Maaneet FF~2~Mitwa ~~ DISCONTINUED

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Hi dearies, I am discontinuing this FF as I don't think I would be able to finish this. I will update this in my blog sometime if possible.

Mitwa - My Beloved



"Friendship is a blessing." He used to laugh hearing it from his siblings. He never believed in any relations other than his family. He always thought that if a person tries to befriend you, there will be a motive behind the talks. He dotted his family and never had any strong feelings to anyone else. He thought friendship is just a waste of time and space. He was a man of very less words and befriending him was almost impossible. He was strong in his believes until one day, when she entered his life. She used to proclaim the importance of friendship aloud everyday. Friends were her strength and weakness. She was talkative and naughty. She gains a special place in anyone's heart once they befriend her. She never thinks before doing anything for her friends. She believed that life without friends was like hell, until he entered her life as a perfect stranger and changed her believes.

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Hi dearies, I am re-opening Mitwa on IF as requested by Deepa (spvd). I had some reasons to move it to my blog. Now, as I have changed the story line, I decided to move it back here. Again please don't expect frequent updates like my other FFs, but I will definitely complete all my FFs and SSs and won't leave them in between.. 😊
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Character Sketch

Geet Handa



Bubbly, chirpy, gorgeous young girl aged 22. Youngest Handa, apple of eye of the whole family. Belongs to a family of land lords in Hoshiyarpur. Her parents and brothers live in Delhi where they run their export business. Her father and brothers never denies her anything, her wish is their command. The only person whom she had to take scolding is her mother due to her over-protective nature. Very much open-minded and talkative. Nobody refuses to talk to her once they start and will get immediately fond of her. Reflects a positive energy around her and people feels at ease with her. Because of her nature, she had innumerable number of friends. She has a group of besties as she calls them, her friends from her school days, they did schooling and college together, a group of perfect friends as she imply them. Completed her B-Tech in Electronics and Communication Engineering. Likes to be independent and is in search of a job despite her mom's persuasion to do MBA and join their family business along with her brothers.

Maan Singh Khurana



Arrogant, rude, angry young man aged 29 with features that make girls go gaga over him. Perfect physique and extremely handsome. His words speak power and authority and people automatically follow him once he speaks. Belongs to the Royal family from Jaipur, who are currently settled in Delhi, the Khuranas. Power and money are his inheritance, but he is a man who built his own empire, Khurana Corporation after his graduation in B-Tech, Electronics and Communication from IIT and MBA from Harvard. In a matter of three years after foundation, KC was one of the best companies in India and now among the top-level companies throughout the world with branches all over the world. Extremely rude and arrogant to the world outside, pays no heed to the girls who swoon around him. But has a different attitude all together when it comes to his family. Loves and respects his parents and dadima. Extremely protective about his siblings. Treats everyone else with a considerable distance and never allows anyone else to get closer. Don't believe in any relationships other than his family.

Geet's Family

Tejinder Handa/Teji



Geet's elder brother, her Teji veerji aged 28, single, handsome and arrogant to some extent. Handles the export business of Handa's. Very protective and caring towards Geet.

Luckwinder Handa/Lucky



Geet's younger brother, her Lucky veerji, aged 25, single, handsome, jovial and full of life. Helps Teji with their family business. Geet's partner in mischief, always helps her from ma's scolding but extremely protective and caring towards her just like Teji.

Mohinder and Rano Handa



Geet's parents. Mohinder is the son of Sukhdev Handa who is the surpanch of Hoshiyarpur. He shifted toDelhiafter starting the export business after marrying Rano. Currently relaxing after handing over the business to his sons. Loves and cares for Geet the most, she is papa's sweet heart. Her wish is always his command. Never denies her anything and knows how sensible his daughter is. Rano is a doting mother and wife. She gets tensed only when it comes to Geet due to her carefree attitude and bubbly nature in her words. Wants to always keep her within the protection of her brothers but Geet always manages to find her way. Extremely caring and loving towards her children.

Maan's Family

Dev Khurana



Second of Khurana siblings. Charming, handsome, little flirty but good at heart aged 27. Helps Raj Khurana in their family business with Khurana Industries. MD of Khurana Communications. Loves and respects Maan and always looks upon him.

Naintara Khurana



Wife of Dev, belongs to the Royal family of Rathods. Beautiful, little proud and arrogant but good at heart. Vice chairman of Khurana Communications. Holds respect to her in-laws especially Maan. Friendly with Annie and Vicky.

Vikrant Khurana/Vicky



Younger Khurana, handsome, charming, jovial and flirty aged 22. Just completed his B-Tech in Electronics and Communication and planning to join Maan after doing MBA. Good-at-heart and joker as called by Annie. Loves and respects his family and will do anything for the happiness of his siblings.

Anwesha Khurana/Annie



Beautiful, arrogant, rude, youngest and most pampered Khurana aged 20. Baby doll of Maan, he does anything for her, so does others. Doing second year of MBBS, aspires to be a gynecologist. Nobody goes against her wishes even if she gets demanding. Cares very less of what others think about her. Loves her parents, dadima, brothers and sister-in-law very much. Secretly in love with Arjun Rathod, Naintara's brother.

Raj and Veera Khurana



Maan's mom and dad, royalty oozes out in every act of them. Always keeps the dignity ahead of anything. Loves and cares for their children, but looks upon Maan always as their pride. Respects dadima and never denies her decisions. Good-at-heart but never compromises their stances.

Savitri Devi Khurana



Maan's dadima. The matriarch of the Royal bloodline of Khuranas. Gorgeous young lady at her early sixties. Maan is her favorite child out of all her grandchildren and wants to get him married to someone who can change his attitude towards others.

Geet's Friends

Meera Mehra



Geet's bestie right from her kinder garden days. Same age as Geet. They both are inseparable. It was a unwritten agreement between them that wherever one goes, the other follows. Related to Geet's mother and is from Hoshiyarpur. Currently working in Bangalore after completing her graduation. In love with Yash and soon to get engaged.

Yash Agarwal



Geet's rightful partner in all her mischievous tasks. Been there with them since school days. Hails from well-renowned family and is extremely rich. Jovial, charming and handsome. Currently working in Bangalore in the same company as Meera. In love with Meera and to get engaged soon. Always tries to keep Geet, Meera and Pari away from strangers and keeps an eye on them being fiercely protective.

Rehan Malhotra



The silent member of their gang. Studious and very much devoted to his friends. Belongs to a middle class family. Geet is the only person who can bring him to talk and he adores her for her nature. Working in Bangalore.

Rahul Chopra



Bade bhai of their gang. Handsome and little serious in nature. Always keeps a protective stance over others. Senior to others of the gang by two years. Even though he was not there all the time with them, their friendship was intact. His family are family friends of Handas. Currently taking care of his family business from their Bangalore office. Secretly loves Geet, but keeps it aside due to the fear of rejection.

Pari Singhania



The most jovial person of the group. Gorgeous, bubbly, vivacious young girl belongs to the Royal family of Singhanias. Family friends of Khuranas. A die-hard admirer and fan of Maan Singh Khurana, her Mr.Dreamy. She and Geet together often lands on trouble but friends will always be there to protect them. Aspires to join KC and is currently looking for a job along with Geet.

Vivek Wadwa



The flirt of their gang. Handsome, charming, jovial. Belongs to a Royal family of Patiala. Secretly loves Pari but since he knows about her craze for Maan, keeps quiet. Been with them since school days. Always protective when it comes to Geet and loves her like a little sister. Joined their family business after graduation and shifted to Bangalore office as his friends are there.

Maan's Office Staff

Aditya Malik



Right hand of Maan Singh Khurana aged 28. The CFO of Khurana Corporation. The only man whom MSK trusts beyond his family. Loyal and hard-working.

Sasha Shergil



Regional Manager for all Indian offices of Khurana Corporation. Proud, arrogant lady aged 27. Admires MSK and wants to marry him but Maan pays no heed to her except for work. She has done extremely well in her post and MSK trusts her with her work.

Pinky Manchanda



MSK's office assistant in their Bangalore office. Old friend and distant relative of Geet. Bubbly, innocent girl who is totally a foodie.

