FF **LoVe QuAdRaNgUlAr** Part 12 updtd on PG 95* - Page 65

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww it,s beautiful cute sweet lovely 👏 ❤️ ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
very well written👍🏼.so we r going to get p confession in next update cann't wait for it😍.thanks vikram for pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PiE-ChUcKeR_AmI


oyiii abb rone se kaam nahi chalega 😉 party kabb de rahi ho ye batao😛😛 mai nahi dene wala is baar 😆 tumko arrangements karne hain😆

chalo bless yaa //pehle kaam karbo..party baad mai karlenge😛😛


Party?? umm.. theek hai..


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piyarapiyari

Wowww it,s beautiful cute sweet lovely 👏 ❤️ ⭐️

Thanku Muskiyaa ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life



Party?? umm.. theek hai..


haan ji party 😛😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice 😊keep it up👍🏼Thanks Vic bro pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mitaly..


<font color="#ff3333">Nice 😊keep it up👍🏼Thanks Vic bro pm 😊</font>

Thanks glad u liked it di 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PiE-ChUcKeR_AmI


aree Mukta di kahan gayab ho jaati ho Mr.India ki tarah😳😳😳
hmm we both are writing eachand every update coordinally...hmm we both r dabaangs toh FF bhi usi type kaa hoga naa😆😆
hmm we both respect girls toh unki pitai nahi hogi😆😆

hmm ye toh apko nect part mai hi pata chalega jii😉😉

hmm we are'nt getting much time these days that's why we are'nt using EMO's now ...Emo's mai hi2 hrs lag jate hain🤔
hmm will try our best di ..

keep reading and enjoy😛😛


hai 😃
oops!!!🤔 so soorrry tht i keep disappearing😭
but there r reasons for m disappearances
this time m not late in commenting 😃 fr this post 😊(i thk sooo)😆
nice update 👏 liked it ⭐️ n enjoyed
not much dishum-dishum 😆 with a little help frm gals 😳 😆. wish tht they r all frnds again .
N also Thnk u both fr making use of emo's 😉 lved thm all❤️
bye waiting fr next update.

*try karungi phir gayab nahi hojaun aur jadli se comment karu 😃





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Posted: 13 years ago



At Night

In Pratigya's bedroom

Pratigya suddenly gets up from her sleep after seeing some horror dream ..

Pratigya says to herself "nahi hum Krishna koo kisi kaa nahi hone denge 'chahe kuch bhi ho jaye 'hum Krishna koo apna pyyarr kaa ijehharr karke hi rahenge " ..

In Muskaan's bedroom ..

Muskaan was thinking deep about Amit ' she tries to sleep but was'nt able to do so ..she was getting distracted again and again '.

She says to herself " hum Amit ke bare mai itna kyu soch rahe hain ??? pata nahi hume kya ho raha hai ?? aajtak humare anddar aise feelings nahi ayyii ..kaahinn hume Amit se pyaar ho gaya hai .." .

She smiles and goes to sleep

Next Day in the Morning

All students were busy in discussing about their projects with their respective groups members at college canteen.
Krishna was moving here and there and was impatiently waiting for pratigya 'he says to himself "ye Pratigya kahan reh gayi" 'he was annoyed

Suddenly he saw Pratigya '. "HEY HEY HEY " BG music plays '

Krishna looks into the eyes of Pratigya whereas Pratigya also started staring him 'and started giving him flirty gestures

She comes towards him ..Krishna gets nervous ..
he started staring her again and was noticing her beauty and started dreaming about her beauty, pratigya was wearing an red Anarkali dress ,she was looking sooo pretty and gorgeous

.she comes near to krishna and sat in front of him.krishna was still dreaming and lost in her beauty .

Pratigya says to herself " ye krishna ko kya ho gaya hai kahan khoya hua hai" then she started calling him.

Krishna got disturbed and regained his senses and replied her "arre pratigya aap kab aa gaye"


Pratigya: main toh abhi bas ayi par aap kiske khayalo mei khoye huye the ki main aapke samne baithi hui thi par aapne toh mujhe dekha hi nahi"

Krishna: oh sorry main bas aise hi kuch soch raha tha waise aap aaj bahut khubshurat lag rahe ho"

Pratigya: she shhlyly smiles and in low tone says "thank u " to Krishna.

Krishna thinks" haaye main mar jawa ye tera muskarana aur akke chale jana kismaat kaa hai khuljana ..tera deedar hua ..pehla saa pyar hua iss dill koo ' jee karta hai bas ek kiss kar dun"

Pratigya: kuch kaha tunme
Krishna: nahi toh maine kuch nahi kahan waise aapne kuch socha kya project ke baare mei maine kal net se ek achha sa subject dekha hai jisme hume project karna chahiye.
then he handed synopsis to her and says "aap isse jarur ek baar pad lena aur achhe lage toh bata dena ya apke pass koi dusra subject ho toh bata dena ussi mei hum project kar denge thik hai ab main chalta hun agar aap ko kisi bhi tarah ki help chahiye hogi toh mujhe call kar dena main aa jaunga aapki help karne.


by saying this he was about to leave that place suddenly pratigya held his hand and said "krishna tumse mujhe kuch jaruri baat karna hai"

Krishna again sat there and said " kya hua pratigya kya jaruri baat karni hai mujhse aapko"

Pratigya became speechless.
Krishna again ask her kya hua pratigya kya kahana chahati ho kaho na kyun shant ho.
Pratigya: Yahan pe nahi krishna kahin aur chalo akele mei
Krishna saw here n there and said: yahan pe kya problem hai aapko vo baat kahne mei jo aap kahna chahte ho aur dekho hum dono akele toh hai yahan par.😕

Pratigya: nahi krishna vo baat aise bheed wale jagah pe nahi kar sakti kahin shant jagah pe chalo na pls.

Krishna : accha thik hai toh park kaisa rahega '
Pratigya: haan krishna park hi thik rahega chalo chalte hai.

they both moves toward Park


At Vikram's house

Vikram was sad and unhappy ,he sat on his bed and his sister Tanu sees him ,she notices that her brother is sad ,she goes towards him and sat beside him n asked him about his sadness
"kya hua vicky aise udaas aur sad kyun ho"?.
Vikram: kya batao dii mera plan phir se chaupat ho gaya inti nautanki karne ke baad bhi vo sala amit ka bachha bach gaya aur ab vo chhuchhunder mujhse ulajhne bhi laga hai.aur toh aur sala project ke liye group divide kiye toh vo ladkiya ladke sath mei aur mere group mei bhi ek ladki hai mere sath.
Tanu: toh kya hua ladki ke sath tumhe project banane mei kya problem hai kuch nahi hota issme udaas hone wali koi baat nahi hai.
Vikram: arre dii aapko achhe se pata hai mujhe ladkiyo ke sath aise sath mei baithkar discuss karna pasand nahi hai aur main chahta hun ki mera project perfect bane aur uske liye main apni puri mehnat laga dunga.
Tanu: Tu chahta hai na ki tera project perfect ho toh perfect tab hoga jab tu group mei discuss karega uske baare mei aur ek dusre ke help se hi achha project banega,mujhe pata hai tere pass achha knowledge and logic hai,tu akele bhi bana sakta hai .par agar group hai toh unhi ke sath bana taki uss ladki ko bhi kuch sikhne ko mil jaye, aur kya pata usse bhi achha knowledge ho toh dono milkar achha project bana sakte ho.
Vikram :hmm thik hai dii ab aap kahte ho toh jarur kosis karunga uske sath mil kar work karne ka.
Tanu: ye hui na achhi baat aur rahi baat Amit se badla lene ki toh tu usse bhi bhul jaa kuch dino ke liye aur project work mei concentrate kar uss se toh tu baad mei dekh lena.aur aise udaas mat raho aur pahle jaisa muskurate raho samjhe.ab jao aur project work ki tyari karo.
Vikram smiling : okay baba ab main samjh gaya ab aisa hi karunga jaisa aap chahti hai.love u diii ..


