Virman FF : Tere Aane Se...#2 *FINISHED* updtd pg 36 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you all 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: innocentmanvi1

now i am gonna cut my wrist with knifelavanya why u not pm me 22 part i got os much confused after reading this part that i have to go to old thread and read 22 part plz dont do this na galti ce bhi nahi and lovely update but y manvi is behaving like this m confused is she thinking karan raped her???? y virat is not clarifying??? or did karan actually raped her oMG i have to go back n again read the part lavanya dont miss my name plz next time i feel like destroying every thing which comes in front of me in anger lol (armaan kohli affect ) keep updating n yes it was lovely full off emotions



WHAT THE HELL ?? again i missd u out ?? ...uhhh ...no re...i send Pm for all my buddies...!! then why always you ?? 😕 anyhw ..may be by mistake again ...but hww ??? 😲 anyhw ..sorry for tht...!!! agli baar se nahi hoga ...!! 😳 and dare u act like armaan kohli ..i hate him ...koi bhi aur chalega...isko aur tanisha ko chodd ..!! 😆 🤢 anyhw ...nahhhiii karan ne uska rape nahi kia...!! yeh maanvi ko bhi pata hai ..but she thinks tht due to this virat will hate her...so she gets hyper...

btw ...thank you ...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww that's very emotional part
manvi still thinks that karan raped her poor she
and her condition is very devasted
both are blaming each other for that which isn't happened at all
feeling really sad for both of them. both of their emotiona describe really well lavanya
waiting for the next part now
cont soon and thanx for the pm

btw congos for 2nd thread 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: virmanfan013

awww that's very emotional part

manvi still thinks that karan raped her poor she
and her condition is very devasted
both are blaming each other for that which isn't happened at all
feeling really sad for both of them. both of their emotiona describe really well lavanya
waiting for the next part now
cont soon and thanx for the pm

btw congos for 2nd thread 😳



thank you 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
wow it was an awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dear😊😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update dear...
So emotional :(
Cont asap and thanks a lot for the pm...
Take care...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratz for your new thread!!!:))) and thaaanks for the update!!:)
poor manvi, abhi tak usko pura truth hi nahin pata...:/
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sorry for being late in commenting
read the update
loved it
it was so emotional
relieved that maanvi has listened to virat
waiting eagerly for the next part
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello TASians ...!! i hope you all are doing well ...im here with the next update of Tere Aane Se ...
uhmm ...first thing i wud like to tell you all is tht...im laveniya ...and from now-on this account will be handled by me ...!! pls no questions about this nw ..!! 😭

Virman : Tere Aane Se...

Part 24 ...


V : maanvi utho chalo ...kapde change karlo ..bhabi ne waha rakhe hai kapde tumhare liye...aur phir so jao..thodi derr...aaram karna zaroori hai ..hmm

M : she just nods... (virat gets up) n turns to see maanvi..she ws struggling to get up..(remember her leg was injured ??)

V :maanvi kya hua?? M: sees her leg n a tear escapes her eyes...

Virat without wasting a minute picks her up...n goes to the washroom places her gently ...goes out brings her clothes...keeps it in...n brings all her needed things near her so she doesn't have to move her leg much...comes near her... Cups her cheek...n

V : kuch bhi jarurat ho toh awaaz laga dena mai bahar hi khada hu ok?? M : nods n weak smile...

He comes closer n kisses her forehead ...n leaves without turning back n closes the door...maanvi's eyes tear up seeing such caring gesture of his...maanvi turns to look at the mirror...

Maanvi removes virat's jacket...n she sees her condition...she was in no state of propely covered...she cried ..her cry sound ws loud...she quickly covered her mouth ..to stop the noise from going outside...as she knew virat wud be standing ryt next to the door ...trying to listen tht she is crying or not...n he ws exactly doing that...she controlled herself n went in the shower ..which was exactly opposite to the mirror...she turned on the shower...she felt warm water droplets...on her...she ws feeling so good in that warm water...she turned n saw in the mirror...she had deep open bruises made by karan ...as soon as warm water made contact with these wounds she hissed in pain..loudly...quickly virat asked..

V :maanvi??! Kya hua tum thik ho?? M : uhhmm ...haa virat ...

She saw the wounds ...n she cried under the shower...she had wounds ..on her back , her elbow...near her lips, on her leg , knee and little near her forehead... She dint knw how n whn she got these wounds...she had no idea...she stepped out of the shower after having a bliss of warm water...she changed into her di's clothes...she was not sure whether to step out in those clothes...as it was nighty...though it ws decent she was hesitating going out...she made up her mind...she opened the door ..turning the knob of the door n she saw virat...closely leaning to the door trying to hear she was crying or not...

M : virat tum kya kar rahe ho?? (weak voice + shocked)

V :uhh kuch nhi ...tum aa gayi... chalo so jao...tumhe aaram karna chahiye...saying this he lifts up maanvi...n she ws forced to surround her hand...around his neck ... he gently placed her on the bed (in sitting positon)...and kissed her forehead...

