My 1st OS on kriya.updated part 10 pg -31 - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Veena.S

Cute update Snigs...😛... But short one...

will update tomorrow long one insallah😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Snigdhakhanam

will update tomorrow long one insallah😊

yup hume hume long n long lallontop updates chahiye...😉 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
sweet n cute update
but itna short update not fair
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Good one. Carry on 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lubllly update snighduuu...but but Very very short one...i want long ones...update asap!
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Posted: 13 years ago
oye hoye snig tu os bhi likthi ho...
mujhe patha hi nai chala...
just nw read it... its beautiful ...
i loved it...
& addme in pm jaanu
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsweet

oye hoye snig tu os bhi likthi ho...

mujhe patha hi nai chala...
just nw read it... its beautiful ...
i loved it...
& addme in pm jaanu

thanks a lot dear for liking it😊sure will pm u whenever i updated😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 10
P:Krishna tumahra phone baj raha hain.
K:Are haa yaar.Is waqt kisne phone kiya.
K:Hello.
Amma's voice was there.
A:hey baba tumri sath maidamji bhi haina?
K:Haa kyun?
A:Tanik use phone debo?
K:Kahe kaa hui gawa.humka bolbo.
A:tu baas phone de use.
K:babu amma ne phone ki.tumse baat karna chahti hain.ye lo phone.
P:hello
A:kaa heilo😡kaa re samar ko chor kar tu kaha kaha bhatak rahi hain.uske tabyet thik nehi hain.wo tujhe dundh raha hain.jaldi se ghar aja.
P:kya😲samar ko kya ho gaya..thik hain hum abhi arahe hain.
amma disconnect the phone.
P:krishna jaldi ghar chalo.samar ke tabyet thik nehi hain.
K:kyun kaa hui gawa use?abhi to humlog dekh ke aye hain ke thik thak khel rahe hain.
P:pata nehi.tum baas ghar chalo.
K:kaa babu yaar aisa maat karo.bohot sari pilan karke humo bahar aye hain.humra dil maat todo yaar.ghar me to sablog haina samar ko shamal ne ke liye.aur mujhe lagta hain ke amma ne jaan bujhe ke aisa kar rahe hain.samar ko kucho bhi nehi hua hain.
P:krishna tum kaisa baat kar rahe ho.amma aisa kyun karenge.waha samar ka tabyet thik nehi hain.aur tum chahte ho ke hum tumahre sath yaha rahe.baas humein ghar jana hain.
Krish was totally upset.he didn't say any words.they reached tn.
P:samar kaha hain?
A:kamre me hain.
krish and prats come to their bedroom.samar was playing with car.
P:Samar beta kya hua hain tumhe.tumahra tabyet to thik haina.
S:haa maa meri tabyet thik hain.mujhe kuch nehi hua hain.
prats understand the matter that amma did it intentionally.she was feeling guilty.
P:krishna sorry.mujhe maaf kardo.mujhe samajh hi nehi aya ke amma aisa bhi kar sakte hain.
K:chodo ye sab.hum restuarant me ja rahe hain
P:lekin kyun.tum to keh rahe the ke tum aaj nehi jaoge.to phir kyun ja rahe ho.
Krish was angry and leave the room without saying any words.prats understand that he is upset.
Prats to herself:subah se kitna khush tha krishna.lekin mere waja se😭
2 hours later-prats called krish.but he didn't recieve the phone.
P:lagta hain bohot naraz hain wo.kuch to karna parega use manane ke liye.aur aise bhi kal subah kitne dur ja raha hain mujhse😔
she decorated their room with flowers.
Sa:maa aaj aap itne sundar tarike se room ko kyun saja rahe hain?
P:☺️aise hi beta.tum so jao.
Sa:nehi hum chachu aane ke baad soyenge.
P:tum meri baat nehi manoge?tumhe subah school me bhi jana haina.so jao beta.kal subah chachu se baat karlena.
Sa:thik hain😊
IN restuarant-
Chandu:are bhaiya itne raat ho gaye aap abhi tak ghar nehi gaye,
K:hum jab chahe tab ghar jaye 😡tu ja yaha se.
C:thik hain bhaiya.prats called to chandu.
C:hello haa bhabi aap?
P:chandu bhaiya krishna hain waha.
C:haa hain.
P:zara use phone dijiye.
C:thik hain bhabi.aap rukiyein.hum de rahe hain.bhaiya ye lijiye bhabi kaa phone hain.
krish staring at chandu.
K:hello
P:krishna tum aapna phone kyun nehi utha rahe ho.hum kab se phone kar rahe hain.itne raat ho gaye tum abhi tak ghar kyun nehi aye?
K:arahe hain.phone rakho,
he disconnect the phone.
P to herself:bapre baap itna gussa.aaj to unhe manane me bohot jada time lag jayega😊
krish reached the home.prats is waiting for him in dinning room.
P:agaye😊chalo aab khana khane betho.
K:tumho ja ke so jao.hum kha lenge.
P:aisa kabhi hua hain ke tum khana khane se pehle hum so gaye.tum khana khao.
krish start to eat food.
prats watching him with romantic look😳
K:aise kyun dekh rahe ho😕
P:pata hain tum jab bhi gussa karte ho na tab humari maan chahte hain ki aise hi tumhe dekhte rahe.
K:kaa matlab?
P:matlab tum bohot pyare lagte ho jab bhi gussa karte ho.
K:main gussa nehi hu.
P:accha ji.aab kahe aur hum maan jaye.tumahra chehra bata rahe hain ke aap humse naraz hain😳
K:aur nehi to kaa.waise bhi hum gussa kare ya phir jo bhi kare tum us se kya farak parta hain.tumhe to sirf samra se matlab hain.
Prats trying to irritates him.
P:haa ye baat to aapne ekdam sahi bola😈












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Posted: 13 years ago
lubbly😳😉
Edited by Eden_luvsKriya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry yaar ek din me double update😳ka kare sablog long update parneke liye pagla gaye hain😆

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