OS Amarprem - Chapter 30 - Part 2 - page 2

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hi,
here's link to Chapter 29
Chapter 30

Pratigya revolved around the room, spinning in tune with the kathak music, her body n mind in a trance...the room was a vast circular one, with no furniture except a wavy couch n 2-3 floor length mirrors...her image filled in n out of them as she revolved in sheer abandon…… memories swirled in her mind, about her mother, her miserable childhood, the hatred , the humiliation………she felt so horribly helpless , as she thought she would get sucked into a hell like void …………….. she tried to scream for her mother , but she can't get the words out………. Just as she felt that she would be drowned in a black abyss , she was hurled up into a brilliant light, by a pair of strong arms.……….

she felt colliding with a hard body , with a gasp n she caressed the strong muscles of the arms holding her , up along the shoulder, her eyes trying to adjust to the light , squinting n blinking , as the face of the man holding her came into view...oh..no its him!!!...no leave me! She was supposed to get away from him!!!... she felt the all too familiar shiver pass down her spine as her eyes met his... it held the same look as earlier, just before he had kissed her... kiss? u have let a man, a complete stranger touch u , kiss u n feel u up...no! u haven't let him! U seem to have no control over urself when he is around!!!!...why?... don't u feel repulsed?!... no... i don't know...!...I don't know!!! She wanted to scream... she was fighting tooth n nail to free herself from his grip ... why do u want to escape? ...its so beautiful there...in his arms... why do u want to escape? ...bec u can't admit that u like it there!!!! No!...I hate him...! do u?

She felt herself looking again into his eyes... her struggles dying down...slowly ...as she felt herself blush under his gaze... it was still that same gaze... much deeper than mere lustful...so u had realised that his gaze held more meaning than just lust ! then why r u trying to frame him in a false accusation!!!... no! I am not doing anything!!!!! It's for my mother...I will do anything for my mother!... u r going to ruin ur life for ur mother!...I don't care! She gave me my life...n i will do anything for her!! OK ..go ruin ur life...why r u ruining his life?...stop thinking about him!! ... she spun viciously sending one of her ghunghuru across the floor...

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Krishna rushed through the corridor, anger flowing through him...she is going to pay...for slapping him back there at his home ...n trying to frame him in a lie...! n making him want her in ways that he was feeling surprised at himself... as he passed the first door , he could hear the voice of gunghuroos coming from inside it ... his legs slowed down automatically , his left hand reaching out to push open the door... he gazed mesmerised , his feeling of revenge n anger slowly ebbing away, as his eyes fell on her , dancing in abandon...he felt an eerie calm surrounding him, inside him... his eyes took in her beautiful face, her eyes closed, cheeks flushed , a sheen of sweat covering her soft skin ...

his eyes drank in the beauty of her movements n slowly the awe was turning into desire , his eyes focusing on her feminine frame...she was wearing a tight fitting salwaar, her shawl tied across her waist, enhancing her curves... the calmness was soon getting replaced by overwhelming desire ... he closed the door behind him, stepping forward , his eyes never leaving her... the only thing he felt like doing was hold her in his arms...feel how she fitted perfectly in his arms...feel her panting breath against his lips ...feel how her delectable lips tasted ...just then her ghunghuru dashed towards him across the floor...he meant to stop it with his boot , but felt his spine benting as he knelt down n stopped it with his hand, his eyes still on her...she appeared to have not noticed anything...it was as though she were in a trance...he straightened , caressing the ghunghuru by his fingers, walking towards her...

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'u can't stop thinking about him...admit it Pratigya!...no!...she felt herself revolving into a strong pair of arms...this time she didn't need to feel up his arms or open her eyes to know where is she...she could feel his ragged breathing on her face...she could feel his rough hands circling her waist...she could feel his masculine scent enveloping her...she could feel her hands on his chest...she felt as if she were home...she felt weightless...she just let her be in that beautiful place , her body relaxing, head slightly thrown back , breathing heavily ...krishna looked down at her, his eyes taking in her serene face, as she lay in his arms...he adjusted her weight on his left arm, which still held her ghunghuru n brought his right arm over her face to brush a lock of sweaty hair out of her face, his face inches from hers, his eyes alternating between her face n her heaving bosom, his fingers roughly caressing her cheek... the blush that spread across her cheek nearly undid his control... but soon he was being tempted more strongly as Pratigya moved her hands up his chest , along his neck n cupped his stubbly cheeks...n her eyes opened, meeting his...

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Oh no! He was still looking at her with those eyes...n he was so close to her...so close that she could feel their breaths mingling...she could feel his stubbly cheeks under her fingers n she sighed , caressing him, their eyes locked...admit it pratigya! U can't get away from him!... her hands on his cheeks made him inhale wildly , his eyes leaving hers to follow a teasing sweat droplet which receded down her throat to her cleavage , which was barely visible under the neck of her salwaar...he dropped her ghunghuru , freeing his hands to hold her closer to him , as his mouth watered , debating for a couple of secs whether to follow the path of that droplet down her body or to capture her rosy red lips , which were half open in open invitation ...

well, that 2 sec costed him much... pratigya started out of her trance as she heard the thump of the ornament on the marble .her eyes widened in shock as she found herself in his arms, not to mention his lips almost brushing hers ...n to her horror , her hands on his cheeks ...'No!' she shouted , pushing him off her with all her might , jumping back , angry at herself n against him...krishna stumbled back , his anger returning as they faced each other across the room...

Hope u liked it 😳 I know its a small Chapter , but part 2 is coming soon ... a bit busy 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Dhanya loved it, your update is fantastic👏

Beautifully written how they are so attracted to each other and both are starting to realize it but are too stubborn to fully acknowledge that they could actually be falling in love with each other. I think that eventually they won't be able to hurt each other I hope so.

You have captured how past can influence a person future, P's hatred for her father and how he treats her mom had an impact on how she feels about men and K's mother being isolated from him and what he has been led to believe that she did at such a young age has impacted his view about women.

I think their love for each other is what will heal each other's pain, enjoying reading their path to them acknowledging their love for each other.

Looking forward to the next update I know it will be worth the wait. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice update..u r indeed wonderful writer😊..please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i'm still in the room


excellent , so well written, i look forward to the next part 😛
i hope its not a very long wait. 😭

as the point you left at 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekrn

Wow Dhanya loved it, your update is fantastic👏

Beautifully written how they are so attracted to each other and both are starting to realize it but are too stubborn to fully acknowledge that they could actually be falling in love with each other. I think that eventually they won't be able to hurt each other I hope so.

You have captured how past can influence a person future, P's hatred for her father and how he treats her mom had an impact on how she feels about men and K's mother being isolated from him and what he has been led to believe that she did at such a young age has impacted his view about women.

I think their love for each other is what will heal each other's pain, enjoying reading their path to them acknowledging their love for each other.

Looking forward to the next update I know it will be worth the wait. 😃




Thanks rekha...glad that u r liking it...
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Originally posted by: lovelyarja

very nice update..u r indeed wonderful writer😊..please continue



Thanks dear 😛
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Originally posted by: Khushi96

i'm still in the room


excellent , so well written, i look forward to the next part 😛
i hope its not a very long wait. 😭

as the point you left at 😉

well, pls continue to be in the room 😳
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Originally posted by: Hope2

Well written Dhanya.


waiting for takrar and eventually... iqrar




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part 2


'how dare u…..?' shrieked gayatri …….her voice was shaky with her effort to control her fear…….'if I shout just this moment , Krishna will be rushing down here n u 2 will be dead………! ' 'oh….go ahead….ma sahaib…. We will see who will end up dying' smirked Durjjan n Shailendra smiled…………… fear clawed at her as gayatri took deep breaths , trying to steady herself, trying to think……………oh no…what if they had some proof about her treachery ! after all it was his father was her partner in crime…………she need to be careful……she knew better than anyone how sajjan n krishna dealt with traitors ….she forced herself to be calm ………..'I …I don't know what u r talking about….' She said, trying to smile……….. 'oh…u very well know what it is, ma sahib…. U know, I only had a doubt …………..but after seeing ur reaction , I think I am sure now………..it was u only……… not Sajjan's wife…………..' durjjan said, sitting down leisurely …… gayatri blanched ……oh no she had dug her own grave………….nothing can be done now………….she had given herself away………..'What do u want?' she asked through gritted teeth………..Durjjan smiled triumphantly at Shailendra as Shailendra said 'we want the files…………….' 'as of now…………' added durjjan , smirking…………… Gayatri looked at durjjan , but he didn't elaborate …………….


'its not possible………' said gayatri …………'well, then u will have to get urself ready to face immediate death………..' sighed durjjan ….''don't u dare threaten me durjjan' shouted gayatri………. 'u don't have any proof which u could place infront of Krishna right now…………. So don't waste ur time………….' She said, smiling……….. Dujjan laughed 'oh, do u think so?………… my father was not stupid , ma sahaib…………he had left behind a proof………..an eye witness………..only I know where he is'………….'no! u r lying…..!' shrieked gayatri ……. 'not at all, Ma sahib…………du u remember my father's driver?' sneered durjjan…………. Gayatri went pale with fear………. 'no….!' she whispered fearfully, shocked………. 'yes, he is still alive………n if u don't want me to bring him infront of ur dear brother or nephew , do as we say…………' smiled Durjjan, nodding at Shailendra…………..gayatri felt as though she would faint………….no! this can't be happening………….this can't be true ………… 'pls believe me……….getting the files is impossible' she said weakly ………. 'why? ' asked Shailendra sharply…….. gayatri gulped …'Sajjan had given the file to Chandu , to keep it safely ………..there is no way I am going to ask that servant for the file………… he already suspects me…………. N ' she stopped, her eyes fearful …………'what?' prompted durjjan….. 'Chandu generally keeps such confidential items on the drawer in krishna's room…………n there r only 2 keys……………1 with chandu n another with him' she said, indicating upstairs , with a nod of her head……….


Durjjan n shailendra looked at one another , looking disappointed ………. But durjjan recovered quickly……… 'well, that's ur headache ……………u should somehow get the files for us…………or else we will be forced to bring ur real face infront of them….! ' said durjjan …….. gayatri stared numbly at him ….. then she remembered the fact that durjjan hated their family ……….'how could I believe u…..? how could I be sure that u will keep ur mouth shut once u get the files? U hate us………..!' 'correction, ma Sahib….I hate ur brother n his son! Just as u do! I don't have any grudge against u………..u were helping my father……… its not ur fault that the plan didn't go as u, no, we wished….…..' durjjan smiled at gayatri……….. she returned the smile…………..


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'What r u doing here?' asked pratigya, realizing finally that she was not imagining him, n angry at herself that she was loosing her head over him ….'get out of my room….' She said angrily , balling her fists , almost wanting to scream as she felt a sense of loss when she lost contact with him…...her fingers still tingled at the feel of his stubbly cheeks… Krishna , his anger returning through a haze of lust , smirked 'Why do u think I am here?' he asked sitting leisurely on the couch………he was trying to smirk down his anger he felt at her…..there she is again….the same drama….. one moment she was caressing him n next moment she was pushing him away as though he were forcing her or something ………well, she is going to pay for this little game she is playing……n he had let a girl cup his cheeks !…..but he couldn't help notice that he was liking whatever she was doing……her soft fingers on his cheeks felt like…..like her hands for made for that purpose only….. to touch him, caress him …………..he wondered how will her hands feel in certain other parts on his body…..


