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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: KriYa_life
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Jaanuu... Im 2nd..

Okay.... Chapter was awesum...thanks😃

Pratigya went to the temple walking barefoot...

OMG... Its must have hurt her so much... obviously

My poor Krishu... it pained him more seeing his Babu like that...😭😭exactly

I hope Komal's operation is successfull...sure😃

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Mitaly..

pratigya mandir woh be bina chappel😭😭 it must be hard 😊 bery hard

'he don't understand to whom he should cry for komal..? or pratigya...?

oh my krish😳 fikr nahi prat will be fine 😃 wahi tho😃

komal kaa operation trillium health care center:

Accha ontario may 😛 yaar!😲 tho u 2 r from ON 😛...that is y i see u on line when ever i am on line...😃

komal come back safe from operatin i dont want krish suffer😉 no worry here after no suffering in kriya life😃...my be just before ending my ff i may bring a small twist, with that kriya may suffer for a while😉

again nice story thanks😃

summi u r star⭐️ aw😍

@ ❤️ btw i m 1 st again😉

but secont is not bad🤣😆😆😆🤣 so true...😃

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: piyarapiyari
wow dii wouinderful aftr so many sad and cry a happy ending to NIKO yep... i will show little bit of NiKo having fun trime too😃and krishna pratigya conversationa nd krishna dancing so beautiful love it it was alovely chp thank u so much for all ur appreciations.it means a lot to me 😃and that little kid he is tooooooooooooo lovely yep...he is adorable😛...in up coming chapter u will love him more😃 love kriya they r the best obviously...cuz of them only this ff crossed 165 pages...😃 update next soooooooooon diiiiiiiiiiiii sure 😃waiting for that thanks 😃

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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: Mitaly..
PART-60
umm😛...once again you did it...😃👏
😳

Khana per gussa

no sweetheart dont do that😊

look at the pizza hut in canada!

hmmmmmmm. pizza from pizza hut

i had last week😛 grilled chiken italiano😉...yaar don't say that my mouth is watering😛 😛 😛

oxygen tube was inserted in her nose😲

ok o2sat level cum hoga after operation😆 lol😉

very good komal operation well done👏👏

i m soo happy for komal...thanks 😃.krishu part was 😆😆 one he gone out of control dear

ThanX shumi for such a wonderful chp..u r welcome mitali😃

YOU R star⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. u r a

i edited the last one also😛 i replied dear😃

thanx😳

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: roshna1020
superb chp👏👏👏👏👏.... awww...... lucky gve half eaten wet chocolate 2 krish 🤣 ....hahahaa😆.......i m soo happy for komal..i know...poor girl suffered a lot ..krishu part was hillarious one..heeee😆....thank u shumi dii for such a wonderful chp...u r belcome roshna😃.... waiting for the next chp...sure😃....

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: HamiSky
Ohh yaa.. :-)
finishd reading the updates....very good.. I need not tell this every time :-) aw that was very sweet of you😃

I like all the kid's characters in all ur FFs..so cute! thanks again...😃...read my next up date u will like him more😉

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Mita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: shumi.

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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: aleena1

Shummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii di😆🤗
aleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeenaaaaaaaaaaaa😆🤗

Lovely chapters hun..thank you dear😃.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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OMG 😲................... I forgot to say CONGO SHONGOS on your new thread.....

sorry😔.... I heard that your not well...no worry...i am feeling better now😃... hun get well soon..... have plenty of rest😊 sure sure. thanks for r concern aleena😃

Cant believe Pratigya went barefooted to the temple..... poor krish......... heartbroken to see her like that...true........ I absolutely adore Lucky he's sooooooooo cute and lovely just wanna give him a tight hug😆😆 ...thank u very much dear😃 All hats of to u madam for giving us a wonderfull ff😊😃😃

hmmmmm pizza hut....... love it ...... mouth is watering😆😆🤣...lol😆 I miss cookie dough........ I want some NOW😭 😆😆😆😆😆

yaar here you go...

YYYYYYY do u always do this?????? me cannot stay away from food😆😆😆😆...... and here you r tempting us all the time😆😆😆 hahaha...have some cookie u will feel better😛😉

Great work hun....... keep it up 👍🏼 thanks😃

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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Mitaly..
Accha ontario may 😛 yaar!😲 tho u 2 r from ON 😛...that is y i see u on line when ever i am on line...😃no dear from mtl😃no time differant😉

montreal!😃...yaar isn't is more colder than ON...? this year the winter is very harsh.i hate it😡

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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#190

PART-61

a week after:

it was friday.pratigya was perfectly fine.

around 3pm after their lunch pratigya was cleaning the book shelf.lucky was standing beside her pushing the books here and there and disturbing her.finally he claimed on a chair trying to take books from the shelf .while he was attempting he pushed some of the books down.

pratigya:'lucky...yeh kya kar raha hai tu...?😲'she said looking at the scattered books on the floor.

lucky sat on the chair and jumped down to take the fallen books.while collecting he found a album.he left other books and started looking at the pics of the album.it was almost one year old album, pratigya's engagement album! in that some of the faces he cannot recognize.

lucky:'hi...this is aunty...😊'he looked at pratigya's pics.

pratigya did not concentrate on him.she was busy in arranging the books.he hold the open album with his chest and ran to shyam saxena with confusion.

shyam saxena was sitting on the sofa and eating a banana.(🤣...)

krishna was sitting on the opposite side sofa and reading a magazine.

lucky:'dadu...dadu...😃'he pushed shyam and sat beside him on the couch.because of his sudden push the top, peeled portion of his banana from his hand broke and fall on the carpet.

krishna:'🤣...he tried to hide his laugh behind the magazine.

shyam saxena:'😡...'he looked at the banana on the carpet which he was about to eat a second before.

lucky:'dadu...dadu...😃'he took a banana from the tea table for him to eat.

shyam saxena:'kya hai...?

'he said irritatingly, still looking at the banana on the carpet.

lucky:'yeh kun hai...?😕'he showed a young and handsome man in black suit sitting beside pratigya with a charming smile.

shyam saxena:'mera chashma le aa.kuch dikha ye nahi daytha...'

lucky:'teek hai..😃'he jumped down and ran to take his spectacle.he knows where it will be.

lucky:'lo...😃'he came back with spectacle.shyam saxena wore it and looked in to the album.

shyam saxena:'yeh...?😕'he showed the pics

lucky:'haan..yeh...😛'he was peeling his banana to eat.

raunak:'yeh tho aunty kay hone wale pati hai...😊'

lucky:'aunty ko tho pati hai...😛'he was interestingly eating his banana.

shyam saxena:'kya? Shocked

..'

krishna:'

.....he stopped reading.

lucky:'haan pati hai...😛'he was seriously looking to the banana and thinking from which side he should bite.

shyam saxena:'kun bola? Shocked

...'

lucky:'my friend...😊'

krishna:'

.....

shyam saxena:'kun hai?... Shocked

lucky:'my friend....😊'

krishna:'

...

shyam saxena:'kun pati?...

' he got confused, removed his turban,kept it aside and scratched his empty head.

lucky:'my friend...😛'

krishna:'🤣...he closed his face with magazine

shyam:😕

lucky:'dadu tumare baal kahan gayeh... Confused

?'he got up... stood on the sofa with banana in one hand and tried to touch his shining bald head with other hand.

krishna:🤣...behind the magazine.first time he was seeing him without turban. his head was like a baren land... completely bald!

shyam saxena:'baal gayeh bhaad mai... Shocked

..tu kya bola...?

lucky:'mai kya bola?... Tongue

'while he was stuffing banana in his mouth a big peeled piece of it fall on shyam saxena's bald head.

lucky:'hi....dadu kay seer par banana👏... dadu kay seer par banana👏...'he clapped and jumped on the sofa.

krishna:🤣...behind the magazine.

shyam saxena:'argh!....yeh ladka bhi na...😡'he tried to take the banana piece from his head.while he was searching his head to take the banana piece lucky slapped and smashed it on his head.(🤣...lol i cannot imagine this...🤣)

krishna:🤣...

naina:'dadu kay seer pe kya banana?(here banana means to make)...😃'she came asking.

naina:'yeh kya bana rakhi hai...🤣'she laughed looking at the smashed banana on shyam saxena's bald head.

shyam saxena:'yeh badmaash ladkay ko yahan se le jao....mera dimaag kharaha hi...😡'

lucky:'dadi..mai tho banana kharaha tha...😊'he said innocently.

krishna:'🤣...he cannot control his laughter and he ran away from there.

naina:'chup kar....tu chal yahan se...'she carried him and went from there.

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago