The Thakur's Forced Bride... ff (part 2 updated)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Virgin mistress...reluctant wife!

Indian billionaire Thakur Krishna Singh is convinced the prim and proper shapeless suits worn by Pratigya are simply a cover for the gold-digging harlot that lies beneath.
Thinking Pratigya's been stealing from his company, Krishna commands her to be at his beck and call - in and out of the bedroom. Pratigya is thrown into his world of unimaginable luxury, until Krishna discovers she's innocent - in every sence! Now she has no choice: she must become the Thakur bride!
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Hey guys its the layout or I can say summary of my new ff. I will be posting its first part in a while. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz comment 😊😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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LUB IT
WHEN R U STARTING
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh wow!!this sounds so exciting.I am so looking forward to reading this ff.Pls update soon😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART ONE

Lounging in his chair at the head of the boardroom table, Krishna Thakur, thirty-four-year old human dynamo and absolute head of the Thakur business empire, hrld the room in a state of near-rigid tension by the sheer force of his silence.
No one dared to move. All dossiers resting on the loong polised table top remained firmly closed. Except fpr the folder flung open in front of Krishna. And as five minutes edged with agonising slowness towards ten, even the act of breathing in and out became a difficult exersise and not one of those present had the nerve to utter so much as a sound.
For Krishma's outwardly relaxed posture was dangerously deceptive, as was the gentle way he was tappimg his neatly clipped fingernails on the polised suface as he continued to read. And anypne-anyone daring to think that the sensual shape of his mouth was relaxed in a smile needed a lesson in the difference between a smile and a sneer.
Krishna knew thw damn difference. He also knew that the nasty stuff was about to hit the fan. For someone around here had pulled a fast one with the company money and whant made him really angry was that the fiddle was so badly put together anyone wiyh arudimentry grasp of arithmetic could spot it a mile awy. Krishna did not employ incompetents. Therefore the list of employyees who might just dare to believe they could get away with ripping him off like this could be shortlisted to one.
Nitin, his vain ans shallow, gut-selfish stepbrother, and the only person employed by this copany to earn his place in favour alone.
Family, in other words.
Damn, Krishna cursed within the depths of his own angry thinking. What the hell gave Nitin tke idea he could get awy with this? It was well known throughout this global organisation that each branch was hit regularlyby random internal audits for the specific purpose of deterring anyone from trying stunt like this. It was the only way a multinational the size of this one could hope to maintain control!
The arrogant fool. Was it not enough that he was paid a handsome salary for doing alomst nothing here? Where did he get of believing that he could dip his greedy fingers in the poiut for more?
'Where is he?' Krishna demanded, bring half a dozen heads shooting up at the sudden sound of his voice.
'In his office,' Shakti his London PA quickly responded. "He was informed about his meeting, Krishna,' the younger man added in case Krishna was living with the mistaken belief tha Nitin had not been told to attend.
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CHAPTER TWO

Krishna did not doubt it, just as he did not doubt everyone sitting around the table believed that Nitin was just about to receive his just desserts. His stepbrother was a freeloader. It went without saying that the people who worked hard for their living did not like freeloaders. And all it took was for him to lift his darh head with its hard, chiselled bone structure, which would have been stunningly perfect if it weren't for the bump in the middle of his slender nose-put there by a football boot whwn he was in his teens-and scan with his rich, dark velvet brown eyes half a dozen carefully guarded expressions to have that last thought confirmed.
Theos. There was little hope of him managing yo pull off a cover-up with so many people in the know and silently baying for Rico's blood, he concluded as he hid his eyes again beneath the thick curls of his eyelashes.
Did he want to cover for Nitin? The question flicked at the muscle that lined his defined jawbone because Krishna knew the answer was yes, he did prefer to affect acover-up thab to deal with alternative.
A theif in the family.
Fresh anger surged. With it came a grim flick of one hand to shut the folder before he rose to his feet, long legs thrusting him up to his full and intimidating six feet four inches immaculately encased in a smooth dark pinstripe suit.
Shakti also jumped up. 'I will go and-'
'No. you will not,' Krishna said in tightly accented Englisk. 'I will go and get him myself.'
Everyone else shifted tensly as Shaktu sank down in his seat again. If Krishna had been in the mood to notice, he would have seen the wave of swift, telling glances that shifted around the table, but he was in no frame of mind to notice anything else as he stepped around his chair and strode out through the door without bothering to spare anyone another glance.
Just as he didn't bother to look sideways as he strode across teh plush hushed executive foyer belonging to the Thakur London offices. If he had happened to glance to the side, the he would have seen the lift doors were about to open-but he didn't.
He was too busy cyrsing the sudden heart attack that took his beloved fatehr from him two years ago, leaving him with the miserable task of babysitting the two most irrirating people it had been his misfortune to know-his high-strung Kyatsh stepmother, Buniya, and her precious son, Nitin Sharma.
Ah, someone save me fro smooth, handsome playboys and hypersensitive stepmothers anxiously besotted with their beautifull sons, he thought heavily. Family loyalty was the pits, and the day that Nitin's ever-looming marriage took place and he took his life and his gullible new wife back to his native Allahbad with Buniya, could not come soon enough for Krishna.
If he could get Nitin out of this without compromising his own reputation and standing in this company that was, or Nitin would not get anywhere but a prison cell.
A sigh hurt his chest as Krishna chose to suppress it, the knowledge that he was already looking for a way out for Nitin scraping the side of his pride in contempt.
What was Pratigya going to do when she found out that she was going to marry a theif?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey, the starting is really great...it's very intriguing story concept...Nitin is Krishna's step brother and is about to marry Pratigya? Hmmm.....


Can't wait to read more 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Both the chps were very nice.Hmm.....it's pretty obvious that Krishna ain't on good terms with Nitin and must be disliking him even more now.I hope Pratigya doesn't get married to Nitin.I wonder how he'll end up suspecting her of stealing from the short summary you gave first.Anyway,looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing new fan fic yaar 👏👏👏👏continue soon n cud u pm me wen u update plz xxxx

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Well..seeing the title of the fic and the writing style..don't know why I am having a feeling that it's being copied from typical Mills & Boons novel..if it is so..then of course it is plagiarism..which is an offense according to the IF code of conduct.😕



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Posted: 15 years ago
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usually i don't read any ff except tamanna's. after reading yakkudimag's note on chat thread...i visited this FF and i read it too. i don't find any thing wrong in this FF😃.for your kind information i am also a ff writer and i too know the IF code regarding FF. the IF code says 'Please avoid adding any sexual content into your written fan fictions, as everything on I-F should be fit for a 13 year old to read! '

MeetPremeer is neither bashing the actor,character or forum members nor her ff contains any sexual content😃.
after all she is trying to recreate this forum members with her writings. if we don't appreciate her work ...fine.let us not hurt her by blaming her😃.
i appreciate all the FF writers in including yakkudimag😃.they all do fabulous work👏
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