Pavitra Rishta Written Update 17th January 2014

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Pavitra Rishta Written Update 17th January 2014


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Karmarkar House

Ankita, Naren, Sunanda and Kinnari are at their house. Kinnari says Ankita, do you not know how to dance? Naren says it's not Ankita, but Ahana. Kinnari says whatever, you know what? I am a trained dancer, I took training for Western dance. Naren says yes so we will also dance. Naren says to Ankita that you know how to dance and tells her that she did a very good dance. Ankita says yes sir but that was a different kind of dance, it was an Indian dance, I know only that kind of dance. Naren says so you perform an Indian dance, a good Indian dance. Naren says to Kinnari, best of luck, you need practice. Kinnari smiles and says ok, Kinnari leaves. Sunanda says Naren, are you comfortable in your new room? Naren hugs Ankita and says Attu, I am more then comfortable, if I knew I would be comfortable I would have shifted much earlier, right Ahana? Naren says but I forgot a very important thing from my old room. Sunanda says what thing? Just then, a scream comes from upstairs. It is Kinnari screaming. Naren says Kinnari, Sunanda says that this is Kinnari's voice. Naren and Ankita run upstairs.

Karmarkar House in Naren's bedroom

Naren, Ankita, Sunanda, Raunaq and Kinnari are in the bedroom. Kinnari had sat on the cactus plant which was on the chair which hurt her. Naren is very worried for his plant and is asking the plant if it got hurt and says if such a big girl sat on you then you must be hurt. Naren says it's ok, you'll be fine. Kinnari says angrily, I am in pain and you are worried about that plant?! Sunanda says Kinnari, relax! Raunaq smiles. Sunanda tells Raunaq to get some ointment from the first aid box. Raunaq says yes Attu and goes. Sunanda tells Kinnari to take some rest. Sunanda asks Naren, why is your cactus plant in this room? Take it to your room. Come on, be a good boy. Naren says no, no, no. Sunanda sighs and leaves the room. Kinnari says to Naren, how would I know that you put that cactus on the chair and does anybody just put a cactus on the chair? Naren says this is my plant, my favorite plant! Don't call it a cactus. And Ahana tell her, that this room belongs to my plant just as much as it belongs to me. And are you a kid, that you could not see that such a sweet plant sitting on a chair? How could you sit on it? And you hurt the plant so much! Naren says Ahana we have to take him to the doctor.


Karmarkar House in Naren's bedroom


Ankita is laughing, her and Naren are about to leave the room when Kinnari says to Ankita, one minute! Naren has left the room and Ankita turns back to face Kinnari. Kinnari asks, were you laughing at me? Ankita says Kinnari I was not laughing at you, I was laughing at what Naren sir said. Kinnari says oh just shut up, don't try to act so innocent. I am in so much pain and you are enjoying it so much?! Ankita says Kinnari? Kinnari says you will have to pay a ton for laughing at me. At the sangeet I will show you your worth and your place. A chawl girl messes with me? Now just wait and watch. Ankita leaves the room.

Mahatre House/Karmarkar House

Mansi is in her room. Her phone rings, Mansi picks it up, it is Ankita. Mansi says hello, yes tai. Ankita asks, how are you? Mansi says I am ok, why did you call? Ankita says Manu I had to talk to you about something important. Actually Raunaq's wedding date is one day before yours. Mansi says so? Ankita says so, what so? Did you know how tense I was? I did not know how the wedding would happen, here is Raunaq's wedding and then there is your wedding, how will I manage? But thank God Raunaq's wedding is first and then it's your wedding. Both weddings will go very well, right? Ok listen, tomorrow is Raunaq's sangeet so please bring everyone here on time, I will wait for you and get everyone ready. Mansi says tai, I will not come. Ankita says you won't come, why? Mansi says don't ask me for the reason, I am just not coming. Ankita says Manu what happened, is there a problem? Please tell me if something happened. Mansi says tai, I'm just not coming. Ankita says Manu I know something happened, or else you would never say this. Don't hide it from me, did Raunaq do anything to you? Did he misbehave with you?


Mahatre House/Karmarkar House


Mansi says tai I don't want to talk about this right now, please don't force me. Ankita says look Manu you don't come, it's not a problem. I will handle everything but Manu please don't hide things from me. Manu please don't hide anything from your tai, it is my promise to you if you hide anything from me then you see. Ok you take care of yourself and call me from time to time, ok? Mansi says yes tai. Ankita says bye and they hang up. Mansi thinks to herself, what do I do, should I tell everything to tai? No, I can't tell her, whoever Raunaq is, he is tai's brother in law. If tai gets to know what happened she will react very much, and she will get into a problem with her in laws, it is best that I keep quiet.