he involuntarily gripped tightly at the cushion as he continued to look at her……it was not at all helping his present condition………the mirrors behind her gave him a full view of her beauty, her side n her back presented to him in full glory……. He was finding it very difficult not to lunge at her……….. he don't want her to know how much he wanted her ………how desperately he wanted her………why? r u afraid of her?...he felt a jolt ……what! why would I be afraid of her? …..then why don't u want her to know what u feel about her? Admit it Krishna….! U r afraid of her……. Afraid that u r not able to see her as a thing! But as a girl!...admit it that u won't be able to throw her away!...…. No! don't let a woman control ur emotions, Krishna…..!... who is letting her do anything like 'control me'…… I am going to control her!...make her obey me! N obey she will!



Why the hell is he looking at her like that? Like she was something he…he would like to eat? N why r u blushing instead of feeling repulsed ? …….u r actually encouraging a man to have his way with u…. He must have stared at many girls like that…….! No! well , he hasn't even glanced at those girls at royal! Not even when he was ordering that girl to………to… … stop! Pratigya what r u doing? …………. U r becoming pathetic! Ur mother is in mortal danger n u r thinking of such derogatory things ! she removed her shawl from her waist n covered herself from his roving eyes, her cheeks burning in half anger, half embarrassment…………The music continued to play…………. 'What do u want?' she asked, her tone angry………..


Why did she have to cover her up? He thought irritated …… 'u know what I want' he said, his smirk widening ……………'u' …..he continued, crossing his legs………Pratigya let out a frustrated hiss…. 'but right now, I want answers………' krishna said , tilting his head to his left, his eyes glinting as she tossed her hair back owing to sweat………'I don't have any answers for u neither I want to talk to u……..get out!' shouted pratigya ……… 'oh no, u will give me what I want….' He said suggestively , smiling , his eyes locked on to hers………… Pratigya tired hard not to shiver…….. and averted her eyes………. 'I heard that u r going to attend a press conference tmw…….is that right?' he asked , leaning back on the couch , his eyes still on her frame, his foot tapping to the music…….. Pratigya closed her eyes , willing herself not to show the amount of pain surged through her heart at the prospect of tmw's conference ……… 'yeah, so what?' she snapped, opening her eyes n meeting his, looking bored ………….'I also heard that u r going to lie to the whole world that I ….raped u…….or attempted to rape u……is that right?' krishna asked , his tone dangerously calm ……..


Pratigya could feel every inch of her being screaming to her to deny it , as an unknown fear gripped her……..'yeah….is this why u r here? U could have known that tmw , while the conference is going on…..' she said , her voice dead as the image of her bleeding mother drove away every other thought from her mind…………krishna smiled 'well, u will have to say good bye to that little plan of urs, Pratigya ' he said , sitting straighter on the couch …….. 'u won't tell me what I want to do or not to do! Get out of my room……..!' shouted pratigya , trying to keep her voice even………'u r going to do exactly as I say , my delicious mistress' he stressed the word , his eyes piercing hers………… Pratigya looked at him , angry n frustrated ……….'u r going to repeat my version of events , the spice garden tour, instead of lying about something I didn't do to u……' he smirked as he said ………… 'what's the difference , I will be lying anyway …….' Snorted pratigya forcefully , trying to look unfazed ………'so chose a better lie ……' krishna said , smiling ………'so u r going to recite the tour story , if u know what's good for u' he continued, his voice pleasant …….Pratigya suppressed a shudder , as she stood straight , her hands folded over her chest... 'how about u saying truth then, about what u did do to me……. The media will be groping at ur feet too, tmw…… just tell them that u kidnapped me n I will think of choosing the best lie…….' She said, challenging him………. Krishna's smile widened ………


hope u liked it 😳
Edited by dhakarn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful update again Dhanya👏

I'm loving how K and P are pushing each other's buttons. 😆
Wonder what K's smile means.

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