OS Amarprem - Chapter 69 Part 2 Page 4

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Hi...

Just thought of posting a promo...



The front of the haveli...porch...

Krishna is standing at th top of the stairs n pratigya at the bottom... krishna says...'u will not enter my house without my permission, maid!... n this evening u r to water the garden n pluck weeds...with ur bare hands... lets see if u can do things other than typing msgs to media with those hands!...'

Pratigya stares at him in pain...

Night...

Thunder n rain...

'Where is the water jug?...where is my maid? Don't she remember that she has been shifted to my room?' ...krishna shouted across from the stairs... chandu turned from the entrance... 'she is still in the garden... u told her not to come inside uf she hadn't finished her work...,' he said, his tone dead...

Krisha looked at chandu in shock... he ran down the stairs n outside tha haveli...into the stormy rain..



Hope u liked it...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow interesting precap di... k hurts pratigya and then cares for her ...waiting for the updates ...update soon..
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Interesting promo

K wants to hate P but his heart won't let him.

Will P end up sick and feverish and maybe say something
That she doesn't realize

Looking forward to the next update
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awesome... loving them too much... dunno how they make me emotional everytime,thanks Dhanya...
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Originally posted by: rekrn

Interesting promo

K wants to hate P but his heart won't let him.

Will P end up sick and feverish and maybe say something
That she doesn't realize

Looking forward to the next update



Thanks dear...

Yes, n krishna is going to freak out totally...
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Hi,

here's link to chapter 68

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3851038



Chapter 69



Shailendra paced up n down his room , his brow knitted ... he was thinking of the way krishna n pratigya seemed lost in each other during the aarti... if the boy's lust turns to something dangerous , that could be a problem... n if the girl reciprocates , then their game is over!... but no!... she is not stupid! She would know that her mother will suffer if she opens her mouth!... but if she knows that the boy has some other feelings for her , she may think of telling him everything... no! ... whatever happens , he should get the files!!!... 'bahiyya , u called?' asked manjula timidly , coming to his room... Slap!... shailendra slapped her hard across her face... manujla looked at him in shock ... 'u almost ruined my entire plan today!!!' shailendra shouted at her... 'what was the need to prove to renuka that everything is not like what she is led to believe the way it is!!!... our priority is files!!! What would I tell durjjan if renuka believes the truth n suicides or something like that? We would lose the files forever!!'... he snarled at her... manjula looked guilty ...' i am sorry bhaiyya... i just want to hurt her! I mean i can't see her happy , u know that!!' said manjula, her tone jealous ... 'yeah, but we have to take care that our path is clear ...' said shailendra still angry... manjula nodded , grimacing ...'but bhayyia... looks like that bitch is going to be super happy...even her daughter is happy... i thought that the boy will use n throw her like a slave! But... but... i saw how he was holding her!... it's far from abusive !!!... n...n i think the girl is falling for him!!...' manjula said, her face contorted in jealousy ... 'hmmm...' shailendra nodded absently...he was not understanding ... he had thought that the boy will abuse pratigya ... his words , his actions, his lecherous eyes ... everything told him that... but...but... that was not happening!!!... if the boy is good to her , there is danger of her spilling the truth to him!... no! that should not happen ... they have to redouble their efforts to make her gets the files asap...


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Pratigya sat in silent tears as the rover sped towards the haveli... she had gone to the hall to fetch the mangal sutra , as the media was content to be allowed photos of the couple n they left rather quickly ... she had asked herself why was she putting the chain' on ...n she had taken the ribbon with her, like the pathetic fool she is... she had hugged her mother n cried ...seeing how happy her ma is...she could feel his cold stare over her throughout ... n what happened to his mood again!... one moment he is so caring , kind... passionate ... n next moment he was cold... cruel... mean... she gazed up at him through teary eyes as he got out n slammed the door shut... krishna was boiling in suppressed need n rage... one part of him wanted to take what he desperately wanted ...her!... n other part of him wanted to just kill her off n end the headache once n for all... how dare she affect him in all kinds of ways! How dare she invoke in him desires n craving such as never before... n how dare she call the media n create a scene !!!... he watched her angrily as she got out , her head bowed , her face panicky n pained... pain? Why?... ha! There u go krishna! All the while she was at her father's she was planning to trap u ...no! she trapped u... n u r wondering whether her face seems pained? Its her new drama again! ... n her mother! He thought that may be she would be genuine ...but who knows , he didn't see that this bitch was actually planning all this media attention n was busy buying her a gift like a fool... may be her mother would be like her too... showing some face n hiding the real poisonous face!!!... pratigya could feel his gaze of intense dislike n hatred n anger on her... n she found her heart being pierced by spears ... why was he looking at her like that? What did she do ?... she didn't dare look up at him as she made to climb up the stairs... 'where r u going maid?' she heard him thunder n looked up at him , pain ripping her chest...his eyes were cold, dreading ... she saw chandu pause in his way up the stairs n turn to look at them, her... his eyes were confused ...


'u will not enter my house without my permission! ... r u forgetting that u r a maid? After posing for the media as my wife, wearing my gift?' krishna sneered ... pratigya held on to the ribbon balled in her right palm for sanity... her chest seemed to be being drilled ... she looked sideways through teary eyes to see chandu dismissing the guards , his face sad ...'chandu... call the chief gardner...! krishna ordered , his eyes slits on pratigya... chandu sighed ...'what happened krishna? Why r u suddenly...?' ...'do as i tell' krishna snarled , his eyes cold on pratigya... chandu cleared his throat to one of the guards ...'call biswas chacha...' n then turned to look at krishna in exasperation n confusion... he had been thinking about renuka n her pained pleading face n her words all the time... what if the woman was telling him truth? She seemed afraid of shailendra! What if shailendra is forcing pratigya to do as he wants?... yes! That would be it! ... he looked at pratigya... he must find out!... 'yes, chote malik?' biswas came towards the porch... 'tell our workers to take rest... this evening , she will water the garden n grounds n pluck the weeds...' krishna said to biswas, his tone unemotional ... pratigya stood rooted to the spot, shock n pain assaulting her even as biswas n chandu inhaled ... 'what r u saying krishna? How could she water n pluck the weeds of acres of land ? Why r u...?' said chandu , his eyes concerned as he looked up at pratigya's limb form...


'oh! She is very smart, don't u know that chandu? krishna smirked ...' u would be surprised to know about the things she does behind our back...! vivek had called u n i picked up the phone... n guess what? Who do u think informed ...no...invited the media down at her father's house?...' pratigya looked at krishna in shock n dread as the words penetrated her brain... chandu looked around at pratigya, shocked ... no! did she do it?...'what r u talking about?' pratigya asked, confused n pained ...'ha! now play innocent ! but no use , maid! ...biswas , see to it that she does it...n maid, no food n water until u do ur job!...lets see if u can other things than just type msgs to the media!!!.' he snapped at pratigya ... pratigya felt her head spinning ...'krishna! this is ridiculous ! why r u ...?' began chandu heatedly but krishna cut in...'I have warned u chandu, stay away from the matters between me n my maid!...' he turned to biswas...' i will be coming to the stables shortly ...tell john to get pavan out of the stable...' ...pavan was his fav horse... krishna climbed up the stairs , leaving a teary eyed pratigya n a sad chandu at the foot of the stairs... ...'u did it?' chandu asked her , his voice defeated n yet disbelieving ... 'what ? i don't understand what he was talking about? Why would i invite media to my house?' asked pratigya through confused n angry tears... his phone rang n chandu picked it up ... it was vivek... he told chandu what happened earlier n also confirmed that the number was indeed pratigya's... ...'is 94873697865 ur number?' he asked pratigya , who was staring at the space occupied by krishna moments ago , her eyes streaming ... 'yes, why?...how did u know it?' she said , looking at chandu... chandu's lips were in a thin line... 'u send msgs to media inviting them for an interview n even informing them that krishna wasn't attending pag phere... n u forced him to attend it !... why did u do such a cheap thing?' chandu asked , his voice hurt ...


pratigya stared at him, inhaling ...what she send msgs to media? ...'no! its all lies! I didn't do it... i don't have my phone with me...I...' she began , angrily n pleadingly ...'pls chandu bhaiyya...believe me'...oh! so that's why he is angry with me!... ...'the msgs were send after u went to ur house , where u have access to ur phone...!' snapped chandu , his eyes disbelieving ...what! may be her father or manjula did it!!! Pratigya thought, anger n panic in her heart...oh no! they have trapped her ! ...how could she prove her innocence ? ...' i didn't do it... why would...?' pratigya began , but chandu cut her short ...'enough pratigya... i will tell u why would u do it! The same purpose when u called the media for an announcement that krishna raped u, perhaps?...' he said, his eyes sad n angry ... before pratigya could tell him anything , chandu had turned to climb up the stairs ... no! she must tell chandu bhaiyya the truth! N also him! ...she can't handle his cruel , mean , angry side anymore... she can't see his eyes filled with hatred n anger for her...! no! ...'chandu bhaiyya...' she called , trying to climb the steps...'stand where u r , didn't malik order u not to enter his haveli without his permission? ...' came meera's mocking voice from her left side ... pratigya wheeled around in panic as meera came n stood beside her... chandu turned to look at pratigya one last time before climbing up the rest of the stairs ... 'going to tell that dog chandu all the truth? Think again bitch!... ur mother's life is in my hands now! Just a phone call to ur father n she will be dead!' hissed meera , her voice low, her eyes slits of jealousy n anger at pratigya... pratigya inhaled , shocked... oh no! what was she going to do? She almost put her ma's life is grave danger again! ... 'pity that malik hasn't even touched u till now ! r u sure u could use ur pathetic body to save ur mother?' meera giggled horribly , careful that biswas wasn't noticing, who was busy pulling the hoses along the fountain in front of the porch... pratigya gritted her teeth in anger even as pain drilled her chest... she glared at meera in anger n hatred as she walked towards the lawn , biswas offering the hose pipe to her , bowing slightly n walking away... pratigya felt her heart getting mashed as she extended her hand to hold the hose n found the ribbon still inside her palm...no! think only about ur mother!... she held on to it anyway , even as she started watering the bushes near the fountain , renuka's face filling her mind... meera looked at her for some secs , smirking , n then went inside the haveli ... gayatri was watching pratigya from the balcony while pratap watched her from his room, his face sad... gayatri snarled in to the phone in her hand ...'see shailendra ...u ruined everything!! Who told u to inform media?... she had managed to get inside her room ...but now everything is ruined! ... she will be spending the whole evening n night in the garden !!! ... n there is no guarantee now that he will ever let her inside the house !!!! u r such a fool!!!!...' ...shailendra rubbed his forehead , tensed ...'how would i know that he will come to know about it? I just wanted to make sure that i am not insulted with him not attending the rasam!!!...' he said , angry ...'i don't know...lets see what happens ...' gayatri cut the phone , grimacing ...



Krishna sat on a couch in his room, angry n frustrated ... she is poison! ... every time u want to be with her , n she comes up with her disgusting games!!... what? Why would u want to be with her? Bec i like it! No!... krishna stood up, starting to undress , his jaw set... ignore her! ... he took a shower n changed to casuals n went to his balcony , stretching lazily ... his evening tea was usually served there , unless if sajjan was at home ... sajjan singh had to go to delhi for some political meeting n krishna made to sit down on one of the chairs , when his eyes caught her frame , pulling the hose pipe towards the stretch of garden directly infront of his view from the balcony... pratigya had looked around as far as she could see , all along the winding path n lawn n garden n the grounds beyond... there is no way she will finish watering it by night, let alone pluck weeds... it was only her mother's face which kept her morale up , n oddly , pathetically, the feel of the ribbon in her hand...n the words in it... to the love of my life...' he wanted her to do it, she will do it... n she must do it, for otherwise she won't be able to be inside his room... n get the files ! n flee with her mother away from him!... her hands pained , dragging the huge pipe along her wake , sweat breaking out over her body... but it was nothing compared to the pain in her chest , the feeling as though her heart was bleeding... krishna leaned on the railing of the balcony , his eyes on her frame ... she seemed to be struggling ...yes!... now she will learn! How dare she play him fool all the time!...



..'chote malik...ur tea...' he heard rakesh say n turned to see his tea n snacks served on the tea table... krishna turned to watch her again as rakesh bowed out n chandu entered the balcony ...chandu served the tea in 2 cups , his face sad n grave ... his mind was in turmoil... he wanted to believe in renuka but after knowing that the call went from their house , especially from pratigya's phone that too after pratigya reached there, he wasn't sure whom to believe ... renuka's anguish filled n pleading face came to his view even as he offered krishna the tea mug... chandu looked down to catch his line of sight n saw what or rather who his friend was looking at... he sighed sadly , his eyes on krishna ...krishna felt his eyes on him as he sipped his tea n grimaced ... 'krishna , u have a video conference scheduled at 7 pm ... lets just go through the files n our strategies ..' chandu said , trying to distract him... krishna who was feeling that the intensity of his anger n hatred seemed to decrease as he was watching her , nodded absently... pratigya who had looked up to wipe off the sweat along her forehead n hair saw krishna looking at her from his balcony n felt her heart flutter stupidly at first n then painfully ... their eyes locked even in the distance ... she almost jumped as a beautiful butterfly flew past her face n krishna blinked , watching her turn deliciously ... the butterfly continued to fly near her , n pratigya giggled in spite of herself , trying to move away , her body swaying n turning beautifully , sensually , her hair flying slightly behind her... krishna's eyes turned darker as he watched her undulating body n smiling face , the way she was trying to ward off the butterfly with her one hand while watering the plants with the other... he continued to sip his tea, his eyes raking her ... he was visited by the strangest n stupidest thought ever... he so wanted to be in the place of that butterfly ... or better a beetle ... ... he would be tormenting her just like that, or even more so... to watch her giggle ...he remembered the way she had arched up to him when he kissed her neck ...the feeling ! out of this world!...he want to feel that again!... to watch, feel her writhe under him as he ... 'krishna ! the video conference!' he heard chandu almost shout at him n felt the mug slip from his fingers n feel down to the ceramic beneath the ground...startled, krishna looked around n saw chandu looking anywhere but at him , his face embarrassed ...he could feel his eyes were glazed n his throat were parched , his body heated up ...n his arousal straining against his pants...shit!...



he ran his hand through his hair to clam down , leaning on the railing n closing his eyes ... 'right... u go n arrange the files...I ..I will come after a short ride with pavan...!' he croaked , the images that his treacherous mind was supplying him driving him insane ... oh no! what would chandu think of him? Get a grip KST! U don't want her!...period!... look at u KST! She is not even near u n has managed to reduce u to a pathetic fool again!... he opened his eyes as he heard chandu say ...'alright ...' n looked around to see him leave hastily an embarrassed yet sad smile in his lips... sad? Why though? ... i will tell u why! He is afraid that u r loosing ur marbles ! ... krishna gritted his teeth ... he looked at her again , his eyes slits ... pratigya who had managed to ward off the fly by then had looked around at the sound of the mug hitting the floor ... she had looked at him , startled to find him flustered n chandu leaving his side ... then she inhaled wildly as his eyes penetrated hers ... 'maid! Come here n clean this mess !' she heard him snap , indicating the broken mug n spilled tea down the floor below... she shuddered at the sheer coldness n hatred in his voice ... tears sprung up her eyes again as she walked towards the broken mug , not daring to look up at him...she sat down , trying to hide the ribbon , her heart ripping... krishna watched in satisfaction as she picked up the broken pieces n washed the floor , her head bowed down to hide her tears... his eyes caught the necklace still around her neck n anger spiked inside him ... she deliberately plotted to get this necklace ! he will give her the real necklace!!... krishna mashed his teeth in anger... he turned n went to wear his boots ...



Pratigya , her hands trembling around the broken pieces of the mug, could feel his eyes on her neck from above ...she kept her eyes on the ground as she stood up hastily n put the pieces in to a nearby dustbin ... she washed the floor with water n turned her attention to the bushes near her... she saw the guards getting alert n watched with that stupid flutter of her heart , him walking along the path down to the stables... she inhaled , blushing ... he looked dashing ... tight shirt , showing off his majestic back n shoulders ,loosely inserted into riding pants , heavy , long leather boots covering his strong legs n his hair flying lazily in the small breeze... he turned to look at her as he flet her gaze on him n pratigya clutched at the pipe for dear life, blushing furiously ...his eyes pierced her ... she saw him disappear around the corner to the stables, 2 guards accompanying him n wrenched her eyes off him, with difficulty ...focus ! pratigya! ... ur priority is ur mother! N not drooling over that devil! ... she took a deep breath n turned off the water supply n stared pulling out weeds from under the bush...her hands pained like anything but she went on ...



krishna reached his stable n went straight to pavan , his fav horse ...he was his usual bet in the races ... he loved him so much ... n pavan in turn loved his master even more so... krishna felt all his anger n frustration ebb away as he saw pavan whine excitedly , his eyes glinting... he smiled as he hugged him along his neck n face n nuzzled his cheeks in his fur...'missed u so much pavan! '...he murmured as he climbed him even without the saddle n slapped him gently across his shoulder , like a friend... pavan jumped happily , as one of the guards untied him n he took off , krishna smiling n patting his fur... he ran a few rounds around their golf course n along the grounds ...it was getting darker n krishna looked up his watch to see that it was nearly seven ... oh! He completely forgot the conference! ... he turned pawan to the garden to go home when he saw her near a tree... he suddenly remembered what he wanted to do ... she looked up startled, pulling out overgrown grass , as the sky seemed to be getting darker , when she heard the sound of hooves ... she was near a huge tree n he was riding a magnificent horse along the opposite path ... she saw him look at her n to her surprise n consternation he was coming straight at her... she saw him pause about 10 paces from her , n order for the guards to take pavan away n leave them alone...



she backed away , fisting her sari along her thighs , her breath suddenly seeming difficult to get in...she gasped in pain as her palms were sore , even gnashes across them... krishna looked at her , his eyes mocking ...'now r u enjoying , maid?' ... pratigya gazed up at him with tear filled eyes , her heart getting clawed... krishna snorted , his eyes on her necklace , as he walked towards her... pratigya stumbled backwards n gasped softly as her back hit the tree trunk... she looked around frantically , her hands flying to hold the trunk behind her for support... ...'ur tears have zero effect on me maid! U r such a dramebaaz...!' he snarled , his hands trapping her against the tree trunk along both her sides , his face inches from hers , but touch her... pratigya met his hateful n mocking gaze , her eyes pained n moist... she could hear her heart scream at her to tell him that she didn't do anything! That she didn't send any msgs like he thinks! ...but her mother's face kept intruding in her mind... krishna could feel a chocking feeling in his chest as he stared at her teary eyes ... no! don't be weak again KST! These tears r her ultimate weapon ! she knows u can't handle it n that's why she is using it!...


he wrenched his eyes from hers to look down at her necklace glittering even in the slight darkness... 'still wearing this, maid! Ofcourse , u had to wreck ur brains to trap me to buy it for u! '... he sneered at her , bringing his right palm to caress her neckline along the necklace , his eyes slits on hers... pratigya shivered at his touch , even as her heart was wrenching ... ...'but i don't think u deserves it...' krishna hissed as his palm closed around the necklace n he pulled it off her neck, breaking the hook... pratigya cried out in pain as the necklace dug at the back of her neck , but she steadied herself , plastering against the tree, tears spilling from her eyes... krishna mashed the necklace in his palm as he looked at her pained face n stepped back from her ...he watched with satisfaction as she panted slightly against the tree , sobbing in pain... 'there , now u know ur place maid! N remember what i told u... u will not enter my house without my permission ! or without finishing ur work!...' he snapped n made to go away... his eyes fell on the nearby bush where pratigya had clumsily pulled out the weeds as her palm got injured ... he turned to look at pratigya in anger...' what the use of being a maid if u don't even know how to do ur job!...pity ... why don't u call media now maid? U can tell them ur position in my house ...not my wife ! not my mistress! Not even my maid! .' he snapped , trying to enjoy her shocked n pained face ...but he could feel his heart being slammed against some sharp edged rock ... ...' i want my garden n my grounds properly watered n pruned ... resume ur work , maid !' he ordered , his eyes cold , fighting an overwhelming urge to hold her pale face in his hands n look into her eyes n ask forgiveness ...what? no!... he turned n walked away , the necklace cutting into his palm ...


pratigya sagged down the tree , silent sobs of excruciating pain rocking her body, her eyes on his retreating image...oh no! he took his gift back! ... no he broke it... he ... don't be a fool pratigya! He gave u that for the benefit of the media ! now that circus is over , he just took it back! That's all!...pls show some self respect now atleast! ...but but...he thinks that i called the media ...! that's why he was being mean... he wouldn't have hurt me if he knew the truth ! she heard her insane part say, deep conviction in its voice...she heard her sane part laugh at her...insane laughter... the truth! What's the truth then? That u r forgetting ur mother n the ordeal of her for the years ? in hope of being loved by a devil? Who just wants ur body or to insult n humiliate u as he pleases?...no!... she took deep breathes to clam herself down , clutching the ribbon in her fist even more tightly ... she frantically rubbed her eyes n cheeks n started pulling out the weeds , her mind in a trance of pain, not even noticing that her palms now stared bleeding , as the pain in her chest engulfed everything else...



Krishna threw away the necklace along the hall as he walked towards their conference hall ... chandu , who was going to come out n check for krishna sighed in relief as he watched krishna walk in , his face full of anger ...n pain... krishna ran his hand through his hair as he sat down in his chair n pulled the laptop towards him , furiously turning on the conference cam... they had a diamond shipment scheduled , illegal ofcourse , the next day at hongkong n certain matters had to be finalized ... he tried to immerse himself in the matter at hand, even as her pained face started bombarding his mind n hitting his chest painfully ... chandu, sensing his mood, supported him n it was late in the night that they finally got the deal done on their own terms ... krishna always gets his way , even if it is not easy n involves risk, either of money or of life... krishna rubbed his eyes, declining the dinner as he just didn't feel like eating , climbing up the stairs ... he vaguely noticed that it was raining heavily outside , accompanied by thunder storm ... he thought he heard chandu ask him about something , but his mind was preoccupied with the deal ... chandu looked at Krishna n then back to the entrance in confusion as he saw rakesh hesitating near the doors ...'what is it ? u haven't closed the doors yet ? he asked stifling a yawn n going over to the entrance ...' chandu bhaiyya , er... choti malkin is still outside ...' said rakesh timidly , his face afraid ... chandu stared at him in shock ...



krishna reached his room n flopped on to his bed , throwing his shirt off ... his eyes caught his image n the slightly burned skin over his shoulder n he looked around for her , remembering that it was night n he had to put the medicines ...will she do that again to him? ... he blinked... she wasn't anywhere to be seen ...he looked at the table clock ...it was nearly midnight! ...where the hell was she ? didn't she remember that he had ordered her to be in his room from that day onwards? ... his anger flared even as his heart skipped several beats ... she didn't forget about his medicines , did she ? or may be she don't put it on him ? ...no! ...he stood up frustrated , his eyes falling over the medicines over the bedside table ...why r u waiting for her? Just put them on urself , u fool! ... no! Yes! ...but ...but she has to be in his room by now! Why is the delay? ... he pulled on his shirt again as he barged outside his room towards the stairs ... he will have to ask for her in a carefree manner ... nobody should know that he wants to see her or...or wants her to put medicines on his back ... ! ... where is the water jug? N where is my maid? Don't she know that she had been shifted to my room ?' he thundered across the hall , standing at the landing , anger n frustration filling him... he saw chandu turning from near the entrance ... even from the distance he could tell that chandu's face was sad n grave ... 'she is still outside ...u told her not to come inside unless she finished her work! ' chandu said , his tone dead , yet his voice carrying across the hall, even through the din of rain ... Krishna gasped wildly in shock as the words penetrated his heart ... he was running down the stairs , feeling the air being sucked out of his lungs , his face scrunched up in tension n shock n pain... chandu watched in sadness n kishna barged outside n flew into the stormy rain , the guards watching in confusion n apprehension ...


Hope u liked it 😃

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Edited by dhakarn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reading & just imagining the complete scene with so much enthusiasm
But ... At climax ...? Pls update part 2 soon
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oh thank u di for this wonderful update... 👏
one moment chandu is believing on her and next is nt..i hate her father becaz of him she suffers a lot..bt k cares for her ...
update soon di waiting to read what happened to next... 😳
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Wonderful Update Dhanya👏

Poor P😭 she loves him so much and her heart is going thru so much pain don't know how much more she will be able to take.

Hope K starts to realize something is not right if he is too stubborn hope at least Chandu figures out soon the truth.

update soon
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Originally posted by: sanitha7

Reading & just imagining the complete scene with so much enthusiasm

But ... At climax ...? Pls update part 2 soon

thanks dear 😃
coming soon...😳

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