More will be revealed as story progresses.
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Part 3

Maan was in a really foul mood the whole day. He lashed out the anger on poor Pinky who was his assistant in Bangalore office and fired two employees for some silly mistakes. Everyone was afraid to be in his near vicinity. He called his private detective wing and asked to get the information of the girl he met in the park, taking help from his guards. By evening, the file with her details was there in his table. He smirked seeing her name even though her surname sounded familiar to him. He thought, "Geet Handa, from today you will not have a single day of peace. You messed with Maan Singh Khurana. You humiliated me in the public. Now get ready to face the worst." There was no much information regarding her family other than she is from Hoshiyarpur settled in Delhi, now in Bangalore searching a job, staying with her friends. Maan smirked and told, "So Ms. Geet is in search of a job, I will make sure that you are not getting placed anywhere. This is just a beginning Ms. Geet, you will see the worst later on." He never bothered much about the family background of his enemies. He just wants to make their present and future horrible that they will never mess up with him. Pinky reached home and told about the ruckus MSK made in office and Pari was more than interested in listening to all MSK's stories. Geet and Meera shook their heads going back to studies.

Next day started on a light note for both of them. For Geet, expecting to get through today's interview while for Maan, with a satisfaction of what he is going to do with her. Geet took blessings from Mr. Manchanda and left along with Pari who was more bothered about her dressing rather than on the interview. They reached the Campus and were smitten by the beauty, infact **** was one of the best IT companies in India. People were less, as it was a scheduled walkin. Both of them did well and everything went fine until the final round. Pari came out happy to get selected and waited for Geet to come and they can share the good news together with others. She didn't have a slightest of the doubts about Geet's selection. However, when Geet came out with a sober expression which turned to a calm one seeing her, she was definitely worried. Before she could ask something, Geet told, "Congrats Pari, you finally made it. So let's party today." Pari was really confused. She held Geet and asked, "Geet, kya hua? Tumhara offer letter kaha he?" Geet told smiling, "Are buddhu, mujhe nahi mila tho offer letter kaha se aayega?" Pari shouted, "What??" That caught the attention of the people around. Geet muttered a sorry to them and left taking Pari along. Once they were out of the campus, Pari held Geet and asked, "Geet, tell me why they haven't selected you?" Geet sighed and told, "Chod na Pari.. Nahi hua tho nahi hua. Usse kya farak padtha he?" Seeing Geet denying again she decided to talk after reaching home. But she couldn't understand why they rejected Geet who was academically brilliant and was exceptionally intelligent. Anyone who interviewed Geet will never reject her. None of her friends doubted that. They left for home while Geet trying to cheer up Pari for her job. Unknown to them, someone had been noticing them from far.

One phone call was enough for Maan to make sure that Geet won't join ****. He wanted to see the disappointment in her face. He had a meeting nearby and decided to wait for a while to see her. When she came out he saw Pari along with her, it was a surprise for him to find Pari Singhania with her. He knew her as she used to tag along with her father or brother in the business parties. From the way they talked he knew that Pari is close to her. He saw that Pari is upset about something and he for once doubted if it was Pari who couldn't get through the interview. But the words that reached his ears when they moved past his car cleared his doubts. What he couldn't understand was why she was not disappointed as he expected her to be? She was rather calm and composed and was trying to cheer up her friend who was worried about her. This was not what he expected. He left deciding that he won't sit back until he sees her defeated face. If he could read her eyes, he could have seen the disappointment.

After reaching home, Geet made all Pari's favorites along with Manchanda to celebrate the Pari's employment. She called all their friends to celebrate. Everyone was sad and apprehensive about why Geet was rejected, but Geet simply shrugged it off telling in her style that, "It is their loss. Geet Handa will get the best always." They all kept aside their apprehensions and enjoyed along with everyone else except one who could always read her eyes. Rahul knew that she was hiding her emotions just for her friends. He looked intently at her while she caught his eyes. She knew that he understood her better than others, so just blinked telling that she will be fine. Rahul smiled and she went back to enjoy with others somewhat forgetting about the first outright rejection she faced. After the party, everyone left and Meera, Pinky and Pari hit bed sooner. When everyone was asleep, Geet slowly went near the window and sat looking outside. She couldn't comprehend why the interviewer, the lady was so rude to her that she found it so difficult to answer her. She hasn't even waited for her answers and told an outright no, that too on her HR round, she felt extremely bad about it. This was the first time in her life that she felt bad about a rejection. However, least did she know that it was just a beginning.

