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[NOTE:
Hello friends!Thank u everyone for such awesome comments and for liking it till now!🤗I'm sorry I could not respond personally today as m kind of in a hurry!
But m updating..😊Before dt I've to apologise before hand as dis update is a bit short.Once again as am in a hurry,and more stories to update..And I'd like all of u to tell me what should happen now..?😃What do u expect in da next chapter?😉Am I making it too mushy,and stupid..?Is the pace too slow?Do give me your feedbacks as I sure need to improve..😳Thank u!🤗]



Chapter-5,page-27:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99922368



CHAPTER-6.

An uncomfortable silence followed Veera's exclamation,as they both stared at each other..Veera with angry eyes,and Baldev with confusion in his..

Finally Baldev broke his gaze, and went on trying to separate their hand..

TINKLE TINKLE TINKLE!

Her bangles seemed to be teasing him..

After the initial shock of discovering her true identity,he definitely wanted to get away from her and that also fast..But due to the stupid glue,he was now really worried if fast would be fast enough..

Desperately he tried to pull his hand free,but only managed to make Veera fall on him.

"Aab ki kar raha hai tu?!Aise khichne se haat thori na chutega!Tenu ki sirf kaminapan hi ata hai?!Kabhi kabar dimaag achche kamo ke liye bhi istemal kiya kar!

[Now what are you doing?!Do you think the glue will come off at pulling like this?!Do you only know how to act like a scoundrel?!Sometimes use your brain for doing some good work too!]"Veera said irritatedly,as she tried to move away..

Baldev's heart had started thudding as soon as she had fallen on him..But he quickly tried to get over it,and pushed her away with one hand..

"To ki karna hoga?!Mainu teri haat pakre chupchap baithe rehna parega ki?!Aur haat apne aap khuljayega hai na?!Baat karti hai!

[So what should I do?I've to sit quietly holding your hands?!And our hands will get separated by themselves?What rubbish you talk!]"He sneered as he looked away,trying to put some good distance between himself and her..

It was getting risky for him to stay so close to her,as she was having an abnormal and uncomfortable effect on him again..

He had taken one extra step,which again made Veera slip,and fall on him.

"Tainu ho kya gaya hai?!Baat baat pe mujhe khichke apni baho mei kiu le raha hai?!Hero banneka shaukh hai ki?!

[Whatever happened to you?!Why are you continuously pulling me into your arms?!Are you trying to be a hero?!]"She muttered in irritation.

In the semi darkness of the hole Veera did not notice how Baldev's expression changed at her words..Nor could she see the darkening of his eyes,as he stared down at her,trying to move away from him..

With one hand only free,and without Baldev's help,she only managed to push both of them flat on the ground..

As she lay on top of him,she kept struggling trying to get up,but it had become almost impossible for her now.Unaware completely of the sudden silence of Baldev..


Baldev was getting lost again..

He had just realized how mesmerizing she looked in her Punjabi suit,with her hair tied into a long plait..Her long jhumkas,and bangles only added to her natural allure..A shattered breath escaped his lips..He was getting lost in her feel,her fragrance,and to every bit of sound she made..His ears took in the sounds..As his heart rate quickened..

Her bangles tinkled as she kept struggling..As if teasing him..He closed his eyes helplessly..

TINKLE TINKLE TINKLE!!!

And she went on struggling,as Baldev's breathing deepened,and his blood started heating up,as her soft fragranced body squirmed and brushed against his,in her struggle to get up..

He did not help her,nor responded,as he got an odd pleasure at her actions..

"Hai o Rabba!Aab kaha gaya tera hero giri!Kabhi hero ki tarha mainu bus se girne se ajata hai,kabhi pani mei kudke bachata hai,kabhi meri kamrei mei mainu tang karne aur jhappiya dene ajata hai or kabhi tu pappiya..

[Oh God!Now where is your heroism?!Sometimes you come as a hero and save me from falling off the bus,sometimes you jump into water to save me,sometimes you come to my bedroom to disturb meand hug me,sometimes you kiss..]"

Veera suddenly stopped talking,when she realized what she had just said..Her face heated up with embarrassment,and she suddenly stopped struggling.To add to her embarrassment,it was at that time she realized finally the way she was lying on top of him.Beside her one hand being trapped in his hold due to the glue,at that moment her whole body was wrapped around his hard one.

Veera took in a steadying breath,as her heart rate suddenly started escalating,and her body started warming up fast.Reacting to his proximity, to his musky scent..

Slowly she looked up,into his eyes.It was a mistake.

Her lips parted,as a soft gasp escaped her lips,as even in the semi darkness she could see the expression in his dark eyes,and handsome face.Hypnotized she stared into those deep dark eyes,that once again started to have a dizzying effect on her..

Baldev looked into her eyes,and forgot everything.A strong current passed through his body,as if making him aware once again,of the effect she had on him,since he had caught her in his arms that first day.

Breathing heavily,his dark eyes,now burning with a fire,travelled her face..Taking in her every perfect feature..

His eyes slowly lowered to her soft parted lips,and a raspy breath escaped his lips..

Involuntarily,his free arm wrapped around her waist,and pulled her closer..And as her soft pliant body came in closer contact with his,a stronger jolt of awareness passed through his system..

He could not look away from those lips..And just when he thought,it was time he look away she licked and wet her lips..

Baldev felt someone had just hit him hard into his stomach,and he drew in a shaken breath..

His free hand now lifted to her beautiful face,and gently tucked a few strands of lose hair that had escaped her plait,behind her ears..The act seemed to make her shiver in response,as his hand brushed against her skin,and that made him sigh out in satisfaction..

His hand brushed against the soft skin of her creamy cheeks once again,as if unable to keep himself from touching her..

His blood boiled,as she seemed to lean onto him more,increasing his hunger by some more notch.

His hand caressed her cheeks,her features,and then his thumb brushed against her soft lips,making her gasp out..

A pleasurable thrill passed through his body too,at her reaction.

With his eyes locked with hers,he brushed her lips again,his fingers brushing left and right across her soft full lip..

She gasped out with pleasure once again,as her eyes widened in response.

Baldev looked down where his finger was now..

And without thinking he rolled her over,trapping her under him..Their glued hand lay on one side,and his other free hand,moved to curve round her neck..

"Dikhau tujhe hero kaise honda hai..?Pappiya chaiye tainu mera..?

[Should I show you how heroes are..?You want my kisses..?]"He said in a breathless husky voice,as his head lowered slowly towards hers..

His lips so close to hers,that their warm breath were now mingling together..

Chapter-7,page-37:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100074154


Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww im in veeba land..☺️.i was like common baldev kiss her...lol 🤪great update yaar im waiting to read more...😊 nd thanks for the pm...😃
Edited by sana2511 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pappiya japppiya...😆
So emberess moment for veeba...and now they both loosing their control...veera want Baldev kisses...omg very nice and beautiful update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thnk 4 pm nd u r going perfectely fine and yes we need some jealousy too ;p
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hai oh rabba 😳😳 Bus ab jaldi update kar 👏👏 Hurry please cannot wait for the next update uff meri rabba bahut garmi hoh gayi hai 😳😳 Too good well done thanks for the pm 👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
me in veeba land still
i thought baldev will kiss her
nice update tehsina thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeh kaha laake rokh Diya yaaar..I was jus gettin drown in veeba land..
jaldi continue karooo...
N the way ur story is going,it is pretty Gud,romantic...
Love t read it more..n more..continue sooon..aur is baar plzz gv us a looong update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful part dear and like sana i m also in veeba land
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ooo wow awesomely romantic :) thanks dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg i'm so lost,i wish i'm veera now😳,ur making me restless with ur updates☺️,but no complaints,only a request plz do make me restless with ur updates👍🏼,thax alot 4 the awsome update & pm😃

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