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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello buddies, i had this concept for a long time in my mind...i just wana give a try ...i may go wrong somewhere too so pls excuse me ...chappels are welcomed ...am ready to count ...

meri zindagi


At mumbai:

madhu shouted " trishna" without opening her eyes in the bed...while trishna came running with coffee in her hands...seconds later madhu after finishing her coffee ...stared simply at trishna...while trishna knew she wont like to speak much ...hence she spoke with a pleased voice " madhubala madam today is the final day shoot of the film "ishq"...and today we also have meeting with the producers of upcoming film "ahankar" madam... final will be your award function madam..." madhu on hearing her schedules...made herself ready quickly...while trishna arranged madhu's breakfast...

At chennai:

The clock was about to strike 5 pm...he wore his shirt and took a pair of shoes which was already strained with wet mud...started to move while radha shouted "have prasad before you leave ...it is in pooja room"...he had his and took some in a small box...and ran swiftly

Academy of martial arts:

Minutes later he reached the academy and ran inside calling out "bhai..."

he kept on calling "bhai"...finally manages to see his bhai who was standing in a stage ...surrounded by a huge crowd which echoed one and only rk's name ...he saw his bhai getting ready for his karate match...he manages go closer near his bhai and fed him prasad with a confidence sparkling in sikky's eyes since he knew his bhai is going to lift the medal...as soon as he fed prasad to rk... he said "bhai ...i love you ...victory is waiting for you" meanwhile rk on seeing sikky's love towards him "cupped his cheek's"...while sikky kissed rk on his forehead saying "all the best bhaiya". meanwhile sultan was announced as the opposite contestant ...while sultan gave his entry into the stage followed by his younger brother(mukundh) for his support...sultan smirked at rk...telling to himself "its my turn rk...ill make feel the hell today"...rk who's eyes on fire stared at sultan ,clenched his fist...the crowd cheered rk...as well as sultan...but majority was echoing rk's name "rishab kundra"...

The fight began...sultan managed to block rk's attacks but seconds later sultan started to attack rk in his own ways while rk after few hits finally attacked sultan with his legs on his chest... when sultan rose his leg to hit him harder in his chest...rk managed to slide down...and seconds later he again hit him harder which made sultan to fall down and he finally finished him of by hitting his face hardly near his jaw...sikky was floating in the air due to his bhai's victory and over whelmed with joy...while anger sparkled in mukundh's eyes on seeing rk's victory...sikky saw rk holding his medal...tears slipped out of his eyes due to happiness...he hugged rk ...which also created emotional feelings in rk ...finally sikky took rk in his car ...while rk asked "sikky your happy that i won it...but wat about if i have lost it" ...while sikky on sudden hearing his bhai's question made a sudden brake...but minutes later he again started to drive cooly ...after couple of seconds he replied "bhai...you win or lose...i always love you...because am lucky to have a bhai like you...who can even shed blood to stop my tears"...rk felt proud on hearing sikky's words...finally they reached kundra's house...where radha was waiting for her son's to be back...as soon as they reached home...radha hugged both of them tightly with tear in her eyes on seeing thier son's love and affinity towards each other...minutes later they had dinner together with chitchat's ...meanwhile happiness started to filled thier house

precap:

rk gets a cal from his uncle ...he answers it...while he offers him the stunt master job in the film " ahankar "...and promises to pay him better amount than he gets...

so friends tell me ur views through comments ...so that ill decide whether to continue or not...waiting for your views...silent readers hit the like button...

part2:pg2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey dear its me...me first
wow u started another ff?😲ya i can understand that this story was disturbing ur mind,right?ha ha it happens😆😆
so madhu is actress here?😊
and rk stunt master?😲
i liked rk and sikky as bro...but one doubt sikky hw old???
plz continue dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept dear...gud gng😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start, so rishabala's first meeting .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start dear...
i love this rk and madhu...
cont soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meiejrishbala

hey dear its me...me first
wow u started another ff?😲ya i can understand that this story was disturbing ur mind,right?ha ha it happens😆😆
so madhu is actress here?😊
and rk stunt master?😲
i liked rk and sikky as bro...but one doubt sikky hw old???
plz continue dear😊

hey dear thanks for your support😊...yeah madhu is superstar as you guessed...sikki and rk's details regarding the story will be explained in next update da😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow...yaarana between rk and sikki..actually brotherhood. .and that too this extent. ..
grt..loved this..
continue soon. .. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start Dear!thanks for pm!pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2: as soon as madhu reached the meeting hall... producers gave her a warm welcome...they explained the concept of the film

"ahankar " ...at the same time everyone handled thier words carefully since they knew about her temper ...there was a pin drop silence while she signed the film after making the changes in the story according to her own wish and left immediately...while trishna finally gave them a schedule.

Rk's house

It was raining heavily...Rk was reading newspaper and sikky was watching tv in the hall...

Suddenly sikky started to shout "maa, bhai see who is in the tv" radha on hearing her son's voice came to hall from kitchen and asked "why are you disturbing me beta when i was in the work" her eyes registered on tv

In tv live telecast of the award function was going on and in the red carpet there was a girl in a black short dress which revealed her perfectly toned legs and her face was angelic with big brown eyes and her glossy lips curved which revealed some arrogance and she walked elegantly with paparazzi surrounding her and tight security were pushing the crowd away to let her walk...

Rk was very deeply indulged in newspaper without bothering about what's going on in the tv...radha was gaping seeing tv and said to sikky "kitni sundar hai ye ladki..main aise hi ladiki ko rishu se shadi karvana chahthi hun" on hearing mom's talk regarding his shaddi... rk suddenly jerked simultaneously current went off before rk eyes could reach the tv .

Radha asked rk to check the fuse...meanwhile sikky gave a reply ...about the girl shown in the tv "ma us ladki ka naam madhubala bahut badi superstar hain and ek hi picture me popular ho gayi" while sikky chuckled "apka sapna sapna hi rahega madhubala aur mera bhai yeh sapne mai bhi nahi ho saktha"

Radha faked her anger "kyun tumhara bhai me kya kam hai..mera beta best hai mere liye"...

Sikky: "mere liye bhi mere bhai hi best ma par bhai ko is filmy duniya par itni nafrat kyun hai...yeh mujhe samaj me nahi aa rahe hain"

Meanwhile rk on hearing the last sentence of sikky replied "sikky vo log apne aapko bagvan samajthe hain aur koi bhi aam insaan ko insaan nahi maanthe hai selfish aur gamandi ..is bath ko chod aur jaa jaake pado"...since its your 3rd year in college concentrate well so that you will be placed in a good job...go go study...rk revealed it in a ordered tone in a soft manner which indirectly indicated his love and affinity towards sikky...Hearing the same dialogue from his bhai for hundredth time sikky shrugged and moves to his room...rk was about to continue his newspaper...as his mobile started to ring displaying the caller id of his uncle "bittooji" his lips made a cute curve on seeing his favourite uncle's cal he immediately answered " hello uncle , how are you?..."

bittooji: am fyn beta...how r you?

rk: yeah good uncle ...how is your work going on uncle

bittooji: everything is moving smoothly beta...rishu i have to say something so ,will you listen to me patiently?...after getting rk's assurance bittooji ...bittooji slowly starts to talk about the film which he had got for rk ...even though bittioji knew about rk's hesitation to work in film industry...he doesn't want rk to miss such a great opportunity ...rk on hearing his offer to work as stunt master in the film "ahankar " ,hesitated initially but agreed unwillingly as he promised sikky that he will pay his college fee within two week's ...as bittooji also promised to pay him better amount than he gets...rk agrees nodding his head as he has no other go...

rk hung the phone and shouted "mom ,sikky"...sikky rushed on hearing his bhai's voice followed by radha...

rk informed radha and sikky about his travel to mumbai ...and also his job offer from bittooji...radha felt little sad since she has to miss his son for months...realizing no other better choice left for them radha agreed nodding her head...while sikky hugged rk with tears...it was fine warm morning while rk moved out dragging his luggage mending bye to his radha and sikky...as soon as he reached mumbai his uncle came to receive him as he promised ...since rk had no idea about mumbai...

meanwhile madhubala's car reached the set... since it was the first day shoot of the film ...everyone in the set has been informed about madhubala's arrival...she was given a warm welcome by the producers ,directors ,camera man etc...madhu started walking on the redcarpet while eyes noticed every nook and corner of the set...her eyes were filled with filled with fire which revealed her arrogance nature...

bittooji: rk take rest today ...ill be back by evening...and tomorrow will be the fight sequence so you can take rest today...

rk: nodding his head ...fyn uncle

bittooji:beta you have to sign agreement by today evening ...i think you have to stay in mumbai for 8 to 9 months approximately ...since its an action film...

rk nodded his head weekly while bittooji left smiling...rk had a deep sleep for sometime which was disturbed by his phone cal...rk on seeing the caller id immediately answered "yeah sikky tell me...how r you?"

sikky: am fyn bhai... wat about yo?...how is mumbai...

rk: yeah mumbai is fyn...am gud...

sikky: wat about your work bhai?...who is the hero...

bittooji returned in the evening as he promised

bittooji smiled at rk hearing his talk ...he understood that it was sikky's cal...

rk after smiling to bittooji...replied to sikky " i dint start my work yet...by tomorrow we will start i think...hero i dont know

bittooji hearing rk's talk replied within a second " heroine madhubala...and hero is new face...action sequence is for madhubala and you will have to train her from tomorrow"...

rk jerkes on hearing bittooji's words...while sikky hears it and remains speechless...

seconds later rk replied without recovering from the shock..."action sequence is for heroine??...should i train madhubala??...but uncle you never told me anything about this before"...interrupted..."beta wats your problem ?your work is to just train the person who ever they chose...so never mind hero or heroine ...just train them ...its so simple for you"

rk was speechless on hearing his uncle's words...he cannot refuse this offer since it was a tight situation for him...finally thinking about sikky's studies and home expenses rk nodded weekely... while sikky on otherside hearing bittoji's words giggled😆😆😆 ...

precap:

bhai ,you know sikky started to speak which echoed his exciting tone..."bhai mom thought of marrying you to a girl like madhubala...i hope your going to prove mom's words with slight modification by marrying madhubala itself " sikky started kidding rk...while rk immediately " is bath ko chod aur jaa jaake pado"

hello guys after long time i am posting this update so i am sorry for being so late...i have become very lazy now a days so, kindly excuse me buddies... pls don't mind the mistake's leave your comments once your done with reading...eagerly waiting for your views...silent readers pls hit the like button😉...

Edited by rishbalaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc update...do cont. when will u update ur another story? PLz PM me

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