V : rukho mai abhi first aid kit lata hu... He brings it ...

V : maanvi kaha lagi hai batao... M : uhmm.. vo..

V :uncomfortable feel karne ki koi jarurat nhi hai...batao...(assuring her)

M : vo pair par,elbow,knee,forehead aur lips ke side par thoda sa yaha (looking here n there)

V : hmm ..aur??(making suspicious face) M : bas ... (looking down )

V : jhoot bolna koi tumse sikhe... ..back par bhi lagi hai na!!

M : (shocked) vo... V : mujhe pata hai ..maine bruises dekhe the...jab tum behosh thi uss factory mai ..tumhe jacket pehanatey hue... (looking down) M :hmm..lagi hai ... (tears form in her eyes)

Virat one by one applies ointment to all her wounds... and everytym she hisses a bit cz of the pain n burn...(tears form in his eyes again... seeing so many wounds) and nw tells

V :maanvi dress ka wrap-up nikaalo !! M : vo virat rehne do na...thik ho jayega apne aap.. (weak voice)

V :maanvi...plss..ghaav aur badh jayega..tumhara back sabse badly bruised hai ..pls ointment lagane do...

M : virat rehne do na... virat understood tht this girl is not gonna listen so he himself untied the knot of the wrap-up n went behind maanvi n pulled it down .. just to see the worst bruises...he regretted...he regretted seeing those bruises on her body...tears quickly made their way from his eyes...n this ws the reason maanvi ws not allowing virat to see it...she quickly turned and saw him ..tears were flowing from his eyes...she looked in his eyes n he looked in hers... ...

V :maanvi...uhh(looks down tears flowing down) mere waajah se ...it is all my fault...all my fault...

With this maanvi gave a medium hard loving slap on viraat's face... though it was hard to hiss in pain but yet soft one...

M : kya kaha?? Tumhari galti?? Phirse kahoge na tho sacchhi wala chaanta lagaungi..!!! (cups his face n wipes his tears n made him look at her) tumhari galti nhi hai virat...samjhe..???

V :meri hi galti hai maanvi...!! ...

Thts it maanvi gave a tight one on his cheek!!! V :maaanvii!! (shocked)

M : kaha tha chaanta marungi ...!! Phirse bologgey toh aur do teen khaoge..!!

V : (smiles through his tears)

M : promise me virat...v will bury this topic here oly...aage se hum kabhi iske barey mai bat nhi karenge...na tum apne aap ko blame karoge na mai apne aap ko ...!!just bura sapna samj ke bhul jayenge..promise me...vaada karo!!

V : I promise you maanvi ...v will neva talk abt it... tucks the strand of hair behind her ears ..chalo ointment laga deta hu...virat applies the ointment... .and makes maanvi to wear her wrap up ...goes in front of manvi ...holds her hands ...

V : maanvi im sorry... b4 he cud complete M : viratt do khaaye kafi nhi hai kya?? Aur khaane hai???

V :oh k k...chill mai sorry nhi bolunga...(looking down)but I love you princess (slow voice ...+ tears + guilty voice)

M : (tears ) I love you too p.c. ... V :p.c. ?? mai tumhe priyanka chopra dikhta hu ??(smiles In his tears)

M : (lost voice n tears) prince charming idiot... V :oh ...they smile to each other... virat hugs her carefully not to again make her hiss in pain...but maanvi aparts... suddenly maanvi's smile changes... ...

V :kya hua maanvi...??(frowns..) M : viraat ..ghar waalon ko kya batau?? (sobbing )

V: maanvi ...sabko pata chal chukka hai infact sab yaha pe hi hai...he tells her everything wat had happened after he entered vadhera mansion...(caressing her hairs..) kisi ko koi problem nhi hai maanvi tum chup ho jao thik hai??

M : nods...

V : so jao ...gud nyt princess ...he turned to leave but maanvi caught his hand...

M : kaha jaa rahe ho?? (weak voice) mat jao ..yaha mere paas so jao ..plss...I need it...infact v need it..pls mere saath yaha so jao... (her eyes shined with slight tears)

V :maanvi par... mai ... M : plsss... (tears rolled down her cheeks...)

With this he cudnt deny her...he also knew that he wanted to feel her presence ryt besyd him ...so...he sat down on the bed...he made her sleep and he himself moved to other side of the bed...and he gently pulled her over his chest and maanvi ws resting her head on his chest n trying to listen his heartbeats...which spoke out oly her name...virat had his hand on maanvi's waist n other behing his head...he kissed maanvi's forehead once again b4 doozing off and...they clinged to each other ...cuddled with each other in sleep...letting their worries flow out to each other...

waiting for your comments .. i knw it's a short one ..but today can manage only this much ...will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super Cute Update..!! Liked VirMan here..n thanks for the PM!!

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