In the Park


Krishna and pratigya came in the park and sat on the bench '

the whole park was almost empty both were alone there.
Krishna: pratigya ab batao kya jaruri baat karna chahti ho aap mujhse.
Pratigya was silent thinking in mind " kaise start karu aur kaise kahu krishna se ki hum tumse pyaar karte hai ye baat kahne ki toh meri himmat hi nahi ho rahi hai ye bhagwan mujhe thoda himmat do ki hum krishna se apne dil ki baat kare"
Krishna :Pratigya kya hua aap shant kyun hai boliye na jo aap bolna chahte hai jiske liye aap hume yahan laye hai.
Pratigya broke her silent "krishna hume tumse mere aur amit ke baare mei baat karni hai.
After hearing amit's name he became very angry in anger tone "uss amit ke baare mei baat karne ke liye aap hume iss jagah pe le kar ayi hai"

Pratigya: nahi krishna actually main ye kahna chahti hun ki mere aur amit ke bich mei '

krishna became sad and got more angry he stop her in between " aap aur amit ki bich mei kya chal raha hai hume achhe se pata hai toh aap apni aur amit ki love story sunane ke liye hume yahan lekar aaya hai,
Pratigya started crying "pahle humari puri baat toh sunn lo krishna"


Krishna: hume tumhari aur koi baat nahi sunani hai,hum jaa rahe hai yahan se ab hamara yahan rahne thik nahi aap bula lo apne amit ko.
Pratigya shouted on krishna: ab bas bhi karo krishna humare baare mei kuch bhi bolna.tum jaisa sochte ho waisa kuch bhi nahi hai hamare aur amit ke bich mei
Krishna: toh kya hai aap dono ke bich mei batao hum bhi toh sune aur ab ye nahi kahna ki aap amit se pyaar nahi karte.
Pratigya: haan hum amit se pyaar na kabhi kiye hai, na kabhi karenge kyun ki hum kisi aur se pyaar karte hai aur ussi ki baho mei puri zindagi bitana chahte hai.
Krishna was shocked "ab ye kya naya nautanki kar rahe ho, aap amit se pyaar nahi karte toh kisase karte ho aur kaun naya hero aa gaya hai aap ki zindagi mei.
Pratigya: krishna vo koi aur nahi tum ho jisase hum pyar karte hai suna tumne hum tumse pyaar karte hai.
Krishna was completely blank after hearing such words from pratigya.

Krishna : kyaa kaha apne 'kii aapp hum se pyar karti hoo ..

Pratigya : haan Krishna yee sach ahi kii hum yumse hi pyaar karte hain '

Krishna : wahh kya baat haii 'pehle Amit se aur aab mujhse ' kitno se pyarr karogi haan 'tumhare liye Pyar majak hai naa '.sach toh ye haii kii hum appse pyarr karte hain ..parr aap hamara pyarr kabhi samajh hi nahi payi ..

Pratigya : (shocked) jab aap humse pyar karte hain toh yee sabb aapp hamare bare mai kaise soch sakte hain ..

Krishna : sach kehh rahe hain hum ..pehle Amit koo apne pyarr mai fasaya aur aabb hame '(he points finger at her ) lekin hum Amit nahi hain jo apkii mithi mithi baton mai aa jaye '

Pratigya became angry and in anger she slapped Krishna '

Pratigya : ajj tumne ye kahkar humme bahut hurt kiya hai 'iske liye hum tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karenege '.(she cries) aree tum kyaa samjhoge pyarr koo 'kya tumhe hamari aankhoon mai jhoot nazar aata hai 'dekho dhyaan se '.voo sirf ek galat famiiee thi 'Amit sirf hamara dost hai aur kuch nahi '

Krishna was speechless ..he was touched ..

Pratigya was about to leave that place 'but Krishna held her hand '

Krishna : ruko yahan ..

Pratigya : abb kyu rook rahe ho ..jaab tum hum par vishwaas hi nahi karte toh iss pyaar kaa kya faiyda ..

