Naksh FF - Life is too short (Part 2,last ch)updated

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I am back with my new fanfiction! Nearly a month after i promised though :p I just wanted to clarify this is a very sad fanfiction, but I am trying my best to make it as beautiful as a Naksh fanfiction...after all, Naksh is a precious couple šŸ˜‰ Also, it will be a very short fanfiction, possibly it will have one or two more chapters at best...Also I am sorry if there is little less Naksh scenes in this first chapter, but as the story will progress, there will be more Naksh, I promise 😊 Do review and like :) It starts off after the Bikaner trip's accident and so Naksh is our little Bani :)


Akshara Naitik Fan fiction 2

Part 1


When Akshara woke up, it was still very early. She tried falling back asleep, but she couldn't. After a little while, she gave up and saw Naitik standing beside the window, motionless.


"Naitik..." she called him softly, worried. "Aap itni raat gaye waha kya kar rahe hain?" She gets up and walks over to him and soon she feels the cold wind blowing over her, coming from the open window.

He turns at her in haste, possibly not expecting her to wake up now.

"Aise hi..." he smiles at her. "Neendh nahi aa rahi thi."

Akshara, unsatisfied with his answer, tries to put her hand over him but he jerks his hands away, noticing what she was about to do. This leaves Akshara even more confused. "Kuch hua hai kya?" This time, she's even more worried than the last time. Something definitely happened. He is not telling her. But he shakes his head in a no again.

"Aap so jaiye..." Is all that he tells her as he himself goes over to the bed. Akshara still stands near the window, not able to go back to bed. Naitik doesn't call her the second time when he notices Akshara isn't coming. She sighs. This has been going on for the last two weeks. Naitik has been acting distanced around her...she wants him to share everything with her, but he doesn't. She is also afraid because she had a feeling everyone knows about it. Everyone at their house has been behaving weird around her. Gayatri always gives her a sympathy look and she has noticed she does this especially when she mentions Naitik. Daddaji, Bhabhi Ma, Bauji, everyone seemed so sad, as if something big happened. But if everyone knows about, why doesn't anyone tell her about it?

Instead of going back to bed, she goes over to the small crib they brought for Naksh. Naksh always used to sleep with them, but from the past two weeks, Gayatri has been insisting to let Naksh sleep in the crib. This made her even more suspicious, but she didn't say anything.

Naksh was sleeping peacefully and her son's face brought back a smile to her. She was tired too, so she unwillingly got on the bed and pulled the covers over her body.

"Naitik..." she called him again.

Naitik's eyes were closed, but he nods his head anyway. "Kuch nahi," she can't find anything she can tell him. Naitik opens his eyes then, "Aap confuse hai na?" He asks her.

He said that so calmly, and she realized he was finally going to say something he didn't in these two weeks. She nods, but he doesn't respond. "Aap ko pata chal jaye ga Akshara." He gives her a fake smile.

The way Naitik said it made her stomach tighten. Does she want to know? Because she had a feeling whatever it was, it was not something that would bring happiness in her life.

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"Bahu...!" The knock on her door jerk her awake. She turned to see the clock. It was half past seven. "Itni der kaise ho gayi mujhe utne main," she gets up immediately and notices Naitik is not there sleeping beside her. Her eyes go over to the crib, but her son is still fast asleep, so she gets up and opens the door.

Gayatri is outside, smiling at her. But Akshara could not help thinking her smile felt fake.

"Ut gayi beta? Jaldi se taiyaar hole...hume bahar jana hai."

"Bahar jana hai? Kaha ma?"

Gayatri does not reply. "Kuch hua hai kya ma?" Akshara asks, this time a little frustrated.

"Nahi...tu taiyaar ho ja...Naksh ko Bhabhimaa ke paas chor jayenge."

Gayatri doesn't give her any more time to ask questions as she goes downstairs.

Akshara quickly changes to sari and goes downstairs, when Gayatri is already waiting for her.

"Naitik office chale gaye hai kya?" she asks, hesitatingly.

Gayatri's face dims. She nods, nevertheless.

Akshara does not say anything but simply walks over to the car.

A little while later, they arrive at a hospital and Akshara finds thousands of questions in her head. But she doesn't ask, because she knew no one will tell her anything.

Before their number came, Gayatri whispered to her. "Sun...doctor tujhse kuch sawal puchenge...unka jawab dena thik se..."

Even this time, Akshara does not say anything. Asking questions for two weeks and not getting an answer was tiring her down.

Gayatri does not enter with her, so she enters the cabin alone.

The doctor is a young man, and she realizes he has a file of her name, which confuses her. Is she sick?

"Akshara Singhania," the doctor smiles at her and indicates her to sit. So she does.

"Kya mujhe kuch hua hai?" she asks bluntly as she sits in front of him.

The doctor nods his head in a no.

"To phir main yaha kya kar rahi hu?" she asks nervously. Why is Naitik not here with her? If she's sick, he should be here with her. She suddenly feels her anger towards him.

"Aapka do hafte pehle ek accident hua tha, aap ko yaad hai?" The doctor asks her gently. Akshara shakes her head. She doesn't remember. Is she having a memory loss. Now, she does not feel mentally okay. If she does not remember an accident that happened with her, how come she is normal?

"Kya main pagal hu?" She asks desperately.

"Nahi," The doctor is still smiling at her warmly. "Aap ke zindagi main kuch hua tha...aapko yo yaad nahi hai..."

"Matlab?" her voice cracks.

He does not reply.

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When they return, she feels frustrated. The doctor did not tell her anything. But he only made her more afraid. She does not remember an accident that happened to her. The thought of it was tearing her down. Gayatri came up with her and took Naksh down with her, telling Akshara to get some rest. Akshara tried to ask Gayatri about the accident, but she didn't want to discuss about it.

As she enters her room, she finds Naitik leaning against the wall, smirking at her.

"Mujhe kya hua hai Naitik?" she asks him with a helpless tone.

Her tone of voice stuns him. He probably didn't know about her visit to the doctor. But is that possible no one would inform him?

"Tumhe kuch nahin hua Akshara," he tells her firmly.

"Mera ek accident hua tha na?" She asks while putting a lock of hair behind her ear, swallowing, afraid of his answer. He nods. "Phir mujhe yaad kyun nahi hai?"

Naitik sighs as he comes over her. "Kyunki tum usse yaad nahi karna chahti," he answers her simply.

She stares at him, noticing how different he looked. He looked pale and his eyes seemed sleepy. But he was smiling at her so lovingly, like she is his everything.

She turns to touch him, but he backs away again.

"Main pagal hu?" she asks one last time to confirm the fears rising in her.

He shakes his head in a no.

"Nahin...tum mujhse kuch zyada pyaar karti ho," he says with a light smile.


"Kya hua tha?"

"Hum Bikaner gaye the, yaad hain tumhe?" he asks her and she remembered the whole trip. It was a short 2 day trip, just with her and Naitik. She nods. "Waha se ate waqt, humara ek accident hua tha," he says this thing so sadly. But she does not remember that part, so she keeps quiet. Naitik looks down on the floor now, not wanting to meet her eyes. "Hum jab tak hospital pauhche, main mar chukka tha Akshara," he looks at her in the eye now.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg you're back šŸ¤—
ah painful FF!😭 here to make us cry hah?šŸ˜›
but seriously very deep and nicely written.
so naitik'sa ghost? :P
waiting for the next oneee
and what was your name agaain?😊
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wo! u r back...
kch smjh nhi aa rha...but lookin rrwrd fo d nxt part..
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Originally posted by: -Maryam

omg you're back šŸ¤— (šŸ¤—)

ah painful FF!😭 here to make us cry hah?šŸ˜›
but seriously very deep and nicely written. @red - thanks a lot šŸ˜›
so naitik'sa ghost? :P I do have some ideas...but have not still decided them now :P
waiting for the next oneee
and what was your name agaain?😊 Safiqa...a little hard name na?? šŸ˜†

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Originally posted by: -Naksh4ever-

wo! u r back...Ji Ha B| šŸ˜†
kch smjh nhi aa rha...but lookin rrwrd fo d nxt part..
curious to knoe wat happnd...I would reveal it in the next part..glad to know i could make you curious about it 😊


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Wow Ur Back With Nice ff 😊
Nice to Read Ur ff..Well Written & I can Imagine d Akshara Situation..

But frankly it didn't understand in first time..After 2times Of reading I could Understood..Little bit Difficult [:p]

Waiting For Next Update..Continue Soon 😃
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very well written šŸ‘šŸ‘...is he dead????😭...at first i didnt understand.šŸ˜•..i understood after reading it for the second timešŸ˜†...eagerly waiting for ur next part...update soon..)). 😃
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wowww ...its gud to c u back ...
its superbbb ...but sad ...u ve planned to make us cry ...so naitik died ...is it naitik's ghost ???? 😭

plzzz update soon ...m really curious ...
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Firstly I am extremely sorry to all of you whom I didn't reply back and for updating after 2 months...but this story was hard to write. This is the end of this story as it was always supposed to be two-shot...

Your reviews make my day...so review karna mat bhulna 😃😃 Spoilers...this is an even more sadder chapter than part 1!

Part 2

Akshara gulped. The moment she was going to scream at Naitik for playing such a dirty joke, realization hit her. Naitik did not let her touch him anymore, everyone around her was sad and she was visiting a psychiatrist for not remembering an accident that happened with her.

At this point of time, her mind went completely blank.

"Aap soch rahi hogi main kya hu..." Naitik starts talking again when Akshara doesn't say anything. "Main aapke dimag main hu Akshara...haqeeqat main nahi hu main..."

Akshara raised her look to Naitik. She was crying. And she was afraid...not because somehow she lost her brain or because someone in front of her is dead...she was afraid because of the thought that he will no longer be a part of her life...

She was sitting on the edge of the bed when Naitik came over and kneeled over in front of her. She had a feeling he was silently crying too.

He took her hands into his and she realized with shock, they passed through his body. It was a strange feeling...but more than anything, she was hurt...thinking she won't be able to touch him again.

"Akshara," he starts talking. "Meri zindagi main aap sabse best cheese hai jo mere saath hua. Aap ayi and meri zindagi main woh sab kuch diya jo mujhe chahiye tha...woh saare cheese jise mujhe pata bhi nahi tha mujhe chahiye...hamari larayi, hamari har Holi, hamara pyaar," he falls silent for a while, thinking how they will never return again. But he looks at her again and she is looking at him with so much sadness that he is forced to continue, "Aur phir aapne mujhe ek bohat khoobsurat gift diya...Naksh," he chokes on his son's name. He won't see him grow up. "Aur is liye I love you even more...agar mujhe meri life main kuch badal na ho...main kuch nahi badlunga...Mera parivaar, aap, Naksh...lekin har kisi ko kabhi na kabhi jana hota hai na?" he asks her that question, not expecting an answer. "Us din us Bikaner ke trip ke baad mujhe bhi jana tha...par jab aapko sab pata chala.."

"Maine usse mere dimag se nikal diya," Akshara finally speaks for the first time since he told her he is...dead.

Naitik nods, carefully. "Aap woh sab nahi manna chahti thi...aapne us pure accident ko aapke memory se block kar diya...doctors nai maa ko kaha tha ke yeh post traumatic experience hai...par aapko yaad karna hai Akshara...aap jab tak nahi kar payengi main nahi jah sakta..."

"Toh mujhe yaad nahi karna," Akshara starts crying freely. "Mujhe kuch nahi yaad karna Naitik...jo cheese yaad aate hi aap chale jayenge...mujhe woh cheese nahi yaad karna...kabhi nahi karna," she tries to squeeze his hands but they pass through her, again. Hysterically, she turns around and sees a picture of the two of them near their bedside table. She picks it up and holds it close to her, allowing herself to cry loudly.

"Aap aise kaise jah sakte hai Naitik??" She screams at the person in front of her, closing her eyes and hugging the picture close to her.

Naitik does not know what to say. He keeps looking at her helplessly. She is the love of his life. And she was crying in front of him, so badly, and there was nothing he could say to her to make her feel better. There was nothing he could do to make her feel better...and that made his present condition even hard. That made him feel broken.

And so, without allowing her to say anything more, he simply disappears. Because he did not want to face her anymore, that would only make things harder for him.

When Akshara does not hear any more sounds, she opens her eyes. The room is empty. She suddenly feels cold. She turns around and finds the window wide open. The entire room is dark, the only light coming from outside the window. She shivers, as she gets up to the window.

"Naitik?" she calls softly.

No sound. He does not come to her as he should. "Naitik?" she calls loudly. Again, no response. And she slumps down on the bed, crying. And no matter how many times she called him, he did not appear.

The next day

Akshara lied to the family that she remembers everything. All of it opened up the family's feelings. Everyone's pain, sorrow was tearing her down. The more she saw them upset, the more she felt helpless. She told Gayatri she does not want to see psychiatrist anymore and she wants to be alone for a while. Her whole family came to visit them again, and although everyone tried to make her feel happy, from time to time, she could see them crying at a corner, thinking no one is around.

"Kyu Naitik? Aap kyun chale gaye?" was all that she questioned in her mind.

That night, she came to the room along with Naksh. Gayatri was still extremely hesitant to allow Naksh to sleep with her but Raj Banna made her understand and allowed Akshara to take away Naksh.

As soon as she stepped into the room, she saw memories of them together. At a corner, they were again together, arguing and the next minute, she saw them together again, happy. As those memories slowly went away, she saw the pictures still hung up on the wall. Their pictures, together, separated, with family, alone. But in the center of the room, there was a picture of the three of them. She stood near the picture, standing there for a long time, crying to herself. Naksh fuzzed in her arms, and she held the child close to her, trying to sing him to sleep...trying to quiet her tears...

When she saw him again...his reflection on the picture. She turned around immediately.

"Naitik?"

He smiled at her and then his eyes flickered to Naksh on her arms. She saw it and went over to him, carrying the baby. She could see it clearly now...the tears that he finally let go when he saw his son...he gently stroked him, kissed him, savouring his last moments with his son.

She saw them together, for more than an hour. Until eventually, he turned to her.

"Yaad nahi karengi?" he asked her.

She shook her head, This was something she could never do...she would keep him with her forever, as long as she could.

Naitik bit his lower lip. "Akshara...mujhe phir bhi jaana hai..." he said it sadly.

She looked at him, in shock and in confusion. "Lekin aap ke kaha tha jab tak main accident yaad na karu...aap nahi jah sakte.."

"Par mujhe jaana toh hai na..." he told her. "Agar aap usse yaad karengi, toh aap is haqeeqat ko zyada jaldi aapna lengi..."

"Main isse kabhi nahi apnaungi Naitik," she said it firmly, determined.

"Naksh ke liye?" he asked her.

She shook her head. "Kisi ke liye bhi nahi..."

She could see the hurt in his eyes, but she didn't react...until suddenly, she could feel him disappearing, away from her. She called his name, but this time, although he replied back, she could not hear him. Until he was gone again...and as she closed her eyes, she saw it.

The entire accident played on her mind, telling her what she lost and what she will never gain again.

When she opened her eyes for the next time, she heard Naksh crying near her.

Sadness. Loneliness. Fear. Anger. Pain. She had no idea what she was feeling as she took the little baby in her arms. Maybe she's empty.

4 years later

A little Naksh Singhania ran into the house, shouting at the top of his voice.

"Mumma, Daadi, Bari Daddi, Girija Didi...!!"

Akshara came downstairs, with a smile as she saw her son.

"Mumma...dekho maine hamare football team ko jita diya!!" He announces happily, holding the trophy in front of her.

Gayatri proudly smiles her grandson, when Naksh turns to her. "Papa ki tarah main bhi superboy huna football main?" he asked, hopeful for the answer to be yes.

Before Gayatri could reply, Akshara smiled at her son and nodded. "Ha mera baccha..." as she met with her son's victory smile.

Naksh was the pure version of his dad...

And it seemed Naitik never left their lives.


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Edited by saf2012 - 11 years ago

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