EPISODE @ 2: Operation of Tempting Mona starts

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guys, Before i come up with the second episode, those who miss the first one

here is the link...
****************************************** Second Episode ********************************************
@ college:
Next day as usual all the boys in the class were discussing about the girls in the college;
when the topic went on MONA. One boy said, "I pity her husband he is gonna have tough time with this girl".
Another boy said, "The person who makes her smile will be an extraordinarily talented person because
she is such a bad tempered girl" One jumped up and said, "Is there anybody who is ready for a challenge?"
Everyone asked "what will be the challenge and the bet?" He said, "1000 bugs" "What's the challenge?" everyone asked.
He said, "The challenge is to befriend to Miss. Long face". Since the bet and challenge was attractive
I was interested in trying it; so I took up the challenge.
Operation STARTS NOW
I thought of a plan to befriend her and as per my plan I did not attend the entire day's class the next Monday. On Tuesday when I went to class I asked my friends, "What were the assignments or records that were given yesterday?"
They said, "The Chemistry record need to be completed till date and the deadline to submit for corrections is on Friday"
I said, "Oh, just three days for Friday. Has anybody completed the record?"
They said, "No, not yet. We have lot of experiments pending to be completed"
I went to MONA and said, "Hi MONA"
She was writing something and when she heard me, she raised her head and looked at me sternly and asked, "What?"
I asked, "Have you completed the chemistry record?"
Sternly she said, "Yes"
I said, "I did not attend the last chemistry class and I heard that we need to submit the record by this Friday. Nobody else in the class has completed it so it would be great if you could lend me your record. I'll return it tomorrow".
With lots of hesitation she gave me the record and in a warning tone she said, "Handle it carefully and return it tomorrow without fail"..
I took the record notebook from her and intentionally left it at home on the day I promised to return back in order to develop friendship. I was so impressed by the way she has maintained it. Her handwriting was beautiful and the highlighting & markings, presentation of the record was mind blowing. I liked her record and I liked her too, but she was a mystery. I was curious to find out the secret behind her callous nature.
On Wednesday she asked me, "Where is my record?"
"Your presentation skill is very impressive" I said.
She asked, "Where is my record?"
"I complimented about your record" I said 😆
She said, "I don't need your compliment, I need my record?"
"I didn't complete it yet, shall I give it tomorrow?" I asked
"I need it by tomorrow without fail" furiously she said and turned to leave my desk.
"Can you remind me in the morning so I won't forget? Please and this is my number" saying this I wrote my number on a piece of paper and gave it to her as she was about to leave.
She plucked the paper and walked off rapidly without saying anything. I knew this was the right way to get her number.
On Thursday morning she called me early in the morning and said, "MONA here, called you to remind about the record book" saying this she disconnected the call.
As soon as I came to the class she asked, "My record book"...
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Note: Still No name to hero...suggest me some good name to hero...( already had 3 options: Prem, Rahul and anaadi )
Dont forgot to press like button, if you really like it and also suggestions are always welcomed..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I like both the names: Rahul and Prem.
But I would prefer Veer since he was ready to take the challenge and he seems to have a strong personality. So, I would suggest VEER.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shtngstrx18

I like both the names: Rahul and Prem.

But I would prefer Veer since he was ready to take the challenge and he seems to have a strong personality. So, I would suggest VEER.

Veer is also a good name..But going forward story is full of love and only love..so give me some other name...pls dont m,ind..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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you already came with second one..thanks for this..getting interesting...keep continuing..also add some precap kinda thing..will be more interesting...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sri11

Veer is also a good name..But going forward story is full of love and only love..so give me some other name...pls dont m,ind..

if it is the case,then fix for PREM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice story :) liking it so far
How about Aakash or Aalaap (to rhyme with anukalp)
or maybe make him punjabi sumting like sidhu or sumting hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharan.k

Nice story :) liking it so far
How about Aakash or Aalaap (to rhyme with anukalp)
or maybe make him punjabi sumting like sidhu or sumting hehe

hehe..
Thanks for liking it..Aakash is good...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow..nice episode...so what is goin to heppen next...increase ur episodes bi more...than u so much really liked it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Though i agree with saraharshad about lengthening the episode, i would like you to keep it short because it builds suspense and it makes you want to come back and see it.

I also agree with apri9, was actually going to suggest a precap kinda thing.

To be honest sri, i kinda like this now more than the first episode, it's really getting me interested and wanting to know more of what will happen.

Question, is hero really starting to like Mona or is it just part of the bet?

Great episode today tho!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chatani

Though i agree with saraharshad about lengthening the episode, i would like you to keep it short because it builds suspense and it makes you want to come back and see it.

I also agree with apri9, was actually going to suggest a precap kinda thing.

To be honest sri, i kinda like this now more than the first episode, it's really getting me interested and wanting to know more of what will happen.

Question, is hero really starting to like Mona or is it just part of the bet?

Great episode today tho!

Thanks for liking it..Hope i wont disappoint you..and answer for ur question is suspense..you will feel happy after knowing it

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