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Originally posted by: gillkanwal

😆ok no jee...write some more poems Vimmi😳

for you....

before this thread closes.......

ab yaheen par rahene do,itna hi fasana kafi hai

ankhonmen ansoo laneke liye,itna hi bahana kafi hai.

muddaten hon gayeen waise to dilko muskuraye lekin,

aaj dilko rulaneke liye itna hi tarana kafi hai.

hazaron zakhm de chuki hai ye sanghdil duniya,

tum nahin, thokar deneke liye ye zamana kafi hai.

kah do khwabonse ab na ayen meri ankhon men,

is dilko tadpane ke liye ek khwab purana kafi hai.

jeeneko to jee hi lungi main,bina kisi sahare ke,

kuchh din zindgi bitane ke liye yadon ka khazana kafi hai.

😳

Originally posted by: veekay

for you....

before this thread closes.......

ab yaheen par rahene do,itna hi fasana kafi hai

ankhonmen ansoo laneke liye,itna hi bahana kafi hai.

muddaten hon gayeen waise to dilko muskuraye lekin,

aaj dilko rulaneke liye itna hi tarana kafi hai.

hazaron zakhm de chuki hai ye sanghdil duniya,

tum nahin, thokar deneke liye ye zamana kafi hai.

kah do khwabonse ab na ayen meri ankhon men,

is dilko tadpane ke liye ek khwab purana kafi hai.

jeeneko to jee hi lungi main,bina kisi sahare ke,

kuchh din zindgi bitane ke liye yadon ka khazana kafi hai.

😳

aww..vimmii...that was wonderful...very touching...😳lots of hugs for you before this thread closes😳(that's all I can give u)🤗

but by writing this poem you made me tempted for some more😍😍..yeh dil maange more😆😉.I really love reading poems but can't write them unfortunately...this one was incredible ..btw I saved it on my comp.hope u don't mind😉

Originally posted by: veekay

for you....

before this thread closes.......

ab yaheen par rahene do,itna hi fasana kafi hai

ankhonmen ansoo laneke liye,itna hi bahana kafi hai.

muddaten hon gayeen waise to dilko muskuraye lekin,

aaj dilko rulaneke liye itna hi tarana kafi hai.

hazaron zakhm de chuki hai ye sanghdil duniya,

tum nahin, thokar deneke liye ye zamana kafi hai.

kah do khwabonse ab na ayen meri ankhon men,

is dilko tadpane ke liye ek khwab purana kafi hai.

jeeneko to jee hi lungi main,bina kisi sahare ke,

kuchh din zindgi bitane ke liye yadon ka khazana kafi hai.

😳

Abosolutely excellent yet again Vimzz! 👏I saved it in my computer too😃

Thanks,Gill & Tanny. 😊 I did not know,any one was going through this thread! 😉
This poem I had written,when I was in my teens. I searched it for you. I do not mind,you saving this on your comps,but I don't think,its worth it! 😳 as to 'ye dil mange more'......
well,lets see,if I can find yet another one for you. Generally,I used to write in Gujarati,so Hindi ones are not many. & I can't write on such a short notice-mood banana padta hai,yaar! 😉
ok,so here it goes...
not exactly in a poem form,but........

Ye kisne pukara mujhe?
ek anjaan awaaz-
awaaz ke peechhe kyon khinchi ja rahi hun mai?!
soye armaan jag uthe,
chhupkar dilne li angdai,
man chillana chah raha-
'thaharo,main aa rahi hun!'
lekin........
ye mere sapne nazuk hain bahut,
kahin tut to na jayenge ye sajne se pahle?!

This one I had also written,when I was 16 years old! 😳

Originally posted by: veekay

Thanks,Gill & Tanny. 😊 I did not know,any one was going through this thread! 😉
This poem I had written,when I was in my teens. I searched it for you. I do not mind,you saving this on your comps,but I don't think,its worth it! 😳 as to 'ye dil mange more'......
well,lets see,if I can find yet another one for you. Generally,I used to write in Gujarati,so Hindi ones are not many. & I can't write on such a short notice-mood banana padta hai,yaar! 😉
ok,so here it goes...
not exactly in a poem form,but........

Ye kisne pukara mujhe?
ek anjaan awaaz-
awaaz ke peechhe kyon khinchi ja rahi hun mai?!
soye armaan jag uthe,
chhupkar dilne li angdai,
man chillana chah raha-
'thaharo,main aa rahi hun!'
lekin........
ye mere sapne nazuk hain bahut,
kahin tut to na jayenge ye sajne se pahle?!

This one I had also written,when I was 16 years old! 😳

awww..another one...wonderful as always😳 ......and you wrote this when u were 16😲😲...you should publish your poetry book..it will be the bestseller😳

That poem was just ahhhhhh, so beautiful! 😳🤗

You have ended your week as BKB perfectly 😳
Thanks soooo much for your time Vimmiiii didiii 🤗

Stay tuned for the next! 😊