FF ~~THE UNTOLD CUTE LOVE STORY~~ PRECAP PG 106

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Nice romantic update Sweety..
Suspense thaanga mudila...Kaushik track innum mudiyalaya? Sikiram update pannunga..
thanks for the pm..

Edited by mathimathi - 12 years ago

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

Such a romantic update but ended as a thriller.. Feel like that problem is related to Kaushik. Romba eager'ah wait panrom Sweety update soon.. Suspense thaangala.

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sweety

@sweety16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

CHAPTER 57

VISWANATHAN'S CABIN:

Karthik and Vishnu standing in front of Viswanathan. He is busy on his laptop and two minutes later, he leans back and looks at them.
Viswanathan: what's going on Karthik? i'm extremely disappointed and i never expected you to do this.
Karthik: I'm sorry sir... i agree ... it's completely my mistake..
Viswanthan: Raji enge?
Karthik: conference room la irukkaa sir.
Viswanathan: pesiyaachaa?
Karthik: innum illa sir...
Viswanthan: go and make her talk to her dad... i'll be here for one more hour... need any help... come to me...
Karthik: yes sir.
Viswanathan: you may go now.

Karthik and Vishnu come out of his cabin.
Vishnu: enna daa... naduvula Raji appa enna panraaru...
Karthik: adhu dhaan matter eh... vaa ... ellarukkum onnaa solren...
They both go to the conference room.

CONFERENCE ROOM:

Raji and Lakshmi are waiting tensely and Karthik, Vishnu enter the conference room.
Lakshmi: ennaaachu Karthik?
karthik: onnum aagala... neenga tension aagaama ukkarunga... naan solradhai porumaiyaa kelunga... thappu en mela dhaan... OK vaa?
Raji: nee enna thappu panne?
Karthik: oru nimisham ... amaidhiyaa ukkaru...
All four of them sit around the table over there and Karthik explains what happened.

Karthik: one hour munnaadi Raji oda appa Office ku call panni irukkaaru.
Raji: ayyayyooo...
Karthik: konjam naa solradhai kekkariyaa?
Raji: sorry... sollu...
Karthik: oru mani neram munnadi Raji oda appa office ku call panni irukkaaru. Lucky yaa ... antha pakkam vantha Viswanathan sir reception la yaarum illennu phone eduthu attend panni irukkaaru. Raji appa Raji kitta pesanum nu sonnathukku... meeting nadakkuthu oru 45 nimisham aagum. mudinja udane Rajiya pesa solren nu sollittu enakku phone panni half an hour la Raji ya koottittu office ku vaa... avalai avanga appa kitta pesa vaikkanum nu sonnaaru.
Vishnu: ippo Raji oda appa edhukku office ku phone pannaaru?
Karthik: enna daa? Office la velai irukku nnu sollittu nethu kaalaile kovilpatti le irundhu kilambi vandhava innaikku office time mudinjadhukku appuramum veedu thirumbalai nnaa tension aaga maattaangalaa?

Raji: sethen...
Karthik: onnum illa... modhalla naan solradhai kelu...
Raji: enna?
Karthik: unga athaiyum mama vum innum konja nerathula inga varuvaanga...
Raji: edhukku?
Karthik: unnoda phone switch off la irukku... nee innum veettukkum pogalai... innaikku kaalai le irundhu yaarukkum phone pannalai... adhaan appa tension aayittu athaiyum, maamavaiyum ner la poyittu parthuttu vara solli irukkaaru...
Raji: kadavule...
Karthik: sari ippo vaa polaam nu athai kooppitta kilambariyaa?
Raji: eppadi? naan oorula irundhu eduthuttu vandha bag, ennoda handbag, mobile ellaame Lakshmi room la irukku... ippadiye kilambinaa athai bag enga nnu keppaangale...
Lakshmi: ippo enna pannalaam?
Karthik: onnum illa... Raji nee Reception poyittu office phone le irundhu appa vukku call panni pesidu... naalaikku pudhu phone vaangidaren nu sollittu appa kitta Lakshmi mobile number kuduthu adhukku call panna sollu...
Raji: mmm...

