Akdha ss animosity vs love

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys.this is my first try at writing a story.i am not sure how it will be but do give it a read.I am drawing inspiration from the current shivani-mirza track
prologue
How can you hate somebody so much without knowing them?
how can you loose somebody in spite of loving them?
How can life conspire against you without your knowing it?
How can a single word make so much of a difference?
How can a single second turn everything around you?

Chapter1- the wedding
The whole of Amer was lit up.raja Bharmal and rani mainavati were full of joy.his youngest daughter,shivani was about to get married.although none of his daughters was married,he simply could not say no to this proposal.mirza hakim- a well reputed king of India ,known for his bravery,valiance and intelligence had asked for shivanis hand.he had encountered her on one of his hunting expeditions.he had seen her playing with the water.he was curious to see her face as her back was
Turned towards him.suddenly he spotted a snake advancing towards her.she was completely oblivious of the snake as she was busy playing with the water.driven by his instinct,mirza ran to save shivani- who was on the verge of being bitten by the snake.he pushed the snake away and in the process fell on the ground,skinning his arm .Shivani turned around listening to the sound and saw mirza fallen next to her.althogh mirza was hurt he could not overlook shivanis beautiful face.she stood up and thought of mirza as an enemy.she picked up a log to hit him but stopped seeing mirza get up.he explained everything to her after which shivani apologised and thanked him.she offered him to come to the palace for treatment of his wound.while going back to the palace shivani took a closer look of mirza and found him mesmerizing.as soon as they reached the palace raja Bharmal received them and asked for Mirza's introduction.

Shivani: baapu sa yeh mirza hakim hain.inhone hamari jaan ek sap se bachai aur usi dauran inke hath mein chot lagayi.hum inhe yahan aushadhi karane Kaye hain

Raja Bharmal thanked him and asked a servant to take him to the hakim.mirza was treated well and arrangements were made for his return.

Mirza could not forget shivanis beautiful face and narrated the entire incident to his brother jalal.

Mirza- bhaijaan aaj us rajkumari ko dekhkar ham sab bhul gaye.hum unse nigah karna chahte hain.
Jalal- zaroor mirza ham kal hi ek pegam raja Bharmal ke pas bhijva dengue

(I am not going to show the oppositions and other drama.i am straight away going to everybody's acceptance.the marriage is accepted by everybody willingly)

Everybody was happy with the wedding but jodha-raja bharmals eldest daughter.she could not see her sister marry a Mughal no matter how good he was. Mughals were supposed to be hated not made relationships with.

Jodha( angry)-baapu sa is rishte ko manzoori kaise deh sakte hain.mirza hakim hoyege ek ache insaan paruntu hum yeh nahi bhul sakte ki wo ek Mughal hain.shivani wahan kaise reh payegi.humein kuch toh karna hoga.

She was interrupted by her mother who asked her to get prepared to leave for Agra as all preparations were to take place there.jodha did not say anything and simply did what she was told.

Jodha-(in a victorious tone) ab ham dekhte hain ki yeh rishte kaise hora hain.
Little did she know that it was only the first of many relations with the Mughals
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please post it in Jodha Akbar forum na :)

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