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As usual, I want more after reading the update - I can't help it when the story is this good and interesting :)
Arnav shocks me a little. He himself knows that marriage has changed him in some aspects, but he's still so stuck in the past that he can't seem to get over it. I understand that one does not change their beliefs overnight, but he's not even trying to let go of his past, and without doing that, I don't know how he's going to move forward with his wife. But true to his character that has been hurt so much in the past, he reacted very badly to what he saw between his wife and her friend.
However unfair it was of him to hurl accusations of his wife cheating on him and loving another man, I understand that he's just so messed up in the head that he's not thinking rationally - he's lucky that Khushi loves him so much and is going to stick by him. I'm kind of glad this situation with Risabh has appeared though; it's a chance for Khushi to tell (and maybe show) Arnav how much he means to her and that no other man has a place in her heart like he does.
I felt bad for Khushi that without fault, two important people were upset with her. Poor girl is already so self conscious about her disability, I can only imagine what the silent treatment is doing to her psyche.
Speaking of patterns, I have noticed that you don't really pick up the next chapter from where the previous one ended - so are we not going to get a glimpse of the potential first (well when both are conscious) kiss??
Also, now that Arnav has made the decision that he wants Khushi as his wife in all ways, how is he going to go about and let Khushi know about that - I'm very curious to know about that as he's always alternating between hot and cold behavior with her that I'm sure he's sending her a lot of mixed signals.
I so enjoyed reading this chapter, even though Arnav really disappointed me, because I really do feel like all these situations are going to help Arnav and Khushi get over their misunderstandings, past hurt, etc and move forward - hope I'm proven right!
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As usual, I want more after reading the update - I can't help it when the story is this good and interesting :)
Arnav shocks me a little. He himself knows that marriage has changed him in some aspects, but he's still so stuck in the past that he can't seem to get over it. I understand that one does not change their beliefs overnight, but he's not even trying to let go of his past, and without doing that, I don't know how he's going to move forward with his wife. But true to his character that has been hurt so much in the past, he reacted very badly to what he saw between his wife and her friend.
However unfair it was of him to hurl accusations of his wife cheating on him and loving another man, I understand that he's just so messed up in the head that he's not thinking rationally - he's lucky that Khushi loves him so much and is going to stick by him. I'm kind of glad this situation with Risabh has appeared though; it's a chance for Khushi to tell (and maybe show) Arnav how much he means to her and that no other man has a place in her heart like he does.
I felt bad for Khushi that without fault, two important people were upset with her. Poor girl is already so self conscious about her disability, I can only imagine what the silent treatment is doing to her psyche.
Speaking of patterns, I have noticed that you don't really pick up the next chapter from where the previous one ended - so are we not going to get a glimpse of the potential first (well when both are conscious) kiss??
Also, now that Arnav has made the decision that he wants Khushi as his wife in all ways, how is he going to go about and let Khushi know about that - I'm very curious to know about that as he's always alternating between hot and cold behavior with her that I'm sure he's sending her a lot of mixed signals.
I so enjoyed reading this chapter, even though Arnav really disappointed me, because I really do feel like all these situations are going to help Arnav and Khushi get over their misunderstandings, past hurt, etc and move forward - hope I'm proven right!
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