FF: Kitani Mohabbat Hai-Part 13 Pg 65 - Page 47

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Posted: 13 years ago
just read Chap 3 and 4... awesome... i hav no words to define... 4th part simply superb... the emotional bond they share Arhaan calling her "Rano"😳😍...
beautifully written Nechu👏👏...
definitely their chemistry is undefinable and you hav bought it out so well... Perfect start and i m enjoying it👍🏼...
Thanks for all the PMs😃🤗... i m yet to read the other parts... m sorry Nechu i m not up to date with the parts...give me sometime i ll read all the left parts n comment😛


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Posted: 13 years ago
read the whole till part 11 and its so awesome... just loving it👏👏... Part 9 where they share that passionate moment just by being very close says it all... m looking towards Arry confessing and also their romances... thank u so much for all the PMs🤗...
keep continuing... update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Guys...Thank you sooo much for waiting...I am so sorry for maiing you all wait for so long...This part is dedicated to one of ma dearest friends...My khushi85...she has asked me a lot of time to update this...and finally i am here my khushi jii..dedicating this part to you...love u sooo muchhh

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ArJa in Car!!!

Both were really sikent throughout the drive...both feeling equally awkward and embarassed thinking about the closeness they shared,yet they loved it!!They reached the McDonalds near P's house and P broke the silence..

P:Sto here Arhaan..I'll walk from here!!...and he obeyed..!

P was about to get out of the car when Arhaan's hand grabbed her in,which made her sit back on the seat again.

A:woohh Pooja...ummm...

P:...

A:I am really sorry Pooja...I am extremely sorry for what happened today!!!I seriously didnt mean to do so...but...i dnt know what happened to me...and and...i..i am not that kind of person...like how you think...umm..pls dont think in that manner...!!!

P:Arhaan...Its ok..its ok..

A:No its not ok...I behaved in a really bad way today and i am really for that!

P:Arhaan...I told you na. ?its ok..

A:No!!Just 'its ok'wont do...You must tell me that you have forgiven me for that...

P:Acha baba...you're forgiven...now happy??

A:Thank you Pooja..and yes...I am really sorry for that!!I really am!

P:Arhaan arhaan...its ok..And I am not thinking anything bad about you...I dont know what happened...But what happened,has happened...now neither you nor me can change it...so its better that we forget what happened...coz thats better for both of us...and lets continue to be friends,like before,as if nothing happened...!!ok???

A:Ok...Thank You!!!

P:OK now...I have to go...Bye!!!

A:bye...TC!!

P smiled and walked off..Arhaan started driving back.

No Rano...I cant forget that soo easily!It will always be in ma memory...forever!OUR first few moments of closeness..I Love you Rano..I LOVE YOU!!!

And after a few mins he received a Text Message...He checked his phone and was happy to see that it was from Pooja!!!And he smiled...The message read:

'Thank you so much Arhaan,...For those wonderful moments...
?..with your family...I loved them!!It will always be in my memory forever ;)'

A smiled and said 'Love u Rano'...P held her mobile close to her heart n said 'I love U Arhaan and thanks for those moments which made me crazyy for you,be it for a few mins'.

NEXT MORNING-PRACTICE HALL

Everyone present,including A n J.They called each of them indiviadually to introduce them to their designs and to take approval.Everyone Loved their designs and thanked Both the guys!

The practice session was going smoothly...A came to the main hall with J and was looking at the practising models.But A came there just to see his girl while Jay was being the typical Jay.

Just then P walked through the ramp and as usual A was lost in her

A:I hope she wins..

J:what??

A:Nothing

P was at the end of the ramp,giving different poses and noticed that A was staring at her.Seeing this she lost her balance but managed herself from falling and walked back.It was break time.

A walked towards P and said

A:you were fab in the Ramp!

P who was drinking water turned back to see him..

P:Jii sir?

A:umm...You were fab in the ramp!!

P:Thank you sir..

A:ummm..I am thirsty..I'll get some water..

P:ok sir

He turned back and collided with the Evil Anita who was standing there with a glass of water

A:Oh i am sorry!

An:its ok sir..!!Here,take the glass sir!! 'she extended the glass of water'

A:No thank you!!I can manage!

A hesitatnty takes the water from her and thanked her!!

An:My pleasure sir!!

All these while,a pair of eyes were over Anita,raging with Atrocious Anger...Anger that could burn her into ashes!

A:See you later P...

P faked a smile on her face and said:Jii sir...bye!!

He walked away and Anita gave a triumphant smile to P who was disgusted by her flirtative nature towards her man.

An:How was it Pooja?

P:It was as bad as you are!!

An:Oh really?

P:Yeah really!

An:This was just a trailer my dear..The picture is coming!!Till then enjoy our chemistry!!and she winked at her and walked away!!

P to herself:I wont let u touch my man again you bit**...Picture it seems!!I'll show you the picture you ********* ...Wait n watchh!!!

TWO WEEKS PASSED BY with not much interaction between ArJa except at FOM!!P had told Payal n Sana about her feelings for Arhaan and they were happy for her!Now there ws only 5 days fot the main event of FOM!The practice sessions almost finished and today was the last day of it.By now Arhaan and Jay had become friendly with everyone and Jay and Payal was on the making...JaYal.

