Veeba FF:Burning Passion..,Chapter-20,page-90 updated! - Page 27

Originally posted by: luvnishal97

nice

Thank u!😊

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

ok so finally dey got to know dat they are the childhood enemies

nd both are stuck nw in the hole dat to becoz of baldev hahahahha

nd nw wat is baldev upto

do update soon

Thank u!Updating soon!😉

Originally posted by: cherryberry293

It was hot update... Ballu toh de hi raha hai Veera nu pappiya de jhappiya...
Par thodi jhappiya tum bhi deserve karti Ho 🤗 for writing this wonderful story.
Ye Ballu Aur Veera bhi na... Kahi bhi shuru Ho jate hai, kabhi nadi (river) toh kabhi gaddhe 😛

I wish ki someday vishal nd Di shud read this story... Maja aa jayega

Thank u yaar!🤗Dt was da best complement ever!😃

Originally posted by: annabh

i love your ss

can you please pm me too

Thank u!😛Will PM ofcrs!

Originally posted by: pinkrose90

Wow,that was perfect!:) you are an awesome writer.the way you described baldev and veera realizing who the other person is and their romantic scenes are just wow!:)

Thank u so much!I love ur writing too!😃

Chapter-6,page-31:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99981692

CHAPTER-7.

Veera felt shock waves travel along her nerves,and her heart beat escalated crazily,as she felt his warm breath on her lips..

Her lips that were already tingling with the brushing of his thumb,was now almost set on fire..

"Baldev..tu.."Veera lost her voice again,as he came even more close..

Baldev did not respond as he came even closer..His lips almost touching hers now..Just as he was about to touch his lips to hers,Veera turned her head to a side.

That did not stop Baldev..He moved his lips down the exposed column of her neck,making her shiver some more..

"Pappiya nai chaiya tainu mera..?Hero wala..?Bol na..

[You don't want my kisses..?The hero type..?Tell me..]"He whispered huskily,as he brushed his lips against the soft skin,of her throat..His soft bristles tickling her tender skin..

A soft sigh escaped her lips,as she desperately tried to get a control on herself..

THIS IS BALDEV VEERA!STOP HIM!NOW!!!A voice whispered from the back of her mind,but Veera seemed to be deaf to its warnings..

An irresistible thrill passed through her spine,when his lips kissed her jaw,and made its way towards her lips..

Baldev did not know how to stop himself..But he knew he had to..

It was getting impossible as her fragrance and apparent lack f protest,gave him more pleasure in kissing her..

He wanted to kiss her all over and more..

He did not know why,but he knew he just had to..Something was forcing him to..His hand round her waist tightened,making his body react some more to her soft one..

And then her free hand,clenched into his naked skin at his neck,and another thrilling pleasure passed through his system..

It did not matter that it was Veera in his arms,that he was kissing like a drugged man..His lips made its way to her lips,to claim his victory..

"Baldev.."Veera moaned out softly,making his blood stir hotly,and making his heart nearly jump out with pleasure..

How he loved to hear his name,from those lips of Veera's that he..

VEERA?!!!

Baldev moved away,from top of her,and managed to move as far as he could with one hand glued with hers.

What was I doing?!!He brushed his hand through his thick air in frustration,and then his fingers pinched the bridge of his nose.

This was Veera,and he had completely forgotten that,in the hunger and heat of his sudden burning passion!

He was too embarrassed to turn and look at Veera now,even in this darkness of the hole..How will he face her in broad daylight?!

He hated her!How could he be attracted to her?!No,it was surely an illusion!The darkness and the abnormal proximity,and the tinkling if her bangles,and the moonlight seeping in through a corner,and the..Everything had forced him to do what he had just done..

He hated her,and will always go on doing just that..He thought firming his jaw,his face turned away from where Veera now sat trying to get back her breath..

Veera was glad he had moved away before anything more happened..This time she was careless but next time,next time she will teach him a good lesson.She thought angrily,as she desperately tried to calm herself fast..

Trying to fix her messed up hair,with one hand..

Baldev knelt back on the wall of the hole,and closed his eyes in frustration.

TINKLE TINKLE TINKLE!

Damn the bangles!He cursed in anger,as he searched for his cell phone..It was not there..He had dropped it by the bush!

Veera remembered her phone,and started looking for it.She could not be sitting in here all night,with this..With this Baldev!!!

She needed to call her Veerji for help..

She had lost her phone!It must have fallen from her hand during her fall!

"Aab main ki kara?!Uss gadho ko bulau kaise phone ki bina?!Mainu iss museebat ki saath aur nahi baithna yaha!

[What do I do now?How do I call those stupids without phone?!I don't want to sit with this troble here anymore!]"Baldev muttered angrily..

"Ha ha!Mainu jaise bauhot shaukh haai tere jaise kamine ke saath rehne mein!!!Wo meri phone bhi tere wajay se gir gaya kahi!Tu ek number ka-..

[Yes!As if I have any desire to sit with a scoundrel like you!My phnone also got misplaced because of you!You are number one-..]"

"Veera!Apna zaban sambhal!Warna mainu agar gussa aagaya na..!

[Veera!Mind your tongue!Or else if I lose my temper..!]"Baldev turned to give her a scathing look..

But Veera was not ready to back down at all..

Ki karega..?Tainu ata kya hai sivae-..

[What will you do..?What can you do except-..]"

"PRAJI!!!AAP KAHA HO PRAJI?!!

[PRAJI!!!WHERE ARE YOU PRAJI?!!]"

Veera broke off in midsentence at da sound of Baldev's companions' arrival.

Baldev turned to give her a last angry look..

"Tainu to mei baad mei mazaa chakhaungi!

[I'll teach you a lesson later on!]"He said and tried to stand up,which became impossible for him without Veera doing the same.."Aab khudh uthna hai tainu?Ki mainu phirse god mei uthana parega?!

[Now will you wake up yourself?Or do I have to carry you in my arms again?!]"

Veera nearly blushed red at that..

"No thanks..!"She muttered angrily,and struggled to her feet..

Finally they were out of the hole,with the help of Baldev's companions,who finally agreed to their mistake in keeping glue instead of paint..

Finding no apparent solution Veera suggested they look for solution in internet through her tablet,and a confused Baldev agreed,as he did not want to run for help to anyone and embarrass himself further..

They were stealthily trying to enter the house when Ranveer saw them..

Instantly baldev hid their glued hand behind their bodies,silently pleading Veera not to expose him..

"Veerakhdi!Tu iththe hai?!Kaha chali gayi thi tu?!Mai kinna pareshaan tha pata hai..?!Wo kuch pindwalo ne tumhe aur Baldev ko kuye ki taraf jate dekha to mujhe laga..

[Veerakhdi!You are here?!Where had you been to?!Do you know how worried I was..?!Somw village people saw you and Baldev going towards the old well,so I thought..]"

"Arey Veerji!I was right outside,talking to Baldev..!Hai na Baldev?!"She crushed his feet with one leg,making him wince with pain..

"Haa!Haa Ranvi!Veera mere saath hi to tha!Pind di kudi nu mai kuch hone deta kya?!Tu aivei fikaar kar raha tha!

[Yes!Yes Ranvi!Veera was with me all along!Could I let anything happen to our village girl?!You were worried for no reason!]"He smiled,and sighed ut,as watched Ranvi relax and smile back..

Ranvi looked back at Veera,and smiled softly,but then his eyes fell on her the dusts on her dress,and her slightly messed up hair..

"Veerakhdi?Where did these come-.."

"Veerji!Dalveer praji is calling you!And I have to see guests off too,right?!"She gave a cherubic smile ,making Ranvi smile in agreement,before he turned to leave..

Veera sighed out in relief,and turned to a too close standing Baldev,as he had to hide the glued hand.

"I don't know why I saved you today!You should have been punished for your deed!And you made me lie to Veerji!"She hissed between clenched teeth.

Then as she noticed the almost empty party,she pulled at him urgently.

"Come on now!Let's go to the room before we are caught by someone else!Hurry!"She said softly.as she ran up the stairs to her bedroom pulling Baldev in his wake..

Finally inside her room,Veera turned and quickly locked the door..

CLICK!!!

Then as she turned to face Baldev,standing right beside her,their eyes met,and a current seemed to pass between them..

The only sound in the locked up room now were their mingled heavy breathing,as they stared into each other's eyes..

Chapter-8,page-42:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100283763

hey

Awesome update...their.fighting was.also cute.. 😊 thanks for the pm.

I dont know about anyone else but if the story contiues like this i am gonna have to sit in the freezer to cool down mind blowingly good dear now what they are in her room doors closed whats going to happen 😉 😳😳😳 Thank dear for the pm

Awesome update. Now they r again alone in one room... Arey Inko akela mat choda karo, yaa toh jhagdate yaa fir hot & romantic Ho jate hai 😛
But that incomplete kiss shud be completed by some or the other way 😉