar Veer & Rajkumari Kushboo...PRC remebering his Dad Someshwar! Chand & Karnataki confess their love....& Arjun & Maya return to Delhi after the yatra! Chand & Pundir's wedding fixed with Karnataki & Vaishali!
Gals Pls. donot continue as I have still a lot of story telling left..Well the Next Update will be on coming Sunday 26th April '09 by 1:30 AM mid-night !😳😃

wow, lovely, awesome, fabulous, and wonderful update,
sorry for the late reply but ur update was mind blowing and outstanding
i am waiting eagerly for the romance
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks Shona dear for liking the update buddy!😳😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
megha di when r u writing the next update...........I m waiting 4 that romantic night of PRC n sanyo!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow, lovely, awesome, fabulous, and wonderful update, 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
didi jaan kaha hai aap
can't wait for the romance
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks Rumi dear for liking the update buddy! Kalyani & Shona sweetie the update will be up by tomorrow night!😳😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Ok Gals below is the Next Part of the Future Track Story Line....😳I hope U All Enjoy reading it !😃

Recap:
Jaichand thanks PRC for saving Sanyo & Kids...when PRC cuts him off saying kya yeh teenoon humare kuch nahi lagte Maharaj..Hum in teenoon se bahut pyaar karte hai .....aur in teenoon ke bagaair nahi jee sakte..Sanyo hearing this lowers her head & begins to sob ....Seeing this PRC raises her head & wipes her tears with his fingers & says Junglee Billi.....all start laughing at what PRC called Sanyo..... after a while they all leave Sanyo & PRC alone with both kids in the room....😳😃
Next Part:
After everyone is left...Sanyo gives PRC haldi wala milk so that PRC gets a bit relieved from his wound's pain....But as PRC raises his hand to get hold of the glass he shouts in pain ahhhhhhhhhh & holds his arm with his hand...Sanyo sees this & asks him bahut dard ho raha hai...Seeing the concern in Sanyo's eyes for him he replis itna nahi jinta meine apne bachpane mein aakar tumhe diya...Sanyo then takes the glass & feeds PRC the milk...While she is doing so...PRC keeps staring at Sanyo & enjoys the luv, affection & attention that he was recieveing from his sweet wife....After he has finished drinking milk Sanyo asks him to sleep as it will help healing his wounds faster.....She puts a blanket over PRC is about to leave when PRC calls her mujhe akela chod kar mat jao nah.....Mujhe bahut darr lagta hai jab mein tumhe apne saamne nahi pata....Sanyo smiles at PRC's words....& turns & looks at him....Then she comes & sits besides PRC & strokes his hair & tells him ki aaj ke baad mein tumhe kabhi akela chodkar nahi jaoongi...tum kahoo gaye bhi tab bhi nahii....PRC smiles at Sanyo & doses off to sleep.....After some time when PRC is in deep sleep Sanyo thinks of leaving ... As she gets up she sees PRC holding her hand tigthly..She tries freeing her hand but to no use....Then she sits down on the ground near PRC's bed.....& she continuously stares at PRC with luv & affection & 2 doses off to sleep..Its next morning....PRC wakes up to find Sanyo sleeping on the ground next to him....He smiles at her & kisses her on one side of her cheek......Then lets her hand free which he had held very tight all night.....As he gets up......he sees both the kids awake.....& smiles at both of them....He picks up both of them simultaneously in both his arms....& kisses them on their forehead...one by one....A tear drops from his eyes as he notices that both kids at extremely happy as their father's had held them in his strong arms...He tells both of them..kya aapko pata hai hum bahut bure Pita hai aur bahut bure Pati bhi...At this kids smile more at him.....par aap dono toh iss duniya ke sabse acche bachhe hai nah...kya aap dono hume maaf nahi kare gaye....both kids stare at him with their big eyes & a quiet look on their faces...as if understanding what their father was telling them......Then suddenly, they both laugh loudly together at PRC ...PRC is quiet amused at their behaviour..as if together they were pranking their father that they would not forgive him for his behaviour.....PRC 2 then smiles at them & says aapki muskaan bata rahi hai ki aapne hume maaf ka diya hai.....He puts both the kids back into their cot & turns to see Sanyo staring at him with her big eyes & smile on her face...Before PRC could say anything to her she leaves to bathe & get dressed for the morning Aarti.....PRC nods his head with a smile & he 2 leave to do his Surya namaskar .....PRC after doing Surya Namaskar returns to his room where Sanyo is dressing herself up......She is about to put Sindoor in her maang when PRC comes & stops her hand..Sanyo looks at PRC..PRC takes the Sindoor's dibbi from Sanyo's hands & fills Sanyo's mang with the sindoor....Seeing PRC's Love ....Sanyo has tears of joy in her eyes & she gets up from the dressing sofa & hugs PRC & starts crying .....& asks for PRC's forgiveness.....& says ki wohhhh humme gussa aa gaya tha isse liye tumhe bina bataye yaha chale aaye..humme aisa nahi karna chaye tha PRC.... hum sach mein pagal hai..PRC smiles at Sanyo's words & says woh toh hai.....Sanyo leaves PRC with a jerk & says kya kya kaha tumne hum.....PRC retaliates by moving away from Sanyo mein kab.....tum hi keh rahe ho....ki tum.....Sanyo then tells PRC achaaa.....rukho..yahi ruko tum abhi batate hai tumhe..Sanyo picks up a stick & begins chasing PRC in her room....when one of the dasi's comes & interrupts PRC Sanyo play of this cat & mouse chase & says to Sanyo..Maharani Nayantara aap ko bula rahe hai....Sanyo tells the dasi ok....she will come along with her....but as she is about to leave she turns & looks at PRC tumhe toh hum baad mein dekh lenge....Bighdhe Rahees ....PRC keeps smiling & inturn says dekh lena Junglee Billi....Sanyo enters Nayantara's room......She greets Sanyo & says acha hua beti joh aap abhi aa gayee hum aapse ek bahut zaroori baat karna chate thai..Sanyo is confused & says..aise kya baat hai Maa....Naynatara a bit hesitent...says hum jaante hai ki jab se aap Maa bani hai..aapki zimedari bachho ke prati badh gaye hai....Aapka jyaada se jyaada waqt woh leh lete hai.....Par beti aapko yeh nahi bhoolna chayeye ki aapka farz sirf Baccho ke prati hi nahi balki..PRC aur Delhi ke prati bhi hai....Sanyo is still confused as to what her mother is talking about....Nayantara carries on & says aapko kya lagta hai hum aur aapke pitaji nahi jaante ki aap PRC se jhgadaa karke usse bina bataye yaha aa gaye....Sanyo is shocked at what her mother just said..Sanyo asks her mother as to how she came to know about this.....Nayantara then tells her that her expressions & behaviour on her arrival in Kannauj said it all..& Jaichand became sure when she kicked PRC out of her bedroom....He became really worried about your behaviour towards PRC but when he spoke to PRC he assured Maharaj Jaichand that he will do anything for your forgiveness & that u 2 will forgive him.....Nayantara tells Sanyo ki yeh toh bahut acchi baat hai ki aap ek acchi Maa banne ki koshish kar rahe hai..par yeh karte karte aap yeh mat bhool jayega ki aap ek Patni aur Delhi ki Maharani bhi hai.....Sanyo smiles at Nayantara & says hum samajh rahe hai Maa aap kya kehna chahate hai..aur aap chinta mat ki jeye hum aaj ke baad PRC ko koi shikaayat ka maukaa nahi degaye......Nayantara smiles at her daughter & both of them hug each other......Sanyo then tells her mother hesitently...Maa kya aap aaj raat ke liye dono baccho ko apne saath rakh lengaye...Nayantara smiles & says haa kyun nahi humme toh un dono ke saath bahut acha lagta hai.....Sanyo then tells her that by eveing she will come & handover the kids to her......In the meanwhile PRC & Jaichand go to the shikar greah & enjoy shikar for the day before returing to Kannauj Mehel........After a long day's shikar PRC returns to his room .....He finds the door of his room closed..He has a confused look as there were no gaurds outside Sanyo's room ....neither he could see any dasi's in & around the entrance of Sanyo room & corridor....he moved on & opened the door..to see hundreds of diya's lit......in & aroun the room...The room was beautifully decorated with all kinds of flowers &....there was a unquie sweet smell of itra in the room.....He looked around in the room but couldn't find anyone....neither Sanyo was there nor was his kids in their cot...He got all the more confused...when his attention was dran by a window which was opening & closing due to the winds blowing outside the Mehel .....As PRC went near the window he heard the voice of a payal in the room.....Sanyo had just bathed & come out wearing a white night dress with her shirngaar done with pink carnations flowers..Her hair was wet.....