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Posted: 11 years ago
@Niki...
Good Morning...
and thanks a lot for liking the updates...
i really appreciate you are such a sweetheart...love you a lot...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123


thanks a lot dear... read today or before?




read on the same day you updated... But commented today
my views on that day were like that
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123

@Niki...

Good Morning...
and thanks a lot for liking the updates...
i really appreciate you are such a sweetheart...love you a lot...😊



good morning jeenia
welcome and thanks😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

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good morning jeenia
welcome and thanks😊


thanks a lot dear, looks free today?
Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123


thanks a lot dear, looks free today?



noo ... Going to put my daughter to bed
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Posted: 11 years ago

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noo ... Going to put my daughter to bed


K.wish my good night to her... mine is still sleeping in bed at home as its her winter vacation...
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Posted: 11 years ago
unresd my views ... waiting for next update... 😊
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K.wish my good night to her... mine is still sleeping in bed at home as its her winter vacation...




that's nice... Its 10 there right... Still sleeping
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Posted: 11 years ago


New Banner For today's update... thanks to Meerab...


Part-40

Varun, Gauri and Astha were talking when Shlok came back with bowls of ice cream...

Have it...he spoke giving to Astha...

Thanks a lot dear...she smiled...saw the bowl and made a face...

Now what? Shlok sked...

This is strawberry... She spoke...

Ya, your favorite one...

No, but I don't like it now, I need vanilla...she made a twisted face...

Without saying single word, he went out and brought six to seven ice cream tubs...

What's this? Gauri was shocked...

I knew it...she is going to speak something like this...Shlok spoke irritatingly...have it whichever you want...she gave all to Atsha...happy now?

Awe...Astha pulled him for a hug...you are so sweet...while Shlok removed her arms away from her looking at Varun...Varun, tomorrow is my chemo...

Ya, I remember...I have reminded auntie uncle too...Varun spoke...

But tomorrow, Astha's checkup is also due...Gauri spoke suddenly...

So you may take her... Shlok spoke looking at Gauri...

Ya, why not...Varun spoke while Atsha pinched Gauri with some signal... when Gauri shouted...no...

What? Shlok looked at her...

I mean, we can't go tomorrow Varun...we have an urgent meeting in the evening...sorry Shlok, you will have to take Astha to doctor yourself ...

Shlok knew, they all are pretending. But he too decided not to beg of their help...ok, I will manage, all he said...and went away...

What? Varun looked at Gauri...how will he manage?

Let him try Varun...he will... Atsha spoke...he has chemo in morning and my appointment is in evening...let him at least try to manage else you people are here na? What's the issue?

Ok baba, as you wish but I am really feeling sad for Shlok... Poor he...Varun twisted face...

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Next day morning, Shlok went to hospital for chemo with Varun while he had asked Atsha not t come with him...

But Astha could not stop herself, she had went with Gauri one hour later after they left...

As Astha reached hospital, doctor had completed chemo session..

How is Shlok doctor? Niranjan asked as doctor came out...

He is fine, doctor smiled...actually better than before and positive...

Means...Niranjan sked...

In fact, in every chemo he speaks just one thing...I don't know, I will be alive or not after handling so much pain...and today you know what he asked...doctor paused...

Hummm...all looked at his face...

Today he asked, till when will I get consciousness? I have to take Atsha to her doctor...doctor smiled...that's good signal, he himself want to live now...this is first step towards betterment for a patient...anyways , he will be conscious within two hours...saying doctor left...Listening all were happy...finally we are on right track...AStha smiled...just hope soon everything will be fine...

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It was almost evening by when Shlok was almost fine and was discharged...

As he came out, he saw Gauri and Varun too there...you? You had to go for a meeting na? He imitated Gauri...

Wo actually our meeting got canceled... Gauri pretended...

So you could take Astha to doctor? He gave her a look...but before she could speak...ya, I know your reply...my love, my responsibility...

Jab pta hi hai to pooch kyon rhe ho? Gauri winked at him...go ahead with her to doctor...

Haan haan jaunga hi...tumhe to nahi kahunga...Shlok to spoke angrily... Wait for few days, ek bar thik ho jaun main... Will take revenge of each and every botheration from you three...

Listening tear rolled over Gauri's face... bus ek baar thik ho jayo yaar...fir jaan bhi mangoge na, to wo bhi hanste hanste dedenge hum sab... Saying she hugged Shlok... While Shlok himself was surprised...he was saying to live... live life with them...

Where is Astha? He asked changing topic...

She has been to her doctor...Gauri relied...

Alone? Shlok was shocked...

Ya, I asked her to accompany...but she said either Shlok or me alone... Gauri spoke...

Ye ladki to mujhe pagal karke hi chodegi... saying Shlok too left for Atsha...

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So, how are you feeling Astha Doctor asked while checking her BP...

I am fine doctor, she smiled...

Ya, looking so...you are looking happy as well as healthy... and BP is also normal...Doctor smiled...

I have told you doctor whatever happened last week was the last one...not any more stress...Astha smiled...

Ya doctor, she hs shifted all her stress on me...Shlok spoke entering the room...Doctor was shocked to see him there...

How is she doctor? Shlok asked...

Good to see you Mr. Agnihotri...she is fine and I hope baby too... We need to go for Ultrasound...lets go... Saying doctor left... While shlok held Atsha's hand...could not you bring Gauri with you?

I need either you or no one...she smiled...

You and your tactics...lets go now... he spoke bringing her out...

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Doctor took Astha to a room while she said Shlok...Mr. Agnihotri you may also accompany...

Me? Ok..Shlok shrugged his shoulders unknown to what was going on...

So Astha, ready to see first glimpse of your baby? Doctor smiled...

What? Astha was shocked...

Yes Astha...you can see your baby...Doctor smiled and she started he ultrasound... Getting images from different angles... Shlok was looking at the procedure curiously...

When doctor focused on one picture and spoke to Shlok...see your baby Mr. Agnihotri...

Really? Shlok was surprised to see image of outer shape of folded baby...while Atsha looked at him...he was too happy seeing, he held her hand with happiness...our baby jaan...

Ya...Astha too smiled in happiness pressing his hand...our baby...

Its a baby girls na? Shlok asked doctor...

Sorry, we can't tell gander, its illegal... Doctor smiled...

No, it should be a baby girl...he looked ta Astha... I have told you... I need baby girl first just like you...

But I need a baby boy...Astha spoke...

No... a girl...Shlok protested... Why you should win always...we will have a baby boy five six years later...but for now, only a baby girl...

Doctor smiled... I can't understand you Mr. Agnihotri... last week you wanted Astha to abort baby and now you are fighting on gender of the baby...

Listening Shlok came back to his senses...seriousness took over his face...i... he left Astha's hand...i am waiting outside...come soon...saying he left the place...

Don't worry doctor, now everything is fine... Astha smiled... how is baby?

Its perfectly fine...don't worry... just take care of yourself...

Doctor smiled making her get up from bed and coming out of room...

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Shlok kept quite on complete way looking outside window of car without speaking single word to Astha...Astha tried to talk to him, but of no use...

Even after coming back , Shlok was still lost , neither Astha's jokes nor her orders were affecting him ...

After dinner, he went alone for a walk leaving her in the flat itself...

Astha waited for him , but enough time had passed, he didn't come back... Finally Astha stood from bed and went to balcony on the beach side...after some time, she listened opening of gate...

Then room's gate also opened and Shlok spoke for her... Astha?

Hum...she replied from balcony itself...

Astha..Shlok came there fast, covered her with shawl...what are you doing here? Don't you know how cold it is what if something happen to you're and our baby?

Our baby? Astha smile don listening...

He outraged and just kept quite as he completed word baby..It was first time in last days, he had talked about baby... he immediately stopped reminding what he has spoken and turned back to go...

But Atsha held his hand, moved closer and placed his hand on her stomach...don't go Shlok... I need you...our baby needs you...she whispered moving closer...

Shlok touched her tummy and slowly moved his hand there, he had tears in his eyes... while Astha moved a bit closer...cupped his face and kissed his eyes removing tears from his eyes...

Shlok had his complete world in front of his eyes for a moment...but slowly he removed her hands from his face and again went out of their home leaving her alone ...


Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE

LOVED IT
THE START IS NICE
SHLOK GUESSED IT RIGHT... ABOUT ASTHA
HE BOUGHT 6 TO 7 FLOVORS TUBS OF ICECREAMS😆😆😆

Awe...Astha pulled him for a hug...you are so sweet...while Shlok removed her arms away from her looking at Varun...Varun, tomorrow is my chemo...

Ya, I remember...I have reminded auntie uncle too...Varun spoke...

But tomorrow, Astha's checkup is also due...Gauri spoke suddenly...

So you may take her... Shlok spoke looking at Gauri...

Ya, why not...Varun spoke while Atsha pinched Gauri with some signal... when Gauri shouted...no...

What? Shlok looked at her...

I mean, we can't go tomorrow Varun...we have an urgent meeting in the evening...sorry Shlok, you will have to take Astha to doctor yourself ...

Shlok knew, they all are pretending. But he too decided not to beg of their help...ok, I will manage, all he said...and went away...

What? Varun looked at Gauri...how will he manage?

Let him try Varun...he will... Atsha spoke...he has chemo in morning and my appointment is in evening...let him at least try to manage else you people are here na? What's the issue?

Ok baba, as you wish but I am really feeling sad for Shlok... Poor he...Varun twisted face...


LIKED THE ABOVE PART
SHLOK CHEMO DONE ALL WELL

Next day morning, Shlok went to hospital for chemo with Varun while he had asked Atsha not t come with him...

But Astha could not stop herself, she had went with Gauri one hour later after they left...

As Astha reached hospital, doctor had completed chemo session..

How is Shlok doctor? Niranjan asked as doctor came out...

He is fine, doctor smiled...actually better than before and positive...

Means...Niranjan sked...

In fact, in every chemo he speaks just one thing...I don't know, I will be alive or not after handling so much pain...and today you know what he asked...doctor paused...

Hummm...all looked at his face...

Today he asked, till when will I get consciousness? I have to take Atsha to her doctor...doctor smiled...that's good signal, he himself want to live now...this is first step towards betterment for a patient...anyways , he will be conscious within two hours...saying doctor left...Listening all were happy...finally we are on right track...AStha smiled...just hope soon everything will be fine...

LOVED THEE ULTRASOUND PART
SHLOK AND GAURI PART IS SUPERB AND EMOTIONAL
LOVED IT

It was almost evening by when Shlok was almost fine and was discharged...

As he came out, he saw Gauri and Varun too there...you? You had to go for a meeting na? He imitated Gauri...

Wo actually our meeting got canceled... Gauri pretended...

So you could take Astha to doctor? He gave her a look...but before she could speak...ya, I know your reply...my love, my responsibility...

Jab pta hi hai to pooch kyon rhe ho? Gauri winked at him...go ahead with her to doctor...

Haan haan jaunga hi...tumhe to nahi kahunga...Shlok to spoke angrily... Wait for few days, ek bar thik ho jaun main... Will take revenge of each and every botheration from you three...

Listening tear rolled over Gauri's face... bus ek baar thik ho jayo yaar...fir jaan bhi mangoge na, to wo bhi hanste hanste dedenge hum sab... Saying she hugged Shlok... While Shlok himself was surprised...he was saying to live... live life with them...

Where is Astha? He asked changing topic...

She has been to her doctor...Gauri relied...

Alone? Shlok was shocked...

Ya, I asked her to accompany...but she said either Shlok or me alone... Gauri spoke...

Ye ladki to mujhe pagal karke hi chodegi... saying Shlok too left for Atsha...


I GUESSED IT THAT BY SEEING THE GLIMPSE OF THE BABY SHLOK REAL FEELINGS WILL BE OUT
Ya doctor, she hs shifted all her stress on me...Shlok spoke entering the room...Doctor was shocked to see him there...
LIKED THIS LINE😆😆😆

Doctor took Astha to a room while she said Shlok...Mr. Agnihotri you may also accompany...

Me? Ok..Shlok shrugged his shoulders unknown to what was going on...

So Astha, ready to see first glimpse of your baby? Doctor smiled...

What? Astha was shocked...

Yes Astha...you can see your baby...Doctor smiled and she started he ultrasound... Getting images from different angles... Shlok was looking at the procedure curiously...

When doctor focused on one picture and spoke to Shlok...see your baby Mr. Agnihotri...

Really? Shlok was surprised to see image of outer shape of folded baby...while Atsha looked at him...he was too happy seeing, he held her hand with happiness...our baby jaan...

Ya...Astha too smiled in happiness pressing his hand...our baby...

Its a baby girls na? Shlok asked doctor...

Sorry, we can't tell gander, its illegal... Doctor smiled...

No, it should be a baby girl...he looked ta Astha... I have told you... I need baby girl first just like you...

But I need a baby boy...Astha spoke...

No... a girl...Shlok protested... Why you should win always...we will have a baby boy five six years later...but for now, only a baby girl...

Doctor smiled... I can't understand you Mr. Agnihotri... last week you wanted Astha to abort baby and now you are fighting on gender of the baby...

Listening Shlok came back to his senses...seriousness took over his face...i... he left Astha's hand...i am waiting outside...come soon...saying he left the place...

Don't worry doctor, now everything is fine... Astha smiled... how is baby?

THIS WHOLE PART IS SUPERB
CONTINUE SOON

Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago

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