SS: I MET MY ANGEL chapter 8 on pg no 32 (17-6-14)

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SS:I MET MY ANGEL

INTRODUCTION
she escaped from the clutches of the guardian angels.finally i m here in the human world which god the father had made.i have always wanted to see this world. but i was warned that if i come here i wud become like humans n i wud sin like humans do.
suddenly i was disturbed by loud noices of people there.i went to the place.there i saw a man crying near burning pyre.i felt some abnormal substance from his eyes.i think it is typical human thing.
i went near him n i sat with him.he glared at me.i with my one finger took that material fromhis eyes.he saw me with unusual expression
i asked him "what is this?" he still continuing his expressions"why r u joking with me in this situation?"
i asked "what is the situation?" he said"my mom died" i asked "what is died?"
he simply saw with an unsual expression. he said"r u really kidding? u dont know what is death?"
i said"yeah,i know what is death?" he smiled rather say laughed.i didnt know why he laughed but i too laughed seeing him.
he asked me"u r from which world ?u dont know death n u dont know tears?"
i told him "i m from heaven" there was sudden change in his expressions.he looked at me wide eyed.
i couldn't understand what to do soo i smiled at him.
TO BE CONTINUED:)
guys this is my new attempt. i know it is weird.this story is like fairy tale sort of thing.😳
if u want me to continue then plz like n comment😊
INDEX:
CHAPTER 1:
chapter 2:
chapter 3:
chapter 4:
chapter 5:
chapter 6:
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My_VivJaan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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~~unres~~
Yiiipppeee!!!!!! 🄳 me first in cmmenting...
awesomee start christy... i really loved fairy tale stories...cntinue soon...
A BIG CONGRATS FOR NEW STORY...šŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow fairytale 😃
I ā¤ļø fairytales!!!!
Madhu as fairy
pls continue soon & thanx 4 d pm 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yah yah..i love fairy tales...pls continue...and pls plan for regular updates sweety
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Posted: 11 years ago
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heyyy
that's really a great idea.. šŸ‘ šŸ‘ i think it is rk rite.. šŸ˜‰ who is crying for his mother.. 😭😭
and madhu.. wow... fairy?? 😳
hats off to u for this wonderful idea christy.. šŸ‘
really amazing.. looking forward to read it... 😊 šŸ¤—
common.. jaldi jaldi update karo and pm me..
waaiiitiinggg šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update..pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superbbb start nd intrestinggg concept...sooo excited 4 first part...loved it...plzzz continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow nice concept
looks like madhu escaped frm heaven...and god sent rishabh to get her back
but y she escaped frm there??
do continue dear
really interesting
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Interesting plot, 😊 So Madhu is really an angle in tru sense.šŸ˜›
Continue soon dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting...so madhu is an angel

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