NEW FANFIC-Obsession Updated Ch8 pg 14 - Page 11

I havent updated in a very long time...... I was put off writing but recently I have been reading everyones awesome fanfics here...... so they kind motivated me to write again...... This chapter is very short....and mind my mistakes....... I just quickly wrote it and posted havent read it so go ahead criticise....... or bash.......😆😆😆😆😆😆

Chapter 8…..

Precap: Pratigya couldn't get her words out and finally manages to speak…..Please help me kamal. Pratigya collapses in Kamals arms. Pratigya felt pain around her chest……… was taking deep breaths and finally she fainted……

Kamal: Pratigya…..Pratigya….get up……..

Everyone hearing the commotion rushes by the door…. They are too shocked at the scene.

Next Part:

Chandu: The ambulance is on its way……. Should be here within 10 minutes…..

Kamal was completely broken down….. seeing Pratigya in this state……. She couldn't believe that Krishna had done this to her…….. such a creep……….

The siren was heard…… the paramedic arrived……and carefully assessed Pratigya….and laid her on a stretcher….They realized that Pratigya may have suffered internal injuries and quickly gave her a oxygen mask to help with the breathing…… Kamal sat in the ambulance shivering whilst holding onto pratigyas hand…….

Kamal: Pratigya……. You will be alright……..I'm here for you……. Nothing will happen to you……Oh God….please save Pratigya……. She's my only family…….. please I will never ask for anything more……just save her (kamal barling her head off)

Paramedic: Don't worry…… she'll be ok…..just have faith…..

The ambulance with its siren on……, whizzed through the streets……. Taking short cuts and driving through red light……whilst Chandu, Tunna and Arushi followed in their metallic green jaguar…..

The ambulance screeched to a halt, the ambulance door opened and the stretcher was lowered from the ambulance……… and porters came rushing outside to take inside the hospital. Pratigya was taken straight into A&E….. While Kamal and the others were in the waiting room walking back and forth anxiously waiting for any news….

Arushi in tears shocked by Pratigyas state began to walk away from the rest and arrived at a chapel……There was an alter and a statue of Lord Jesus…… Arushi walked briskly towards the alter…… she knelt and with folded hands began to pray….

Arushi: Please Jesus……… please save our friend Pratigya…… she hasn't done anything…….please why are you punishing her ………please we want her safe and well…. Please return her to us…….

While Arushi was praying…… Father John had appeared……he began to walk towards Arushi…..

Father: My child……. Do not worry….. Lord will answer your prayer……. Have faith…….. and remember the Lord never gives more than a person can bear…….. so my child, be strong and support those around you……. I am certain your prayer will be answered…..

Kamal who saw Arushi praying was weeping and vowed on her dead mother's grave that nothing will happen to Pratigya and will ensure that she gets full justice…… Krishna will pay for everything he has done to pratigya….mark my words….. he will pay…….

Few hours has passed……… Pratigya was taken into the ward……..

Kamal: Doctor how is Pratigya now??

Doctor: She is fine…….she has suffered a fracture in her ribs…bruises over her body and burnt marks…whoever did this to her is a coward, attacking a defenseless woman like that…..…she is lucky that she hasn't ruptured any organs in this brutal attack it could have been fatal……she is resting now and is sedated…… she will be able to return home in a couple of days, we'll monitor her for now and when she returns home she will need bed rest for about 6 weeks until she recovers…..until then give her these medications it will help to ease her pain…..

Kamal: Thank you doctor………

The doctor leaves kamal to attend another patient……. Kamal was very tired.

Tunna: Kamal….. you look worn out…. Go home…… we'll take care of Pratigya….

Kamal: No….. I'm here to look after Pratigya and support her….. Please guys go home

Chandu: but……

Kamal: No buts……. Don't worry, I'll be fine….. you guys head off…Its already 3 in the morning….you need rest as well, you guys need to pass the semester exams….. go and study…..

Arushi: Ok, we'll go , give us a call if u need anything

Kamal: will do…. (she smiles and hugs Arushi)

Arushi, Tunna and Chandu leave…….

Kamal: sat on a chair beside Pratigya……..waiting for any response/reaction from Pratigya…… As time flew…..Kamal walked back and forth in the ward……trying to kill time and kept anxiously watching the time…… Tired….she returned to her seat….drained of energy….. she didn't know when she had fallen asleep…..

It was 9 o clock in the morning, the door knob twisted and the door opened with a creak, a smartly dressed man entered the room, with a large bouquet of Roses….. Kamal stirred as she heard the door creak.

She opened her eyes, she was startled….she couldn't believe who stood before her…..

Kamal began to burn with rage……..if looks could kill…… she would have done a perfect job of it…

The man smiled whilst looking at Kamal and stepped forward…… took a glance towards Pratigya and then glanced back at Kamal….

Man: Hello kamal…….. Its been a long time since we met he said whilst grinning evilly……………his eyes glowing with pure evil.....as if dancing at the thought of his next victim.......

I love the story, it's so different from the normal ones. Krishna is actually very scary. Every time one of his scenes start, I keep wondering what outrageous stunt he'll pull now. God, the part where he slit his wrists thrice was terrifying.... gave me the creeps Plus, the Pratigya Kamal friendship is too good..... (I hope it's just friendship though 😆)

😆😆.... On the lighter side.... I'm missing Nando's now, Yum!

omg! krishna slapped pratigya for came home late!!!! girrrrrrr😡