A had become friends with Anita too,like how he was with everyone else...obviously except Pooja With whom he was a lot more friendlier and A was glad that finally Anita was concentrating on her work rather than flirting around.But in the same time An left no opportunity to flirt with him and at the same time taking care not to give him even a bit of clue of her plans,with P being jelous all the time and now An has bcum the worst enemy of her life!!She hates to see her around A,while for Arhaan she was a normal friend with whom friendship lasted only uoto FOM!!

Final Day Practice was over too and everypne was busy in their groups.Drinks were being served.A was standing with An engaged in official talks.Just Just then a man walks towards them with different kinds of drinks on a tray.He offered it to them.A took a glass of Pepsi and seeing this An too took another glass of Pepsi!

A pair of jelous eyes was staring at them from a li'l far.Those were P's beautiful eyes,which Arhaan loved the most.She just came out of the washroom n was wiping her face!The waiter came towards her and she too took a glass of Pepsi!

P to herself:Dont you think Rano,that this Anita is being a lil close to Arhaan...
Just then Rabecca who was standing behind her said:why wouldnt she...

P turned back and asked:what do you mean?

R:I mean Why should they not be close?Afterall they are seeing each other!

P was shocked and these words entered her ears like swords and her body completely became numb and she dropped the glass which broke into piece,just like her heart which broke into a million Pieces by now..

Everyone looked at P including A.He ran towards her and asked:Are you ok P?

P was devastated.It seemed as if her world ended.J and Pa also came to P.

Pa:Are you ok Poo...??Poo..?

P came out of her thoughts.

P:hmm..um..yea I am fine..,I am absolutely fine!! She said swallowing her pain...and she grabbed her bag and ran through the croud towards the exit,tears dropping from her eyes!!

Pa called:pooo..poo...?

Without answering her questions P walked away!!

INSIDE THE HALL

Everyone disperesed to form their own groups again.

An:so what were we saying sir?

A:Leave me alone Anita!!!he said angrily...angry seeing his angel in this condition,whom he always wanted to be happy!!

An:why?what happened sir?

A:I said..LEAVE ME ALONE!!He shouted..

An walked off angrily towards her group!!

A rushed toward Pa and ansked,


A:What hppened to Pooja,Payal?

Pa:I dont know sir..I have to meet her soon!!
A was really worried and nothing could kill him,other than Pooja avoiding him which just happened!!

P hired a taxi to her house.She entered the house and was glad to know that only her parents were at home and sana was out with the rest of the family.

Avi:Rano beta...You came!

P:I'll freshen up mamma...I am tired..she said without facing her mom and using all her might not to cry...

Avi:ok

She ran to her room,locked the door,threw her bag and jumped onto her bed and brpke down into tears...crying as hardly as she can,letting out all her pain.At the same time Burrying her face on her pillow,so that her voice could not be heard outside!!She cried for a long time and it continued..

P though to herself:What was i dreaming about?Why did I dream about it?And God,why did you make me feel like that for someone,if he was not meant to be mine...This was the first time,I fell for someone and had wished that it should be my last time too...and its all over...over...all of the sudden.Now my heart is broken into a million pieces...to that level,from where it is absolutely impossible to regain it.Why did you do this to me God???Why??...she said softly,through her tears!!

After few minutes Avi came and knocked on her doorbut P didnt respond thinking that this time she wouldnt be able to control infront of her mom.,which made Avi assume that she would be asleep!

Avi:she must have slept...Let her sleep!...saying this she walked away...

Pooja sat on her bed and wiped her tears and said...

P:Its over...Its all over...Forever...Nothing is left between us...It was my mistake that I too, you more than my friend!!!hhh...He was not meant to be mine...I was not meant to be his...He is destined to be with someone else and now he belongs to her...

Tears continued to roll over her face!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
🤗jaanu thank you for dedicating this part to me so sweet.
the whole car scene was sweet A held her back but then Jaanu this part was sad the misunderstanding between p and A 😭
now i am more addicted to this ff then before please write next part please don't leave like this or i will 😭 a lot.
Excellent writing all was really good.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Koche ninakku nannayi ezhuthan ariyam...mudukki kuttiya ...😳
Nice chapter😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...the whole car scene...in alone they both confessing to thier self that they love each other...they r in love...

i hate this Anita..but i know Arja r the divine couple and destined to be each other.❤️.I hv full faith on u Nechu...that small misunderstanding will disappear in next update...😍...
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update after a long time... thank u so much😃...
Ahhh that car scene ArJa and the way he pulls her Wowww😍😍...
How dare you Anita come between my ArJa😡
Oh my angel is bitterly weeping there... hope the misunderstandings get clear soon and ArJa are together😍
Nechu dear great update🤗...

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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update nechu after sooo long time😊
poor poo cried😭😭 due to that misunderstanding
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nechu, its sucha heart touching update... its like real... too gud too gud... cannot explain in words...❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: khushi85

🤗jaanu thank you for dedicating this part to me so sweet.

the whole car scene was sweet A held her back but then Jaanu this part was sad the misunderstanding between p and A 😭
now i am more addicted to this ff then before please write next part please don't leave like this or i will 😭 a lot.
Excellent writing all was really good.

Thank you sooo much jaanu...
i am glad you liked it...😉😃
dont worry...i'll try to update tomorrow...😊

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