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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awww thankyou so much. U all building my confidence to write more now :D xxx I will update soon. :D nearly finished part 2 xxx
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Originally posted by: Binny1247

Very nice the story is very interesting can't wait to read more 😊

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Mmm......this sounds interesting.Looking forward to the next chp😊

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Originally posted by: kaasshh

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">beautiful part..... i was feeling sooooo 😭vry nice uyar....plzzz keep updating.....😳</font>

Awwww thankyou so much xxx
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Lol sorry keyama. Didn't realize u were loged in. All the thanks to u all is from me. Not from keyama :D xx
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Part 2
"Pratigya are you alright. Are u kk". My aunt and uncle were in panic.

Pratigya: "I am good... A guy called Krishna
basically saved me from embracing my self". I said with a small laughter.

Aunt: "thank god. Aeb ghar cale! U look tired. I made your entire favourite dish". She had a wide smile on her face. "I am sure u will love it."

Uncle: "Enough of talking. Give pratigya some space. Let's go."

Adars: OMG
at last you are here. I was dying to see you. I have so much to show And tell you.

arusi: move adars! With a massive hug.., welcome back pratigya.

I just laughed at them. There family are completely different then my…More happy and loving.

Pratigya: let's go.


In car:

Pratigya: uncle...umm...

Uncle: yes? What is it?

Pratigya: Mum brought me a house! That's what she told me! Ummmm... Can we stop there first? And I will drop my bags and everything.

They all listen to me in a surprise manor. My aunt was shocked!

Uncle: you are not staying there.

After few Seconds of hesitation pratigya spoke: "I brought the house and u know I love to be independent. If I live round you're..."

Before I could say another word I was interrupted by both my uncle and aunt.

Uncle: in a low tone voice. "Everything... All my business... Everything I have ever done it's all yours. I am your carers for your business. You know very well that everything is yours. Even this car and the house...

I interrupted: not my! My dads!


Krishnas place: in car


Krishna was driving. It's a BMW. Very posh. His fav car. Krishna is the only son of sajan sing. In there house it's only him and his sister komal. There is only one year gap between them. Krishni being the oldest.

Dad is never home. He is a well known business man and also very popular. Due to this Krishna and komal are always home alone. And free to do anything. But they know there limits and very good at there education.

Krishna
: dad! So... When r u leaving again.

He had a smile on his face. (A strange smile).

Krishna was wearing a Gucci top and black Jens. An ermony watch on his left hand. No other jewellery like his dad.
He looked smart and handsome… Perfect in everyway.

Ss: "Thanks son!" With a sarcastic voice. "In 3 days."

Krisna: would u like me to cancel all my uni appointment! With a big smile.

Ss: "NO". With a loud scream.

The sudden boom of his noise made Krishna
jump. And nearly lost control of his car.

Krishna
: kico bolbo! Why r u shouting? He said with an anger tone.

Ss: you done the same thing last year and missed the interview day in your university. I know your interview is tomorrow and you are….defiantly starting your engineering course this year. I don't want you to waste another year.

Krishna
: oh... Ummm... How! I mean.. How did you found out.

Ss: in a low tone.. I am your dad. I have my eyes on you.

Pratigyas car:
Still arguments.
Pratigya: fine as you wish. I will stay with you.

Uncle: that's like a good girl.

Pratigyas new place:

Adrash carried all pratigyas bags in her room.
It's a big room with two windows. In between two windows there was a door which led to the balcony. The view through my windows and the balcony was breathtaking. In middle of my room I had a huge double bed along With verities of different size pillow. The colour of the pillow and the duvet was my favourite. Light blue. Right next to my bed…was my wardrobe with Black glass door also with it matching tool and leather sofa. I had a massive HD telly right in front of my bed on the wall. I had my favourite flowers all round the room.
I absolutely adored the room.

I turned around and gave a massive hug to my uncle.

Pratigya: thank you so much. I absolute love the room.

Uncle gave me a big smile. And told me to rest.

After a 3days:

Krishna
's room were empty. He also had a massive room like pratigya with a double bed in the middle. Everything around was black... Starting with his bed cover to carpet. Except the wall which was light blue.

Krishna: shouting... Komal... Komal! Komalllllllllllllllllllllll!

Komal suddenly appeared in his room.

Komal:OMG
why r u shouting u idiot. Seriously grow up. You are 20 years old. U stupid. In a very angry voice.

Krishna
: "still in angry voice: who told dad about my interview for university.
I haven't told you a single word for these three days. Just because of day." Screaming by now.

Komal: "ummm.. Ohhh... Well... I accidently... U know. Ummm accident!... you know" she continiously mumbled. After few second of thinking she started to walk backwards. After half a second she disappeared from krishnas room.

Before Krishna could caught her. She was no where to be seen. Krishna came ran out of his room and watched komal. She ran across his room around the balcony.. Through the living room and disappeared through the main entrance.

Krishna
: omg what I will do with this girl.

He again shouted: ramu kaka! Ramu kaka!

A middle aged man came straight through the door, in krisnas room.

Ramu: ji baba. Do you want somthing?

Krishna
: yea. Well... Could you call my manager and find out when I have to start my uni. I mean what day. Thank you.

Ramu: ji baba. I will do it straight way.

Krisna was in frustrating mood. He was trying very hard to calm him self down. Either way it wasn't working. Suddenly his phone rang. This nearly made him jump.

Krishna
: "hallow" he said in a low tone.

