OS-Gift of true and unique love :)updated pg-57,58

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Snigdha

@Snigdha_Khanam

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: babithaj
Very Gud... 👍🏼 But i was thinking to write sumthing of kriya in the hospital bed itself after everybody returns...🤓

Wow it would be awesome diPlz write it na😳

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Vikram Dewangan

@DareDevil_VickY

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: babithaj
Very Gud... 👍🏼 But i was thinking to write sumthing of kriya in the hospital bed itself after everybody returns...🤓

pls pls write it immediately na sweety dii 😛 impatiently waiting

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ritu ralhan

@teenss

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Snigdhakhanam
Thanks a lot everyone🤗
@teens-Lallantop updates😛Plz carry on😉Huh u need my permission to continue it😲?Go ahead bey😛

fcrse i need uor permission..🤓.i respect uvt if i trned this os too into a dirty one☺️😆

dnt wrry m kidding...😉😳

Edited by teenss - 12 years ago

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ritu ralhan

@teenss

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: babithaj
Very Gud... 👍🏼 But i was thinking to write sumthing of kriya in the hospital bed itself after everybody returns...🤓

oops sryy dii..

u pls cntinue frm vere snigs ended.😛.i too vnna see a hosp scene with 3 f them

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Snigdha

@Snigdha_Khanam

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: teenss

fcrse i need uor permission..🤓.i respect uvt if i trned this os too into a dirty one☺️😆

dnt wrry m kidding...😉😳

Nautanki😆😆!

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ritu ralhan

@teenss

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Snigdhakhanam
Nautanki😆😆!

i knw...🤗

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ritu ralhan

@teenss

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

pt 4..

soo p heard a noise at the window...she still on bed..😕'''who is there'''

😕😕

n her voice make little movemnt in gudia😳,,so p jstt tapped her,kissed her on forehead 😛😳 n went off to see vts there...😉😕

p at window'''krishna😲😲

tum yahan kya kr rhe ho,,is waqt..😲ye sahi nhi hai krishna,,is tarah se,, koi dekh lega😲

nd suddenly she realised she is angry😆🤔

k'''arre shant babu shant..tum dar kahe rhi ho..😲.

tumka yad naina ki ham tumre mmg aise he aate the or aate hain😳,sbko jaga kr,,😆

aur e bar chupke se aaye hain,oo ka hain na ki hamri gudia so rhi hai to...😳

p'''😈krishna natak mat kro,ham jante hain tum hame vapis lane aaye ho par ye sahi nhi hai krishna dekho tumne he to kaha na ki tumhe ab hamari jarurat nhi..

k''😲ee babu yar ka bol rhi ho😲acha tum khidki to kholo aur hamka andar aane do phir ham tumka sab samjate hain😳😳

so prats opened the window n baba came in😆😉

awww...baba into the room n gone towards bed...😛towrds gudia😳😊

p''aram se krishna vo so rhi hai😳

nd k n p sat beside her😳looking over her face vere bright moonlight falling😛

Edited by teenss - 12 years ago

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Sonakhan_

@Sonakhan_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

very nice teenss plz continue👍🏼

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Simmi

@simmi.friends03

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

snig & teens u wr awesome...👏..i was so sad,,but with yr os update i feel that mkap is on-air...i m just imagine yr word & visualising them...thnx for uplifting my mood... 😊 i hv a suggestion for u...to give that scene more visual effect u can also give full detailing abt their dresses they r wearing......

pls cont...

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ritu ralhan

@teenss

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: simmi.friends03
snig & teens u wr awesome...👏..i was so sad,,but with yr os update i feel that mkap is on-air...i m just imagine yr word & visualising them...thnx for uplifting my mood... 😊 i hv a suggestion for u...to give that scene more visual effect u can also give full detailing abt their dresses they r wearing......

pls cont...

this ff is jstt fr this ki we will nt miss frthr storyy.😃.nd i wnt to cntribute as much as i can,,😊

soo dnt be upset nd enjoy..diff is only ki instead of shantibhushan nd vishal sir,,snigs nd teens r writor now🤣

actors r still same...😳