virman ff: journey of life #3 Epilogue pg 25 03/10

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Aenna

@Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

OMGGG IT WAS D END
I CANT BELIEVE IT...I WANT MORE LOLZZZ ...
It was d superbbb journey with dis story. .
Loved it alot...
Nd I reallyyy enjoyed dis update...
Ur idea was awwsum... lyk how u hv explained dere moments
after every 2 months of manvi's pregnancy...
Mind blowing storyyy

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ramanirani

@ramanirani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

its just awesome yaar...
i enjoyed your story well
and its one of my favourite ff...

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lujeyn9

@lujeyn9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Wow Awesome Update
Loved ur story
Thanx 4 PM
Waiting 4 season 2😊

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: prathe
wow yaar ...i enjoyed the whole journey of life very much ...very well written ...fun emotion drama...enjoyed each and every update of yours dear...👏

next season definitely u should continue dear...😊

thank u so much dear for ur lovely comment nd yea i'll definately go ahead with season2 bt need sometime 😳

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Shivi!!! 🤗 Wonderful! Fab! Awesome! Loved it a lot! ❤️❤️❤️❤️ You know na that I love happy ending! 😳 Virman and their little angel Meethi.. Happy family ❤️❤️.. Perfect ending! Meethi is so adorable and cute.. Love her.. Update is beautifully written! 👏👏 Loved each and every moment! Thank you for such a fantastic FF!! Superb work! 👍🏼 I will miss this one.. But I'm very excited for JOL season 2 also! Eagerly waiting for it.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

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unres
Finally here i am commenting on this one 😛

fabulous awesome amazing cute and romantic update shivi and also long one 😃😃 the whole pregnancy time and after that the complete virman family happy family very well written ...the pregnancy moodswings and poor virat manofying and consoling her like taking care of a child then her cravings and virat making pizza for her late night poor thing aur phir kuch khane ko mila bhi nai 😆😆 then bearing all those nautankis of his maha nautanki wife the baby first kick feeling both of them feeling it together awww beautiful moments
and manvi ki beti bhi manvi ki tarah nautanki hai 😛😆 but complete daddy's daughter haan really cute and fun bonding between the duo to irritate manvi and then manofy her soo easily ofcoz and virman soo beautifully admiring and cherishing their little dool's presence in their life 😃😃
its finally happy's ending for this couple who began from mere strangers who knew not the presence of the other when met hated even facing eachother but cared for eachother that bond was just made with the first sight of eachother from mere strangers to life partners the soulmates the journey of their life have been with soo many ups and downs with lots of happiness and love at once with hell loads of sorrows and pain few misunderstanding few fights but still they stood strong with trust and loe and at the end they stand together 😃
beautiful story shivi amazingly written 👏👏every feeling elaborated soo well 😃
waiting for season 2 ...😉

Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago