Naksh OS ~ Ek Khoobsurat Date

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello freinds, I came here with my second naksh OS read it and enjoy it..
here is my OS..
In morning in naksh room naitik is sitting on the bed suddenly akshi came in the room, he hold akshara's hand and make her sit on his lap
A:naitik pls chodiye mujhe jane dijiye.. mere paas bilkul bhi time nahi hai
N:kya akshara aap bhi..thodi der to mere paas baithiye
suddenly akshi sees geela towel on the bed
A:ye kya hai naitik aapne phir se geela towel bed par rakh diya.. main kahte kahte thak gayi hu lekin aap na kabhi nahi sudharenge
N:abhi ladne ke liye time hai aapke paas.. ab der nahi ho rahi hai aapko.. jab maine aapse do minute mere paas baithane ke liye kaha to aapne mana kar diya aur ab mujhse lad rahi hai
he acted as he is angry so that akshi would manofy him 😉
Akshi came near naitik and say sorry
A:sorry naitik
A:extremely sorry
A:dil se sorry
A: plese sorry
naitik still makes faces so akshi came near naitik and kisses on his cheeks and say sorry.. after this naitik is completely melted and hug her
N:hmm.. mujhe manana aapko achi tarah se aata hai
A:vo to hai hi
N: i love you
A: i love u too
N:kitne din ho gaye hamne sath me time hi spend nahi ki
A:haan.. aaj kal kam hi itna hota hai ki hame ek dusre ke sath time spend karne ka mauka hi nahi milta
N:akshra agar ho sake to aap aaj office aayengi..aaj kal main aapko office me bahut miss karta hu
A:main bhi aapko bahut miss karti hu aur aapke sath office aana chahti hu..par bm ghar par akele kya kya sambhalengi isliye nahi aa pati.. main jarur koshish karungi ki main aaj office aau..
N: ok bye.. ab main office ke liye nikalta hu
naitik goes office and akshara completes her house works..in office naitik thinking about akshara
N:akshara ke bina to mera man hi nahi lag raha hai office me kash wo office aa pati.. lekin wo kaise aayengi unhe to bahut saare kaam hai..then he thinks that lekin agar wo aa gayi to..ye to maine socha hi nahi main abhi saari taiyariyan kar leta hoo..
meanwhile akshara become ready for going to office
A:main jaldi se taiyar ho jati hu naitik bhi mera office me wait kar rahe honge
in the office naitik arranging everything suddenly akshi came in naitik's cabin and says hi..naitik is completely shocked to see akshra there..he thought it was his dream but later he realizes that it is real
N:akshra ap sach me office aa gayi mujhe to ab bhi yakin nahi ho raha hai
A:naitik apko kya main akshra ki bhoot dikh rahi hu
N:agar ye akshra ka bhoot hoga to bhi theek hai
A:kya..to phir ap usi ke sath rahiye main ja rahi hu
N:are nahi main to majak kar raha tha aur ap bura man gayi khair chodiye ye sab bat aur ap yahan baithiye mere bagal me
naksh sits on their chairs
A:kitne din ho gaye na hame sath me aise office me baithe hue
N:apko pata hai subah se main apko bahut miss kar raha tha aur is chair ko dekh ke apki aur bhi yad aa rahi thi kaam me to bilkul man hi nahi lag raha tha
A:ab main aa gayi hu na ab hum sara kaam milkar jaldi se khatm kar lenge
N:aur uske baad dher saara waqt ek dusre ke sath bitayenge 😊
Naksh doing work on their laptop then office boy came with one cup coffee..naitik says to him to bring one coffee for akshra too.. akshra says that she does not want coffee..office boy goes
N:akshra apne coffee ke liye mana kyun kar diya khair apke liye main kuch aur mangata hu
A:naitik uski koi jarurat nahi hai kyonki hum dono ye coffee share karenge
N:acha main samajh gaya lijiye pahle ap pijiye phir main
akshra takes one sips of it then naitik drink it then akshra..like this they take coffee and complete their work
A:aj se pahle coffee pine me itna maja nahi aaya
N:mujhe bhi..acha ab ap apni aankhe band kijiye
A: par
N:kijiye to
A:theek hai
akshi close her eyes
N:ab ap apni ankhe kholiye
akshi opened her eyes and sees that naitik came with cards and flowers
N:ye sab apke liye kholke dekhiye isme kya likha hai
akshi opened the cards and read it

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Edited by bindas567 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Akshara opened the cards and read it
akshara apke bina meri jindagi adhuri hai.. jab kabhi jis mod par mujhe apki jarurat hoti hai ap hamesha mere sath khadi rahti hai ap nahi kewal ek achi bahu aur maa hain balki usase bhi achi ek patni hai..hamesha meri khushiyo ke bare me hi sochti rahti hain..maine pichale janam me jarur kuch acha kiya hoga jiski wajah se mujhe ap jaisi patni mili.. i love u so much akshara and very very thank you aj office aane ke liye aur is din ko itna special banane ke liye..
akshara is mesmerized with naitik's words
N:aur ye phul isliye kyonki in fuloon ki tarah hamari jindagi bhi muskurati rahe
A:naitik aap na sach me bahut ache hai.. is letter ki ek ek word mujhe bahut achi lagi.. apka ye gift mujhe bahut pasand aaya aur main ise hamesha sambhal ke rakhungi.. vaise apne ye card banaya kab
N:aj subah office me baithkar
A:kya ap office me baithkar ye sab karte hai
N:ye sab matlab.. apni bibi ke liye likh raha tha kisi aur ke liye thodi likh raha tha..
A:main to bas apko chida rahi thi 😉
N:acha ap mujhe chida rahi thi.. ab dekhiye main kya karta hu
within a second akshra ran..
N:akshara rukiye kaha bhag rahi hai.. ap mujhse bach nahi sakti
somehow he caught her
N:ab aayi ap mere hath me.. ab dekhiye main kya karta hoo
A:naitik pls chodiye ye office hai hamara room nahi jaha ap jo chahe vo kar sakte hain
N:acha theek hai ek shart par apko mujhe ek kiss dena hoga
A:kya... bilkul bhi nahi
N:to phir theek hai main bhi apko nahi chodunga
A: par
then hesitatingly she kisses on naitik's cheeks.. naitik becomes happy
N:akshara aj office akar apne is din ko yadgar bana diya bilkul ek khubsoorat date ki tarah... aj se pahle office me itna maja kabhi nahi aaya..thanku so much
A:thanks to mujhe aapko kahna chahiye kyoki ye aapka pyar hi hai jo mujhe yahan kheench le aaya... i love u naitik
N:I love u too😊
they hug each other
the end
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Edited by bindas567 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I think dat star plus also should give the party to the whole team of YRKKH for completing 5 glorious years. ...bcz dey deserve dat
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum it is ...
i just wish v get to c dis on show ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona_naksh

awesum it is ...
i just wish v get to c dis on show ...

thanks for liking it.. i too wish that we see these type of scenes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sure I will write more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely Dear👏

well written
Keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful os
loved naksh office romance
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: greatsumkum

Lovely Dear👏


well written
Keep it up👍🏼

thank u so much

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