ASYA OS : MY CRAZY FILMY FAMILY

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello guys!! i m riddhi n this is my first ever writing on this ff..i just wrote it and really dont have idea how it had came out..go on and read...

please do comment.. all good bad comments r welcomed even tamatoes and onions welcomed coz they r getting expensive , so i will use it..

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Summary: asad , ayyan n najma are siblings and are in love with zoya, humera n imraan.. they r the best of buddies and are in college

Asad and zoya were sitting in the class and it was their free period. Zoya was doing her project while asad was busy staring her angel..


Asad : mein ye kesa project hu , jis per uski client dhyaan hi nahi deti...

Zoya looks up and reply dramatically..

Zoya: tsk tsk tsk tsk so sad.. do one thing , kisi aur client ko jake dhundlo jo is project par dhyaan de.. n looks down smiling..

Asad : (smirking) are you sure?

Zoya : ( looking down , busy in her project) ha baba sure.. damn sure, river sure, lake sure aur koi sure hona h kya..

Asad: okay fine..

And he goes away from there..


AFTER 15 MINUTES..

Imraan, ayaan n humera came running to zoya..

Imraan, ayaan n humera : zoya !!!

Zoya closes her ears with her hands..

Zoya: what ??

Imraan : have you and asad broke up??

Zoya : what?! Why??

Ayaan : what why? Which type of girlfriend you are ha?

Zoya : matlab?

Humera : vaha tumhara boyfriend is roaming with some one else and you are sitting here doing your project??

Zoya looked shocked and confused bit before she could reply they heard a sound of falling of books and they turn to find najma with her hands on her ears..

Najma : ya allah!! Ye kya keh rahe ho tum sab?? Bhaijan ... bhai.. j..an..esa kar sakte h vo? Vo meri zoya ko kese chod sakta h?

N she ran to zoya and engulfed her in an embrace..

Najma : koi baat nahi zoya hum tumhare sath h... hum tumhare liye ladenge..

Imraan, ayaan n humera : ha zoya , hum tumhare liya ladenge..

Zoya stood up and replied : allahmiya wats wrong with you all? Tum log itna over react kyu kar rahe ho? If he is roaming around with some one so whats the big deal??

Humera : what the big deal?? Zoya tum kesi gf ho , jo apne bf ko kisi k sath bhi ghum ne de rahi ho.. abhi chalo humate sath!!
Abhi!!
N she dragged zoya with her..

Zoya jerked her hand. , : ofo guys its his life , vo ghum raha h to ghum ne do but vese ayaan , he really broke up with me?

Ayaan : mona are u serious, you r sounding so casual?? Tum abhi chalo..

N all dragged her towards assembly hall where asad was sitting with nisha,.

Nisha : asad tum iss ZOYA ke piche kyu pade ho.. i mean she is so boring!!

Asad hears sound od footsteps n realised zoya n everyone was here n so he said this to make her jealous:

Asad : kya karu phisal gaya tha par ya she is boring!! Mein to use chodne ki soch raha hu..

There everyone was listening having anger on their faces except zoya..

Zoya : hmm ohhh ( making different expressions listening carefully)

Nisha keeping her hand on his : to chod do na!

Humera , ayaan , imran n najma : BHAIJAN!!

Zoya agn closed her ears..
Asad ( making shocked expression as if he dont know anything) : t.. t..um..tum..l..log..tumlog!!

Everyone except zoya: ha humlog !!

Najma: ha bhaijaan ha! Aap esa karenge, hum ne socha nahi tha!

Ayaan : apko meri mona darling ke sath esa karte hu sharam nahi ayi!

Humera: ab bolte kyu ni kuch?

Asad tries to speak something bit zoya says : ab bolne ko bacha kya h ? Esa karke bolenge lese janab!!

All : haha bolo bhaijaan!!

Zoya : ap esa karenge mujhe nahi pata tha! Apse esi umeed nahi thi mujhe!!
All: ha nahi tha , nahi tha!!

Zoya : apne mujhse bina puche break up kar liya ?Mujhe puchne ki zarurat nahi samjhi??

All : bolo bhaijaan!! Bolo!

Asad murmured: dramebazz n smirked that zoya was reacting..

Zoya : apki himmat kese hui sachme asad !!

All : ha bhaijan!! N they kept blabbering

Meanwhile zoya raised her hand in a position like to slap asad n asad closed his eyes but it was a suprise for everyone when it led to a handshake..

Zoya : congratulation for ur new relation..

All : kya???

Asad was shocked would be an understatement..

Zoya : ye kya baat hui? Tumne treat bhi nahi di , that's not done..

All: zo !!

Ayaan : ye tum kya ke rahi ho mona! Tum tum,.. pagal ho...

Zoya : are asad ki life h , vo decide karega ki use kese rehan h or nisha ( she goes to nisha who was giving her weird looks n tapped her shoulder) kya baat h , tumhara nasha kya chaya h asad par.. keep it up..n yes chalo guys let them have some privacy..


They all started walking suddenly zoya stopped n turned

Zoya : aur ha asad ( smiling ) apni shakal mat dikhana kabhi..
All turned : mat dikhana mat dikhana..

N all of them went home, leaving asad flabbergasted..
Asad abruptly left from there..


AT KHAN VILLA:

Zoya ran happily to the kitchen and hugged dilshad from behind..

Dilshaad : aa gayi meri shona!

Everyone comes inside with sad and angry face..

Dilshaad : are meri phudko gang ko kya hua.. itna sad sad kyu h

Ayaan goes n picks up a photoframe which had photo of asad ..

Ayaan: dhyann se dekhiye iss shaks ko diya isne meri mona ko dhoka..

Humera : sun dekh kar bhi humne apne aap ko ye man ne se roka..

Dilshad : oh to phir kya tumne use kyu nahi toka.?

Najma : unhone pheka apna dil , before zoya nisha ne kia catch

Imraan : nahi kiya unhone humari zoya ki loyality se match

Dilshad : ab lese hoga inka patch?

All : ab bichana padega hume koi trap

By this time zoya was hugging dil from back whereas najma and ayaan kept their head on dilshaad's shoulder n humi n imraan on zoya's shoulder..

Asad : ya allah please cut this crap..

Dilshad : asad tum galti karke in pe hi chilate ho..

Asad : ammi par..

All : kya par..ha kya par?

Zoya was just rubbing her temples..

Zoya : GUYSS! She shouted.. Dinner tak ke liye sabhi apne apne kamre me raho phir milte h okay.. over n out..

All retired to their respective rooms.. murmuring hmph..


AT DINNER TABLE:

All were talking except asad and this made him think of divide and rule..

Asad : najma you know imraan was once in a garden with shalini who was..

Imraan : asad!!! Kya hua achanak se tum ye..

Asad : kyu tum to mujhse baat nahi kar rahe the to phir m kyu tumhari baat suno?

Imraan : nahi nahi m tumhari side hu..

Asad : smirked okay and najma see i bought you a pack of your favourite chocolate ice cream its in the fridge..

Najma : zoya you just bought two packs of ice cream na that too my favourite..

Asad was shocked but then next target : humi u wanted a cat na , i talked to a person he will select the sweetest cat for u..

Humi : sachi !!

Ayaan glared her

Humi : apni ye badi badi ankhe mat dikhao , me nahi darne wali..thank u bhaijaan m apki side..

Asad : welcome sweetie.. ayaan..

But ayaan cut him off : me apni mona ka sath nahi chodunga.

Meanwhile dinner was over n they were sitting down in drawing room and zoya was lost in a dream..

DREAM:

All were dressed in military dress and were wearing cricket helmets with hockey sticks in their hands...

Background music was : bar bar ha , bolo yaar ha.. apni jeet ho , unki haar ha..

Zoya and asad were glaring each other , humera and ayaan were fighting as well as seperating imraan and najma who were holding each others hand and were crying..

DREAM END

She was brought out from her dream when they all shouted her name..

Zoya : huh..

Dilshad : kya hua zoya, thik to hona..

Zoya nodded..

Dilshad : lo tumhare liye mene gajar ka halwa banaya h..

All : kya halwa ..Hume bhi chahiya..

Zoya : tum log to asad k side the na me to sirf najma aur ayaan k sath share karungi..

Humi, imran : nahi nahi zoya hum to tumhare sath h , vo to bas yuhi unki side le rahe the..

Zoya : oh.. thikh he..Ajao

Asad : aur me.. he came and kneeled down in front of them holding his ears..

Zoya : sachi wala sorry ?

Asad: sachi wala

Zoya : maaf kiya jaye ya chod diya jaye??

Ayaan : phir mona ko chodke kisi aur k pass nahi jaoge?

Asad : nahi jaunga..

Imraan : humari gang k alawa kisi k sath masti nahi karoge,.

Asad : nahi karunga

Najma : hum sabse zyaada kisi se pyaar nahi karoge ,

Asad : nahi meri family ke alawa kisi se itna nahi

Humi : humari demands puri karoge??

Asad : karunga baba karunga..

All : yay

N they all hugged each other

Dilshad and rashid : hum bhi join kar sakte h kya ?

Zoya : ye bhi puchne wali baat h?

arz kiya h,

sab sunlo aur janlo ye fact,

apne sathi ke alawa hum nahi honge ke kisi se attract..

They all hugged ..

n again hugged their loves ..
Happy ending..

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akaswan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratulation for this first OS 😃

They are so cute "crazy family"😆

I really like it you should write more now 😃😃


Edited by akaswan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hehe that was a really cute update, i loved ur os.
If this was ur first than uh dont have to worry it was just amazing.
Uh can finally breathe now as i have passed uh😆.
They r indeed a filmy family.
Plz do continue with some other story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sooo good 👏
Edited by KaBhilove07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb punches my sweetie pie.
Loved shayaris.
CHOOCIE CHOO os..
THANKS FOR PM.. Loved it a lot.. Lot
VERY VERY AWESOME WORK
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hiii riddhi😊

So my dear lil cute so reader,riddhi U wrote an os?Let me tell U it was the cutest os I have ever come acrossloved the whole coll atmosphereZoe not worried abt losing asad coz she already knows he s hers😉And I knew U were good at shayari n stuff,now ur Os proved itAnd Zoe s dream was hilarious..reminded me of kal ho na ho..Loved the whole dining table scene,asad using divide n rule😆And loved the way dilu called zoya shona...awww so cuteAnd they were a lot of rhyming words..awesome job👏Ending was super super cute,dilshaad n Rashid also joining group hug,Sooo cuteBtw I looove ur title...riddhi write more...Thanks for the pmLoadsss of luvpinky😳
Edited by pinky06 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it riddhi😃
Edited by pinky06 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤣 Tomatoes and Onions are getting expensive. Oh my gosh. 🤣
But anyway moving on, your story was beautiful and funny. I loved how everyone kept on side talking while Zoya and Asad were delivering dialogues. 😆😆 Cute story and a great start for your first OS ever. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: akaswan

Congratulation for this first OS 😃


They are so cute "crazy family"😆

I really like it you should write more now 😃😃


Thank you so much...
Yup they are indeed crazy family..
Thank u for ur lovely comment, u r d first ...
Thank u thank u so much..
This encouraged me , i will definetly write more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u so much..
Thanx for ur comment..

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