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Ananya

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Posted: 12 years ago

REMOVED. Soon to be updated on blog.

NOTE : PAGE 59

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

😉😛res

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ana! I loved this Chapter for so many reasons...

1. Lizzy...what an awesome friend? Guys make amazing friends especially when the relationship is platonic. He's fun, he's sensible, he is emotional, although he likes to think he is touch, he is emotional, he is rational and he is both Arnav and Khushi;s friend. So there's the friend for life for our BD - Cheeni😃

2. BD and the song - Did you just make BD sing that song for Khushi😆...I loved it. It made me wish...that I could see something similar in real life. That is the power of your writing...the realistic situations and the real people make you believe that this could be (swoon worthy romance) experienced by all of us.

3. Khushi's mum and her dal makhani...I swear Ana...Mrs. Manorama Gupta is one fantabulous charter in IC. I loved every line she uttered. She makes me laugh every single time...

4. And Our dear dear dear Khushi...Aww...confused and in love. Deadly combination😳

P.S - I just realised how much I enjoyed Ela's character. She is perfect for Lizzy...she gives as good as she gets and she will keep him on his toes for the rest of their lives. What a perfect partner for my favourite friend in this FF world.

Sorry for this late unreserve, sistah...But as I already told you...loved it 😃

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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

So that was it...I mean actually that was it???? Of course the update was more than beautiful and entertaining but it was sooo short for our wait of 20 days 🥱

No issues...Can wait for lifetime for your updates dear!!!! 😛

To tell you I had really very hard time of my life blushing and laughing together...

Blushing and Laughing together means you know like the unique breed of

RABBIT and ALLIGATOR?? 😆

Ohh girl, only you can write such things together I tell you...

I mean REPTILE BLESSINGS??? really??? 🤣

How sexier our BD will be by singing In a pair of blue denims and a black shirt which revealed his oh so beautiful Adam's apple and bit of collar bones when he already makes me sigh in his formal avatar . I really can't handle the hottest specimen on the earth performing on ""Are you gonna be my girl? for A GIRL whose knuckles had gone on white, whose face was all red, whose legs gave up on her and whose tummy was acting funny.

No it wasn't Khushi Kumari Gupta

Common It was ME 😳😳

ohh now you kill me

Well I already like making -breaking pair Eela(with an E of course) and the curious Buddy Chopra.

Good that Eela(with an E ) shifted to accommodate Khushi (not on her lap) or there would have added more complications in already so complicated life of Khushi.

This Alligator is such a rare or rather unique kind of creature... If you were knowing everything pahale se hi ...toh why to add these twists in nervous Khushi's life?? Arghh...

And whenever I start kind of liking Mother Gupta...she spread 'Makhanee-E-Daal' on my armaan

That was it for this part

Now do update next soon... Because Tonight is the night for talking. Yeah. 😉

Edited by praj.shrish - 12 years ago

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

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Posted: 12 years ago

Un-Res ~~ 😳

Oh! Im so going to miss reading this story. :')
Since Im unres-ing after such a long time, consider my bak-bak below as for both the chapters!

BD sang for khushi! what could be a better way to woo your girl. A person who can sing always tops my list, (since I sing awful, I have a soft corner for them) :P
So, Go BD! 👍🏼
And that song!! so appropriate and lovely. ❤️ *me swoons*

Is alligator always like this whenever a girl ditches him or does he like to feel like a trash?! He's funny alright, but he needs to move on and stop being an Emo and drinking expensive thingys! :P

A lot of people got busted in there! Khushi, Eela and Lizzy specially! 😆

And,oh god, that 'dal makhani aka makhani-e-dal' fiasco. Nothing can be ever simple or smooth for Khushi. She has a knack for falling into pit holes full of trouble!!
And thank you BD for reminding her 'yet' again to not call titu 'tits'. Its hilarious and downright ...ahem...can't say. :P

So finally everything got sorted. Everyone got to know about Khushi and her 'secret boyfriend' aka Arnav, Lavanya got proposed by her dreamboy..err.. Lizzy, Arnav got to know about his nickname aka 'beautiful devil' (but, hey! what about 'diabetic devil'?!), and finally everyone got to eat 'one' packet of makahni-e-dal! *sighs*

They kissed.☺️ They reunited. They cleared their MUs. Ab aage ka Epilogue mein sochenge? Maybe we'll get to see or atleast get a whiff of their marriage? what say?! *wink* 😛

Loved it Ana. Update epilogue soon!😊

Edited by avika_ShArMa - 12 years ago

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sumana561

@sumana561

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update..I have been laughing for the past 1hr..my mom gave me wierd looks&asked me..what could I reply,I again started laughing 😆
Thanks for such a lovely update... 😊
Khushi!!left daal in BD's car...so excited to know what happens when BD takes it in!!!
Ek aur complication...
Lizzy &eala ka baat bangaya kya!!
U r so sweet !!from yesterday afternoon u have been spending all the time only on the update.thanku 👏 👏
Will be waiting for part2 😊

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

congo

Its a res too 😆

Phata poster nikla hero 🤣 Lolz waat was dat ana 🤣

Cn lizzy be more funny den dis 😆

D whole journey was awsm

Frm d point

Ohh how i love ella reaction to lizzy cmnt of phata poster nikla singer

He rejcted her loll saying he doent like her ohh boy who is he kidding nw

Bet d alligator is surely a dumb ass

Did he just kept on repeating the band wala

Ohh how i was expecting khushi to show his real place

The secret boyfrnd juat gt revealed or say just gt cnfrmd by lizzy

Damn lizzy for opening his big mouth at wrng tym

Lolzz he called Ella mother teresa

I seriously loved arnav interuptions

As if he would have sensed wen she wil speak up

Lolzzz d whole update was funny

Nd ufff d song {Although i dnt listen to english songs} Bt wid d lyrics i cn just say prfct

I wanna kill alligator u knw

Damn he mann

Waisa trust mother gupta to disturb d new love birds wid d topic to bring dal makhni

Lovd whole updTe ❤️

It was fun reading it 😆

Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago