Fan Fic - The Outsider - Page 37

MT darling,

Aww....you are really fantastic when it comes to describing people, their emotions, clothes each and every detail so beatifully dear.👏And your sense of humour dear is the best, you excel in that dear.👏

Loved Jai watching at Bani and her interaction with everyone. And loved Bani alot especailly for her dialogues with Pia, just loved Pirahina🤣 and the botox joke alot🤣. Too good MT , too good.🤣

🤣 And Pooks aks Poouch aka Pushkar , 🤣 he was such a cutie pie 🤣 and the best thing her brother😉

I had a hunch it would be so when she said she was not alone after her mothers death.😃

And now for our hero getting all worked up and jealous after hearing the words from Poochs mouth Live-In Realtionship🤣

Poor Pooch is definitely going top be dead meat for sure🤣🤣🤣 until and unless Jai finds out the truth soon that he is Bani's mother and nothing more and Bani still loves him as she did before and she knows his feeling more then he knows his own.😳

Cant wait for the next part from you dear.😃

Love

Krishna

Rekha Di,
love it!!!
that was too funny!!! 😆
Pooks and Buns 😆 😆 😆 no comment on the names 😆 😆 😆
OMG i can't believe that their first meeting was so amazing...simple but yet amazing...thank you for making it private...
But seriously this meeting had me in fits...especially with Pooks around... 😆
btw love his way of calling all the people in their wrong way...but why is that? does he not remember names or just simple not too bothered with the right choices? 😆 😆 😆
love they way you had Ekta Cooker...seriously 😆
My god i love this part...it is so funny 😆 😆 😆
I fear for Pushy now...poor him, he has no idea what he has gotten himself in...
So alas Bani knew of Jai's feelings...that is excellent...
something to watch out for now...
Love love lorn state of Jai Wadia 😆 😆 😆 sorry got carried away...
ok i think i've written enough..
please continue soon
rooj

Loved how colourful "Pooks aka Pushkar's character"was in this part. 😆 😆

Please keep him on in the next part and do save him from JW's wrath. The poor thing's harmless. 🤡

Originally posted by: pooks

Loved how colourful "Pooks aka Pushkar's character"was in this part. 😆 😆

Please keep him on in the next part and do save him from JW's wrath. The poor thing's harmless. 🤡

OMG...There is a member by the same name??? Talk about coincidence!

Arre yaar! Now I will make double sure that "Pooks" is not harmed by JW😆

On a serious note, this was completely unintentional, I had no clue that my character would have a nameksake also!😃 I hope you don't mind my using the name!

Cheers,

MT

PS: I had taken the name from an animated character!

I don't understand how you can not like your final draft MT!

Was practically rolling in laughter at Ekta Kapoors characters, wholly at your mercy!😆

My sympathies entirely for Tarun....he's not so bad that he should be punished with a wife like Pia.....on the other hand, better him than JW!😃

Pooks (how in the world did you come up with that name😆), however silly, is simply adorabe and so naive to annoy Jai like that!........Poor guy!........Hope his neck remains intact by th end of the story!

I also loved the 'DHOTI' and 'VEST'.........The silent 'N' was hilarious!

Thats was absolutely briliant...i just dunno wat else to say, its left me speechless!!
Thanks
Ria XxX

Mt, another hilarious update!! Pooks!! 😆 😆 DHOTI and VEST!! i burst out laughing resulting in curious looks from my brother!!

Pooks, is such a loveable person!! Ekta Cooker!! 😆

Will he able to survive JW.. uh. i hope so!! poor guy!

jai is going to feel quite stupid and relieved when he figures how that pooks is bani's brother!!! 😆

Tanu

"OMG...There is a member by the same name??? Talk about coincidence!

Arre yaar! Now I will make double sure that "Pooks" is not harmed by JW

On a serious note, this was completely unintentional, I had no clue that my character would have a nameksake also! I hope you don't mind my using the name!"

Cheers,

MT
PS: I had taken the name from an animated character!


No worries.. MT. Simply loved your Pooks in the fan fic. 😃 He's such a cutie..and loved JW's response to him "Devil wears Dalda"... 😆 😆

awesome part... just loved Pooks 😆 😆 , but Jai se panga ab iska kya hoga?
please continue soon,
Kripa.

Excellent update again.

Leave pooks as is, we all love him. 👏 👏 👏

Loved how Bani gave back to Pia as good as she got. Want to know how Tarun( ek mamooli lawyer) can afford to buy a Prada for Pia.(May be Laloo Prasad Yadav ka corruption case handle kiya hoga)

The company names(initials ) that Bani/pooks came up with are wicked.😆 😆 😆

Loved all the interaction of the characters in this episode.

pooks raised a green-eyed monster in Jai by mention the phrase for their living arrangements. At least Jai 😈 admits that he loves her and will do anything to make her his.