FF ~~THE UNTOLD CUTE LOVE STORY~~ PRECAP PG 106

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Ramya05

@Ramya05

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#391

I love the way friendship has been brought out and the mutual concern... Please... Ivangalukku indha tension marakara maadhiri oru dinner treat episode kudunga... :)

Edit... Oh dinner aacho... At least our night coffee episode :)

Edited by Ramya05 - 11 years ago

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muthucheenu

@muthucheenu

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#392

Hi Sweety, I recently started reading this story, the way you write is simply mind blowing. The flow, twists, clear characterization, relationships, logic and so on are remarkable. In fact, I have now stopped following the serial as that has lost its magic as you rightly noted. Keep up the great work and pl do write more!

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#393

sweety,super,chanceilla.colourfulla iruku
kl and vr combo really fabulous.these four understand each other feelings beautifully👏
nicely written,i am waiting for next part😉
antha innoru storya seekarama update pannunga.athu romba interestinga iruku.

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Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#394

Thanks Sweety!

Vishwanathan saving them lol, nice one!

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sathyakrs

@sathyakrs

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#395

lovely update sweety...

KRLV ..as you say..awesome foursome..

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sukanya

@twittersukanya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#396

nice update sweety..krvl rcks...n i always lov v r friendshp..its too gud n vijaytv offce n ur stry...rckng...waitng fr nxt part

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sweety

@sweety16

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#397

CHAPTER 59

Vishnu and Raji come downstairs and get into his car. Karthik and Lakshmi stay in the canteen for five more minutes and then come downstairs. They stand at the main entrance and...

Lakshmi: enga Karthik... ivanga rendu perum ...

Karthik: theriyaliye... irunga...

Karthik calls Vishnu...

Vishnu: hellooo...

Karthik: dei... enga da irukkeenga?

Vishnu: naanga kilambittom...

Karthik: kilambitteengalaa? enge?

Vishnu: vera enga? veettukku thaan...

Karthik: dei... vilaiyaadaadhe... naanum Lakshmiyum entance la thaan irukkom... ozhungaa vaa...

Vishnu: machaan... naan nijamaave office kitta illa daa...

Karthik: dei... thirumbavum mazhai vandhura podhu...

Lakshmi gets tensed up... seeing this...

Karthik: sari daa... naanga illaama neenga eppadi veettukulla poveenga? veettoda rendu saaviyum enga kitta thaan irukku... neenga kilambi evvalavu dhooram poyirundhaalum mariyaadhaiyaa return vandhu engalayum koottittu po...

Vishnu: dei... unga veettukku poganum naa thaan daa saavi venum... naan ennoda veettukku poren...

Karthik: unnoda veettukkaa? appo Raji?

Vishnu: Raji yai yum koottitu poren ... avangalai thaan... amma, appa vukku theriyume...

Karthik: dei...

Vishnu: iru machaan... semmayaa maatti irukke daa... neraa Raji ya koottittu poyi...

Karthik: mm.. koottittu poyi???

Vishnu: amma kitta unnai nallaa pottu kuduthudaren...

Karthik: adappaaavi... dei...

Vishnu: vartaa ... machaan... neeyum Lakshmiyum call taxi vara sollittu veettukku ponga... paavam engalai samaalichu samaalichu rendu perum tired aah iruppeenga... emotional aah strain aagi irukkura ungalukku nalla rest thevai... thirumbavum engala parthaa ... en thaan ippadi pattavangalai love pannom nu neenga feel panna aarambichiduveenga... bye...

Vishnu cuts the call...

Raji looks at him and smiles...

Karthik calls Vishnu again...

Vishnu: sollu machaan...

Karthik: dei... Vishnu... sorry daa... evvalo dhooram poyirundhaalum return vandhu engalayum koottittu po daa...

Vishnu: en daa??

Karthik: dei... please daa... edho joke aah sonnaa serious aah eduthukkuviyaa? ammaa kitta ellaam solla venaa daa...

Vishnu: adhu eppadi? semmayaa sikki irukkiye... indha chance naan miss panna virumbalai...

Karthik: Vishnu... vaa daa... nijamaa enakku bayangara tired aah irukku... please daa...

Vishnu: sari wait pannu... eppadiyum 15 to 20 mins aagum...

Karthik: Ok... vaa...

He cuts the call...

Lakshmi: enna Karthik?

Karthik: nijamaave kilambittaanga Lakshmi...

LAkshmi: cha...

Both of them keep quiet and fifteen minutes later Vishnu's car arrives and stops in front of them.

Karthik opens the front door and finds Raji seated there.

Karthik: Raji ... vaa... pinnaadi ukkaaru...

Raji: naan iranga maatten... nee pinnale ukkanthukko...

Karthik: eppavum ... neeyum Lakshmiyum back seat la dhaane ukkaaruveenga?

Raji: naanga kilambi romba dhooram poyittom... neenga lift request pannadhaale vandhirukkom... lift venum naa backseat thaan gaaliyaa irukku... appuram unga ishtam...

Karthik looks at Lakshmi ...

Lakshmi: enna Raji... adam pidikkure ...ezhundhu vaa...

RAji turns towards Vishnu and...

Raji: Vishnu... enakku thookkam varudhu... neenga koottittu poreengalaa? ille naan irangi auto pidichu enga athai veettukku poyidavaa?

Karthik: enna Raji idhu?