Answer: hay it's adarsh. How are you? Haven't seen you for three days. I hard you starting university! Well guess what me my sister and my cosine will be in your class. I hop that's good news for you. You won't be that board. I went to the university today and found out we all are in same class.

Krisna just listens to him without any hesitation. It also made him smile.

Krisna: well I am glad. U have no idea how happy I am. Komal idiot told dad about the interview and stopped me from banking. I am so angry at her. You have teach her a lesson.

Adrash: are you crazy! She will kill me. She is your sister.

Krishna
: she is your girlfriend. Learn how to control her. Man up man.

Adrash: yea.. Yea... I am not like you.. Where girls scream after you. I have one and happy with it.

Krishna
: giggled. Fine. Anyway.

Adrash: well my cousin is round and my mum cooking tonight. And far as I am concern you love her cooking. :) So you and komal are invited.

Krishna
: well komal is already there. I am guessing. And I will be there by 7. Does that sound good to you!

Adrash: perfect. I talk to you soon.
Oh hay pratig........
Line went dead.

Krishna
: "pratig? Sounds femiliar." He said in a thoughtful tone.


Adrashs house:


Adrash: oh hi pratigya. What's up?

Pratigya: with a smile. Komal is here, aren't u introducing her to me.

Adrash: "umm yes ofcorse." He said with an embracing smile. "Let's go."

Living room:

Adrash: hay komal.

Komal ran across the room and gave him a massive hug. They hold each other for few minutes.

Pratigya+aroshii: cough loudly to Break there concentration.

Pratigya and arusi looked at each other and bust in to laugh.

Komal: sorry. U know Krishna
! Shouted at me this morning. So u know...

aroshii: lol. Well where is he. Adrash u did invite both. Haven't you?

Adrash: With a wide smile "I have. Anyway komal met my cousin pratigya.".

Komal: "omg we met atlast." And gave her a massive hug. "Don't you were Indian cloths? You look amazing in this top and shorts! But you know if you go out with these cloths.... In a whisper boys will defo going to loose there mind"…….. She spoke in a sarcastic voice which made everyone giggle.

Pratigya was standing there all embraced, also very sighed.

Pratigya: "sorry. I will go shopping tomorrow. You can come and help me". She said with a sigh smile.


Evening
7:30:


Everyone is waiting in the living room for Krishna, Frustrated and angry.

Pratigya: holding a pillow by his tummy. How long he is going to be I am so hungry.

Komal: omg my brother! He is never on time.

Adrash: I will hive him another call.

Aunt: could you tell him to hurry up.

Everyone was angry. Suddenly one of the house keepers came in the dinning room flowing with Krishna
. Pratigya ran across the room from sofa and sat straight on the chair.
She didn't even realize that it was the same guy who she met at the airport.

Aunt: "pratigya"… In a teas voice: "wash your hand at least."

Pratigya: gave another smile and went to the washroom.

Meantime everyone was sitting round the dinning table. Helping them self to the food.
Krishna
and adrash were sitting next to each other komal opposite of adarsh. And next to her the sit was empty for pratigya. On the Other end aunty and uncle and aroshi on the other corner.

Uncle: "where is pratigya? "

Straight way the word pratigya caught Krishna's attention and nearly made him cock.

Adarsh: with a panic are you alright to Krishna
.
Komal and aroshi gave him a weird look and ignored him.

Suddenly pratigya walked in. She really didn't give a massive deal of attention on the dinner table, concentrating more on her hand.
As she walked in uncle shouted out:" pratigya come! All the foods will disappear in are tummy if you delay a bit more." …..Everyone giggled except Krishna
.
His eyes were fixed on pratigya. She was wearing a different colour violet short. Just above her knee, with a blue sleeveless top, which just covers her tummy. She had a heart shape crystal pendent which hanged just below her collar Bone with a black thick string. She had a long straight hair just above her waist. On her left hand she wore a silver watch which looked like a thick bracelet and a charm bracelet with few charms.

As she walked towards the table, Krishna
's gaze was still on her. She came and sat right opposite of him in between komal and aroshi.

Adrash gave a slight jerk to Krishna to bring him back to the real world from his fantasy world which nearly made Krishna
chock on his food again.

Pratigya still haven realized that Krishna
is the same guy who she met at the airport.

Adrash: In wispier: "you should stop looking at my cousin like that. She will give you a big slap you know". He laughed at his own joke.

Krishna
gave him an evil glare.

Komal: "ae lo. Ai hai mera bhi. Who can never be one time." She said in cheesy voice.

Krishna
: with an evil look at komal... Shut up.

Adrash: komal... With a small look at komal he turned to pratigya.
Pratigya ai hai Krishna
. Mera best friend.

Pratigya: with a small smile... Hi.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely fanfic👏👏👏

Very well written hun xxx.........
I liked kriyas first meeting..........
Eagerly waiting for your next update...... Keep it up hun xx👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely second chater hun xx😊👏
Cant believe she didnt recognise him....... well it seems that Krishna has a crush on her.........oooooooh cant wait for next update...... keep it up hun👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aleena1

Lovely second chater hun xx😊👏

Cant believe she didnt recognise him....... well it seems that Krishna has a crush on her.........oooooooh cant wait for next update...... keep it up hun👍🏼

thank you...thankyou...thankyou sooo much. 😃😃. xxxxxxxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hmmm I Read The Beggining And I Loveee The Way You Write😳
Will Read When Im Free x

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