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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
very romantic.you should have been in the writing team.please carry on.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was very well written and quiet romantic as well👏.Pls do continue😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice!!!! U can continue .... Hope cv's read dis ........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aleena1

Lovely scene hun.....⭐️

Eagerly waiting for next update................ Keep it up👍🏼



thanks for the appreciation..........will update soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: shruthiR

That was very well written and quiet romantic as well👏.Pls do continue😊



thanks a lot...........😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Arine_123


what a scene that wud be !! 😍 Hey Dhak r u listening ?? I want this ........😳 😆



wait dear,............😆😉 thanks a lot for appreciation..........it means a lot.........😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: HamiSky

Hey dhanya

Adipolli penne...

good read..its nice..continue
but one request..once u start pls update regularly.

lage raho!




thanks akka.................😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: yemi3006

great start...... 👏

if this really happens on the show we'll all be tomato face for a whole week ☺️



yes........i too hope this to happen, sometime............😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
2ND scene..............continuation.............

Krishna forcefully breaks her hug and stands up in anger........pratigya is still smiling but she realizes he is beyond reasoning now as he is in towering anger............she slowly feels the storm brewing''..a look of concern and pleading comes to pratigya's face as she opens her mouth to speak.............but Krishna shuts her up with his angry outburst ' yes, I only told u and the whole world I would give u all the love in the world..................so now I only am reaping reward for it.............u blame me for everything that's bothering u, be it ur sister, or ur kesar di or what not.....................tell me haven't I helped u in whatever u wanted to do....................then why r u pulling long faces at me, always disobeying me in every matter as if u had a bet with somebody that u will not listen to me or do as I tell, I am ur husband, damn it!!!!....................enough of this, amma was saying the right thing about u , u r so self centered, u just don't care for anybody's happiness other than your's................' Krishna starts walking towards the door to unlock it while still talking 'why am I wasting my time talking to u, I know u will do only what u feel like doing, no consideration to the persons around u at all............... pratigya is shocked at his hurtful words that before she could stop herself tears started rolling down her cheeks.................krishna stops in his tracks with his hand outstretched to open the door knob.............he listens to the sound of pratigya crying and turns around to look at her...............pratigya was crying with her eyes tightly shut a hand over her mouth to stifle the sound..................automatically Krishna walks up to pratigya and sits beside her , concern and pain etched all over his face................he calls her ' pratigya'.................. Pratigya looks at him with tear filled eyes, cheeks and eyes red from crying................krishna grabs her hand in his one hand and hugs her with his other hand................aeye babu, no, no, don't cry like this yaar, u know very well I can't see u like this, why r u hell bent on torturing me at every opportunity u get.........................' pratigya rests her head on his chest and the moment her face made contact with his chest her crying intensified.....................


if u like it then i will update it soon, replybo😊


Edited by dhakarn - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Scene 2 was beautifully written👏 How I wish you were the CV for Pratigya😊

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