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preeti4mehta

@preeti4mehta

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

wonderful 👏👏wonderful 👏👏wonderful👏👏
hey payal, i dont have words to describe my feelings. the ff is just too good yaar.😃😃
you have done a brilliant job. very nice ff.
please introduce krishna in the next chapter.
when r u going to update the next part?
update soon dear.

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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Tooooo gudddddddddd part.Waiting for the next part.Update soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.

fatima

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Payal

@paaal

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

@Aabrayy & Kash : Yup.. dears.. take ur time...

@Preeti: Thank U soo much dear... I am so glad that u liked it. Would update the next part as soon as I finish writing .😛

@Fatima: 🤗 Thanks dear

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aleena1

@aleena1

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Wow...... that was a great update👏👏

Aaah poor Pratigya.....Angad is such a disgusting creep🤢

Cant wait for your next update.... keep it up hun👍🏼

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shruthiR

@shruthiR

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Both the chps were really good😊Was it Krishna who she bumped into,the one who knocked on her door and the one who was staring at her as well?Looking forward to the next chp😊

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Azi

@Aziya

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

wooooooooooooooooooooooooow!!!!!!!!vwell written👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Angad cheeeeee.well well well wndrfully written n plzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzz cntnue sooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!11im eagrly w8n.hey,i hv 2 thngs 2 tell u
THNX for ur PM n
SORRYYYYYYY 4 d delay..............
newys keep gng!!!!!!!!!

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elle45

@elle45

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Oh... poor Prats! But how come she never know about Krishna while she visited so many times? He's not Komal's brother then? Plz do continue... looking forward to the next chapter 😃

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haala

@halaa

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

i have just read chap 1 and 2.both were superb and very well written.poor pratigya .felt sad for her.angad is just disgusting.i hope she will prove her innocence soon.thank you for the wonderful updates.plz continue soon.

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Sadie

@..CountingStars

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

😲😲😲 Omg Omg Omg!!!

I Cant Believe I Missed This!!😲

MINDBLOWINGGGGG!!👏👏👏

Lovedddd It!😃

Hmmm I Guess It Was Krishna...Looking At Her😆

Update Jaldiii!! Cant Waitttt x

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Payal

@paaal

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

@Aleena: Thanks yaar... u liked it.
@Preeti: I am really sorry for the late updates😔
@ Shruthi di: I am soo happy.. dat u liked it 😛
@Zash : 🤗 Thaks for ur sweet comments dearies
@elle : Read out the nxt chapter... hope the mysteries will unfold a lil 😛
@halaa : Thanks for ur lovely cmts..
@SadieLuvs_Suku : Glad.. dat u finally read it 😆 Hota hain yaar.. dont worrie 😉 Do stay tuned.. to watch out more of KriYa.

Thank U soo much guys... I am soo glad that u all like my updates. I am so sorry for the late update.. was a lil busy last days.. I will b updating now.. Though its a short one.. I will b updating longer update soon.

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