& PRC was completely lost at the very 1st sight of his wife...dressed in such a manner.....PRC started walking towards Sanyo who was busy..drying her wet hair & lost in the thoughts of her hubby with a shy smile on her face .....not knowing that her husband was present in the room....... When PRC came very near to Sanyo..... Sanyo saw his shadow in the mirror & was a little shocked & so she turned suddenly to face PRC...Sanyo said..Aap..aap kab aaye with her eyes not looking in PRC's eyes.....but at the ground as she was feeling a bit embarrassed at her dressing..She tried covering herself nicely....with the dupatta of her night dress when PRC catches her hand & cluches his fingers around her fingers & replies tab jab tum apne yeh gheela kheesho ko shukha rahe thai.....Sanyo smiles shyly & says hum kapde badalkar aate hai..when PRC stops her & says koi zaroorat nahi hai...tum Iss Libaas mein aur inn phoolon ke ghenoo mein bhi tum bahut kubsuraat lag rahe ho.....Tumhe aaj Dekha toh aisa laga ki .......Iss Kamre ke hazaaroon phoolon ke beech mein bhi tum Iss duniya ka sabse kubsoorat phool ho...aur hum bahut khush naseeb hai ki uss upar wale neh yeh phool humare jholi mein dhala hai.....Sanyo tries breaking from PRC's hands...but......to no use.....PRC keeps giving a shy Sanyo naughty smiles & asks her yeh sab aapne kiya.....Sanyo now out of embarressment says nods her head in yes & says woh Maa ne kaha ki hum jitna khayal bachho ka rakhte hai utna kayal aapki khushi ka bhi rakhna chayeye..... kyunki humme sirf ek achi maa aur acchi maharani hi nahi balki ek acchi patni bhi banaa chayeye....iss liye humne..yeh sab..PRC smiles at her wife's innocence & hugs her & tells her ki aap iss duniya ki sabse acchi patni hai....Sanyo smiles & hides her face in PRC's chest....PRC after a while enquries about the kids..Sanyo tells him that Maa took them away for night so that we don't get dissssss.....PRC now smiles broadly at Sanyo & gets close to her & say in her ears Sachhhhhhhhhhh mein aapko humara itna khayal..hai...aur kyaa aap sach mein humse itna pyaar karti...hai.....Sanyo smiles & nods her head.....Sanyo & PRC hold each other's hand & go & sit in the balcony on a jhula together....Sanyo puts her head on PRC's shoulder & PRC puts his one hand around Sanyo's shoulder & ......with his other hand holds Sanyo's other hand .......They both look at the moon & then get lost in each other's eyes......PRC runs his fingers through Sanyo's cheeks & her lips...Then as he tries coming more close to Sanyo...Sanyo just pushes him away & goes & stands near a pillar....PRC comes & stands behind Sanyo & moves her long wet hair to one side of her neck & kisses her on her neck....Sanyo shruggles & moves away again....but this time PRC gets hold of her by her hand & he pushes her towards the pillar & holds her very tightly by her waist.....Sanyo tries freeing herself....but PRC tighten his grip even more.....Sanyo shyly looks up in her husbands eyes....PRC stares at her with naughty looks ....Sanyo gets lost in her husbands loving looks & stops freeing herself from PRC's grip.....Sanyo now herself begins to run her hands on PRC's arms & shoulder...PRC one last time smiles at her & then kisses her.....Then he picks her up & makes her lay on the bed full of rose pettals.....Sanyo tells PRC Aapko pata hai aap bahut jyaada natkhat hai Maharaj.....PRC tells Sanyo acha....lekin humne toh abhi tak koi natkhatpan aapke saath kiya hi nahi.....Sanyo tells PRC acha..toh abhi joh aapne hume chuaaa woh kya tha...PRC again gives a naughty smile to Sanyo & says....wohhhh woh toh sirf shuruwat thai..abhi toh poori raat baki hai....aap aagaye aagaye dekhiyega hum aapke saath kya kya karengaye.....Sanyo cheeks by now are completely red out of embarressment...She hugs PRC tightly.....PRC too hugs her back.....PRC then gets up & blows away all the diya's near their bed & they both dose off to bed.......😳😆
Precap:
PRC & Sanyo next morning after their 1st night together at Kannauj Mehel ...Vaishali returning to Kannauj & meeting up with PRC Sanyo & the kids....On one hand... Nayantara teasing Sanyo about the night......& on the other hand Pundir Teasing PRC about PRC spending the night with Sanyo......Pundir & Vaishali falling in luv at their very 1st meeting....Pratha & Samar's moments ...PRC Sanyo returning to Delhi with Rajkumar Veer & Rajkumari Kushboo...PRC remebering his Dad Someshwar! Chand & Karnataki confess their love....& Arjun & Maya return to Delhi after the yatra! Chand & Pundir's wedding fixed with Karnataki & Vaishali!
Gals Pls. donot continue as I have still a lot of story telling left..Well the Next Update will be on coming Sunday 3rd May '09 by 1:30 AM mid-night !😳😃
Edited by meghaparti - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow megha di...........it was so beautiful!!!...........very nice update..........I was imagining how Sanyo must have been luked wearing that night dress n ornaments made of flowers n how would PRC had engrossed in her!!!!!!!.............wow!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow👏.Wonderful update.U described it so beautiful.I'm totally speechless.
It's so romantic😳.Very good written it.

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