Paya hai mehnay phir tujhay-OS

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This OS carrys on from the forest sequence...when Raghu and Antara get lost in the forest when he rips her skin of her leg while getting her anklets off...Hina this is for you...Plz comment and like...Enjoy!!!!

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Raghu was wandering here and there trying to find a way out of the dense forest...while Antara was sitting on a rock trying not to cry...the pain was unbearable for her now...She scrunched up her face trying to make the pain go away...but it was of no use...Raghu was noticing all this and walked up to her...he knelt down infront her...and lifted her foot up and placed it on his knee...Antara opened her eyes feeling a hand being placed on her foot...She took her foot of his knee...He put it back on his knee...she took it back off...he put it back on...This went on for quite a long time...

Raghu: MISS KAUL!!!!!
Antara: KYA????
Raghu: PAO YAHI REHANY DO...
Antara: KYU???
Raghu: TUMHAY DARD HO RAHA HAI...MEH KUCH KARTAH HU...
Antara: TUMNAY PEHLEY HI BOHAT KAR DIYA...
Raghu: ROHNAH BAND KAR!!!
Antara: PEHLAY DARD DEYTAY HO...PHIR ROHNAY BHI NAHIY DETAY...

Raghu pushes her foot off his knee...gets up and walks away leaving Antara behind...Antara gets up...She looks around trying to find Raghu...She moves forward still looking around to see if Raghu is nearby...

Antara: RAGHUUU!!!!...Raghu tum kaha ho????

She was walking or should I say limping...She was limping through the forest when she heard some leaves rustling...she quickly turned round but found no-one...she walked further still looking around to find Raghu...

Antara: Raghuuu!!!!!!!!!...Mujhay bohat dar lag raha hay...Please yaha aah jao...RAGHUUU!!!!!!

She walked further...She heard some more leaves rustling...She again looks back scared...She was still looking back when she tripped over a rock lying on the floor...She closed her eyes tight waiting to hit the floor...Instead she felt two strong arms around her waist...She opened her eyes and saw Raghu only a few inches away from her...*eye lock...Mahi Moment*...They were both breathing heavily and they could feel each others breaths...Antara quickly got up and started hitting Raghu's chest with her small fists...Raghu tried stopping her but she just didn't stop...He pulled her by the waist which made her stop...

Antara: Kaha chalay ghay thay tum?...Tumhay pata hai meh kitna dar ghiy thi?...
Raghu: Tumnhay to kaha thah...ki meh dard dehtah hu...phir tu mujhay kyu doond rahiy thiy?
Antara: Agar tumhay nah doondu to kisay doondu?...Sher ko...
Raghu: boorah Idea nahi hai...
Antara: RAGHU!!!

He lets go of her waist...Antara moves back and sorts herself out...

Raghu: Chalo...
Antara: Kaha?
Raghu: Tum chalo to sai...

Raghu starts walking and Antara follows him...They have been walking for hours but got no-where...They were still walking
when Antara saw some people walking by...

Antara: Raghu...
Raghu: Kya hai??
Antara: Waha dehko...kuch log...
Raghu: Arrey ha...Chal unse kuch madat mangtay hai...
They both went up to them...
Antara: Exuse me...
Villager 1: Gi...
Raghu: Apun ko kuch madat chaiyay...
Villager 2: Arrey bhai app...bolo kya madat kar saktay hai?
Raghu: Wo kya hai..Hum yaha gum hogat hai...
Antara: Aap ko pata hai...main road kaha hai?
Villager 3: Ha...aap ayay meray saath...

The villagers started heading into the forest...Rantara followed behind...The track was very un-even...Antara kept on tripping and falling on Raghu...They reached a narrow lane...with twigs and thorns...

Villager 1: Bhai...yaha sambhal kay chalnah...
Villager 2: Yaha zareerlay kaantay hai...

They started walking through...The villagers infront...than Raghu...and behind him was Antara...They all were walking when they heard a scream...Everyone turned around to see Antara sitting on the floor holding her foot...screaming and crying...Raghu ran to her and sat beside her...He looked at her foot and was shocked...Her whole ankle was green and swollen...All the villagers came up to them...

Villager 3: Bhai...yeh zarila kaanta hai...

Raghu stared at the villager than at Antara who was still crying and screaming in pain...A tear escaped Raghu's eye...He went near her ankle and was going to remove the thorn...

Villager 2: Nahiy bhai...Haath maat lagana...apko ko zehaar affect kar sakta hai...

Raghu didn't care...He moved forward to take the thorn out but Antara pushed his hand back...

Antara: R..Ra..Rag..Raghu...h...ha...haat...maat lago
Raghu: Lykin Miss Kaul...
Antara: Tuhay..me...meri...kasam...

Raghu looked at her...even if he wanted to he couldn't take the thorn out of her foot...He looked around...He quickly plucked a leaf of a branch and pulled the thorn out...

Antara: Ahhh
Raghu quickly cupped her face...He slowly kissed her forehead...
Raghu: Miss Kaul...tujhay kuch nahiy hoga...
Villager 1: Bhai...iska elaaj sirf jari bootiy sey hoga...

Raghu jumped up and grabbed his collar...

Raghu: Kaha milay gha jari bhootiy?
Villager 1: Waha madar meh..Lykin ek ghantay meh ponch jana...Aur larki ko sonay at dena...

Raghu let go off his collar and starightned it out for him...He looked at the temple he was pointing to...

Raghu: Yeh to bohat door hai...ek ghantay meh nahi ponch pai ghay...
Villager 3: Bhai...aap jaldi ki jiyay
Villager 2: Aur yaad rakhna...Larki ko sonhay mat dena...

Listen to this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_svykdZMvJA

Raghu went to Antara and scopped her up...He started running towards the temple...He was running as fast as he could...He looked towards antara who was resting her head on his shoulder...falling asleep...

Raghu: Miss Kaul...Tu so nahi sakti...MISS KAUL...

Antara slowly opened her eyes...

Raghu: Ha...Ek baat bato tum bohat baari ho...
Antara: K..kya?
Raghu: Haa...

Raghu tried to make a conversation with Antara to keep her awake...His shoes were stopping hi fro running faster...He stopped and took his shoes of and started running again...He was still running...There were only a few minutes till an hour...He finally reached the temple out of breath...He glanced at Antara to find her asleep...His breaths got heavier...Numerous tears escaped his eyes...

Raghu: MISS KAUL...MISS KAUL...UTT

Antara wasn't waking up...Raghu saw a water pump nearby..He quickly ran there and splashed some water on her...Antara slowly opened her eyes to see Raghu crying...she slowly lifted her hands and wiped her tears...Raghu quickly scooped her up again and ran up the temple steps...He quickly went inside...

Raghu: PANDIT JI...PANDIT JI
Pandit: Kya huwa beta...
Raghu: Pandit ji...Miss Kaul

The pandit glanced at her and understood...he quickly went and got the medication...Raghu made antara lie down and kissed her forehead...Antara slowly held Raghu's hand...The pandit applied the mediaction to Antara...Antara fell unconsious...

Raghu: Pandit ji...Miss Kaul ko kya huwa hai?...
Pandit: Beta...Mehnay hari bootiy lagaliy hai...Agar 24hr eh inko kosh nahiy aya to...
Raghu: TO...TO KYA???
Pandit: To kuch nahi ho saktah

Listen to this again: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_svykdZMvJA

Raghu fell to the ground...tears escaped his eyes...This was the first time he cried so much...He went close to Antara and held her hand...he slowly came forward and kissed her forehead...He scooped her up and took her to a room the pandit had gave them...He slowly placed her on the cot...He sat next to her and placed his head on her hand...

He had flashback's of all their moments...*There first meeting*...*There fights*...*There knock joke*...*There friendships*...and...*There special moments*...A smile automatically escaped his lips...He looked at Antara...He slided his fingers through her hair and smiled...He slowly carrased her cheek...

Raghu: Tum apun kay liyay itni khas kyu hai?...

He remembered aaji's words...

Aaji: Ek khas ehsaas hota hai...Ek Ehsaas jo sab say anokah hota hai...Wo ehsaas Pyaar hai...Jab ek ko pyar hota hai...to wo sab kuch bhool jata hai...sirf apnay pyaar kay baray meh sochtay ho...Jab tumharah pyaar tumharay paas hota hai...To dardkanay tez ho jati hai...aur hawa chalnay lagti hai...Lagtah hai ki sirf tumharay kay liyay music baj raha hai...Chintu ek din tum ko bhi hogah...tum ko bhi PYAAR hogah...

Remembering her words he smiles he looks at Antara...
He looked at Antara...He forgot what was going on around him...He was just remembering the time spent with her...He slowly placed his hand on his heart...His heart was pacing...He felt wind run through his hair...He slowly heard some music...and some lyrics...*Mera mahi tu...mera raanjan tu*...He smiled and slid his fingers through his hair...

Raghu: Miss Kaul...Raghunath Naik ko pyaar ho gaya hai...Aur uska pyaar sirf tum ho...sirf or sirf tum Miss Kaul...Sirf tum...

Hours passed by...But there was no sign of Antara waking up...There was only one hour to go...Raghu was really impatient now...He was pacing around the room...He quickly ran to Antara and sat next to her...he held her hand...

Raghu: Miss Kaul..utt nah...itnah kyu satatiy hai mujhay?...Tum mujhay chor kay nahiy jaa saktiy!...Jab mujhay sahiy mainay meh humarah rishta pata chala tu mujhay choro kay chaliy jao ghi?...NAHIY!!!