Lakshmi: Vishnu... enakku unnoda front la ukkaanthu varanum nu aasaiyaa irukku daa... please

Vishnu gets melted as Lakshmi says so requestingly...

Vishnu: Raji... please... pinnaadi ukkaarunga... Lakshmi kku innaikku Birthday illa...

Raji: sari ... ungalukkaaga othukkaren...

Vishnu: thank you Raji...

Karthik steps back, Raji gets down and Lakshmi comes and sits in the front seat and closes the car door. Karthik opens the back door for Raji but she closes it comes near him, pinches him on his sleeve and he screams "raatchasi"...

Raji comes around the car and opens the door on the otherside and gets into the car. Karthik also gets in and Vishnu drives towards home.

On the way Karthik tries to talk to Raji but she doesn't respond... She closes her eyes and leans back and pretends to be asleep. Everyone keeps quiet until they reach home.

As they reach their home Karthik and Lakshmi get down and Lakshmi opens the door. Raji opens her eyes and ...

Vishnu: Raji... ulla poyittu unga bag eduthittu vaanga..kilambalaam...

Raji: ok ... Vishnu...

Raji gets down and enters into the house and finds Karthik and Lakshmi sitting in the living room on the couch.

She goes into Lakshmi's room and in two minutes comes back with her bag etc., and both Lakshmi and Karthik couldn't believe she was actually leaving...

Lakshmi: enna di idhu?

Raji: naan kilambaren Lakshmi...

Karthik: enna Raji idhu? Vishnu thaan olar raan nnaa ... ippo intha nerathula avanga veettukku ponaa nallaavaa irukkum?

Raji: naan Vishnu veettukku pogalai... avarai enga athai veettule drop panna solren...

Karthik: enna thideernu? inga varanum nu thaane athai kitta naalaikku evening varen nu sonne?

Raji: paravaa illai Karthik... naan kilambaren...

Lakshmi: iru... naan ippove varen...

Lakshmi comes to the car and sees Vishnu still in the driving seat. She comes to him and ...

Lakshmi: enna Vishnu idhu? ulla vara maattiyaa?

Vishnu: illa Lakshmi... Ulla vandhaa enakku thirumbavum return varadhu kashtamaa irukkum... Raji veeettukku poganum nu sonnaanga...

Lakshmi: ennoda birthday innum mudiyalai... innaikku full aah ennoda irukka maattiyaa?

Vishnu: adhilla Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: Please daa...

Vishnu: sari ... OK... nee po... naan car park pannittu varen...

Lakshmi: I love you Vishnu...

Vishnu: me too...

Lakshmi comes to the living room and sees Raji still standing with her bag.

Lakshmi: ey... ellaam naalaikku polaam... bag ulla vai po...

Raji: illa naan poganum..

Karthik: enna adam Raji idhu... .

Raji: edhukku orutharukku kashtamaa irukkanum ..naan kilambaren...

She moves a step towards the door and Vishnu enters.

Raji: vaanga Vishnu pogalaam...

Vishnu: Raji... romba tired aah irukku... naalaikku pogalaame...

Karthik laughs and Lakshmi says..."ippo eppadi pove?"

Raji gets angry and says ..."naan auto la poren..."

Everyone gets tensed...

Karthik: adi venumaa unakku... intha nerathula auto la poren nu solre...

Raji: edhukku mathavangalukku kashtam kudukkanaum...

Lakshmi: yaaru di mathavanga?

Raji: neenga thaan...

Lakshmi: Raji...

Karthik: sari appadiye irukkaatum... ozhungaa bag ulla vai... veettukku naalaikku pogalaam...

Lakshmi: po Raji...

Raji angrily goes inside Lakshmi's room and closes the door with a bang...

Karthik :ellaam ivanaala vandhadhu... unnai naalu saathu saathinaa ellaam sariyaa poyidum ...

Karthik folds his sleeve up and comes to beat Vishnu but Lakshmi stops him...

Lakshmi: Karthik... Vishnu vandhuttadhanaale thaan Raji innum inga irukaaa...

Karthik: nallaa support panreenga ivanukku...

Vishnu: dei... panradhellaam pannittu en mela kovam varudhaa unakku...

Karthik: naan enna daa pannen?

Vishnu: nee thaane Lakshmi kooda serndhukittu avangalai kalaaiche... semma gaandula irukkaanga Raji ... unga rendu peru meleyum...

Karthik gives a furious look and goes to his room. He takes a shower, changes his dress and comes downstairs.

He looks around and finds Lakshmi and Vishnu seated closely on the couch, looking into his laptop and smiling at something. He comes and sits on the sofa opposite to them. They have a glance at him and get busy with their stuff.

He takes a pillow and throws at them. Vishnu catches it before it hits and Lakshmi claps and says "Super catch ... Vishnu.." both of them laugh...

Karthik: dei... enga rendu perukulla sandaiya mootti vittuttu ... neenga jolly yaa sirichittu irukkeengalaa? nalla varuveenga rendu perum...

Vishnu: machaan ... tension aagaathe daa...

Karthik:mmm... appuram...

Lakshmi: edhukku Karthik tension aagare? unga madam terrace la waiting...

Karthik: ennadhu????

Vishnu: po daa... poyi samaathaana paduthu... un paadu thindaattam thaan...

Karthik: unakku kondaattamaa irukkaa?

Vishnu & Lakshmi: (say chorusly) aaamaa...

Karthik says "huh.." and goes to the terrace...

Chapter 60 ... coming soon...

CHAPTER 60

Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago