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morningdew

@morningdew

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Wah wah Wah !!!!

Grandmaster at work !! Skep, you get the emotions bang on..

Class work !!! 👏 🤗

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Dew ,

Simple Simon can't get physical with her................even if she goads him no end. If that happens, then ................... ohhhhhhhhhh how sad........................ and how yuck............ 🤢

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Priti

@pritirays

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: skeptical
He held her chin in his fist
With a mere flick of his wrist

She was stunned by his ire

He could match her fire with fire

Maybe that's what's in her heart ?

That there relationship has to start

Is she trying to find a way

Does her heart want to say

I do want to be with you

That I'm beginning to fall in love with you?

Man, you are one gifted writer! 👏 👏 👏
I loved these lines! You are so spontaneous and yet so awesome! 👏

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morningdew

@morningdew

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Man, I am preening like one proud mother hen for getting Skep on board !! 😎

About Krish getting physical, exactly, how yuck !! Total butchering of his character.. I just hppe it never happens.

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Priti

@pritirays

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: morningdew
Man, I am preening like one proud mother hen for getting Skep on board !! 😎

About Krish getting physical, exactly, how yuck !! Total butchering of his character.. I just hppe it never happens.

I am so hoping it will be P-RATS dream sequence! 😆 She dreams a lot about Krishna, just doesn't say anything in front of him! 😉

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#46

Does he feel that his violence

Is going to bring forth obeisance

It will only push her away

Shocked she'll be at these shades of grey

Maybe she's then really dim

If there's no difference between his bro and him ........

😭 😕

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morningdew

@morningdew

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#47

@Priti- Is that so? 😃 She dreams abt him? 😉

@ Skep- She'll hate him further.. what a mess !! Best would be, Ignore her totally.. let her come around..

Edited by morningdew - 15 years ago

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morningdew

@morningdew

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Double posts happening here again..

Edited by morningdew - 15 years ago

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Priti

@pritirays

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: morningdew
@Priti- Is that so? 😃 She dreams abt him? 😉

We had one dream sequence where she dreamt that Krish has come to kidnapp her! 😆 😆 😆 This was shown immediately after one discussion between Krishna n his friends to kidnap her! But Krishna did not do that!

So I am guessing, if she can dream this then why not this physical abuse thing too be turned out as her dream! That way CVs can gain some more TRPs and Krish is spared of all horror!

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#50

Her resentment is pouring out ............. and he thinks he's been indulgent enough. If there is no control of feelings reigned in on both sides, yes....... that going to be tragic.

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