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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

CONFUSED WITH THE CHARACTERS

DOES RISHAB HIT HER AND SHE ACCEPTS IT

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saakhi01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Its ur call at d end... U wanna update or not, ur decision...

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: saakhi01
Its ur call at d end... U wanna update or not, ur decision...

Thanks for understanding🤗

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: punam2712
CONFUSED WITH THE CHARACTERS
DOES RISHAB HIT HER AND SHE ACCEPTS IT

I was hoping the work would speak for itself.

If not, just wait it out. I am occupied at the moment.

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: kuttu
Hi
AAagain I found a work of yours that really caught my attention. The character of Rishab close to a pessimist or rather a dark twisted minded person. Is he abusive or doe is he just insecure just couldn't figure out the character. In just two chapters you have build a mystery around everything about them From the job, relationship, the behaviour of the characters.
so waiting for more.

I might get some slack for saying this but oh well. As an afterthought, I noticed he is the kind of anti-hero that starts off fed up with life (Walter White-esque).

Is he abusive or not: I am not going to make that decision for you. I am not going to tell any reader how to think anymore. Choose your own view and it might be different from mine but that's how literature works. It tells you who YOU are, reflected through someone else's words (in this case mine).

I am happy you like the lit. work.

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

This story has been discontinued. I hope you will leave it at that and not let curiosity get the best of you. There are plenty more works of mine you can check out if it is the writing you like. I appreciate your cooperation.

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