Maan was in his gym meanwhile furiously working out. He wanted to see her defeated look, and then only he will be in peace. He had in his desk the list of interviews scheduled for her in the next one month and had taken care of it wisely and made sure she won't get anywhere. Somewhere a little amount of guilt was there for making such an excellent candidate struggle so much for a job, but not enough to overcome his hatred for her. Everyday Geet will start with a new zeal to get the job but her misfortune followed her in every interview she attended. She was getting disheartened but kept it for herself as her friends were getting sadder with each rejection she faced. She didn't want them to be sad and did everything she could for cheering them up. Yash and Vivek were ready to argue with the interview board after she was rejected for the second time, but she made them understand that it is common. However, the constant rejection made everyone worried for her. Mohinder and Tej had even decided to bring her back to Delhi, but Geet was adamant to find a job.

She decided that if not big companies, she should try on smaller firms. She saw one posting in a job portal and applied for it. She got a call the very next day from a person named Mr. Mehra. She was asked to meet him on some place. She was little confused as the address seemed to be a residential area. However, she decided to give it a chance. She knew that her friends won't allow, so she just informed Rahul on where she was actually going. When she reached the address, as she thought it was a huge mansion and there was some construction going on next to it. She rang the bell and a lady of late thirties opened it. She asked for Mr. Mehra and she asked her to wait. After sometime a man of mid forties came down. She instantly had a liking towards the man. She greeted him, "Hello Mr. Mehra, I am Geet Handa. We had a talk yesterday regarding the job opening you have." He smiled and told, "Geet Handa, yes I was expecting you only. Make yourself comfortable." Once she was seated, he told, "As you expected I haven't called you for an interview, rather I want to have a discussion with you. Your profile looks so outstanding that you could get selected in any top companies. Then what made you to apply for this?" Geet liked his straight forwardness. She told, "Mr. Mehra, I applied to all top companies. But I got rejected in the interviews for reasons I am still unaware of. So I thought why it is really required to work in big companies. Anywhere I work, I will give my best. Only difference will be in salary and in the process models. It doesn't matter for me at this early stage as I am just a fresh graduate. If my skills could help you then you can appoint me."

Mr. Mehra smiled again and told, "Geet, I hope you won't mind me calling you like that. I like your straight answers. And as you told your skills will definitely help me if you are willing to work on a start-up firm and you will be the first person I am recruiting. I have few clients and couple of projects. If we could make a good start, this firm will grow. But it will depend on your decision." Geet asked, "Mr. Mehra.." Before she could proceed he told, "Geet, you can call me uncle as your father will be only few years elder to me." Geet smiled and told, "Ok Mehra Uncle, but why you don't want to interview me?" He told, "Geet, I don't need to take interview of a person to assess him/her. I am sure that you can do it. So are you willing?" She thought for a while and told, "Yes Uncle, I am ready. So when will we start?" He smiled and told, "We can start from next Monday. I will email you the offer letter and few documents. Go through those before you come on Monday. And one more thing, you have to give me a commitment of minimum one year. Read the offer letter carefully and sign it. If any clause is not agreeable you can tell me." Geet agreed and after having a tea she left. She was feeling light at heart after the discussion. It was like all the tensions that she had during the past few weeks just vaporized.

She reached home and told the news to all. The first reaction from all was no, but Geet made it Yes' with much persuasion. She called home and told them about the job. Everyone disagreed at first but they had to agree finally. She had received the offer letter from Mr. Mehra next day and it seemed pretty good offer for a startup firm even though it won't match upto what was given by big firms. She signed it and kept taking a copy for herself. Meanwhile Maan got the information from his detective that she joined a start-up firm. He had already made sure that she gets in no good companies, not even medium sized companies. He felt calm listening to him even though was feeling a little guilty somewhere to have done something like that to her. He decided to leave her matter here as he had so many things to take care. The higher management in Bangalore had made some blunders before client that he had to come to handle it personally. He fired around ten people in higher management due to their irresponsible behavior and everyone was afraid in every single step they made. The only people whom he trusted were Adithya Malik, CFO of Khurana Corporation and Sasha Shergil, Regional Manager for India. Both were currently in Bangalore to assist him in the current situation. Pinky was really efficient in managing his schedule except for her craze to eat. Even though Sasha recommended changing her from the post, he kept her knowing that she can handle it better and she won't drool over him much. One more reason to keep her was Manchanda, her father whom he respected.

Days started to move forward in a good direction for both of them. Geet joined the firm and she gave her hundred percent to the work. Mehras were treating her like a daughter and she used to have her lunch and sometimes dinner along with them. If she is late either her friends will pick her up or Mr. Mehra will drop her home. He was very much pleased with her work as he could understand her real capability. They started getting more clients and work as Geet finished everything given to her efficiently and her creative ideas were very much appreciated by the clients that they recommended their firm to many others. Slowly Mr. Mehra rented out a small office building and recruited ten to fifteen fresh graduates to assist Geet giving her an upper hand to manage them. Geet's nature helped others to learn fast and they became more like a family increasing Geet's friend circle. Meanwhile Maan settled most of the issues with KC, recruiting efficient managers and having discussions with clients. He decided to keep a watch for five more months as he wanted to make sure that nothing goes wrong.

Geet's life was going extremely good. She was satisfied with her work and the environment. She learned a lot from Mr. Mehra as he had worked on a lot of good companies and had a very strong background. She got accustomed to everything that has to be considered while running a firm. She considered their firm as her own and worked so hard for its growth and Mr. Mehra made sure that every time there is a good profit a share goes to Geet also even though she refused to take. Meanwhile Meera and Rehan who were in very good companies were truly disappointed with the kind of work they received as they were not seeing much growth there. They were studious and always wanted to do something innovative which they were not getting to do. Others were happy with their job as they had time to work and enjoy. Everyone was happy for Geet as she was the one who suffered a lot. Vivek and Rahul always managed to take time from their business and joined others. Their weekly outings and short trips gave them the much needed relaxation inspite of their jobs and business. Pari was still mad after MSK but whenever she went to KH along with Manchanda he will be outside for some meetings and finally gave up the wish to meet him and concentrated further on her job. That is the only way by which she could get to KC.

Maan had not forgotten about Geet. She came to his mind once in a while still somewhere making him feel guilty. One such day he was going to office cursing the traffic for making him late when he heard a screeching sound at the other end of the road. A biker had lost control while overtaking a bus and had fallen down. The other side of the road had less vehicles compared and when he thought that he will get hit by some other vehicle, an young lady from an auto which was coming behind his bike came out and stood almost by the middle of the road stopping the vehicles following. When she was sure that no vehicles will come forward she rushed to the biker. No one had yet come to help him except the auto driver and his head was bleeding. He seemed to be a teenager and may not even have license. All were just watching sitting in their vehicles. She checked his wounds and told the driver that he needs to be taken to hospital. The driver alone couldn't hold him and she looked around for help.

Seeing everyone just watching she told, "Arey, why no one is coming forward to lend a hand to him?" Everyone was looking at her silently when someone told, "We don't want to get into any accident cases. It is a headache. He seems fine, he can walk." Her face turned red due to anger and asked him, "If someday you had an accident like this and no one is caring what you will do? Wait for some supernatural force to come and take you to hospital?" She didn't wait for the answer and moved ahead to help the person to get up. She kept on asking him questions occasionally scolding him for over speeding. She took his friends number making a call to them informing them to come directly to the hospital. When the auto moved ahead, Maan was sitting there shocked. He had seen many accident cases and his drivers had helped many but it is the first time he was seeing a lady helping someone like this and he never expected this from Geet. He was really shocked. She didn't bother while standing in the middle of the road, she didn't bother about getting late to office, she didn't bother about anyone watching her, she didn't bother about the stains in her dress, the only thing that bothered her was the biker's well-being. He couldn't just forget that incident. His thoughts were disturbed when he reached office.

Hi dearies, this update was posted only on my blog. So posting it again here. Next update in few minutes.. 😊
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Part 4

The rest of the days he couldn't get rid of her thoughts. So he decided to go for jogging much to the dismay of his guards. The next day when he went to jogging in the park, the first thing he found was the object of his distraction helping an old lady who came for morning walk to sit, she seemed to have breathing problems. Soon other people surrounded them, who all seemed so friendly with her. After a while a man in late thirties came and took the old lady with him after thanking her. He was all the while watching her not even moving a bit from where he was standing much to the surprise of the guards. He came out of the reverie when she got up and glared at him. He looked away and started jogging ignoring her and everyone near by, cursing himself to have stood like that. That was Maan Singh Khurana, he knew to gain the composure the same way he lost it. As he completed two laps he noticed her standing with a group of ladies talking to them. Whenever she sees him, she will avert her gaze from him. He left after taking eight more laps. Through out the day she seems to have dominated his thoughts, he couldn't understand what triggered this change but he knew that he need to get rid of it. He believed that it is always good to face things rather than running away from it. So he decided to go for jogging daily. He met her daily in the park. In the next few days, he could understand that she was simple and kind, someone whom he believed has seized to exist in this mean world. He could see that she was a regular person much like him and every time he met her, she will be talking to someone and everyone seems to like her. She completely avoided him or rather never tried to come on his way. He had even seen her talking to his guards when they thought that he was not noticing. He wondered how much she can talk. Watching her slowly became his favorite pass time.

Geet was initially taken aback when she started to see him daily, but ignored him remembering about the incident. She became friendly with his guards but never used to speak of anything regarding him. Most of the people coming in the park knew that he was Maan Singh Khurana, but never tried to talk about him to Geet as they knew she disliked him from the very first incident. Geet was never a person who will be harsh or rude at someone and she can't stay without talking to someone whom she knew even once. So it was irking her that she couldn't talk to him. She knew that he watched her from far and somehow has got accustomed to seeing him daily. She even told her friends about the khadoos she meets daily in park. Her friends were surprised because knowing her she can never stay without talking to someone whom she is acquainted with, even people who had issues with her had eventually turned to her friends even in college due to her nature, then how come Mr. Khadoos was an exception. Even Geet was getting confused.

Geet decided that today she was going to talk to Mr. Khadoos. What he will do much? He may tell something that she may not like, after that she can royally ignore him. She changed into her jogging tracks and t-shirt, tied her shoe lace and rushed to the park. After greeting her park friends as she calls them, her eyes searched for him. There he was, talking on phone. It seemed the conversation he was having was not pleasant for him and she could notice him disagreeing. She decided to go and talk to him when he finished. That is when she noticed a pole that was just next to him was shaking. She ran towards him without a thought and pushed him aside. Before she could move away the pole hit her legs and she fell down due to the impact. Maan was so annoyed when someone pushed him and his phone fell far away. As he turned to see who did it, he saw Geet falling down being hit by the pole. He understood everything and rushed near her. Before she could protest or anyone could do anything, he picked her up in his arms and asked his guards to get his car. Geet was shocked even though in pain, she could see the concern in his eyes when he picked her up. But he was a stranger till now to her. She told, "Aap mujhe neeche utariye.. Mein apne friends ko call karthi hoon." He gave a glare to her that made her shut, it was not definitely her nature. Others followed him concerned for Geet. He turned and told them that he will take her to hospital and others agreed knowing his nature very well. Geet silently sat in his car when he placed her inside and sat next to her. She was looking at him with her big doe shaped eyes when he took a shirt from what seemed to be a mini cupboard and wear it. Then only she noticed how big the car was.

Her thoughts were broken when he asked, "Kya zaroorat thi tumhe beech mein aane ki. Mein itna weak nahi hoon ki ek pole se mujhe kuch hoga." She pouted and told to herself, "Dekha babaji, khadoos tho khadoos hi nikla. Thank u bolne ke alawa dat raha he." He heard her murmuring and couldn't help but smile, soon he regained his composure before she could see and told, "Geet, apne aapse baat karna band karo. Kuch kehna he tho mujhe kaho." She pouted but remembering something he asked, "Aapko mera naam kaise patha?" Maan told immediately, "I heard someone calling you." She told, "Par mujhe aapka naam nahi patha. That is not fair. Agar aapne uss din nahi chillaya hotha tho ab tak mujhe patha hotha. Ab aap kehna chahthe ho yaa nahi, mujhe aapka naam jaanna hi he, kyun ki aap tho mera naam jaan gaya hoon." Before Maan could tell something she told, "Aur ha, mein kisi ko apne papa ke naam se ya apne parivaar ke naam se nahi jaanna chahthi hoon, sirf first name, so your name." Maan was amused hearing her explanation and talks, no wonder she is like this, she doesn't know Maan Singh Khurana and she is not bothered about it. He started feeling bad for doing that to her. He told extending his hand, "Maan, I am Maan." Geet immediately took his hand and smiled, "Wah ji aapka naam tho bahut acha he. Lekin mere diya hua naam se acha nahi he." He raised his eyebrows and asked, "Oh, so you gave me name in advance. Tho boliye kya he mera naam jo tumne diya." Geet fumbled, "woh.. chodona.. ab tho hum pehli baar baat ki he, woh aakhri baar ho jayeja." He insisted, "That is not fair Geet. You have to tell." Geet closed her eyes and told praying to her babaji not to make him angry, "Mr. Khadoos.." But she opened her eyes hearing his laugh. She smiled seeing his laugh, he looked nice laughing. Maan was laughing like this after a long time. He stopped hearing her, "Aap haste hue ache lagthe ho. Yeh angry young man image aap pe bilkul acha nahi lagtha." He looked at her when she smiled shaking her head and told, "Aap mujhe uss din se lekar naraz tho nahi hena? Woh kya hena, I don't like people showing over attitude. Everyone should be considered as human, money will come and go but ultimately we are all the same. So I don't like when someone does something like that. I know you might have felt humiliated but I couldn't help it."

Maan liked her straight forwardness. She was transparent, no hiding, no sweet talks, everything is crystal clear about her. Few minutes of talk had actually changed his whole impression about her. But what he did to her was something not right. Maan Singh Khurana for the first time in life was feeling that he was at fault and the fact was that he was not feeling angry that someone can make him feel guilty. He told, "It is fine Geet. Even I couldn't have reacted like that." Geet gave a sigh and told, "Ah babaji, ek tension tho mann se nikal gaya. Aapko patha he I was upset since the time you have been a regular jogger, about the fact that I am not talking to someone whom I am seeing daily. Mujse nahi hoga. Don't think rubbish, ok.. I will talk to everyone in the park starting from the kids to dadus and dadis. I am like that." Maan smiled hearing her talks and bend down when he remembered something. He slowly touched the portion where it was hit and Geet jumped in pain. She told, "Dekha.. I was making myself forget about the pain and you, khadoos reminded me again." She bit her tongue and looked at him. He smiled and took his phone dialing some number. Before Geet could tell something, he put his finger above her lips silencing her. She pouted shaking her head while he took his finger immediately when he felt the smoothness of her lips. Before his thoughts could process the call was answered. He told, "Sneha, are you at home?" After finishing the call he looked at Geet who was looking at him questioningly. He asked, "What? You can't expect me to take you to a normal hospital. Do you want tomorrow's page 3 headline about you being spotted with me?" Geet shook her head immediately and told, "Isliye mein boli thi na, I will call my friends. Ab hum kaha jaa rahe he? Dekha babaji, yeh khadoos ke saath hi mujhe bhej diya." Before Maan could reply, the driver informed that they reached. Maan went out and the driver opened the door for Geet. She came out and saw that they are near a beautiful villa and saw a name board with Dr.Jai Chauhan (cardiologist) and Dr. Sneha Chauhan (General medicine) written in it.