Karmarkar House in Raunaq's bedroom

Raunaq is doing dance practice with a dance instructor, they are dancing to a song. Kinnari is sitting down on the couch using her phone. Raunaq and the dance instructor keep dancing until Raunaq gets tired and he sits down. The dance instructor turns off the music and tells Raunaq to take some rest, and that she will come back after a little bit. The instructor leaves. Raunaq goes to Kinnari. Raunaq says to Kinnari, hello, why did you need to trap me into these useless things? I do not like these things at all, but yet I am still dancing and look at you! You like all these things, so why are you passing time on your phone? Kinnari says you know that I can't dance! I am in so much pain. Raunaq says so am I just going to dance like a foolish person?! Kinnari says keep your voice down! Kinnari stands up and says I am not used to talking in such a loud voice. And also, I have no interest in doing this sangeet, this wedding is not happening according to my will. This wedding is happening because your Attu wants it. And you know what, there are 1,000 guys better then you that flirt around with me. So who would want to marry you? Raunaq smirks and says oh hello madam, who are you talking to? Kinnari says of course, I know your entire history, you always get attracted to every girl. After all you have no standard. Raunaq says oh, I don't have a standard, should I talk about your class and reputation? If I do then you will get so embarrassed, I know all about your affairs in Nagpur.

Karmarkar House in Raunaq's bedroom

Kinnari smiles and says yes, I left the house, and I went with my driver but however he is, he is far better then you. He just didn't have money but you have a lot of money, but you know what? You don't have a status, your family has a name and status and that's why you got a girl like me. Raunaq says oh, I got a girl like you, so you love him but you're marrying me? Kinnari says of course, because he only loved me, he did not run after every girl like you do. Raunaq says so then go and marry him. Kinnari says I don't understand why we're discussing all this, because we have our own interests. And also, I am getting married to you for my father's sake and because of your Attu, and my parent's happiness, because if I did not agree to marry you then they would get me married off and send me to some chawl. Kinnari gets a phone call from a friend and she leaves the room. She tells her friend it's good she called her, and says she is getting bored in this rubbish place. Raunaq looks annoyed.

Karmarkar House

Naren and Ankita are in the main room. They are doing dance practice. Naren and Ankita are holding hands and Naren is helping her with the dance. Ankia sits down and she thinks to herself, this is the right time to know about Ahana and understand her, I will not get the chance again. Ankita says sir I need to ask you something. Naren says yes, ask. I will tell you about the dance moves. Ankita says sir where was the first place you met Ahana? Naren smiles and says you're asking me when I met Ahana for the first time? Ankita says yes sir I have seen many times that after marriage the husbands forget how their love story started. So I just want to test to see if you remember. Naren smiles and says romance, you're checking to see if the romance is finished or not. Naren says ok what do you think, that I will forget? Ankita says no. Naren says that's the most special and important thing of my life, how can I forget it? Naren tells Ankita about the first meet and how he was behind her and says he was wearing a boring, old fashioned, old coat and you thought I was a professor. And do you remember the Pizza Express, you ordered a single cheese pizza and I ordered a double cheese pizza but when the order came you took the double cheese pizza, you might have taken the single cheese pizza because you were fat. Ankita laughs, and Naren asks her if she remembers. Ankita says yeah sir, do you remember anything else? Naren says Ahana I remember everything but we have to prepare for the dance and practice. Naren and Ankita start their dance practice. After a little bit, the lights go out. Naren says how could the lights go out? Ankita says how could it not? Naren says because you got the current just now. Ankita says sir how will we dance? Naren says one minute. Naren holds Ankita's hand and they both start dancing.

At the doctor's office

Ankita goes to a doctor's office. Ankita says to the doctor, doctor I want to know about Ahana, whatever you know, I want to know about Ahana because the more I know about that girl the more I can understand Naren sir and then make him understand. But please tell me whatever you know about Ahana. The doctor says frankly speaking, even we don't know much about that girl, we just know that there was a girl named Ahana who Naren loved. At a point, she got in a major accident and Naren could not bear that accident and he got in this condition. We don't know where the girl lives, where her house is or about her relatives. Ankita says but doctor do you think the memories of that girl could help Naren sir get better? The doctor says it could definitely work. Mrs. Karmarkar, it is very necessary for us to know what exactly was the relation between Ahana and Naren, what was there and what memories were there which brought Naren to this stage. Mrs. Karmarkar I'm sure Naren has a lot to say, he has a lot of things in his mind which he can't say openly. The day these things come out in the open he will be normal and his mental balance will be stable. After that a few days of medication and I'm sure he will be perfectly alright.

Karmarkar House

The family is sitting in the main room. Sunanda is talking to the pandit ji and asking him if Mansi's wedding is 4 days after Raunaq's. The pandit ji says yes tai it is a very good day, if the wedding Is done on that day then it would be very good or else we would have to wait 4 months, there is no other good date. Sunanda says but pandit ji this means Raunaq's wedding and her sangeet are on the same day? The pandit says yes. Sunanda says this is not possible, how can Naren and Ankita attend both functions? Shashank I'm so sorry, we can't postpone Raunaq's wedding. All of the arrangements have been made and the cards have been sent, I'm really very sorry. Shashank says if this is a problem then we'll postpone Mansi's and my wedding. Naren says no actually the wedding should not be postponed. Shashank says but Naren this can't happen, to have 2 functions on 1 day, it will be hard for you. It is very necessary for you to be at your brother's wedding with your wife. Naren says yes so when am I prohibiting? Raunaq's wedding will be during the day and the sangeet will be at night, and then me and Ahana will come to your function. Raunaq says I think bro is right, you know when do good days come? And the wedding should be the day that the pandit ji says. Raunaq says I'm so sorry Mansi, I won't be able to attend your sangeet, I mean we have our wedding so how will we able to come? Mansi says to Naren, jiju, are you sure you'll be able to manage everything? I mean all the wedding duties will be on you, how will you attend both functions?


Karmarkar House


Naren says Mansi don't worry at all, both of us will manage and Shashank don't take tension at all. You enjoy your wedding, Ahana and I will take care of all the arrangements. Shashank says no Naren we will do it, actually baba and aai confirmed a date and our wedding is happening then and that's enough for us. Naren says that's what I am saying, you enjoy your wedding. Rushali agrees. Naren says Ahana why don't you say anything? Ankita says whatever you guys decide is good but I just wanted to spend some time with Mansi but Shashank if your mother wants it then than I have no problem. Shashank says ok we will leave now, ok? Thank you. Shashank and Mansi say bye and leave. Naren tells Ankita to make a 3 G list. Ankita says 3 G list? Naren says yes, Guest, Gift and Gaana.(Song) Raunaq is going to Shashank and Mansi and blocks their path. Raunaq smiles at Mansi.

Outside the Karmarkar House

Raunaq, Mansi and Shashank are standing right outside the home. Raunaq is telling Shashank and Mansi how the door is jammed and doesn't open very easily, and says I like to do things which are not easy. That's why I didn't fix the door because I like to open doors which only I can open. Raunaq opens the house doors and smiles. Raunaq says oh, this opened so easily, please. Mansi quickly leaves. Shashank says dryly, thank you. Shashank leaves. Raunaq smiles and he turns back. Kinnari is there and she asks him what are you doing here? Raunaq says nothing. Kinnari says I'm talking about Mansi. Raunaq says I told you Mansi flirts with me. Kinnari says really? Raunaq says yeah but I prohibited her now. Kinnari says why? Raunaq says because I have to marry you madam. Kinnari says do you think that I'll believe you? You know what, by looking at you, I think you're a dog, a dog who runs after every girl but you never reach her. Raunaq says Kinnari, behave yourself! This is Karmarkar House, not your Nagpur society, understand?! And to make things really clear, my matter is different. I bark and I bite and to make things clear, she was running after me, not me running after her. Get that? Kinnari says ok, I get it. Because if the older sister can marry a mad man then the younger sister could run after you.

Karmarkar House in Naren's bedroom

Naren and Ankita are in their bedroom. Naren is practicing his dance moves. Ankita is dressed up and she shows Naren her dress. Naren says wow. Ankita says sir what are you doing? Naren puts a black spot on Ankita's cheek. Ankita says what is this? Naren says a black spot. And you look prettier then prettier then prettier then pretty. Ankita says thank you. Ankita puts the black spot on Naren. Naren says why did you put it on me, I'm not a pretty girl. Ankita says, you could get the evil. Naren says who said this to you? Ankita says my heart. Naren says does your heart talk to you? Ankita says yes. Naren says ok Ahana, what do you think, am I crazy? Ankita says no sir. Naren says you don't think so? I think you're crazy because everyone calls me mad except you. Ankita says because you're not mad, due to your incident. Naren says incident, what incident happened with me? Ankita says sir, each person fears something. Naren says but I don't fear anything. Ankita says you are afraid of crowds, camera flashlight. You are afraid of it right? Naren says yes but why am I afraid of it? Ankita says because you are afraid of losing Ahana. Naren says but my Ahana is with me, so why do I fear it? That's why people call me crazy, thanks. Ankita says why are you thanking me? Naren says because you called me handsome, that's why. Ankita says but I did not call you handsome sir. Naren says you were going to say it so I thanked you in advance. Ankita tells Naren that he is looking very handsome, really. Naren says I won't say thank you. Ankita asks why. Naren says because I said it in advance. Ankita and Naren laugh. Naren says shall we go now, they are waiting for us. Ankita and Naren hold hands as they leave.

Precap: No Precap, Naren is promoting the show Dance India Dance, he is telling the audience to cancel their plans and tune to Dance India Dance, and says you will ask what special thing will be shown? Naren says I will tell you, the great super star Salman Khan is coming on Dance India Dance at 9:00 on January 18th. Naren tells the audience he will not miss it or he will regret it.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Bhalla !
They are sure playing with the Ahana story...the mystery will be released only slowly slowy, when the writers decide what the story will be, as they don't know yet themselves ! 😆... Was she in the car that exploded? Was she on the road? Did Naren think he couldn't save her? Maybe she lost her memory too otherwise wouldn't she have been searching for him...if she survived? Does Ankita realize that if she finds Ahana she may be put out of the picture or does she think that Naren will just be cured and they (Ankita and Naren) will be together forever?

I suppose once again they will have someone sacrificing their love...either Ankita or Ahana for the other. I am quite tired of that story line. Life has other problems they can explore and make it much more interesting.

How about for example they find Ahana and she is in terrible condition physically and Ankita and Naren help her to recover and during that time Naren realizes his love for Ankita for her giving nature, and how much she means to him as Ankita. And Ahana wasn't so in love with Naren after all and everyone has a role to play without treading on someone elses. There doesn't HAVE to be competition for someone else's life, or a sacrifice ALL the time. But i supposed i'm just dreamin' since this is Indian TV ! 😉

I thought Kinnari's family was supposed to have money. Now it sounds like they are more middle class and not at all wealthy Otherwise why would she say that if she didn't marry R. her family would get her married off and send her to some chawl. (as if that were bad of course ! )😕

Ranauk...really gets on my nerves. Other "villains" were bad or evil.. but he's just sleazy !! He's disgusting. I hope his plans keep backfiring on him...at least the CV's have been good about that ! What ever he plans turns out the opposite. 😆




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Originally posted by: naava

Thanks Bhalla !

They are sure playing with the Ahana story...the mystery will be released only slowly slowy, when the writers decide what the story will be, as they don't know yet themselves ! 😆... Was she in the car that exploded? Was she on the road? Did Naren think he couldn't save her? Maybe she lost her memory too otherwise wouldn't she have been searching for him...if she survived? Does Ankita realize that if she finds Ahana she may be put out of the picture or does she think that Naren will just be cured and they (Ankita and Naren) will be together forever?

I suppose once again they will have someone sacrificing their love...either Ankita or Ahana for the other. I am quite tired of that story line. Life has other problems they can explore and make it much more interesting.

How about for example they find Ahana and she is in terrible condition physically and Ankita and Naren help her to recover and during that time Naren realizes his love for Ankita for her giving nature, and how much she means to him as Ankita. And Ahana wasn't so in love with Naren after all and everyone has a role to play without treading on someone elses. There doesn't HAVE to be competition for someone else's life, or a sacrifice ALL the time. But i supposed i'm just dreamin' since this is Indian TV ! 😉

I thought Kinnari's family was supposed to have money. Now it sounds like they are more middle class and not at all wealthy Otherwise why would she say that if she didn't marry R. her family would get her married off and send her to some chawl. (as if that were bad of course ! )😕

Ranauk...really gets on my nerves. Other "villains" were bad or evil.. but he's just sleazy !! He's disgusting. I hope his plans keep backfiring on him...at least the CV's have been good about that ! What ever he plans turns out the opposite. 😆






hey naava😊 hope ur doing well, i am hoping nothing bad happens in the Ankita-Naren story, I have a feeling Naren might not like Ankita as much once he finds out its really Ankita and not Ahana but i hope he loves Ankita for who she really is. I really cant stand Raunaq and Kinnari at all, Kinnari was so rude to mock Ankita for her status, and hope Raunaq's plans always backfire, he is way worse then Soham ever was. But one thing I like about Raunaq is that he yelled at Kinnari, and also it was funny how Naren cared more about his plant then Kinnari.😆

I hope Sunanda goes back to where she came from, it was very calm without her, Rushali-Shirish were handling everything just fine.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was a big mistake for the CVs to bring in Sunanda's character for the long term, the track was just fine without her meddling and controlling behavior.


I believe Naren will think differently of Ankita once he recovers and realizes she is not his Ahana, maybe he will believe she felt obligated to marry him and free her from this marriage but by that time she will already love him.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the updates... Raunak irks... More than any villain...
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LOL thanks ap.meena !

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