Krishna : hum tumkoo apni jaan se bhi jyada pyarr karte hain '.aur hume tum par pura bharosa hai '.

Pratigya started feeling better ..

Pratigya : toh kyaa tum bhi humse '

Krishna : haan hum tum se pyar karte hain bahut pyar karte hai ..bole toh "I Love You pratigya "'

Pratigya start blushing

Krishna grabbed her and hugged her tighly ..

Pratigya : I Love you too Krishna ..


they both gave a smile to each other ...

then Pratigya grabbed his face with her both hands and she moved her face closer to Krishna's face

she started starring Krishna's lips ...after a minute or so she brings her lips closer to Krishna's lips ... and after then they had a lip lock for a minute or so..

At Cafe ..

Amit was drinking coffee with her new school friend Simmie
Muskaan comes there and sees Amit with someone else

She gets annoyed

Muskaan comes near to Amit '

Muskaan : kyaa ho raha hai Amit ..

Amit was shocked to see her

Amit : hiii Muskkaan ,kaisi hoo 'dekho mere saath kaun hai ..my old school friend "Simmie" 'ye hii meri friend hai joo mere bare mai sab kuch janti hai aur mere itne kaarib hai '

Muskaan looks annoyed

Muskaan (says to herself) : bata toh aise raha hai jaise puri zindagi isi kee saath bitayega '

Simmie : hii muskaan ..im simmie ..

Muskaan: hii 'im Muskaan 'Amit ki best friend '

Muskaan looks into the eyes of Amit

Simmie : wow ..nice to meet you '

Suddenly Simmie got a phone call ' she picked her phone '

Simmie : hellooo Simmie here '.ohh yaa ..ohh yaaa ..im coming in just 10 minutes '

Simmie : Amit ..mujhe chalna hoga ek urgent kaam hai ..

Amit : okkieee bye Simmie 'cc yaa 'milte hain ..

Simmie gave a Hug to Amit 'and leaves from there

Muskaan looks perturbed 'she says to herself " ek baarr mere haanth maii aaja Simmiee tujhe toh '"

Amit : kuch bola Muskaan tumne ..

Muskaan gets disturbed ...

Muskaan : arree kuch nahi

She sits down with Amit ..

Muskaan was looking sad ..

Amit : kyaa huaa Muskaan kiss kaam se ayyi ho ..

Muskaan : kyu mai tumhare pass aa kar baith bhi nahi sakti kya aur kuch baat toh kar sakti hu naa ..

Amit : dekho aisa nahi hai ..mai toh aise hi keh raha tha ..

Muskaan : achha aise hi keh rahe the 'wah kya baat hai ..

Amit : haan toh batao kya kehna hai ..

Muskaan : toh ye ladkii Simmie tumhari friend hai ..

Amit : haann friend nahi meri best friend hai ..

Muskaan : aurr mai kaun hu ..

Amit : Friend ho

Muskaan : sirf friend hii huu ??

Amit: aurr kya hoo ..tum khud hi bata do '

Muskaan : mai tumhari best best best friend hu naa ..

Amit : dekhoo tum ye faltu kii baat karne ayyi ho mere saath ..aurr haan abb ye mat kehna kii mai Simmie se tumhe jealousy ho rahi hai ..

Muksaan : (becomes serious) 'she puts her hands into Amit's hands "nahi aisi baat nahi hai Amit"

Amit : (got furious after seeing Muskaan puttinmg her hand over his hand)..dekho hume janne doo ..hume jaruri kaam hai ..

Amit removes her hands and leaves from there ..

Muskaan was sad 'and tears comes from her eyes '..


to be continued ...

Precap : Muskaan shouting on Amit "hum tumse pyaar karte hain aur tumhe toh hamara pyar najar hi nahi aata" ...Amit tells her " dekho Muskaan mai inn pyaar vyaar ke chakkar mai nahi podna chata" ... then Muskaan breaks down (crying) and leaves from there ...and from behind Krishna and Pratigya sees this and were shocked..
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update sirji👏 kriya part was awesome 😛n amit muskan ki life main triangle😉 great.😛

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