Karthik: tension aagaathe... normal aah pesidu...
Raji: athai, mama kitta enna solradhu?
Karthik: velai mudiya late aagum... thirumbavum kaalai le seekkiram varanum adhanaale Lakshmi veettukku poyidaren... naalaikku evening veettukku vandhidaren nu solli anuppu...
Vishnu: avanga othukkalai nnaa?
Karthik: neraa Sir kitta koottittu poganum...
Raji: ponaa?
Karthik: Office la velai irukku... naanga ellarum inga thaan irukkom... velai mudinjadhum naalaikku evening Raji veettukku vandhiduvaa nnu Sir unga athai, mama kitta solluvaaru...
Lakshmi: oru velai...
Karthik: Lakshmi late aaguthu ... naama appuram pesalaam...
Lakshmi: OK... Karthik...
Karthik: Raji ... poyittu modhalla appa ku phone pannu... Lakshmi... konjam neengalum kooda ponga...
Lakshmi: mmm... vaa Raji...
Both Raji and Lakshmi leave...

Vishnu: idhukku en daa nee avvalo tension aane?
Karthik: tension aagaama? yosichu paaru... Raji appa phone pannappo Receptionist oh illennaa David oh eduthu Raji Office ke varalai nnu solli irundhaa enna aayirukkum?
Vishnu: nalla velai... appadi edhuvum nadakkalai...
Karthik: kaalai le modhal velaiyaa Raji ya avanga appa ku phone panni Lakshmi number kudukka sollanum nu nenachen... eppadi marandhen ne puriyalai daa...
Vishnu: free ya vidu daa...
Karthik: illa daa ... sir nammalai pathi thappa nenachiduvaaro nnu yosanaiyaa irukku daa...
Vishnu: appadi ellaam onnum aagaathu... parthukkalaam.
Karthik: mmm...

AT THE RECEPTION:

Lakshmi and Raji come to the reception.
Raji calls her appa from the phone kept on Reception table.
Raji: hellooo...
Raji appa: hello ...
Raji: eppadi irukkeenga paa?
Appa: naan nalla irukken Raji maa... nee eppadi daa irukke?
Raji: nallaa irukken paa..
Appa: pudhu phone vaangalaiyaa Raji maa? appa venum naa kaasu anuppavaa?
Raji: naalaikku vaangidaren paa... kaasellaam irukku paa...
Appa: nee kaalai le irundhu phone pannalaiyaa adhaan athai, mama vai oru ettu poyi parthuttu vaanga nnu sonnen... vandhaangalaa daa?
Raji: edhukku paa thevai illaama avangalai ivvalavu dhooram thondharavu pannikittu... avanga innum varalai paa...
Appa: kovichukkaadhe Raaji maa...
Raji: sari naan oru number solren ezhudhikkonga... adhu Lakshmi odadhu... ava en koodave iruppaa... ungalukku eppo pesanum nu thonudho appo ava number ku call pannunga... naan naalaikku pudhu number vaangina udane ungalukku solren...
Appa: sari daa...
Raji: appo naan vachidavaa? udambu parthukkonga...
Appa: sari Raji maa... neeyum velaikku saappidu...
Raji: sari paa... vachidaren...
She ends the call and her athai and mama arrive.

Raji: enna maama idhu... appa thaan solraar naa neenga udane kilambi vandhiduradhaa?
Athai: en solla maatte? unnai inge velaikku anuppittu enga annan anga nenjai kaile pidichittu ukkaanthirukkaaru...
Raji: athai... enna pesareenga?
Athai: enna nadakkuthu inge? oorula ulagathula illaatha... athisaya velai...
Lakshmi interferes...
Lakshmi: aunty romba mukkiyamaana velai poyittu irukku... naanga ellaarume inga thaan irukkom ...
Mama: adhu sari maa... aanaa veetla kaathittu irukkaravangalukku late aagum nu sollanumaa illaiyaa?
Raji: mama meeting nadanthittu irundhadhu... mudinjadhum phone pannalaam nu nenachen...
Mama: sari ... vaa maa polaam...
Raji: illa maama... velai innum mudiyalai... naan naalaikku sayanthiram veettukku vandhiduven...
Athai: ennna vilaiyaaduriyaa? modhalle kilambara vazhiya paaru...

Lakshmi: aunty...
Athai: nee idhula thalai idaadhe...
Raji: appadi ellaam padhiyile vittuttu vara mudiyaadhu athai...
Athai: ippo nee vara poriyaa ? illaiyaa?
Raji: sari vaanga... enga ofiicer kitta vandhu sollunga... ennai koottittu poganum nu... avar permission kuduthaa... vandhidaren...
Athai: sari vaa... naan avaraiye kekkaren.
Raji: vaa Lakshmi...
Raji takes her athai and mama to Viswanathan's cabin.
Lakshmi follows them.

VISWANATHAN'S CABIN:

Raji knocks the door and gets in and the rest follow her.
Raji: Sir...
Viswanthan: enna?
Raji: ivanga ennoda athai... ivar mama...
mama: Vanakkam sir...
Viswanathan: vanakkam... enna vishayam?
Athai: naanga Raji ya veettukku koottitu poganum ...
Viswanathan: inga paarunga maa... Melai naadula irukkaravangalukkaaga project panra company idhu... Raji mattum thaniyaa velai seyyalai... Lakshmi irukkaa... innum niraiya peru irukkaanga... night shift la velai parkuravanga iruppaanga... neenga dhairyamaa veettukku ponga... Raji naalaikku evening vandhiduvaa...

Athai: vandhu...
Viswanathan: onnum prachanai illai... unga ponnu paadhu gaappaana edathula dhaan irukkaa...
Raji: Thank you sir...

They start to leave...
Viswanathan: Raji... Lakshmi...
Lakshmi & Raji: yes sir...
Viswanathan: ivangalai anuppittu unga team ellarum en cabin ku vaanga... important discussion irukku...
Lakshmi: yes sir...

They come out of his cabin...
Raji's athai is not convinced and wants Raji to come with her. Raji takes Lakshmi's phone and calls her appa. She explains him that she has work and ask her athai to leave and gives the phone to her. Raji's appa tells his sister it's Ok if raji has work and asks them to return home leaving her at office.
Raji's athai and mama leave.

Lakshmi goes to conference room and explains what happened to Karthik and Vishnu...
All three of them go to Viswanathan's cabin and Raji also joins them...

Chapter 58... coming soon...

CHAPTER 58

Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago

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sathyakrs

@sathyakrs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

So raji call pannaadhadhu than indha tension kelaam problem ah???

viswanathan sir raji oda ottu motha kudumbathakum advice panna vendi varum pola...😉

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

At a stretch la 15 chapters padichitten... oru periyaa novel padikkura maadhiri irukkudhu... visualize panni paakkura feeling...

You rock Sweety... 👍🏼

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Ramya05

@Ramya05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#386

Karthala office porathukku munnadi oru cursory glance... iPpo complete aa niruthi slow va padichen... U rock... Ur story moves very nicely and always makes me wait for the coming soon part of it ;)

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

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Posted: 11 years ago

#387

sweety, atlast suspense revealed by u.appa,i was afraid and tensed about it.anyway nothing serious,vichu sir saved raji😃

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sweety

@sweety16

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#388

CHAPTER 58

VISWANATHAN'S CABIN:

Karthik, Lakshmi, Vishnu and Raji are seated in front of Viswanathan. Everyone is quiet and Viswanathan is busy typing in his laptop. Few minutes later, he leans back and looks at them.

Viswanathan: So, what's going on?

Karthik: Sorry sir...

Viswanathan: I didn't expect this from you...

Karthik: i take complete responsibility for this sir, its my mistake..

Viswanathan: you better be... Had I not been with you people yesterday, I would have definitely told Raji's father that Raji didn't come to Office today.

Raji: sorry sir...

Viswanathan: nethu naan ungaloda irundhadhu naale... iknow what you've been through... that's why i asked you to take leave... but innaikku unga appa call vandhappo... i was shocked... how can you do this? ... actually naan udane Raji number thaan dial pannen... it was switched off and then only i remembered Karthik's words and dialled him...

Lakshmi: nethu naan dhaan sir Rajiya veettukku pogaama ennoda iru nnu kattaaya paduthinen... veettukku ponaa thirumbavum edhaavadhu yosichikitte iruppaa, friends oda irundhaa relax aayiduvaa nnu...

Viswanathan: that's fine ... indha vishayam parents ku inform pannanum illaiyaa? avanga tension aavaanga nnu theriyumaa illaiyaa?... lucky yaa... Raji Lakshmi oda thangi irukkaa nnu Karthik ku therinjadhanaale you all have come immediately... illennnaa Raji appa ner la vandhirundhaa enna panni irukka mudiyum?

Karthik: Sorry sir...

Viswanathan: behave like grown ups... u should be brave enough to face life... appa, amma kitta poi solla vendiya avasiyam enna? if u can't say the truth thinking it may harm you can be atleast frank with them... Raji avanga appa kitta naan Lakshmiu kooda irukken nu solli irundhaa endha prachanaiyum illaiye?

Raji: yes sir...

Viswanathan: yes sir, sorry sir... idhai thaandi yosikkaadhe...Poruppu nnu onnu irukkaa illaiyaa?

Raji: thappu dhaan sir...

Viswanathan: this is the first and last time i'm supporting you and helping you for such silly mistakes... you may leave... if it repeats... i won't spare you...

Karthik: yes sir...

Raji: thank you sir...

All four of them come out of his cabin and come to the conference room again.

IN THE CONFERENCE ROOM:

Karthik, Raji, Lakshmi and Vishnu are seated around the table and a dreadly silence prevails...

It was Lakshmi who breaks the silence first...

Lakshmi: sorry Raji... ennaala thaane ippadi ellaam...

Raji: nee enna panna?

Lakshmi: nethu nee ozhungaa veettukku poyiruppe... naan thaane unnai en kooda irukka sonnen...

Raji: nee nallathu thaane sonne... naan kaalaile coffee kudikkumbodhu Karthik ah kettu appa vukku pudhu number kuduthidavaa nnu kekkanum nu nenachen... appuram maranthuten.. enaakkillaiyaa poruppu irukkanum ... sir sonna maathiri... appa pathi therinjum naan thaan thappu pannitten...

Karthik: illa Raji ... phone off pannu sonna naan appa kitta pesi pudhu number kudukka solli irukkanum illaiyaa... thappu en per la dhaan... kaalaile modhal velaiyaa unga appa vukku phone pannu nnu sollanum nu nenachen... eppadi miss aachu nne puriyalai...

Lakshmi: adhukkum kaaranam naan thaane? ennoda birthday ku surprise arrange panna poyi nee unnoda vishayathai kottai vittutte... sorry...

Karthik: illai Lakshmi... adhu illennaalum enakku eppadi idhu marakkum ne puriyalai...

Raji: vidu ... Karthik... mudinjipochu...

Lakshmi: idhukku thaan naan ennoda birthday celebrate panradhu kidaiyaadhu...

Vishnu: edhai edhoda mudichu podare Lakshmi?

Karthik: oru second vera yedhaavadhu negative aah nadandhirundhaa yosikkave bayamaa irukku... en mela enakku sema veruppaa irukku...

He holds his fist and beats the table, stands and goes to the window and stares the other side...

Lakshmi: enaaku theriyum... ennoda birthday enna santhosha paduthanum nu ninaikkaravangalukku kashtathai mattume kudukkum... I'm Sorry...

She is full of tears, gets up and runs awy from there.

Vishnu and Raji look at each other.

Vishnu: enna Raji idhellaam?

Raji: onnum illai Vishnu... sari pannidalaam...

Vishnu: eppadi?

Raji: neenga poyi Lakshmiya samaathana paduthunga... naan Karthik ah koottittu varen...

Vishnu nods his head and leaves.

Raji comes to Karthik and holds his hands. He turns towards her and says "SORRY RAJI..." with tears...

Raji: enna Karthik idhu? chinna pillaiyaa nee?

Karthik: oru second unga appa ner la vandhirundhaa nnu yosichaale bayamaa irukku...

Raji: Karthik... adhaan nallabadiyaa mudinjiduchi ille... inime sothappaame parthukkalaam...

Karthik: illa Raji... vera edhaavadhu negative aah nadandhirundhaa ...

Raji: Karthik ... please... innaikku ennoda life la romba mukkiyamaana naal... naan romba santhoshamaa irukken... adhai sogamaa aakkidaadhe please...

A smile appears on his face as he realises what she was mentioning.

Karthik: Raji... enakkoru promise pannu...

Raji: enna?

Karthik: inime nee appa kitta poi solla venaa... ennoda varadhaa irundhaa... Lakshmi veettukku poren nu sollitte vaa... appa, athai othukkalai nna paravaa illai... varaadhe... ini indha maathiri risk edukka venaa... unga appa namma love ku OK sollittaa ...appuram yaarukkum bayappada venaa...

Raji: sari... OK... vaa poyi Lakshmiya samathaana paduthalaam... ava bayangaramaa upset aayittaa...

Karthik smiles and says ... Vaa...

Both leave to canteen...

IN THE CANTEEN:

Lakshmi is very upset and is in tears sitting at a table. Vishnu gets her a coffee but she doesn't drink...

Vishnu: enna Lakshmi idhu? kaalaile irundhu evvalo santhoshamaa irundhe? ippo edhukku ippadi upset aagare?

Lakshmi: unakku theriyaadhu Vishnu... Naan santhoshamaa Birthday Kondaadina annaikku ennoda amma, appa vaazhkaile periya puyal adichadhu... adhu adutha birthday annaikku enga amma oda vaazhkaiya chinna binnamaa aakkiduchi... adhukku appuram innaikku naan santhoshamaa kondaadina udane Karthik Raji life la periya prachnai uruvaagi irukku... idhu enga poyi mudiyum nu yosikkave bayamaa irukku...

Karthik and Raji come there and Raji says .. adhellaam oru prachnaiyum illai...

Lakshmi: unga athai idhai appadiye vittuduvaanga nnu ninaikkiriyaa?

Raji: parthukkalaam Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: adhille...

Karthik points his index finger towards Lakshmi and says"STATUE"... and Lakshmi remains so with her mouth open.

Karthik: machaan andha coffee ya appadiye Lakshmi vaayila oothidu...

Raji and Vishnu laugh...

Karthik smiles and says: enna Lakshmi idhu? naan thaan emotional aayitten naa neenga enakku mela feel panreenga... neenga kaalaile irundhu evvalo santhoshamaa iruntheenga... appadiye irunga... enga life la oru puyalum illai... edhaavadhu nadandhudumo ngra ungaloda bayam pokka thaan ippadi oru vishayam nadanthirukku... adhuvum easy yaa mudinjidichu... inime edhunnaalum konja careful aah irundhuttaa mudinjudhu... inime ovvoru varushamum ungaloda birthday santhoshamaa kandippaa ellaarum serndhu kondaadarom... Ok vaa?

Lakshmi remains still...

Vishnu: dei... release panninaa dhaane badhil solluvaanga...

Karthik: sorry daaa... Lakshmi... Relax...

Lakshmi comes to normal with a sigh...

Vishnu and Raji go to get coffee...

Lakshmi: irundhaalum sorry Karthik... ennaala thaane nee Rajiya vittuttu pone.. ava unnodave irundhirundhaa oruvelai neenga idhai pathi discuss panni irukkalaam illaiyaa?

Karthik: illa Lakshmi... idhula discuss panradhukku onnume illa... Raji ya phone off pannu sonnavan naan ... thirumbavum avanga appa pathi therinjum eppadi careless aah irundhen nu puriyalai... edhaavadhu vibareethamaa nadanthirunthaa yaar poruppu nnu yosikkave tension aaguthu...

Vishnu and Raji come with coffee and listen this...

Raji: enna neenga rendu perum?

Vishnu: en daa... tthirumbavum modhalle irundhaa?

Raji: adhaane...

Karthik: dei... engalai enna unga rendu peru maathiri nnu nenachiyaa?

Lakshmi: aamaa Karthik... ivanga rendu perukkum konjam kooda emotions eh kidaiyaadhu...

Raji: oho... appadiyaa?

Karthik: paarunga... konjamaavadhu akkarai irukkaa nnu... avanga appa vai pathi kavalaiye illaame eppadi jolly yaa irukkaalo... naama thaan ivalai nenachu tension aayittu irukkom...

Raji: nee irukkurappo naan en kavalai padanum?

Lakshmi: romba dhaan di nakkal umnakku...

Vishnu: enna Lakshmi... neenga rendu perum panradhu thaan over ah irukku... Tension aaga vendiya Raji ye cool aah irukkaanga... neenga enna daa nnaa...

Karthik: adhai thaan naanum solren...

Raji: Vishnu... ivanga romba over aah scene podaraanga... ivanga ippadiye feel pannikitte irukkatum ... vaanga naama polaam...

Vishnu: aamaa vaanga Raji...

Both of them leave together.

Lakshmi: enna Karthik... rendu perum kochittu poraanga?

Karthik: vidunga Lakshmi... enga poyida poraanga? ivanga rendu peraiyum samaalikka mudiyalai nnaa naama vera edhukkum laayakku ille nnu artham...

Both of them laugh.

Raji and Vishnu who were going , stop, look at each other and turn towards them angrily.

Vishnu: andha alavukku aayipochaa? unmayaave naanga porom... vaanga Raji...

Raji gives a serious look and follows Vishnu...

Karthik and Lakshmi look at each other and smile.

Chapter 59...coming soon...

CHAPTER 59

Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago