~The Knight in Shining Stilettos~ FF

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Posted: 12 years ago
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So, this is my new ff.😊 Yeah, I know I am already writing one fan fiction. I should complete it first. But you guys see, mi querida, Kashish aka CP requested (or probably demanded 😆) me to write an AU, more specifically something dark and angsty. Since I am in a mood to grant wishes and also because I don't wanna deny mi querida 😛, so here I am. There is nothing clich about this one. Read on...

Running. Yes, he was running. He was sure that is what they called this. This fast movement of legs with air rushing past one's face. The air smelt sharp, f..fresh and there was no dust. Was this usual???? Was this how air smelt everywhere? Did air smell different in every place? Pain laced up his legs but he did not feel it. This was the only emotion he is used to. He ran till the last ounce of strength in him depleted. And then he collapsed waiting. Waiting for something, anything. Maybe death. But he wanted to avoid death. That is why he ran from home, did he not? Sir used to say he is a monster. That he was a danger to society. Will he kill now that he has escaped? But he had no such urge. The only urge he had was to sleep.

Cold night air seeped in through her thin jacket. But she did not shiver as her determined steps led her to home. It had been a good day for business. Plenty of marriages were happening this time of the year...and plenty of bachelor parties as well. She had money now. She will leave the city within a week. Now, she only had to steal Jerry. A low groan filled the alleyway making her skip a step. There was pain in the sound. But that was none of her business. She could not afford to stop. However she found her legs moving of their own accord looking for the source of the voice. And, then she detected a figure crouched on the pavement.

A man locked in a store room since infancy. A stripper on the run from law. What happens when two people scarred beyond belief and damaged beyond repair come together??????

As I said before the characters are seriously damaged. No fluff or fuzzy things involved here. Should I write more?? You guys tell me. More than 20 votes and 10 comments and I will continue this. Also, I don't know whom to write this on (KR or SS), so I would welcome suggestions. Also, suggest a few names since I am horrible at naming characters. And Kash dearie, you is one spoilt brat (but I adore you anyways) 😉. Also, what do you guys think the title should be? "Broken" or "The knight in shining stilettos"??

Much love,

Kishi 😃

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Dreamer3003 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomee start!!
sounds interestingg!!!
do continue soon!!
and love d title very much!!!
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heya kishi...
I hv read ur other wrk also bt cudnt do it coz of useless studies...
Anyways...
The prologue is wonderful...both souls r running away nd r afraid of life...
Their intersection of path will be interesting...
Continue soon..nd pm me pls...
Well its akanksha here...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

Heya kishi...
I hv read ur other wrk also bt cudnt do it coz of useless studies...
Anyways...
The prologue is wonderful...both souls r running away nd r afraid of life...
Their intersection of path will be interesting...
Continue soon..nd pm me pls...
Well its akanksha here...


Yeah dear, i have seen your likes😊 but have always wondered why you do not comment . Hey Akansha nice to meet you😃, Hope this is entertaining enough. Lets see the response.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Knight in Shinning Stilettos, it's the most attractive title i've ever read.. yes, let it be that, I vote for it.. Broken is so predictable..😊

awesome start, really want the first chapter (guessing it's the prolouge)...it sure is going to be a hell dark one, i can allready sense it, but am also sure, you will surely portray the love within them beautifully...
me not gonna comment long, coz, honestly, idk what to write.. am just eagerly waiting...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anki_22

Knight in Shinning Stilettos, it's the most attractive title i've ever read.. yes, let it be that, I vote for it.. Broken is so predictable..😊

awesome start, really want the first chapter (guessing it's the prolouge)...it sure is going to be a hell dark one, i can allready sense it, but am also sure, you will surely portray the love within them beautifully...
me not gonna comment long, coz, honestly, idk what to write.. am just eagerly waiting...😆


Its alright darling. There is not much to write about anyways. And yeah it is a bit of a dark cloud albeit with a silver lining. And you commenting is enough.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nic proluge...

update soon..

sorry 4 shrt cmmnt ... studies
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OH EM GEE!

KISHI darling bacha, I'm only a spoilt brat because you're spoiling me rotten acha? Maine toh aise hi mention kiya tha. I am SOOO crazy happy ke you're actually going to write a whole fic and it sounds amazing. I can already foresee some amazing things here. Just a question, Jerry is her kid isn't it? God! I can't wait.

The premises you've picked is amazing. I have been wanting to read a hooker!fic for ages anyway and I have a feeling I'm going to love this but then again I love everything you write anyway so what's new?

Chal post more soon and haan, I feel soo touched that you wrote this cuz I wanted to read something like this sooo would you like to read something too? I'd love to return the favour. PM me and make your demands known!

P.S. I love the title. It's unique and has such a nice ring to it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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holaaa !!!
me agayaaa 😃

wel first of all ... no need to change the title .. " the knight in shinning stilettos " is very unique n amazing as well ... so dont change it ^_^

nd

though i love both KR n SS ...
i genuinely want u to write on KR 😳 PLEASH !! _/\_


nd tht was a kick start !!!!!
unlike EOAK it was dark , angsty nd i lved it ^_^

update soon re !!!! 😎

much love,
~divyani~

PS- isse lamba comment nhi de sakti ...


Edited by divyani.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Starting with title very innovative and eye catching
Concept is totally new and i think u should continue for sure
I would like it more if its on KR but then even if its on SS i dont mind coz anyway i am going to read this
U srsly have a thing with writing
U write awesomly good
Srsly love ur works
Get going with them and try to update soon wanna their story

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