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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Awesome
Update soon
Lots of suspense
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ASYA ff : "Ferocity: the war for and against love " ...

PART : 2

After the family breakfast of the two faaruqui sisters headed to their room Humaira started to pack up her bag and Zoya went inside to change in her outside clothes . After a giffy of seconds they were out and Humaira was stunned seeing Zoya in a new suit that covered her fully and then she smiled ear to ear ...

"Wow baaji !... new dress ...hmmm "...She said teasing the poor Zoya who paid no heed to her . Whereas she was just lost in her own world of thoughts it was obvious for her as this day was the day she met the love of her life . Seeing this humaira shook her shoulder bringing Zoya out of her world of thoughts and zoya just shrugged her shoulders trying to hide her emotions .As she was about to leave trying to not meet her eyes humaira pulled her back...

"Aapi ...kab tak ?... kab tak aap apni zindagi ke uss dardnaak manzar ko aise yaad krti rhengi ?... Humaira said while looking in Zoya's eyes ... " Mai jaanti hu ...aap aaj bhi Asad bhaijaan se utni hi mohabbat krti hai ... " . With this Zoya looked up in her sister's eyes with moist eyes . " Aapi ... aapne abbu ki wajah se..."..."Humaira please isme abbu ki koi galati nhi hai...tum unhe dosh dena band kro..." Said Zoya in an annoyed tone that was not gone unnoticed by humaira...

"Huh !...kyu na doon dosh mai abbu ko ?...he ruined your life baaji he ruined our ammi's life he ruined OUR life ..."...said humaira in an sarcastic tone. " Humaira ... wo mera achcha chahte the..." . "Achaa ?... huh ! please aapi agar accha chahte tho aapko kabhi bhi apne mohabbat chorni nhi parti ... Aur uss ghatiya nikaah se azad nhi hona parta ..." . "Humaira please !!!... i don't want to discuss anything about Asad right now !!!... please..." And with this she turned around and gave humaira the keys of the scooty .

" Take this ... ab ye tumhari hai ..." said zoya smiling weekly at her sister while humaira just took the keys and ran away out of the house banging the door behind her to which zoya just shut her eyes in order to regain her power back . She still felt love for Asad and she didn't deny it but the past with which she went through was just a big threat to her . She knew if today also she went back to Asad he won't except her as she was the one who did the mistake in her life ... no sorry ... in "THEIR" lives...


**|XoXoX|**
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Here at the other end was Haider and Asad who were just quitely sitting in the car . Haider was of coarse driving as Asad was still drifted to the thoughts . Today ...it was today when he met the love of his life " Zoya " . How ethernal she looked in a simple saree and she was accompanied by a girl who looked in her teens...

*****________________FB______________*****


She was gaffoor siddiqui's daughter a man Asad hated but he had to tolerate him . Asad knew he was a man of money he could even buy or sell his own daughters . Everyone knew about his past "The Gaffoor Ahmed Siddiqui " married Zainab faaruqui and when she died after his youger daughter's birth he barely took care of his daughters ...

The party was organised by Asad to raise his contacts he wanted to leave " Gaffoor Enterprises " though he was just a snr. employee there but he wanted too achieve something in his life that's the reason he spent all his savings organising a party . He wanted to become a good businessman... No wait the "Best Businessman"...

With this he saw Zoya coming with humaira he didn't knew who was she with but the girl did erupt the feelings in him those strange feelings . She came towards him following her father holding her sister's hands . While Gaffoor just hugged Asad in a professional manner . After sometime he ordered Zoya to just shake hands with Asad when he introduced her ...

" Asad ... she is my elder daughter Zoya Siddiqui ..." . and with this Asad shook hands with her the very first tough of her hand made chill go down his spine . How perfectly her hand fitted in his ...

*****________________FB ENDS______________*****


Asad was taken back out of his thoughts with a loud screech on the signal and he still looked at haider not bothering to look in front . Haider quickly got up from his seat and rushed out to the girl who was fallen in front of him with her scooty on little distance ...

" Are u OK ?..." Haider found himself asking her to which she turned with a force her hair flung in air and her nose and cheeks were burning red with anger . " Aapko gaadi chalani nhi aati ?..." she said in with a rude tone . " excuse - me ?..." haider was confused at her sudden outburst ...

" aapko andaza bhi hai mera kitna waqt barbaad hogya ..."... " Dekhiye miss aap... " and before he could complete she just picked up her scooty and flew away in rage . Asad was still lost and because of this he failed to notice HUMAIRA ...

Haider entered the car and was suddenly questioned by asad . " Kon thi wo ? ..." ... "ptah nhi bhaijaan ... maafi tak nhi maangne di aur paise bhi nhi liye ..." He said totally confused by her behavior "Hogi koi... by the way she didn't get hurt na ?.." ... " jee?... nhi nahi bhaijaan ..." " Acha Haider mere uppar ek favour kr sakte ho aaj ek nyi employee aa rhi hai for the job of software enginear ... and u know the jos is already given to someone yesterday and my care taker just forgot to inform her ... so I need to go to office .. umm i think i'll give her some money and appoligize to her as they told she was in very need of money ..." said Asad a bit worried .


" OK bhaijaan ..."... and with this they drove off to the " THE KHAN AND SHEIKH'S ENERPRISES" ... the company Asad OWNED now !...


**|XoXoX|**
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Zoya was stuck in the traffic as today she was late because of small fight with Humaira . She was very scared as it was her first day and she was very late for her work...

As she saw no movement in the traffic she took out her appointment letter . That appointment was scheduled yesterday and because of some stupid reason she didn't go . the reason was that Zoya being the usual caring person saved a life of a pregnant woman and with this good thing she got a shock yesterday .

The Employee of the company informed her that she hadn't come to the appointment and that's why the job was given to someone else . "Prasad !" the employee of the company have called her . and due to her please he had to give her one more chance to visit the owner of the company . Zoya thanked allah for this and she was determined that she will get this job at any cost ...

With this she oppned the seal of the envelope on which it was written... "THE KHAN AND SHEIKHS ENTERPRISES"...But did she knew her past was once again going to come in her life that would give her more worse pain than last time...

**|XoXoX|**
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Here Haider and Asad reached the office and Asad directly went in his cabin . He took out an extra pair of clothes that were always kept in his cupboard in his own cabin. He got dressed in Formal Suit and waited for the employee to come so that he could give her money ...

||OUTSIDE THE OFFICE||

Zoya finally reached the office and after paying the taxi driver his share she entered in . She was awstruck seeing the interior of the building . She didn't know why she felt so familiar in here like she knew everything here...

She went to the receptionist and showed her the letter and with this the receptionist called the ^HEAD^ of the company *^MR. ASAD AHMED KHAN^* that could the employee come in ...
"Sir miss . faaruqui is here ... should I send her in ?..."She said in a very professional tone to him...

" Yes sure!!..." said asad in a cold tone being calm . He was really calm towards his employees . As he knew the meaning of Struggling in life ...

" Miss Faruqui ... you can go and meet sir !... just go in that coridoor and take left the cabin at the end is his !... n ya all the best ! sir is never harsh on his employees..." She said in a familiar friendly tone to zoya and she took a sigh of relief ...

She reached on the door and bought her hands together to pray her allah . She silently prayed to her allah for giving her this opportunity and when she was done she knocked on the door twice in a rythimic manner and then she just flung the door open .

AND what she saw maid her world go upside down . She was not able to breath properly as if her throath was choked somewhere . tears took no time appearing in her eyes ...

"ASAD ..." she said in whisper kind of a voice causing Asad to look up and when he saw Zoya his anger knew no bounds ...
He stood up and stared at her with his eyes burning with rage ...

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PHEWWW M DONE GUYSSS !!! LIKE AND COMMENT IS MUST !!!

SEE THE OTHER TWO POSTS FOR
THE PMSS
&
REAL AND FLASH BACK
O U T F I T S... 😃

I HOPE THIS WAS A LONG UPDATE AND WORTH THE WAIT !
AND YES THE PINK COLOR IS
FLASHBACK OF ASYA'S FIRST MEETING ... 😃
Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Zoya's FB outfit !!!

Zoya's real outfit ( present track ) :::


Humaira's FB outfit :
Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Note :!

hello guysss ...

i am really really sorry for the late update ...

and i have only pmed ppl in my buddy list ...

sorry for that but my PSA EXAM is sheduled

on 18 n as not much days are left i am studying hard i barely open IF ...

let this psa get over i promise i'll update regularly ...

and ya i will surely try to update my other story soon too . SORRY FOR THE INCONVIENINCE ...

i am NOT pming to ANYONE who is not in my buddy list ...

sorrryyy !!😭

Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
I M FIRST YUPIEEE...

AWESOME UPDATE...👏👏

REALLY LIKE IT...😃😃

FB IS INTRESTING...😉😉

ENDING IS SCARY WHAT IS ASAD GOING TO DO WID ZOYA NOW...😕😕

DRESS OF ZOYA AND HUMAIRA ARE GUD...

WAITING FOR NXT PART SO UPDATE SOON...😊😊

THANKS FOR PM AND PM ME FOR NXT PART ALSO OK...😆😆

ALL THE BEST FOE UR EXAMS...👍🏼👍🏼
Edited by Shubh007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Shubh007

I M FIRST YUPIEEE...

AWESOME UPDATE...👏👏

REALLY LIKE IT...😃😃

FB IS INTRESTING...😉😉

ENDING IS SCARY WHAT IS ASAD GOING TO DO WID ZOYA NOW...😕😕

DRESS OF ZOYA AND HUMAIRA ARE GUD...

WAITING FOR NXT PART SO UPDATE SOON...😊😊

THANKS FOR PM AND PM ME FOR NXT PART ALSO OK...😆😆

ALL THE BEST FOE UR EXAMS...👍🏼👍🏼


thnkyou i even luv all dressess 😃
will pm u !
as u r in my buddy list
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
NOTE

well now i am happy 😭🥺

giving u all an update that i wrote whole day ...

and wht i get ...

ONLY 1 COMMENT ????😭😕 🥱

now i'll punish u guysss...

let me see i'll not update for long this time ... 😈
Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Lol
Dont Be Angry😆
Do U Want Help For Pming?😊
I Will Help😊
It was an awesome update😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
OMG... that was awesome...
thanxx for the pm...!! 😊
continue sooon..
i reallyy wanna know wat happens wen asya come face to face...
and em expecting more flashbacks in the next updatee...


continue asap..


-fuii-

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was awesome update...👏
I am now waiting what will happen now that asad and zoya has come
face to face...
I loved the flashback scenes, now will there be any more flashbacks...😕
Gaffur is always a villian and here he dosen't care abt his own daughters...😡
Now waiting for next update..
Don't be angry...😆 have commented
Thanks for the pm... Update soonish...😉
Do pm me when u update next...

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