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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: yakkudimag



Hmmm..I kept my promise..Krishna is the owner of Thakur Building business..😆



ya i remember......😆😆😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
best of luck for ur exams.i will be eagerly wait for ur update.
Edited by halaa - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kaasshh

ya i remember......😆😆😉



Hmm..I think you are eating badam everyday...good memory.😆



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jaya_1234

Thanks Ananya, for another nice chapter, urs is teh only FF i have ever followed. Good going gal. Feeling sad for poor Rolli. But what a change in lives of characters....really anxious to know where will it go....

BTW how did ur prelim exam go?



Exam ..hmm..I tried my level best..rest will soon be declared by the UPSC..😆



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Posted: 15 years ago
Amazing fanfic, please update soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago



Part 22


"Kyaa hai?"..Krishna asked curtly...

"Woh file pe sign ho gaya?Kal raat ko jo bheja tha...check kia tumne?"..Jatin questioned..

"Haan..le jaao...ho gaya..."..Krishna replied..

"Aur ek baat..Thakur Saab ne tumse baat karne k lia kaha hai..tumhari shaadi ki baat..jaanna chaahte hain k tum shaadi karoge yaa nahi.."..Jatin said..

"Baojee ka toh dimag fir gaya hai..ab tumko bhi saath kar lia hai unhone...tum apna kaam se kaam rakho na..kaahe lia humri dimag ki batti gul kar rahe ho be?" ..Krishna said with frustration..


"Now out with it Krishna..bahut chup reh lia tum..ab bolo..jo kuchh andar daba k rakha hai..just speak out...may be I can help you...come on...."..Jatin insisted..


"Jatin...tell me one thing..god forbid..if any day your beloved ..how I can say.. hmm...if any day she becomes raped..will you be able to love her any more?I mean..after that whenever you will see her..you will obviously remember that
disaster..will you be able to feel the same that you used to feel about her..before ..the..you know what I mean..."..Krishna stopped with a significant pause..


"Fortunately I never faced this kind of phase in my life Krishna..but if it really would take place with my lover...I mean..if she slept with other man amicably then of course..she is equally guilty..but if she became molested or raped ..then ..that is not her fault at all..Krishna kehna aasaan hai mere lia..kyunki maine yeh kabhi face kia nahi..haan ..it will be difficult for me to forget..but then we must remember that..we get horrified whenever we think about rape..so..how much agony and pain a girl faces..who goes through this kind of ..you know..hum uske saath sympathy dikha sakte hain..koi yeh bhi kahega k ussika dosh hai..people will blame her..society will spit on her ..because she is a girl...she is the one to be
blamed..all we can do but to feel the agony which she had..no..she has..rape is such a matter Krishna..it's a lifetime injury..life time curse Krishna...a man feels bad because of her male ego that his beloved is touched and...you know..by
other man...it's natural..but honestly..the the girl feels the pain with thousand or million time intensity..."..Jatin said...


"I understand...but what if the girl is still relishing her pain..and put herself in self-confinement...what if she is not ready to forget the curse..?"..Krishna said...


"What are you saying Krishna?Which girl relishes this kind of pain?It's not her..it's the society..the surrounding people..may the girl once tries to forget that..but society will not let her to do so...some will show sympathy..some will throw slang.. nobody will talk to her normally...I sometime wonder..these rapists..do they ever think about their own mother or sister?..I guess not...but tell me..why are we discussing this?What is the matter with you?Is there anything wrong in that way?" ..Jatin said..

"Nahi...nothing..it's fine..main soch raha tha.....k..Gorakhpur wale us zameen k jo.."..Krishna was interrupted..."What is the matter Krishna..tell me the truth..what is it?Beloved..rape..feelings..what are you talking about?What's the relevance?" ..Jatin was pushing Krishna..constantly..


"Jatin..kaam karo..mujhe pakao mat..."..Krishna said...Krishna was about to leave his chamber...suddenly Jatin compelled him to stop..he said ,"Tumne Angad Yadav ko goli kis lia maari thi Krishna?Kya Angad Yadav ne ...batao..."...and Krishna gave him a punch..."SHUT UP....SHUT YOUR MOUTH YOU MORON..."..and Krishna left the room...

Jatin muttered,"I guess I hit the right nerve....hmm..so..Krishna Singh...a tragic hero...hara hua majnoo...cool....."..Jatin smiled...


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Pratigya was alone in her chember..she was exhausted..she had spent a few sleepless nights..too much work load..she doesn't stay in Saxena house anymore ..she had baught a seperate flat for herself..the close vicinity from her officer was the excuse..Saxena house was shifted now..they are not in Manfodgunj anymore ..they had their new bunglow...Saxenas were not anymore middle class..they were also affluent..and high class..Aarushi was nagging a few moments ago...talking about some festival in her MBA College..Pratigya was standing her nagging with all her effort.."BULL SHIT"..Pratigya cursed under her breath...she decided to stay at her office that night..it's already 1 in the morning...she took a glass of water and nibbled four sleeping pills ...she wished to sleep...her mind was restless..

Suddenly her mobile rang...it was from Advocate Garg..it was a land dispute case ...matter between Hirani Enterprise and Thakur & Sons Builders..Garg is trying for an outside court settlement...Pratigya threw a slang in her mind for Garg..khoosat buddha..usko neend aati nahi..now he spoilt her sleep..Pratigya looked at her wrist watch..it is 4 in the morning...she was feeling dizzy...suddenly she got a push from inside..and left the office..and drove on her car..


Her car betrayed her..petrol was finished..she had to stop that..in the middle of road..she discovered that she took the wrong way..thanks to the sleeping pills...this place is known to her..yes...this is the place where Rohli was found....injured.. devastated...

"Pratigya...Pratigya..."...she heard something...she saw Rohli there..drained in blood...tears in eyes..."You forgot me Pratigya...how could you?You are so indifferent ..how?After all that happened..don't you have a wish to make it up ...?You know Pratigya very well..you were supposed to be the victim...what did I do?Because of your chaos with Krishna..Angad raped me..his friends raped me.. you were their target..I was by mistake...you know everything...but you are silent..I kept silent so that you family honour could be saved..already I had a great damage ..but what did you do?You also became silent?Don't you have a wish to clear the account with Angad's gang members?They are still free.."...


"No Rohli...everyday I feel the pain..I am being burnt everyday..I am trying..." ..Pratigya said...

"What are you trying for?Trying to forget me?Those rapists are free..may be any other girl will be their victim one day...you want another girl to die like me?"...Rohli became angry...

"Nooooo..it's not that I want..."..Pratigya tried to explain...


"Adarsh..and you..just became silent..didn't do anything..why?Adarsh thought that he will cover my injuries by marrying me...but the wound is still fresh which those rapists gave me..cover it..or uncover it..it is still the same...Pratigya...I am still in pain...my soul is still restless...please..set me free..let me be free...Pratigya..."
..Rohli said in a melancholic voice...


Taking 4 sleeping pills..Sedipam 10..high dose..and not sleeping..Pratigya started to shake..her legs were numb..inside her brain cyclone was passing..suddenly Rohli was vanished..and it was Angad...

"Kaa hua Partigya?Darri ho kaa?Chalo..jindagi me hum tumka darra nahi paaye.. humri maut tumko aaj bhi darra rahi hai..afsos toh is baat ka hai k galati se tumre saheli ko uthaaye hum..tumko utha paate toh afsos nahi rehta..Krisna toh goli
waise bhi maarta humko...humse ulajhne ka anjaam dekh lia Partigyajee?Hum toh mar kar ajad ho gaye..par sasoori tum..jindagi bhar tum jalti rahogi is aag me.. maut maangogi..par aasaan maut nahi marogi...roj ek maut marogi..jab bhi tum
uu laundia k baare me sochogi...kaa baat hai..Angad Yadav..tumhara marna bhi safal...jeeaa....bahut maja aata hai Partigya...tum kachhu nahi kar paai..kachhu kar bhi nahi paaogi...hum jeet gaye Partigya..tum jeeo apni haar k saath..."....



Pratigya was under sedation...not awake..not slept...stood in the middle of the road...she started to walk...where..she doesn't know...the road was full of blood.. she was hallucinating...she heard sound of laughter..demon like laughter...as if
the whole nature was laughing at her..suddenly the nature started to cry..big rain drops fell on her...it was raining cats and dogs...heavy rain fall started...Pratigya was confused whether she was also crying or not...it was raining..as if the nature was also the part of her pain and grief..she failed to hear the car horn...she failed to see a car in high speed...

The car couldn't control ..it hit the girl roaming in the road...

Pratigya was collapsing..before she closed her eyes..she saw another known face ...KRISHNA...and she wished to die..she thought she was still hallucinating..but no..it was Krishna...

Krishna looked at the injured figure..drenched in blood...he felt numb and shocked..

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A Police Officer came to Saxena house..to inform that their daughter had an major accident..she is in hospital...she is fighting between life and death..Nainajee became white...Shyamjee perspired...Dadi started to sob...Aarushi ran to Adarsh's room to inform him about the accident..Adarsh was still sleeping...it was 7:30 in the morning..


Krishna was listening to the Doctor..Pratigya already in took 7 bottles of blood...her operation will be commenced as soon the consent form will be signed by a closed relative of her...Krishna saw Saxena family..running towards the emergency ward..in great panic...


"High dose of sleeping pill she took...that is why her brain was restless as she hadn't have sufficient sleep...she is still unstable.."...Doctor said to Shyamjee.. Adarsh looked at Krishna..he was surprised...


Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago


Abhi toh update dia..itni jaldi kahan se paida karoon?😆



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Posted: 15 years ago
Omg I Feel Sooo Sorry For Pratigya, Rolli 😔
Krishna Is Just..😡
Anyways Cant Wait For The Next Update :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it realy nice part
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxx alot dear
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome FF, your an amazing writer.😊
Keep up the good work👍🏼 Cant wait for your next update
Edited by aleena1 - 15 years ago

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