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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina..

loved ur update

not just shlok even i forgot about shlok's medical condition ,pregnancy is really more dangerous😆
n he is so concerned for astha n his baby too though he won't admit it...
Its not possible Astha...he had almost tears in his eyes...

Then let's make it possible dear...Astha raised her face and looked into his eyes...

astha is optimistic ,she always tries to find something positive in every situation... I love dis about her

the park scene of shlok is heart touching...


My health? Mujhe kya huya hai? I m perfectly fine...shlok spoke carelessly...

What? Both Varun and Gauri were surprised at his reply, this was after months, he was speaking so carelessly anything otherwise, he used to give negative thoughts only...

Ya, I am fine... He spoke again... Actually mujhe sochne k time nai milta ke muje bhi koi problem hai...at moment, I think pregnancy is bigger disease than blood cancer. He sighed..

ha ha ha... loved this part n also the one where astha orders for the ice cream...

n not just astha varun n gauri but all your readers too need shlok back with a bang... nice update...😊

Thanks a lot dear for liking the update...yes, one thing i have maintained in all update since start...
Astha is positive and shlok always thinks negative...
YA...pregnancy is bigger disease than blood cancer

thanks a lot once again dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

good hai... thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good morning and thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow what an update, its too good... everything is so perfectly written
the ice-cream scene...
shlok was prepared for every situation 'Got all the flavors for her'
learning fast....😆

ya, I know your reply...my love, my responsibility...

Jab pta hi hai to pooch kyon rhe ho? Gauri winked at him...go ahead with her to doctor...

Haan haan jaunga hi...tumhe to nahi kahunga...Shlok to spoke angrily... Wait for few days, ek bar thik ho jaun main... Will take revenge of each and every botheration from you three...

Listening tear rolled over Gauri's face... bus ek baar thik ho jayo yaar...fir jaan bhi mangoge na, to wo bhi hanste hanste dedenge hum sab... Saying she hugged Shlok... While Shlok himself was surprised...he was saying to live... live life with them...

loved this part... n then the ultrasound one too,

shlok was lost in his world of happiness n the sweet fight for baby girl or boy was so natural

loved it...

Astha..Shlok came there fast, covered her with shawl...what are you doing here? Don't you know how cold it is what if something happen to you're and our baby?

Our baby? Astha smile don listening...

He outraged and just kept quite as he completed word baby..It was first time in last days, he had talked about baby... he immediately stopped reminding what he has spoken and turned back to go...

But Atsha held his hand, moved closer and placed his hand on her stomach...don't go Shlok... I need you...our baby needs you...she whispered moving closer...

Shlok touched her tummy and slowly moved his hand there, he had tears in his eyes... while Astha moved a bit closer...cupped his face and kissed his eyes removing tears from his eyes...

Shlok had his complete world in front of his eyes for a moment...but slowly he removed her hands from his face and again went out of their home leaving her alone ...

Oh ho Mr. Shlok Agnihotri should learn something from astha ,

learn to be positive n enjoy the moment he has in his hand...

very nice update il be waiting for the next one... love u😊

Edited by naina.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123


good hai... thanks a lot dear



😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww sho emotional
shlok wants to live but he is nt sure
may be astha will becum his remedy
wnderful ff
loving it more with each passing day
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina..

res... sorry il unres later ...


all right dear...take your own time...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pt311288

awww sho emotional
shlok wants to live but he is nt sure
may be astha will becum his remedy
wnderful ff
loving it more with each passing day


astha has become his remedy already...
moreover he is feeling his child too now...
Thanks a lot dear...
but now its nearing end...may be by five more updates...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



astha has become his remedy already...
moreover he is feeling his child too now...
Thanks a lot dear...
but now its nearing end...may be by five more updates...




😭
this is really sad
i need more more and more
ye dil maage more
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pt311288




😭
this is really sad
i need more more and more
ye dil maage more


Oh really?
but my dil Mange updates from you now Madam...

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