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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SweetRozie123

sadieee! I'm interested in you updating this FF :D
Please dooo!! :)

-& oh I just realised I have not read your last one :O
will edit this post and comment. aplogies!

xx


😆😆Awwwhhh🤗Luv ya Roziee!!
I'm Updating Today BUT I...Don't Know How You Guys Will React To It...😆
And Heyy No Sorry-Shorry🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sadie...

I have been following your ff for a long time... So I DEMAND that you keep updating or else...😡😆🤣🤣
I dont watch the show but loved this ff and the previous ones😃😃😃... I have always commented on them and will always do... so hurry up and update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aleena1

Sadie...

I have been following your ff for a long time... So I DEMAND that you keep updating or else...🤣
I dont watch the show but loved this ff and the previous ones😃😃😃... I have always commented on them and will always do... so hurry up and update😊


🤣Awwwhhh!!!🤗Heyy Aleena!!🤗Missed You Buddy!!
I'm Updating Tonight!!! In Half An Hour!!
I've Also Haven't Watched The Show But This FF Was My First😳 And Also I Feel Soo Happy That People Actually Remember It!😆 Challo I'll Stop My Bak-Bak And It'll be Up In Half An Hour! I'll Pm You If You Go Offline🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku


🤣Awwwhhh!!!🤗Heyy Aleena!!🤗Missed You Buddy!!
I'm Updating Tonight!!! In Half An Hour!!
I've Also Haven't Watched The Show But This FF Was My First😳 And Also I Feel Soo Happy That People Actually Remember It!😆 Challo I'll Stop My Bak-Bak And It'll be Up In Half An Hour! I'll Pm You If You Go Offline🤗

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How can i forget your ff?????😭... missed ya
oh yes... this was your first ff.Embarrassed... got mixed up with zash_sparkling who also wrote around the same time as well( she had 2 i think)...
any way stop your bab bak am waiting😆😆😆😆ROFL
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aleena1

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How can i forget your ff?????😭... missed ya
oh yes... this was your first ff.😳... got mixed up with zash_sparkling who also wrote around the same time as well( she had 2 i think)...
any way stop your bab bak am waiting🤣


Me Tooo😭
Yuppp😳 My Writing Style Changed Too😆 Arre Haan She also used to read this😆
Okiii Me Going As Fast As Possible!
And Dekhooo!!! I'm A Dazzlerr!!!😳 NO SPAMMING Btww😆 Pure Hardwork🤣
And And I Have A Twishttt Coming Up😉 Patta Nai Kaisa Reaction hogaaa😆😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry Guys! I'm Running Out Of Time!! And I Have Another Scene To Write!
I'll Be Online Through My IPod But I Won't Be Updating! My Work Is On My PC!
Sorryyy!!! Tomorrow Morning Pakkaa!!!
Sorryy Again!
My Father Is Coming!!!😭 And I Can't Stay On My Computer While He's In The Same Room😡 Nosy-Parkers I Tell Yaa!!
Sorry Tomorrow Pakka!! Wait For Another...12 Hours😳😳 And It'll Be Long!! I Promise!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank Youu🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update Coming In 30 Minutes
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Ufff!!!! Now What Shall I Say? I'm An Idiot Aren't I?
Kitna Time Laga Diya Maine Challo...SORRY😳 Don't Shout At Me!😳 I Have A Twishttt In This Part😉😆 And I WILL TRY To Update Another Part Before This Year Ends AND Maybe Another One😆
No High Hopes!😆
AND I Have A Special Note Which I Will Post Under This Update😳 PLEASE Read It. It's Not A Complaint-ish Note😆 A Thank You Note For Some people😳
Challooo I'll Shut Up Now!!!! And MEENA!😳 Shoorryyy *Kaan Pakro-ing* Dimaag Mera Theek Kar Diya Tune😉😆Thank Youu🤗
Chal Here's The Update!

NOTE- Please Don't get Mad!! I HAD To Do This!!😳

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"Not So Fast My Love" he placed his arm in front of her as he continued "You don't even know where you are" "What? Oh come on Krishna everyone knows where the THAKUR family lives!" she said as she started walking again. "Uhh that is the THAKUR mansion, I have my own mansion...which is located somewhere else..." he replied calmly. She froze at hearing his last words. "W..where Am ..I?" she stuttered.

Now the Rest:

"I told you! We're home!" he replied smiling.

"No!! Like where are we?" she asked panicking now.

"Oh we're in ******" he replied calmly.

Her eyes opened wide in shock.

"WHAT?!!" She shouted after few moments. "That's bloody on the other side of this town! Tell me you're joking right?!"

"Krishna Singh Thakur never lies" he spoke proudly.

"Then SHUT UP!" She held her head. "Oh God Oh God Oh God!!" she repeated again and again.

"Why are you bothering God for? Main Hoon Naa" he spoke moments later.

"SHUT UP!!!" She almost screamed.

That was it. Nobody shouts at Krishna Singh Thakur! Not even the love of his life.

He grabbed her shoulders and pulled her closer.

"Enough Pratigya!!" Boy was he angry!

"SHUT UP YOU KIDNAPPER!!" She shouted and wriggled helplessly.

His grip only got tighter as he pushed her to the nearby wall and pinned her.

"Choro Mujhe!" she squirmed.

"Listen up Pratigya! I was being very nice with you but you took advantage of that" she stopped struggling and looked at him in shock as he continued "But now I guess I'll have to be harsh on you".

Before she could say anything, he bent down and lifted her on his shoulder.

"Krishna!!!" she shrieked.

"Leave me!!! Kya Kar Rahe ho tum?!" she started punching his back and moving her legs but he did not listen as he started walking somewhere.

She froze when she heard him talk to someone on the phone.

"Get everything ready" she heard him say.

"What? What are you talking about Krishna?" Pratigya Questioned.

"Shushhh" he hushed her. "You've lost your opportunity to say anything" he continued.

"What?!!" Pratigya was…clueless. Just who was he talking to and about what???!

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She sat there numb, was she really here?

Oh Hell Yeah she was!!

She stood near the window and looked up at the sky. "You must be very happy right?" her voice choked with tears.

Oh how she wanted all this to be like a fairy-tale. A drop of tear fell from her eye and followed the same path as the previous droplets of tears.

The door clicked open and he entered the room.

Silence

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- None spoke a word for a long time.

FLASHBACKS *Oh Bachaaa Lenaaa!!*

"Krishna what the hell are you up to?!" shouted Pratigya as she tried jumping off the jeep.

"CHUP! Don't move! Warna!" Warned Krishna.

"WARNA KYA?!!" She retorted.

He stopped the jeep suddenly and jumped out.

'Chalo Achcha Hua! Must be regretting this Yippiiieee' Thought Pratigya.

But what happened next was, unexpected.

"I've given you enough warnings! Now see the consequences!" Krishna said as he walked to the back and took out a rope.

"What in the-" she couldn't finish as he started tying her to the seat! *Yaad Haiii?!! Somewhere in one scene where Krishna had done that? See Main Bhooli Nahiii!!😆*

"You're tying me like I'm an animal!! Krishna Choro Mujhe!" she was in tears.

"You make me do all this Pratigya" he replied and walked towards his side of the jeep.

"Arghhh open this rope right now!!!!" she screamed as he started the jeep.

"I can shut your mouth up as well Pratigya!" he warned.

Okay that DID make her go quiet. She made an angry grumpy face and mumbled profanities.

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The jeep stopped. Pratigya looked around and her eyes widened in shock.

"KRISHNA!! Why have you brought me here?!!!" she shouted, struggling with the rope that was still tied around her and the seat.

"We're Getting Married Aur Kya" he replied calmly before getting down and walking towards her side.

She froze. Married? Now? WITH HIM?! WHAT?!! She was clueless at that time.

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?! I'M NOT MARRYING YOU!!!" She screamed and started struggling harder.

"You have NO Choice!" he replied and opened the ropes.

Before she could react he swiftly picked her up *Bridal Style😳* and walked towards the….

Temple/Mandir

"What are you doing?! Put me down!!" she squirmed to get out of his hold.

His grip only got tighter as he walked towards the temple.

"Krishna Choro Hume! I'll scream!!" she warned

"Toh Chilao" he replied.

Not that she was waiting for his answer. She screamed "HELPPP!!! BACHAAAOOO!!! I'M BEING KIDNAPPED!!!! ARGHHH!!" She screamed till her lungs hurt.

His reply was a soft chuckle. An evil laugh.

She looked at him, how could he do this? He's forcefully…Oh Goshh!

"Krishna!!! Put me down!!!!" she struggled once more.

"I Will…On the Mandap" came his reply. *Guys I'm Not Really That Interested in all this Shaadi Stuff! Be it any religions! So My Knowledge at that is limited BUT I Know more On Hindu Marriages than any other's😆!! Bollywood Freak I Told Youuu😉!!! And YESSS he's getting married to her!!*

Her eyes widened in shock and horror. He was serious! Does he even know how old I am?!!

She started struggling even harder, this time when she was fully convinced that he was….Oh Gosh!!

He placed her down on the Mandap thing and told the Priest "Uhmm Start The Shaadi" *What else am I supposed to put?! 😆*

"What?! No!!!!" she tried getting up but Krishna held her hand and forced her to stay in place.

"Krishna What are you doing?!!" she screamed.

"Chup Chaap bethi Raho!" he warned.

"Krishna jaane do mujhe!" she was in tears as she struggled to free herself.

The priest asked them to stand up *Am I going at the right track?*

As he held her up, she pushed him with all her might and made a dash towards the stairs.

Oh By the way, Pratigya wasn't wearing any shoes since she didn't have any 😆

She ran and stopped as she saw the entire temple surrounded by guards.

"Oh God!!!!" she was trembling in fear. *Oh Btw I Use Gosh/Days/Monkeys Any Other Word Apart From God, For myself 😆 But the story DEMANDS God 😆*

She took a step back and hit something. She knew what was behind her.

Krishna.

Instead of turning or waiting, she ran forward only to be jerked back.

"Krishna Choro Mujhe!" she shouted, struggling against him. She pushed him with all her might and ran.*I Know Pratigya used to say Choro Hume😆 Too Much respect for…idk 😆*

"BAS Pratigya!" he shouted and instantly pinned her to one of the pillars. *Mandir main hote hai na?*

She struggled to stand straight due to the aching feet of hers and eventually gave up and slid down on the floor. He brought his left hand forward, holding something. Her eyes widened in shock and utter horror.

"Krishna No!" she said in disbelief, looking up at his hands.

He held a little pot of powder. It was red. YEAH SINDOOR! *Aur Kitni Detail Main Jaaon! I'm Crap At All This! 😆*

"You've left no other option Pratigya" he spoke as he bent down to reach her level. *Let's say he had to go realllyyy down 😆*

He took a little bit of the sindoor.

"Krishna Please!" she pleaded as she tried moving away but he held her by the waist and jerked her closer.

She struggled even more knowing what was to come. She punched his chest with her tiny fists but he didn't budge. His only aim at that moment was her 'Maang'.

"Krishnaaa!!!!!!" she screamed as she tilted her head back and sideways.

"Bachaaooo!!!! Someone help me!! Bhaiyaa!!! Papa!!!" she screamed again and again but NO ONE Was sparing a glance at her. Endless tears rolled down her eyes.

She froze.

Closed her eyes

As she felt her forehead being smeared with Sindoor.

That was it.

All over.

She was numb, lifeless.

Krishna picked her up and took her over to the Holy fire to get the rest of the rituals completed.

The Mantras started and he walked around the fire with a numb Pratigya, seven times. Then he tied the necklace *Woh That Wedding Chain Naa*

The priest then announced them as Husband and wife.

And with that, Pratigya fainted in Krishna's Arms.


*Biting My Not So Long Nails*

How was it? Could I Get some suggestions? I Mean...What he should do 😆

Chalo My NOTE Is On The Post Below And Do Read It😳

Sadiie x

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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay My Note😆
Well I Just Wanted To Say A Thank You To You Guys🤗
I Have NOT Forgotten You Guys!
You Guys were my first set of friends! On Pratigya Forum!
Maybe No-one remembers me But I DO.

I Know Someone Called Aleena *Jis Se Raat Ko Baat Kar Rai Thi But She Went Offline😆* Uff I Know You Di! I Remember When Me And My Sister Would Fight Over And How You Used To Say "Sisterly Love"😆 Kuch Aisa Hi Kaha Thaa... And I Also Mentioned Once We Have Holidays And You Said You Didn't...And I Think You're A Teacher😆 I'm Trying To Remember Our Convo!😆
And I KNOW You Had Your Own FF's 😳 I Still Remember!!😳

Uff Aur Koun?

I Know Shruthi Di😭 Kahaan Chali Gayi Woh? I Remember How She Used To Analyse My Every Update😆 Bari serious Types Ki Ho Jaati Thi😆 And I Remember Her First Comment When She Had Said That She's Seen me Do Comments On Other's Work But Nvere Expected Me To Write One😆 Ufff Kahaan Chali Gayi! She Had Her Own FF Too!😭

Aur Koun?
Ohhh Kaaashhh Lekin She Changed Her Name To Her REAL Name😆 Ufff How I Used To Love Reading Her Stories!😍 She Also Commented Here😳

And I Know Someone Called Shumi- Di😭 I Loved Reading Her FF's😳 And Ek Baar I Had Mentioned That I Love Her Writing/Replying Style So I'm Copying It😆 Toh Phir She Came Here And Read My Story😳

Uff Aur Koun?
I Know Cwezy_Manoola But she's got her name changed To AdiYa😆 Well she's called Manal😳 Ufff I Rememebr How We Had Chatted Instead Of Updating And then she's warned me that MODs Will find out Chup kar and post😆

Ufff I Knew someone but she changed her name to starrysky😆 Uff i loved how she used to give names to Krishna😆 Ufff Not Talked since ages😭

I Know someone called Serialmaniac😆 Uff I Remember her posting a pic of a bib for krishna's Drooling session😆 She also had her own FF's😳

NZ_Rocks- Ufff You had your own FF Right?😳 Pyaar Ya Dhoka😉 Gosh I Have a lot to catch up on

Oh Aur Koun
I Know Surbhi😳 A Biggg Arhaan Lover😆 Ufff I used to get posts saying update update! And I Had also updated once because you had Personally requested me to do so😳

I Know Zash_LubUKriYA- 😳 Azi Uffooo You kept forgetting if i had updated or not😆

Uff Aur Koun?
Nabila! Nibbles😭- Kahan hai Tu Nibbles? You met me through this FF Of Mine And i rememeber how you used to send me Pm's Talking about 😉 You knooww😆 Derek Morgan😳😆

KriYa_Life- Ufff You were there from the beginning! And you had called me Sadia😆
And You were angry/Upset because i was off for months Challoo Maafii For That😳

Meena😳 Uff You were here now😆 And I Am Thankful to you for actually making me realize that yes, there is someone who wants me to update because i had given up the hope of completeing this story Uff Ghussa Nai Honaaa😳

Now Some Other Buddies Which I Know!

Arhaina Dii😳 Ufff A Biggg Arhaan Lover!😆I Was Soo Tempted at that time to call her "Slang Friend" Cuz she used sooo much slang in her FF's😆
Uffooo I Just Don't know what to say to you Di! Miss Youu😭

Sanarhaan😆 Hoyee I Remember I Had Said Sana cuz i thought Arhaan was for Arhaan😆 Lekin i was told that indeed the name is Sanarhaan😆😳

Aur Kounn?

Ufff There's Soo Many Of You And I Remember You All!! But Some Of you just stayed in my mind for like..forever😆
I'm Sorry I Know I'm Using Names But I Can't Help It.

Maybe You guys don't remember me...But I Remember You😭
So What If I'm Not In This Forum? I'll Always Remember You Guys😭
I Don't Expect You Guys To Remember Me Or even Talk To ME but my journey in I-F Had started from this forum Amongst You All😭
I'll Never Forget It😳
Maybe You guys don't remember me...But I'm Fine with it😳
Atleast I'll Know that i remembered my first set of friends😳

Uff Last But NOT The Least! Since there's soo many of you to name and my Back is killing!

Roziee🤗 Rozie we've had our ups and downs in Life and i've always considered you as my sister😳
You have been with me for Almost 7 Years now and I Thank you for being with me🤗
Ufff You're with me like every day!😆😛
Chal Show some emotions RozIe!!😆
I Love You For being with me 🤗

Ughhh I Can't believe I'm getting all emotional!!
Uff That's It!
I THANK YOU ALL For Being Here And There And I Don't Mind If None Of You Rememebr Anything😆 I Tend To Have A Strong-Ish Memory 😆 So I Remember My Times In This Forum
Thank You🤗

Edit! Thori Typing Mistakes I've Sorted Out And...Maybe Added Some More😆😳 Uff There's Soo Many Of Youu!😳 Luv You All🤗
Edited by SadieLuvs_Suku - 13 years ago

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