KriYa... short story - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb yemi 😊👏 but u could have elaborated on what happened in the hotel room before K went to TN 😉😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yemiji🤗

Insomnia agrees with you😛😆. What a LALLANTOP scenario. Maybe we should let POPS know we have some creative writers here on MKAP forum. You get the MAHARANI BICTORIA LALLANTOP SAPTARISHI TARON AWARD for a well written script. If only they handled the track this sensibly with viewers cheering the man with a golden heart. If only he wasn't behaving like he had just found like long lost mother.😕

But kya karein! MMM is fixated on the word "R-I-F-T". Viewers are taking this four letter word bec' Pearl Gray has promised us there is a bright light at the end of the tunnel. Takurain better be ready to get the prasadi of her lifetime when Krishna turns a blind eye after his eyes are fully open to Takurain's evil doings. This time SS will pay a price by default for failing to stop Takurain from following through on her evil plans.
Edited by MERARAI - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing Yemi! But I always knew you had the talent so no surprise for me. Unleash your creative side!
Next time do add a little bit of math and science. You can PM that version to me.😆


Edited by Atticus - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
Yemi!!!!🤗
May it be JUST like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏
Lubbed it girl - K as we like him best...
Faithful, Fearless, F the world, its u and me baby,Forever!!!!!
👍🏼
Edited by kEEnkEEn - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
brilliant yemi fantabulous yaara keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
OMG...

Yemi..

this was too good...

hats off for writing such a beautiful story...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: piyarapiyari

wow yemi sis whaqt a story hope all goes like this if not so somethting like this that,ll b more and more interesting to watch i want pratigya to tell krishna that they r having only 3 days to b together and lovely and touchy conversation when krishna returns frm his parent,s room just want this briiliant post

thank you 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramanbabitha

WOW!! Yemmia, I had tears whn i read the first half anf whn i read the second part, again tears but out of joy... what if this happens, iam so feeling great abt ur writing... u r so good Yemia...I luvya lots esply for this... Thanks a ton for making all Kriyans happy atleast for a while... I wish u should be P in PG's avatar and does this scene... how nice it would be if P do this...
saath clappers for u...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Thanks Babs ... awww 🤗 I didn't mean to make you 😭. but I completely understand... me got a bit emotional too when I was writing that part 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: maya.sethi17

woow, yemi wht a brilliant post u know even in this situation iam expecting frm cv,s this tht they can show us kriya reunitedly face thakurs and win. i really want them to do tht

thank you 😳 i hope the CVs give us a pleasant surprise 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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What are you two trying to do? sneak into the hotel hoping to catch a glimpse of KP?
Chalo, Azi you've been assigned room 214 ... and Saima you get room 215.
KriYa is safely tucked away in the penthouse so you'll have to hang out inthe lobby if you want to see them 😛😆

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