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Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 17

Previously:

Maan and Geet yelled simultaneously. They both knew that Pari was now going to start a tirade of words which were definitely not meant for Dev's ears. Maan raced across the room to snatch the phone from Dev's hands, while Geet leaned forward to do the same. Dev moved slightly backwards and raised his arm to avoid Geet's. Maan dived for the phone in his brother's hand, tripped over the wheel chair and slammed into Geet Handa.

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For a moment, Maan was completely disoriented and struggling to get his bearings, the next he was looking into the startled eyes of Geet Handa. He was kneeling at her feet while her hands were holding on to his shoulders. He wasn't sure if it was to steady him, or to push him away. She was so close to him, that he could feel the soft puffs of her breath on his face. He unconsciously leaned in slightly closer as his attention flickered to those rounded molten eyes, the color of clear honey. He felt the same fierce attraction, he felt every time he was in this woman's vicinity, as he had from the first moment he'd seen her. His eyes involuntarily lowered to her slightly parted lips and he realized they were moving up and down. Moving? He suddenly came out of his trance and the whole room came rushing back to him.


"Aap..aap thik to hai?"

(Are you...you ok?)

Geet was asking him.


He nodded abruptly and was about to stand up when he realized that his left hand had landed on her left thigh, when he had fallen. His hand involuntarily clenched, fiercely onto her thigh in reaction. She gave a loud yelp and tears sprang to her eyes.

What? Wait? What was that? His hand moved slightly over her thigh in an enquring motion, when she grabbed his wrist with both her hands and pushed it away, jerkily.


"Kya?..."

(What)

Maan began, when she tried to get to her feet jerkily, but couldn't manage it.


"Dadi, Nakul Chacha, ya kisi doosre driver ke saath ghar bhej sakti hain kya aap hume."

(Dadi, can you ask Nakul chacha or some other driver to drop us home today?)


Maan suddenly jumped back on his feet.


"No!! I told Brij I'd bring you back home, so I'm taking you guys."

"Par aap... Dadi samjhaye na inhe ki hum Nakul chacha ke saath chale jayenge"

(But you... Dadi please make him understand, that we'll go along with Naku chacha)


She was wary of any offering from this man. She did not think she could bear to hear another tirade from him tonight, nor did she want Miri to be witness to another such confrontation."


"Na Nakul yaha pe hain, na koi aur driver. Aap ko mere siva koi doosra chara nahi hain Miss. Handa."

(Nakul is not here currently, neither is any other driver, so your only option Miss Handa, is me.)


Maan retorted, gazing fiercely at the doorway entrance behind Geet, where Nakul had just appeared upon hearing from another servant that Geet had been hurt.

Dadi and Dev looked in amazement from Maan to Nakul, as he sent away Nakul with a negative jerk of his head and told Geet a blatant lie, so that he could take her home himself.


"Par bhai, Nakul Chacha..."

"Ouch, dadi, why are you pinching me?"


He asked, rubbing his arm looking in confusion at his Dadi, who gave him a warning glance and moved towards Geet.


"Geet bete. Aap jaiye Maan ke saath. Aapko jaldi pahuchana hain na ghar, Pari ke pass. Zyada mat sochiye. Maan chodke aa jayenge apko. "

(Geet bete, please go ahead with Maan. You want to get home quickly to Pari right? Don't think too much. Man will drop you and come back. )


Geet thought for a moment and quietly nodded her assent.


"Ji Dadi."


Dadi breathed out a silent sigh of relief and tried, not to show an ounce of the inner glee she was feeling.

She slowly walked over to Maan and told him in a hushed voice,


"Kuch mat kehna ussey. Samjhe?"

(Don't say anything to her, you understand?)


Maan glared angrily at his dadi, opened his mouth to say something, then thought better of it and just nodded his head abruptly.

Dadi was smirking up at him when they heard Dev's panic stricken voice behind them.


"Nahi di, nahi. Main nahi doonga. Kabhi nahi."

(No Di no. I'm not going to give Never ever.)

"Aap kaise, aap kaise..."

(How can you, how can you...)


And then he burst into great big sobs.

Maan and Dadi jerked around simultaneously.

"Shant ho jao Dev aur batao mujhe kya hua?"

(Calm down Dev and tell me happened Dev?)


Maan crouched down before Dev's chair and patted his hair back gently. Dev looked at his brother and shook his head. Maan felt tears smart his eyes. He had not seen Dev in such an emotionally aggravated state for a long time, not even when Geet Handa had threatened to walk out of his house. He pulled his brother closer, hugged him tightly and started patting his back. Suddenly he saw a plump tiny hand, stroking Dev's back, alongside his. He turned his head a little, to see Miri Handa, standing beside Dev's chair and tentatively patting his brother's back, even as she kept a wary eye on him. Her eyes widened slightly when he looked at her directly, but she did not step back. She did not touch his hand even once and if it came closer to hers, she moved her hand back hastily. He did not know why, but the sight of the little hand soothed him, as if she were stroking him instead of Dev. An involuntary smile touched one corner of his mouth. They stood there in perfect harmony, both stroking Dev's back but never once touching each other's hand. After a long moment when Maan felt that Dev had calmed down a bit, he pushed him back, pulled out a handkerchief from his pocket and wiped the sweat and tears on his face, before asking,


"Ab bolo Dev kya hua? Jo bhi hain main thik kar doonga"

(Now tell me Dev, what's wrong? I'll fix whatever it is.)

"Aap jante hain bhai, why I'm in this wheel chair? That is the price I have to pay for being alive, while Mummy Papa died. That is why I can never walk again. I know that bhai, main janta hoon. But, if there is a miracle for me and I can ever get out of this chair, then I will never, ever, never, even for a moment sit on it again, till the day I die. Then how can Di tell me, that she wants to sit in it again, even if it is just to get downstairs."

Maan's eyes went wide and his body absolutely still, at the double shock he'd received.


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Edited by Susegad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohk. Maan babu was too bechaan to drop Geet. making bahanas.

end was depressing. but i still cudn't understand the trigger point for Dev's sudden outbrust.😕

after 8 months, we got the update. next thoda jaldi dena please...
Edited by mannu_minnie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😃

--Edited--

Finally got to read this again! 😃

It was a small chapter but it was a chapter of revelations.

Seems like Maan's parents and Dev had been in an accident. How hard it must have been for Maan and his Dadi to deal with the loss of two members of their family and with the stress of one becoming handicapped! And Dev's words there at the end which showed a desperation to be able to stand on his feet yet a surrender to the fact that he wouldn't be able to, they just made me want to cry for him. I really do want him to be healed and remain the encyclopaedia that he is. I've missed that encyclopaedia so much!

I guess I started commenting in the wrong order. Should have kept it in the chronological order. 😆
Why was Maan so intent on dropping Geet home? Are we seeing some softening here? 😳

Having come to know Geet had been in a wheelchair before, I want to see how Maan reacts. He is shocked, yes, but I want to see if he treats her any differently. Honestly, I don't want him to. I don't want him to pity her or think she's weak and vulnerable and subject to be look after. Geet is not weak. In my opinion. And she won't take to Maan's changed behaviour as kindly as he'd think.

Thanks so much for updating, Apa! I hope you'll be able to update again soon! 🤗

PS: Why were they moving when they fell? 😆
PPS: What happened to Pari's call? Did it cut? 😆
Edited by mayyo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad



😆😆

How did I know you were going to ask that question?
I live in California.
So now you can calculate the time😆



LOL... :-)
Wow California,, Such a beautiful city.
So many writers n members live abroad.
😛
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Posted: 11 years ago


Wow...kitne donin baad update karr rhe hain aap...I am waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

Anybody waiting for update or has everybody forgotten me and my story😆

Ok people updating now.😃



Finally the most awaited moment has come. This FF is being updated!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
NOW WHERE HAVE U GONE LEAVING THE UPDATING STATUS BEHIND????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh it's past midnight there.
So update in morning?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry. Abhi kar rahi hoon.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part,update soon.
Waiting 4 nxt.

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