VIRIKA: ON MY WEDDING DAY.... MARRIED A STRANGER INSTEAD OF MY BRIDE ! - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago


Part 6:

( if u like my story, please do share it with ur buddy's as the response is very very less for 350 pm's !! u can check the last part likes n comments to know it better ... i'm really upset, but thanks to all those who like n comment !! )

varun: why are you acting soo mean vanshika ? ... and give viren some respect infront of her atleast ... he must be feeling very bad !!

vanshika: coz i don't want them to divorce !!

varun: what ? 😲

vanshika: yeah ... They want to divorce, but donno why they accepted to live together

varun: how do u know that they are going to divorce ?

vanshika: I went to call them as it has been a very long time after they went into the room to talk personally ... Then I heard jeevika saying ...

" it's just a matter of 3 months and then we'll divorce "

As I heard them coming out, I came back.

We should do something in these 3 months to make them stay together for life long, but I donno wat to do ? please help me varun !!

Varun: ok, we'll do something ... But that doesn't need you to scold viren always ..

Vanshika: I don't want to hurt him, but I want him to understand n take seriously wateva I'm saying ... I want to insert some sense into my son !!😆

Varun: first, we should make him forget aenna, else ... He's never going to accept jeevika

Vanshika: but wat's the guarantee that jeevika will accept him after he starts liking her ?😕

Varun: we'll make her love viren, but first, we should make both of them on same level ... N for that, we should make viren back to single from his relationship status !!⭐️

Vanshika: how can we do that ?

Varun: first we should know completely abt aenna for planning anything !!

Vanshika: how can we know abt her ?

Varun: we should catch someone who knows completely abt aenna

Vanshika: how abt her mother or father ? they'll know her very well

Varun: why do u need to go to them also ? ask ur son ... He also knows her very well 😉😆

Vanshika: why would he tell us ?

Varun: then why would her parents tel us ?

Vanshika: then why don't you go n do friendship with her 😉

Varun: I would have done it far ago, if u were not there !!

Vanshika: no probs ... U can go n do friendship with her ... I'll give u the permission ! 😆

Varun: donno how I got into these cracks all around me ... Vanshi ... first u insert some sense into ur head n then try it on ur son !!

Vanshika: not necessary, I've sense ... My son wil only tel us !!

Varun: please ... This is not the time for silly talks !

Vanshika: don't u remember ... Viren writes diary n we'll get all the info abt her from his dairies !!

Varun: that's a very bad thing to do ... N I'll not do bad things !!

Vanshika: look who's talking !! ... Talking like u didn't even do a single bad thing !

Varun: I've done wrong things wen I was small, but not after that !!

Vanshika: then, who came to my room like a theif during night and kissed me before our marriage 😳? u were not a kid then n that is a very bad thing to do ... at night ... into a girl's room ... Before marriage ! 😆

Varun: u knew it 🤢 ? I thought u were sleeping at that time ... N how come u didn't tel me all these years, that u knew it ?

Vanshika: I waited for the right moment to disclose it 😉

Varun: u r a devil vanshi 😡!! ... ok, but u've to get those diaries tomorrow , we'll read them n then think as to wat we should do !

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In virika's room ... At night

Jeevika: aunty ... Wat are u doing ... All these flowers ?

Vanshika: it's ur first night jeevika, so I'm decorating ur room !

Just then viren comes from office ...

Viren: wat's all this mom ?

Vanshika: asking as if u don't know anything

Viren: mom ?😲😡

Jeevika: but we don't want all these aunty... Please

Vanshika: I know, u can manage without flowers also😆😆, ... But Viren likes jasmine flowers

( Spanish jasmines smell wonderfully n I love their smell personally ... so, I've added them )

Jeevika: ( stopping her laugh ... ) is it aunty ?

Viren: mom, I'm not going to accept her as my wife ... The faster u understand that, the better wil be situations !!

Jeevika: aunty, even if he ever accepts me, I'll not accept ur son as my husband !!

Vanshika: who told u both to accept eachother as husband and wife ?😕

Viren: then wats all this mom ?

Vanshika: this is all my responsibility to arrange n I did it !! ... Rest is upto u both to use it or not !😉

She leaves their room ...

Viren: I'll go n freshen up

Jeevika: I didn't ask u 😆... N u need not tell me ... ok ?

Viren: ( gritting his teeth ) it was my mistake to tel u ... N for ur kind information, I didn't tel u like a husband so that u'll keep my dinner ready as soon as I come out,

I just told u coz ... It means that... u should leave the room as I need some personal space !!

Jeevika: even I'm not going to stay here to see how u look after shower !!😆

She marches out of the room ... varun n vanshika hide

Varun: OMG !! why are these two shouting at eachother ? is this the way to talk ?

Vanshika: this is wat is happeneing ... Leave that husband n wife tag, atleast they can talk like friends or atleast like strangers, they can be normal to eachother !!

Varun: if we leave them like this, then they will soon become enemies also !

Vanshika: so, our first mission is to make them friends !!

Varun: yeah ... n mission 1 starts from tomorrow ⭐️!!

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Jeevika goes to their room after dinner

She sleeps on the bed with pillows on either side

Then viren comes into the room, seeing jeevika sleeping on the bed, he shouts ... " get off my bed "

Jeevika woke up at his loudness

Viren: don't ever again sleep on my bed ... Now get up ... Wat are u seeing ?

Jeevika: ( shouts ) aunty ... !! aunty, uncle !!

Both varun n vanshika come to their room to know why she was shouting !!

Jeevika: see aunty, ur son is not letting me sleep ... !!

Vanshika: how can he let u sleep?😲 ... It's ur first night after all😉

Complaining like a small kid ... Don't u know that u r not going to sleep on ur wedding night😡

U have other imp. Works to do other than sleeping, my dear😳😆😆 !!

To viren ... U carry on my son, this time I'll support u 😆!!

Viren: mom ?😲😡

Jeevika: aunty ... He's not letting me sleep on the bed 😡!!

Vanshika: it's upto u guys to sleep on bed or not😆😆, u both decide it ... How can we tel u ?

Saying so, she drags varun out n they go to their room !

Varun: wat was that vanshika ? u know wat they are talking abt !!

Vanshika: yeah ... I know, but we've to leave thme to settle matters btw themselves n not to call us for everything ... This is how they'll become friends ⭐️!

Varun: u r a genius vanshi 👏... Love u 🤗 !!

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Jeevika: since it's our room, bed also belongs to both of us ... We'll share it !!

Viren: wat 😲? I'm not going to share my bed with u ... How shameless u are😡 ?

Jeevika: shut up viren, else I'll shout for a different reason this time 😉😆!!

I've already told u ... Don't act like a girl, be open minded ... I'm telling to sleep on bed, n not sleep with me ... Meanings differ ... u better understand 👏!!

U r a hypocrite !!😡

Viren: I know😆

Jeevika: then, how come u have a girlfriend ?😉

Viren: it's my personal matter ... Stay out of it !

Precap:

( guys, please wish cutie pie a happy birthday ... this update is for u dear !! ... happy birth day ... love u ... party hard 😳 )

Wait for the mission 1 n for the secrets in diary


wish u all a very happy new year !!


I'm really sry for the delay ... I missed one thursday update ... So ... I've given u all ... A very long update of the story !!

I guess, many of u knew that I'm a Christian ... N chritsmas is the biggest one for us ... I enjoyed the whole Christmas week n hence the delay !!


My apologies !!


i want long comments for my long update


********** love ... reyna

This story will be updated every Thursday !!


my first story: BEST FRIENDS TO BEST LIFE PARTNERS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3823857/best-friends-to-best-life-partners-upd-epilogue-11-2


Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment ... !!

reyna's index: fusion of ff's , girl's corner n kid's corner !!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3762857/reynas-index-fusion-of-ffs-girls-corner-n-kids-corner

Edited by reyna. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res😊
unress😊😊😊
🥳🥳🥳reyna u updated 🥳
🥳🥳yipeee me first
❤️love u lot❤️
😊thanks for the long and wonderful update😊😊
its so good👏👏👏
👏👏awesome 👏👏👏
jut too perfect⭐️
vanshika and varun convo 😆😊
i loved it❤️
vanshika heard them talking😆
they were planning to l take divorce after 3 months😲
whats the reason ??🤔
vanshika and varun are also cute couple 😊😳
the midnight kiss before marriage😆😳
vanshika and varun in mission to make virika friends😊
hope they get something in viren's dairy😊
viren and jeevika are fight like kids😆
just perfect👍🏼
will love to see what is there plan to make them together😊😃
viren and jeevika fight for sleeping on bed 😆😉
and what vanshika told them😆 love her❤️😉
just too perfect reyna 👏
u write so beautifully😊
i loved the big update👏👏
waiting for next to see what is store now in next😊😆😉
and the last part was fab😊
thank u for the update 😊😃
and dont feel sorry for not updating 😊❤️
i was the only one being so greedy!!!!
i am now waiting for next Monday and Thursday to see your updates!!!❤️

😊HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOOO!!!!!!!!!

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update Reyna
loved it
loved vanshika and varun
vanshika is a devil behind her mask of innocence😆
liked how varun calling her vanshi
then viren and jeevika fighting for the bed is funny


Jeevika: ( shouts ) aunty ... !! aunty, uncle !!

Both varun n vanshika come to their room to know why she was shouting !!

Jeevika: see aunty, ur son is not letting me sleep ... !!

Vanshika: how can he let u sleep? ... It's ur first night after all
Complaining like a small kid ... Don't u know that u r not going to sleep on ur wedding night
U have other imp. Works to do other than sleeping, my dear !!
To viren ... U carry on my son, this time I'll support u !!

Viren: mom ?

Jeevika: aunty ... He's not letting me sleep on the bed !!

Vanshika: it's upto u guys to sleep on bed or not, u both decide it ... How can we tel u ?

Saying so, she drags varun out n they go to their room !

Varun: wat was that vanshika ? u know wat they are talking abt !!

Vanshika: yeah ... I know, but we've to leave thme to settle matters btw themselves n not to call us for everything ... This is how they'll become friends !

Varun: u r a genius vanshi ... Love u !!

nice part
continue soon
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update ya
how vanshika and varun covo ya like vanshika doing something plan
for his sons life and the varun secreat blasted out from vanshikas mouth and jeevika shouting like a child in her first night and she is warning viren dont act like girl
loved it ya 'superb
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
superb
fantastic
how vanshika is telling to jeevika it is your first night
dont know anything
marvaleous
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing amazing!!!!!!! this the only reaction i give when i read ur updates plzzz tell me how do u have such a great talent i mean i m so jealous of u i wish i cud have a talent of writing stories like u.
ANYWAYZ had a great time reading reading the update n
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO U TOO HAVE A GREAT YEAR AHEAD
GOD BLESS U😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
happy new year
loved all of it
amazing update
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
only one word 2 say amazing luved the update hope 2 read the next part soon want 2 know abt the mission soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres
amazing
superb
just fantastic
it was long
loves it totally
epic
just loved the convo between varun and vanshika
it was funny
thnx for the pm
cont soon
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO U 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing
great
fabulous update
love virika convo
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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