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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Rantaraholic: Yes I am...but I prefer not to post my stories on there. Sorry

@Honeybees: Sorry yaar I forgot ur name...im trully bad at this. But Im posting today for sure :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arriving at our destination was probably the greatest drive ever. The trees along the rode were decorated with white lights and when we parked the car you can see the waves crashing upon the sandy shore as the wind silently sang. God it was so beautiful. There was gazebo the was decorated with white lights and red roses balloons all over the floor and table in the center with two chairs. On the table was of course a cake, but it was chocolate, my favorite. On the cake it read "Happy Birthday Antara I love you" I looked at Raghu and saw him leaning against the rail of the gazebo.

"Thank you" I said walking up to him. I got on my tip toes and planted a kiss on his cheek. I brought myself back to the ground and hugged him. I felt his arms wrap around my waist and he pulled me closer. I mean if we could get any closer that is. He kissed me on my head and released me from the hug.

"Let's cut the cake!" he said with glee as he dragged me back towards the table. I laughed and grabbed the knife that had a red ribbon tied to it and lifted it. Raghu wrapped his hand around mine and we cut the cake together. He let go of my hand and started clapping as soon as the knife dug into the cake. I smiled and cut a small piece out. Lifting it with my fingers I turned and held it out for Raghu.

"Thank you" I said as I fed him the cake. I winced in pain and quickly yanked back my hand as I felt his teeth dig into my skin. "Raghu...that hurt" I yelled shaking the pain out of my fingers. He chuckled and grabbed my hand. He brought my finger up to his lips and blew on it. Feeling his breath on my skin gave me this tingling sensation and I couldn't resist but close my eyes. I felt his fingers slip around my waist as the distance between us became smaller and smaller. Soon enough I was able to feel his breath on my face and by god did it do wonders. I let out a gasp as I felt his hand graze the back of neck moving my hair to one side. He bent down and kissed my neck. I grabbed his shirt into my fist and pulled in closer. God I felt like I was in heaven his one touch did wonders to my body. He grazed his lips from the crook of my neck to my ear at first it was sensational, but then it started tickling. "Raghu" I managed to whisper as he continue to graze his lips down to my throat and to the other side of my head.

"Hmm" he said as he brought his hand up to my cheek and started rubbing it.

"It tickles" I moaned as he just continued to shower with me with kisses. Honestly I had no idea what to do or say. I wanted him to continue and at the same time I knew it was wrong.

"Does it?" he asked seductively finally pulling away from me. I managed to open my eyes and saw a pair of eyes staring right back at me. Gosh there was so much love filled in them that it brought me to tears. The love in his eyes changed to worrisome in a split second. "What happened?" he whispered cupping my face and wiping away my trailing tears.

"Nothing" I managed to say as the breath got caught in my throat.

"Seriously! You are going to tell me nothing while crying here?"

"Well it's just that..." I couldn't finish what was I saying because my words kept getting stuck. "It's just that I can't believe..."

"Believe in the love that I have for you?" Raghu asked finishing my sentence for me. I honestly had no idea how he knew what I was feeling but he did and that just made me even more emotional.

"Hmm" I mumbled and he just chuckled bringing back into his arms and squeezing me tight.

"It's because I truly love you! Ever since I met you I couldn't take my eyes off of you. When I finally met you and realized that you are not only beautiful on the outside, but the inside too I couldn't help but fall in love" he said as he continued to hold me tight.

"Really?" I whispered into his chest taking in his manly fragrance.

"Really" He whispered pulling apart from me. I gazed into his eyes and smiled. He lifted my chin up and smiled at me. I saw his gaze shift from my eyes to my lips and closed my eyes. I wasn't going to stop him today. He brought his face closer because I felt him breathing on my lips. Our breath was intermingling and god he was creating havoc in my body. "May I?" I heard him ask. I quickly opened my eyes in shock and looked at him. I smiled and without answering I place my lips on his. I felt his lips soften from the surprising kiss I gave him. Our lips began to move in sync as our heart began to beat as one. I felt his hand slide its way up to my face and he began to caress my cheek. The kiss became more intensifying than I thought I would be as our lips continued to move in sync and heads from one side to the other. The kiss continued for god knows how long when I felt his tongue on my lips, something I wasn't expecting. I quickly pulled apart gasping from breathe and looking at him.

"Sorry I didn't mean to..." Raghu said coming up to me and putting a hand on my arm and rubbing it to soothe me.

"No don't be sorry I just wasn't warned, I guess you can say" I told him looking at him and smiling so he knows that he didn't hurt me at all. "In fact Raghu..." I hesitated to complete my sentence but I did anyhow "...that was my first kiss" I finished turning around to look away from him and gaze at the sea. I felt a rock hard chest hit my back and strong arms engulf me in them. Raghu came and stood behind me and placed his chin in the crook of my neck.

"Did you enjoy it" he asked kissing my cheek.

"What?" I asked shockingly hitting his arm. He chuckled and asked me the same question again. "I don't know. Did you like it?" I asked as I continued to gaze out at the open sea.

"Ummm" was all he said. I turned around leaning against the rail. He placed his arms on either side of me on the rail.

"So you didn't like it?" I asked looking down at the bracelet he gave me yesterday. I felt a pair of lips on m forehead and closed my eyes. I looked up at him and smiled. He returned the smile and captured my lips without any warning. However, this time the kiss was short and sweet.

"It was the best kiss I have ever had" he replied after releasing my lips. I blushed and hid my face in his chest as I started to giggle. He laughed along with me and once again took me into his arms. Wow I couldn't believe that he had the best kiss with me. With me? Wait a minute,

"You have kissed other people?" I asked pulling away from his embrace crossing my arms over my chest.

"Well girls to be exact, but trust me you are the last person I will ever kiss from now on. My life is now yours and my heart as well." He said cupping my face in his hands. "Thank you Antara for letting be your first kiss" He said kissing me one more time. I smiled softened up in his hold.

"Raghu...you will be my last as well" I said pulling away and intertwining my hand with his.

"Let's go for a walk there is another surprise" he said holding tight to my hand and dragging me out of the gazebo and onto the sand. I pulled him back to take off my heels. I took them in my hand and he once again took a hold of my hand and we continued to run. We didn't run that far, but it felt like we were running away, running away to a world that only consisted of us. Raghu and Antara...Rantara.

When arriving to the destination I noticed a white tent that had red curtains on each side of the tent. As we got closer I noticed that there was something inside. Laid in the middle of the tent was a white bed that was covered with rose petals. There were candles the surrounded the bed providing light to the area. I walked around the tent and there was this familiar fragrance. Jasmine, located in every corner of the tent was jasmine plants. The place looked outstanding it was though I was in heaven. Unfortunately, it hit me that there was a bed. What was Raghu planning?

"Do you like it?" I heard Raghu ask. I turned around and saw him standing next to the entrance.

"Yes, its magnificent, but I have one question, why the bed?" I asked walking up to him.

"I thought you might ask" he said walking closer to me. "Look, don't get me wrong, but there are some things that I have been hiding from you; not only from you, but everyone. I want to spend this night telling you about me. This is something you deserve to know" he said. He took a hold of my hand and brought me closer to the bed. He kneeled down on the bed and patted to the empty side of the bed indicating for me to sit down. I kneeled down beside him and sat down.

"What do you want to talk about?" I asked playing with my bracelet. I felt the bed move and when I looked over he was laying down with one hand under his head and his eyes closed.

"There's a lot" he said letting out a sigh and opening his eyes. "Antara I'm dying" Raghu said looking me in the eyes.

"If you are dying to tell me than tell me" I said looking at him. Wanting him to know that I was there to listen to whatever he had to tell me.

"Antara, I'm dying. I have stage 4 lung cancer" Raghu said closing his eyes and lying down. The world around me seemed to have fainted away. All I heard were the waves continuously crashing against the shore and his words repeating in my head. I felt my heart starting to break the blood flow slowed down and my breathing still. Raghu is dying.


Working on it right now...might be posting it later tonight or tomorrow. Tomorrow I have a party so hopefully I can get it done. Right now it seems as though this may end up being 4 parts.

Edited by Chandni- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Awesome yar simple amazing, Loved it so much

But Raghu is dying , Damn you are making me so emotional 😭 😭

Continue soon plx wanna read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing yaar btw m honey
loved the update
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
OH ! Raghu is dying OMG

An update soon please

Continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
nice update dear..!!!😛
so beautiful,romantic moments lived by rantara😳 bt OMG!!!! raghu is suffering from lung cancer😲 and in last stage😭..it is really shocking
thanks fr update😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Brilliantly written yaar...
I loved it but raghu goin to die...nooo!!! :( :(
Well i luved your story... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have a doubt that is Antara a school going girl??
Ans what about Raghu is he a college student??
By the way it was emotional that Raghu is going die.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update..😳
but OMG..raghu dying made me so emotional 😭
thnks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
So I finished the third part! But my computer crashed...so now I have to re-write it, but its not gonna be as great

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