MG Adoore Sapane part 25,26,27 on 133,143 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanx 4 pm
Nice update
Maaneet facing each other
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Posted: 11 years ago
teaser part 6

geet ye mere paith /tummy main kya ghoom raha hai ,jab hi ye dadima ka grandson bat /talk karta hai

maan god iska face hai ya emotions ki dukan /shop in every second changing ye dadima kaha gayi




Note for Dhadkan do dilo ki

i want make this os but your respons give me thought that i will end it as os in more 2 or 3 parts or i make it another ss or ff please help me waiting
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser...
emotion ki dukan 😆
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part 6 Jaanta hoon aapko sahare ki zarurat nahin

Main sirf saath dene aaya hoon

geet eyes met with maan eyes world stop for her , she got some unknown feeling of safety , satisfaction like her soul , her wounded soul got some medicine , when after so much wait a men got his destiny same expression come on geet face , dadima watching all this very keenly , maanji a little voice came from geet mouth and maan feel like he hearing some music both are loss in each other eyes like they speaking with there eyes Mahiii


dadima called out ,when both are lost in each other eyes both came on reality after dadima voice maan feel embarrassed and geet just bend her head , dadima introduce them geet beta he is my grandson maan and maan this is my beti geet


maan just nodded her but his heart feel pain watching her like this , totally pale face ,and dadima words coming again and again in his mind he some how get control on his mind geet feel wired that she don't scared with maan present but feeling safety around him she confused with herself , but shoo her thought that may be he is dadima grandson that's why i don't get scare with him

Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise

Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise

Tune aankhon se koyi baat kahi ho jaise

Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise

Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise

Jaan baaki baaki hai magar saas ruki ho jaise

Jaanta hoon aapko sahare ki zarurat nahin

Main sirf saath dene aaya hoon

Awkward silence coming between them and dadima want to brake this silence so she start to talk ,geet beta you know he is person who play that music , geet just nodded her head now dadima want to bang her head but she thought may be she expect more from this two soul ,but she don't want to loose this chance she want to they open up with each other which is help them for there pain ,sorrow , dadima make excuse that she have a work so maan give company to geet , she ask geet that it is ok with her ,geet just nodded her head in approval


maan want to talk with her but his less talkative nature can't help him , he just watching hear and there and geet after so much time start to cribbed to her babaji ye kya hai , why he is not talking he anything is he mute ,no no geet tum bhi hi na , some time spend like this , after some time both talk in same time oh app , but geet have shock because when he talk she get felling that something in her tummy like something roll in her tummy ,maan watching her and enjoying her face which is changing by second , maan thinking god iska face hai ya emotions ki dukan /shop in every second changing ,both nodded their head and small smile came on their lips



maan just have peace in his heart when he saw smile on her face , maan start to talk apka naam geet hai na , geet said ha wo dadima ne apko batya th na / yes dadima tell you na that my name is geet ,she looking to his eyes

Har mulaakat pe mehsoos yehi hota hai

Har mulaakat pe mehsoos yehi hota hai

Mujhse kuch teri nazar pooch rahi ho jaise

Raah chalte huve aksar yeh ghumaan hota hai

Raah chalte huve aksar yeh ghumaan hota hai

Woh nazar chupke mujhe dekh rahi ho jaise

Woh nazar chupke mujhe dekh rahi ho jaise

maan just nodded his head , wo I don't know how to talk with you so ask this ,she just admired his truth ness


geet .. I think you are less talkative but you really good with music but why so much pain in your tune


maan just shock with her qus that how she get pain in my tune , he just say I like that tune it is truth of our life pain , very few person are there who are away from pain ,geet just mummer huu but her face change in sad and maan don't want to that so imm change the topic , don't know why but he want to talk with her like he know her from ages

Ek lamhe mein simat aaya hai sadiyon ka safar

Ek lamhe mein simat aaya hai sadiyon ka safar

Zindagi tej bahut tej chali ho jaise

Zindagi tej bahut tej chali ho jaise

Is tarah pehron tujhe sochta rehta hoon main

Is tarah pehron tujhe sochta rahta hoon main

Meri har saas tere naam likhi ho jaise

Meri har saas tere naam likhi ho jaise

dadima say that you also like music ,geet say yes I love music ,but I don't know to sing or cant play any instrument ,she make baby face , maan just smile on her reply ,geet make O shape oh you make fun on me I complaint to dadima don't make fun on me


maan just surrender and say no no please don't complaint to dadima else she punish me , I am really scared with her he said this with so much serious face geet just ask in innocent is it true really dadima punish you if I complain them ,phir didima ne un logo ko punish ku nahi kiya unhone to muje kita dard diya / really then why dadima not punishing that dirty people who gave me so much pain , injury ,dirty touch , tear start to come from geet almond eyes


Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise

Tune aankhon se koyi baat kahi ho jaise

Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise

Jaan baaki baaki hai magar saas ruki ho jaise

That question just shake him like hell, he totally blank with geet innocent as well as so painful question , he just don't know what to give ans ,and hear now geet start cry bitterly a past for some time she forget, again hit her and again hurt her ,maan just cant see her like this he just want to hug her console her , want took away all her pain all her past but scare for her reaction , he feeling so helpless , but cant control himself he came closed to her and stand near bed he just put his shaking hand on geet shoulder and softly called geet , geet don't cry please , geet just hug her waist and cry loudly , why why ,what is my fault that's I get this punishment why , app bolo na why ,god punish me like this he took away my baba and ma also from me , I missing my ma ,baba ,i also want to go to them



maan took away her from hug and put hand on her mouth and say don't talk like this geet , some time before I also thinking like this , for ending life , and I try that also , geet eyes turn big in shock ,


yes geet some day before I try to suicide geet , and trust me geet it is not good way , if we end our life than it will be wining of that bad person who hurt us ,why should we take this decision it is our life and we should have to live with our consult ,we don't give right to other to rule our life , I know geet we cant change our past what is happening in our life ,but we can make our future with our decision , with our rule na think about it geet ,and geet with your life you have another life with you , what is his/her fault to have punishment of death , jishne abhi tak life ko dekha hi nahi , can he deserved this punishment because we don't want to face pain ,tell me geet with that he just took geet hand in his hand and put it on her tummy she first time felling some moment , both felling same thing like baby response to their touch , their talk


now geet know why she felling something rolling in her tummy when maan start to talk with her , her eyes winded in shock , she ask him , ap ko path hai jab apane bath shur kiya muje laga mere peth main rat jump kar rahe hai , rat jumping in my tummy



maan just laugh on her talk he just pull her cheek and say rat nahi pari , yes pari just like you sweet , innocent and be... ,he just stop in middle and slap him in mind maan control maan , but he have big smile on his face


geet pari for me sachhi ,


maan muchhi yes pari like you


geet just put her hand on her tummy and start cares there with love and care ,she just lost in her pari,and her nave mind for gate maan word that he try to suicide

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update😊
maaneet part was too good👍🏼
make it into SS..so that we can get more of maaneet😊
Edited by -Mithuna- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
daadi let them alone to talk each other
geet not scared from maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful part, innocence lurking in every corner.
Maanu pretending scare from dadima.

Poor maaneet, perhaps baby will bind dem togezer.

Maan sai bole, geet is fit to be called pari, she's soo naive, bilkul koi masoom baby jaise.

Pls make them see love soon, dadima very smart.

Waiting for more.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Jaanta hoon aapko sahare ki zarurat nahin

Main sirf saath dene aaya hoon...loved it!!

Nice update

Like maan geet convo...

Ab geet maan ki pari ban gayi...so sweet!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part..both started to have a normal talk..geet is so innocent n her pain will be there for life time..the culprits must be punished ..maan too told about himself n his suicide attempt is foolish now letting the others win over it..baby ..abi se maanki side..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww beautifully written emotional update yar:)
loved it a lot:)

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