On Pratigya's b'day (Kriya walking hand in hand) - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ab jaldi update karbo bahute der ho gayis 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mall

Kriya enters the mall. Krishna walks casually when the security guard interrupts him and asks him to go through security check. Krishna is a bit annoyed at this.

Security guard-"Sir, aapko check kiye bina hum aapko andar nahi jaane de sakte.."

Krishna-"Abe ka be? Hum ka tumka aatankwadi lagte hain ka??"🤣

Pratigya-"Krishna, ye kya bole jaa rahe ho tum?? Check karwa lo ye yahan ka KANOON hai.."

Krishna-"Tum keh rahi ho to thik hai.. baaki…"

Guard checks him and then Kriya leaves…

Krishna is over-joyed to see so much brightness in the mall… He gets excited and says-"Babu, tumka jaun kuchho bhi lena hai chahe kapda latta, kuccho bhi khana pina hai toh befikar batana.. Kaa samjhi?? Arre yaar matlab janam din hai to…."🤣

People in the mall look at Krishna and some start giggling at him.

Pratigya stops him and says-"Krishna, ye kya kar rahe ho tum?? Itna zor se bolne ki kya zarurat hai? Hum yahin hai. Accha nai lagta."

Krishna-"Yaar babu who ee maal ki chaka chaundh dekh ke nah humri khopadiya ghum gai yaar aie liye….Accha saari…"

Pratigya-"Uski koi zazurat nahi hai.. ab chalo…"

Kriya roam in the mall when Pratigya sees a beautiful dress of a jeans and short kurti…She keeps on starring that dress but then diverts her mind as she knows that Krishna does not like this.

But, Krishna notices this and feels a bit guilty about it. He decides to make her day more special…

Kriya get into the lift to go to the second floor. In the lift, there is no one except Kriya.. The lift moves and Krishna holds Pratigya's hand tightly. Pratigya is a bit shocked and asks him-"Kya huwa Krishna?? Sab thik hai na?? ya phir ye tumhari koi nai shararat to nahin?'

Krishna-"Nahi yaar babu, hum na ee lift mein pehli baar jaee rahe hain aie liye thoda darr lag raha hai. Aur aei liye tumra haath pakad liya. Jab tumra haath pakad lete hain to kauno baat ka darr nai lagta babu…"😳

Pratigya is touched and says-"haan Krishna. Zindagi mein agar tumhe kabhie bhi kisika bhi baat ka darr lage toh tum humesha apni babu ka haath pakad lena. "🤗

Kriya share an eye lock. Suddenly lift stops and they are shocked. Later, they come to know that power has failed and the lift will not move for 1 hour…..

Krishna is afraid but Pratigya holds his hand to calm him down….

There are darkness and our Kriya… holding each other's hand tightly and firmly…

After an hour…

The lift is suspended between the 2nd and the 3rd floor. The gap between the lift and the 3rd floor is wide. The guard takes Krishna out giving his hand. Then, Krishna lifts Pratigya up on his shoulders….The people in the mall clap for them and praises Krishna for being such a caring husband….🥳

Krishna hugs Pratigya tightly. Pratigya makes arrangement for water for Krishna who suffers from suffocation due to the lift incident.

After this incident, Pratigya tells Krishna to leave the mall.

Krishna tells her to wait and says that he will be back in a moment…

Krishna moves to the shop and then to the payment counter…Krishna comes with a parcel. Pratigya asks him about it but Krishna says it's nothing special. Kriya moves out from the mall….

More updates coming...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Muskaan, add index abt updates in 1st page...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veena.S

Muskaan, add index abt updates in 1st page...😊

Sure di. Will do as time permits..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh, how sweet, Our Kriya sooo touching scene yar...
Muskaan, Rocking weekend bcos of u.. Thank U dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i too wanna more and more updates from u, so continue till u fed up with ur written work 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good one 😃 Continue 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: babithaj

Oh, how sweet, Our Kriya sooo touching scene yar...
Muskaan, Rocking weekend bcos of u.. Thank U dear...

Thanks a million... for appreciating...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Wow sucha a touching KriYa scene😃...it was soo gud...liked it continue plz😛
Edited by Eden_luvsKriya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vikram0669

i too wanna more and more updates from u, so continue till u fed up with ur written work 😃

Vikram... will never get fed up writing for my Kriya...😳

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