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Posted: 13 years ago
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Krishna had never used revolver in the past 4 years……..but he still kept it with him lest any emergency occurred………. He thought what would his babu say if she sees that he had his revolver hidden in his jeep's closet………'I don't care what she thinks' krishna said fiercely , to the air ………… well, he has got an outlet to let out all his pent up frustration now…..those thieves or thief who dared to break into his, krishna singh thakur's , restaurant is gonna pay dearly for this mistake……….they will wish they were never been born, krishna thought savagely ………. He reached his restaurant to find chandu waiting for him at the front door………..krishna looked past him n saw light shimmering inside his restaurant ……….. …….anger ripped through krishna like a bolt of lightening ….he got down from the jeep as chandu ran to him saying ' I swear bahiyya , I had put out all the lights myself…..dunno how….' Chandu flattered as he saw the rage in Krishna eyes……..his eyes fell on the gun in krishna's hand , n he gulped ………'where's the key?' krishna growled ,as he strode purposefully to the main door……….


chandu ran frantically behind him , his voice wrought with fear …'don't do anything stupid bhaiyya …..if bhabhi comes to know u still have this gun…..' he stopped at the look krishna gave him as he said 'keys'……chandu , fished out the keys from his pocket n gave them to krishna……….krishna grabbed the keys n started opening the door asking ' when u say that u have locked the door n went away , then why r u here again? Why did u come back?'…………chandu became pale , n he stuttered ….'that, …bec ….bhaiyya….i….forgot my…phone……no…I forgot t take my….wallet ….n so I came back… then I saw this light….inside…leave It na bhaiyya…..its a good thing I came back, that's why I was able to see that somebody broke in……….' He finished lamely …………'broke in !' krishna hissed through his teeth ….'so far I can't see any door or window broken here ….atleast at the front……' he said giving the keys n lock to chandu…….chandu said, his hands beginning to sweat, as he took the keys n lock 'May be someone entered from the kitchen side…….'


krishna opened the door n stepped in, raising his gun ….he looked back as he saw chandu still standing outside …..' aren't u coming in? don't u want ur wallet?'……'oh yes bhaiyya….' Chandu slowly started climbing in to the room …..krishna turned raising his gun further ….suddenly he heard a snap behind him n he turned around, concerned…'chandu, r u OK…?' he lowered his gun, bewildered as he realized that chanu had closed the door from outside…….'chanduwa….! What the hell….?' ……..krishna shouted , trying to open the door ….'what r u…' he stopped as her heard chandu locking the door…….'what do u think u r doing?' krishna shouted anger………'once I deal with the thieves I am gonna roast u alive….'….he heard chandu's voice from outside the restaurant , apologetic…' sorry bahiyya…..have to do it…..n I am sure u won't roast me for this ……have a great night……' ....'what …' krishna said, confused n angry….'and, I think u may not want to open the restaurant tomorrow…' chandu continued…., his voice full of embarrassment …..'so I suggest u hang the 'Today holiday' board at the window….' he chuckled and climbed down the steps, walking out of the restaurant , his face lit up in a shy smile……..……..


krishna stared at the door, bewildered n angry……..'what was he talking about ?' he looked sideways n saw the 'holiday' board sitting pretty on the table next to the entrance…..'whatever….!' krishna turned , arming his gun n walked towards the inner door which led to the main dining room of his restaurant …..as he walked , he could feel that something was not right….the curtains were drawn , but he could see golden yellow light seeping through them , which was not electricity, he was sure……thieves or intruders have lit up fire inside his beloved restaurant …..krishna yanked open the door n was stunned………there were hundreds of candles lit up before him in every corner, every table, n the heavenly smell of his fav rose petals filled his senses, and he blinked his eyes , n saw the floor n the tables decorated with rose petals……….he stepped inside , feeling his anger n confusion ebbing away n lowered his hand , pointing the gun loosely to the floor…………he felt relaxed , n he walked into the hall , looking around taking in the fragrance n sight ……….a slow breeze blew from outside , through the door n breathed in ,feeling calm……..


suddenly he sensed that someone was behind him……his senses picked up the heavenly scent he so loved , the presence of his love n he inhaled , feeling aroused , taking in her fragrance , but he stood still , some of the anger at her returning to him ……….he purposefully started ahead, he could feel her so close to his back ,when suddenly he felt his vision obscured by a silk cloth being tied on his eyes……..krishna turned his head to his right side, gently , his free hand slowly feeling the silk as he fought to keep his anger n displeasure at her as such, bec now some other feelings were threatening to override them………pratigya finished tying his eyes , n hugged him from behind her hands along his chest n shoulders, pressing her body to him , her lips caressing his right ear as she whispered sensuously ' What would u like to have tonight ?' ……..krishna could feel her breath on his ear n face which made him lose his control nearly, n he turned his face away , his jaw set in determined anger, trying to shrug her off ……..Pratigya, sensing his anger , loosened her hug n slipped her right hand in his right hand , slowly tugging at the gun 'Hmmm, so thakur sahab still has his gun with him……tsk…tsk….he really believed that somebody will dare break in to his, krishna singh thakur's, restaurant ………shame , shame……..' she managed to pull the gun out of his hands n she threw it away……….her words made him more angry…….


krishna tried to remove the silk over his eyes saying ,irritated n angry ' stop all this nautanki …..what do u think ? that I would fall for ur false show off ? No, I have had enough ………' pratigya grabbed his hands to stop him from untying the silk n she laughed softly…..'ah, still angry…..good husbands won't be angry for so long with their wives, when she has prepared a delicious dinner for him , especially his fav kheer……….' Krishna stopped in his act to untie the silk , his stomach grumbling , suddenly feeling hungry as he hadn't eaten anything since morning ……pratigya , giggled , pushing him forward to a table set in the middle of the hall , laden with all his fav dishes as she said ' uh , so my thakur sahab is hungry …..i know that he hasn't had anything since morning …...n l have arranged for all that he would love to have…….' She traced his right jawline with her right forefinger , looking naughtily at him, her lips caressing his right ear , her chin resting on his shoulder from the back , as she led him to the table……'especially the one which he wants the most ……..' she whispered seductively ……..


krishna felt his pulse quicken n the veins in his neck twitched as two different yet related primal hungers rose inside him ……..the sudden change in his body language almost unsettled pratigya n she blushed scarlet n stuttered ' I …I mean the kheer ….kheer…..' krishna bit back the sly grin on his lips n decided to play along , as she made him sit down……..prtaigya , flustered that how quickly she lost her 'seduction air' before him, debated whether to untie his eyes or not………..she decided against it , as she was sure she will melt like anything once he gazed at her………krishna tried to open his eyes saying 'now Pratigya I am not going to fall for ur little tricks….if u think I am going to forget the torture u put me throughout this day , forget it, u r wrong………' , but pratigya grabbed his arm rather strongly, sounding breathless …'no…no…l….let me feed u…'she was confused , a second ago she had felt the man in him roaring in delight , but now suddenly he was angry , again………………. krishna sat , his face set in the same angry mode as he hissed 'but who is gonna eat ? if u want to eat , u can….. I won't…….i am not going to die if I don't eat anything tonight …..' pratigya put her fingers on his lips 'shush…don't say bad things' …..her tone had changed , she was feeling worried now …krishna tried not to kiss her fingers , pursing his lips…..she took a long breath …..'why wouldn't u eat ? arrey , thakur sahab u shouldn't say no to food ...tht too ur fav food...u r angry with me na...Ok , let it be...but what has the poor food done to u? ' she sat next to him pulling a chair , her left caressing his right hand , while she pulled the plates of rotis to him……krishna so wanted to eat them n his hunger grew as he knew the taste must be double as she herself had cooked them……but he clutched his hands, willing his stomach to stop complaining….. the delicious scent wafting to him was not at all helping n his mouth had begun to water……….No, let her work harder , he thought naughtily……….


pratigya , sliced a small piece of roti n dipped it in the curry n smilingly offered it to him saying 'open ur mouth, krishna…… pls….' krishna turned his face away in mock anger………..pratigya , getting up from the chair n bending over him , her long plait brushing his right shoulder, her one hand slowly caressing his chin as she forced him to face her , said , her face inches from him, her voice , husky n out of breath …' pls eat, krishna, for my sake…..look I have made this all specially for u…..''no', krishna swatted her hand away , rather harshly ……'let me go….i don't want….' Pratigya , now planting a light kiss on his right cheek , asked shyly 'now, will u eat….?'……krishna , fisted his arms n fiercely held his lips pursed, to stsop him from opening his mouth , either for eating or grabbing her n kiss her ……' i don't want to eat...just leave me alone' Krishna yelled at her ….tears threatened to flow down from pratigya's eyes n she fought them back….the look in his fiercely set face was both killing her n giving her hope……….. ' I am sorry krishna…pls forgive me…. See, I am asking forgiveness ….now pls eat…..u haven't eaten anything since morning ……' she pleaded ………krishna could feel in her voice that she was about to cry …..n he smiled inwardly ….'.uff….i said I don't want ….why r u tormenting me? as if u care for me !'……….


pratigya chocked in her attempt not to succumb to tears n looked down saying ' pls…..' her voice so low that krishna suddenly made a show of frustration at her behavior n he threw his hands on air saying 'Ok…Ok…but I only want what I want the most ……' he said , his tone desirous n yet irritated……….Pratigya ,looked up to his face trying to read whether he meant what he said , a blush spreading across her cheeks, a coy smile lighting up her eyes………but as his eyes were still tied , she couldn't read it from his face, as krishna kept his face inscrutable……… 'what …?' pratigya whispered , feeling the happiness filling her heart……..'I meant the kheer' krishna said evenly , trying not to smile…….pratigya , smiling shyly , started serving kheer to a new bowl ……….'Am I allowed to know why have u tied up my vision?' krishna asked incredulously …….. 'yes, ' pratigya said as she took a spoonful of kheer in her hand n without any preamble sat down on his lap , her one hand holding the bowl n the other , spoon ……..'bec I have heard the sense of taste increases when one is blindfolded…' n she placed the spoon next to his lips, her face close to his………..krishna inhaled deeply, both the scent of kheer n his loving wife , feeling aroused like never before , n he struggled not to touch her , fisting his hands n opened his mouth ………pratigya fed him the kheer , which he eagerly ate , feeling that the taste indeed was very good ……..pratigya looked at him lovingly as she fed him the second spoonful n krishna ,forgetting to be angry , bit the spoon playfully , not releasing it , his hands snaking up her arms………..pratigya almost dropped the bowl , as she gasped , tugging at the spoon , her voice suddenly joyful n hoarse as she sensed that he is slowly coming to good mood 'krishna….'


Krishna released the spoon n lunged forward , his mouth capturing hers in a passionate kiss , his hands , burning up her neck, along her shoulders , n cupping her face ………….pratigya closed her eyes in pleasure, dropping the bowl n spoon , as he devoured her mouth , her hands entangled in his hair , gripping him tightly , a sensuous moan issuing from her throat , as his fingers tormented her neck n cheeks n hair……krishna , was gentle n brutal , as he groaned in desire, while sucking her lower lip to his mouth , making her threw her head back…..he released her , detangling his one hand from her hair n pulled at the knot of the silk cloth around his eyes , as pratigya lay panting slightly for breath in his lap , her face flushed , head thrown back , her chest rising n falling frantically, the veins in her neck throbbing, under his fingers……….krishna untied the silk , shook his head n opened his eyes n looked down at his love , laying sensuously in his lap, her trembling hands hugging him along his neck…………what he saw made his breath catch in his throat ……….


If u liked it will update soon 😉 😳

Edited by dhakarn - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb,awesome update n waiting for more n more romantic moments pls update soon before new year
Edited by vikram0669 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏 👏Lallontop Update Dhanya...😛
Edited by Veena.S - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Dhanya...Just Awesome...Please Update It Soon...Please👏
Edited by -aHnAf- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏 if they ever gave the hottest jodi award basing on fan fictions, your kriya would win all the awards hands down! You do have a great style! 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Veena.S

👏 👏Lallontop Update Dhanya...😛




Thanks yaar 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
never had i anticipated for anything as i did for your OS update😆...its great...thank you for keeping our kriya dream alive..👏.no hope on cvs
just 1 question dear😛...the last line of the update...what did krishna see that caught his breathe😉...just curious😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dhanya... Dunno how to xpress mt hapiness... Its just awesome update dear... U r so nice to all of us kriyans...
Dhanya... what is P wearing???? Pls update jaldi... u hv immense talent...
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Posted: 13 years ago
U had 2 end it there????...nw its even more difficult 4 wait till u update next😛...
Awesome update Dhanya👏👏...it was too romantic☺️😍...plz update soon n if possible plz give us a double update treat😳😳😃

Updateee jaldiii
Edited by Eden_luvsKriya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update...jaldi update karbo before x-mas...

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