Before she could ask something a handsome young man opened the door and there was a look of surprise in his face seeing her before he greeted Maan, "Hi buddy, kaise aana pada yaha.. Yaad bhi ya nahi hume?" Maan shot a look and asked, "Mein tumhe dekhne nahi aaye ho? Meri behan kaha he?" A beautiful young woman emerged from inside carrying a three year old who seemed just woken up. She also had the surprised look seeing Geet. She told, "Kyun tang kar rahe ho Maan bhai ko? Aao bhai. Aur yeh kaun he jo aapke saath he? Introduce tho karwalo." Before Maan could tell anything Geet told, "I am Geet, and this khadoos is my friend since today morning." She bit her tongue immediately when Maan glared at her while Jai and Sneha burst out laughing. Sneha noticed the blood trail in her leg and asked immediately, "Are Geet, aapke pao mein chot lagi he." Maan who was about to give an earful to Geet remembered why they were here, immediately took Geet in his arms much to the amusement of the three and told, "Iske pao mein ek pole gira he. Tum pehle uska check up karvalo." Jai and Sneha led them inside while Geet was feeling butterflies in her stomach when his strong arms held her tight. She told, "Khadoos.. Mujhe neeche utariyena. Mein chal sakthi hoon." Maan looked at her and told, "Chup.." She pouted again and looked away. Jai and Sneha were awed by the way they both interacted. Knowing Maan Singh Khurana, this was something impossible.

He placed Geet in Sneha's consulting room table and went outside with Jai. Sneha checked her wounds while Geet gave her all information on how they met and about everything till now. Sneha who herself was so talkative liked Geet's nature and became friendly with her soon. She also got to know that Geet doesn't know that he was Maan Singh Khurana. For Geet, he was her friend who was little khadoos but good at heart. She thought to let it be like that; she could see the sparks in both and prayed for it to be true. When they came out Maan was pacing in the living room. Sneha smiled seeing her brother like that. She told, "Maan bhai, she is alright. I have given proper medication to her wounds. Ab aap saas le sakthe ho." Maan was embarrassed but somehow it didn't matter to him. Geet smiled and soon started to talk to Jai in her usual toofan mail style. Sneha smiled seeing her and the way Maan was looking at her, it was definitely something different. Both were out of the thoughts when Geet screamed after looking at the time, "Hey babaji, mein late hogayi. Aaj tho ek important presentation bhi he." Everyone smiled hearing her and Maan too remembered about his meeting scheduled at ten. He told, "Sneha, I think we have to leave now." Before he could proceed, Geet told, "Ek minute. Sneha di, apne number tho do. Mein aapko pakka call karungi. When you are free, we can meet." Maan smiled seeing her nature. She had got close to Sneha, Jai and their three year old Ryan in just an hour. After bidding bye they went out.

Maan told, "I will drop you near home. Where do you stay?" Geet told, "I stay in *** street." Maan was surprised and asked, "Where in *** street?" She told, "Ha right.. Aapko kaise sab jagah patha hoga.. Woh KC ka MD hena, Maan Singh Khurana uske ghar ke paas he, Manchanda uncle ke ghar pe. Uski beti Pinky meri friend he." Maan was surprised hearing that and they got inside his car. He never imagined that Geet was staying just next to his home and that too with Manchanda. He smiled hearing her telling about him to himself, he asked, "Oh great.. So you stay near MSK's home. Have you met him before?" Geet shrugged her shoulders and told, "Why would I meet him? I heard that to get an appointment with him takes months. And I am not someone desperate to meet some rich hunk." Maan was surprised and she continued, "Ha, mein aapko batana hi bhool gayi. Woh Pari hena, my friend, she is mad after him. I don't know how can someone be so crazy for someone when she knew that he won't pay any heed to her. She is totally mad, you know, she wants to join KC just to work with MSK and she is even ready to take up any job so that she can be with him." Maan was amused listening to her talks and about Pari's craze for him. He smiled while she continued to tell him about her gang, how they have been together. Both didn't know how time passed until the driver told that they reached the destination.

Hi dearies, hope you liked this part. Please leave your comments.
Edited by --Dia-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update

Finally geet and maan talked

omg wat an express she did not even take a break while talking but maan sudden change towards her was a surprise.. the biggest thing is she is still isnt aware who is he... loved the fact tat both were so normal..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome story
loved all four parts

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