A tear escaped his eyes and fell on Antara's hand...Antara twitched her eyes...She slowly moved her hands...Raghu felt Antara move her hands...he opened her eyes and looked at her...He quickly wiped his tears and cupped her face...

Raghu: Ha...ha miss kaul...ankay khol...

Antara slowly opens her eyes...Her vision is blurred...Soon she sees Raghu sitting infront of her...Raghu cuppes her face and kisses her...

Raghu: Miss Kaul...Miss Kaul tu utt ghiy?...Itna sataaya hay tune meray ko...

Raghu hugs Antara...She weakly responds...

Raghu: meh abhi aya...

Listen to this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ka-dtVBQAYM ...Start from 0.45

Raghu ran to the pandit with a sweet box...He fed him sweets...and hugged him...He ran around the temple hugging people and feeding them sweets...He gave the pandit 10,000 rupees...

(Leave song on)

Pandit: Beta kyu
Raghu: Meray Miss Kaul ko doorsarah janam dehnay kay liyay...

He turned around and saw Antara standing there crying..Tears of joy...They both had a eyelock...Raghu slowly walked towards her...He stands in front of her still in a eyelock...He feeds her sweets and she feeds him...They both just couldn't hold it they went in for a hug...They felt complete in each others arms...There special music played behind...Wind blew through their hair...They were hugging for god knows how long...They finally broke there hug...Raghu scooped her up and went inside and placed her on the cot and kissed her forehead...Antara kissed his forhead...

(Stop Music)

Antara: Meh bhiy...
Raghu: Tum bhiy kya?...
Antara: Raghu...meh bhayosh thiy...lykin mujhay sab sunaiy deh raha thah...
Raghu: Matlab?...Saaf saaf bhol nah...
Antara: meh bhi tumse PYAAR kar tiy hu...Khud say bhi zayada...
Raghu: Miss Kaul?

Listen to this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qvEUxa8qnKc

They both smile..*eye lock*...
They both hug...Raghu cups her face and kisses her cheek...Antara does the same...They both smile...

Raghu: Teray larnay sey...teray jagarnay sey...teray rootnay manay sey...Har cheez ko RAGHUNATH NAIK KO PYAR HOGAY HAI...

Antara smiles and hugs him...

Antara: Aur mujhay meray limit kay gunday sey pyaar hogaya hai...

(Stop music)

Raghu breaks the hug and looks at her angrily

Raghu: Tumharay dono pao peh chot ayai hai...aur tu chalni ki koshis kar ti hai?...
Antara: TO?
Raghu: TO?...JAB GHAR CHALAY GHIY...TO AUNTY MUJH PAR NARRAZ HO GHIY...
Antara: KYU...WO NAHI HOGIY...
Raghu: TUMHAY BARA PATA HAI...
Pandit: Bhagwan tu dono ki jodi ko salamat rakay...

Rantara turned around and saw the pandit and some other people at the door...laughing and awe...ing at them...

Rantara: Pandit ji...Aap?...

Everyone left apart from the Pandit...

Pandit: Ha beta...Meh dekhnay kay liyay ayaa thah ki beti thik hai ya nahi...
Antara: Pandit ji meh theek hu...
Pandit gave soe more herbal treatment...
Pandit: Beta iss ko phir lago...
Raghu: Ji...

The pandit left and Raghu sat on the floor...and took off Raghu's previous bandage...He was going to put te ointment on but Antara pulled her foot away...

Raghu: Kya kar rahaiy hai Miss Kaul...Pao yaha rehnay deh na...
Antara: Raghu...agar bhar pata chal gaya to tum ooh dekhanay nahi reh jao ghay...
Raghu: Miss Kaul...Yeh kya keh rahiy hai..siday siday bhol nah...
Antara: Agar bhar yeh baat phel ghiy ki..."Raghunath Naik"...apni girl fri...mera matlab Antara ki pher choota hai...to tumhari naak khat jai ghiy...

Antara tried to hold her laugh...and hide her smile...and put on a serious face...

Raghu: Arrey tu pagal hai kya?...Kisi ki hai itni himmat??
Antara: Ha...lykin agar yeh baat pehl ghiy ki..."RAGHUNATH NAIK" nai ek larki key pher chota hai..to koi nahi tumsey daray gha...
Raghu: To??
Antara: TO?...Tuhari barso ki mehnet mitti meh mit jai ghiy...Tumhara tough figure...chala jai gha...

Raghu gets up and turns around...he wipes the back of his pal on his moustache...He scratches his head...Antara couldn't hold it anymore...She burst out laughing...Raghu turned around confused...

Raghu: Tujhay kya huwa?...*Mocks her laughing*...Yeh kya hai...
Antara: Apni shakal to dehko...

She starts laughing louder...Raghu starts walking towards her...Antara still laughing...Raghu came to the cot she was sitting on...He started leaning towards her...Antara still laughing started leaning back to...unfortunatly...she was on a cot...so she couldn't go any further...Raghu was actually on top of her now...He grabbed her waist...Antara grabbed his collar...

Raghu: tere izzat kya bachi ghiy...jab baar pata chal giya ki tu darfok (coward) hai...
Antara: Matlab?
Raghu: Jab sabko pata chalay gha kiy tu apnay boyfrie...mera matlab mujhay kiss karnay say darti hai...
Antara: KYA????
Raghu: Aur nahi to kya...

He got up...Still holding Antara's waist making her get up to...Antara freed herself and ran for the door...

Raghu: Arrey Miss kaul...pagal hai kya...tu abhiy theek huwiy hai...tum pehley hi dornay lagiy hai...Yedi...

There was a veneration going on in the temple...Antara went and blended with the crowd...Raghu came out the room finding Antara...He looked around...he went into the crowd...Both of the were looking in the opposite direction...so were facing there backs on each other...they were both walking backwards when they both collieded...Antara tripped and feel right into Raghu's arm...*Mahi Moment*...

Antara: Ouch...
Raghu: dard ho raha hai?
Antara: Hai...

He helps her up...and looks at her foot...He then looks at her...he kisses the air...than signals her to come to the side...Antara moves forward and pulls him closer by his collar...Raghu had no idea what was going on...She pulled him closer so there was no room for even air...She slowly placed her lips on his...and kissed him...

Antara: Darfok (coward) wo hota hai...jo cheezay chup chup kar karta hai...

Thankfully no one saw them...as they were too busy doing the veneration...Antara smiled and went in her room...Raghu slowly follwed her...Antara went in and laid on the cot...Raghu came in and locked the door...He went next to Antara and leaned on top of her...blocking her with both arms...

Raghu: Abb meri baari...

Raghu slowly camed closer and pressed his lips onto Antara's...He slowly sucked her botto lip...than her top...and then took both her lips into his mouth...Antara lifted her hands to push him off...but instead wrapped her arms around his neck...soon that kiss turned into a passionate one...Finally they parted for air...both of their lips were swollen...
Antara: Mujhay ghar jana hai...

Raghu: Itni kya jaldi hai?...
Antara: Mama wait kar rahiy hogi...
Raghu: Arrey Mama ki bachi...At least humme yaha privacy milti hai...
Antara: Kyu waha nahiy mili ghiy?
Raghu: Tu MM ko jantii hai nah...

Antara just smiled...Raghu was going to go in for another kiss when he got a call...He looked at the name an d wasn't at all suprised...

Raghu: MM!!!

Antara starts laughing...Raghu picks up the call...MM asks them to be home before evening...as there will be a function...

Soon Rantara got married and had a daughter and named her tara...well Raghu named her Tara...He couldn't decide what to name her...he wanted it to be linked with Antara...that it struck him...An-TARA

So they named her Tara...they had their own small little family...and they were all very happy...Tara grew up...and it was her turn to find her Raghu...

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Thank you so much for reading...please like and comment so i know if you like my storys...Read my SS called COLLEGE DAY SS/0S...Thank you soo much for reading...This is one shot...no other parts...Hina hope you liked it...

Edited by Niyaz_Lover - 11 years ago

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hayakhan5 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unedited
RES...
Me first...
Yayayyy...
Will read and comment...

Edited
Very nice...
I loved it...
The way you started...
Jungle scenes...
RaNtara nok jhok...
Antara stuck in zahreeli plants...
Raghu tensed for her..
Hayai the mandir part was awsum..
I love the way antara ran off...
She teased him.. And he teased her...
Unki takar crowd mein mast thi..
And u chose a perfect time for the romance..
The veneration... Jab sub busy htay hain...
Antara kissed and then raghu ki turn was awsum...
MachMach entry as always disturbing with mast..
Their marraige... Baby tara...
What a perfect end of them...
I loved it...
Hats offf...
Thank u so much for the pm...
Edited by hayakhan5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful os dear
please write more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice
loved it
thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely os
thanks fr pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh lovely os yaar!!!
It was wat to say im speechless...
It reminded me of rantara's cute nok jhok...
Thanks a looot dear for such a nice n sweet os...
Totally enjoyed reading it... :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg the best OS I have ever read
it was soo cute I wish that happened In the show
thank you soo much for this OS love you
ur the best writer ever
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very very nice update . Fantastic . Loved it .
Thxs for the PM 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Beautifully written
Luvd it...😳👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

omg the best OS I have ever read

it was soo cute I wish that happened In the show
thank you soo much for this OS love you
ur the best writer ever


I LOVE YOU TOO...If it wasn't for you I would have never wrote this OS...Thnxs so much for the appreciation means alot to me...

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