You're My Life!! [Bonus Chapter - Page 74 [25/11/15] {COMPLETED}

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sushmakryan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

update soon ya cant wait to read more

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sushmakryan

@sushmakryan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

i dont no how many times i have a read it ya write it has ff please

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Kays94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

dudeee

i love the dialogues in every update of yours!!! just fabulous as always!

Sorry for the late reply, just finished my exams a few days ago!!!!

and sorry for the short reply... but i can't wait to read more!

and plzzz update my fav story as well... thank you love!

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Riddhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Chapter ~ 8

Just A I Moved My Head To Place It On The Lap Of The Person Sitting Next To Me, I Could Hear Him Mumble "Is She Awake?"

But I Still Pretended To Sleep.

I Could Feel His Hand Caressing My Hairs. And He Just Leaned In To Kiss My Forehead. He Whispered "I Missed You,And Now Finally We'll Be Together Forever In Next Few Days..."

"I Missed You Too..." I Hugged Him Really Tight, To Which He Was Startled.

"Jeevs? What's Wrong? Virat Informed Me That You Didn't Have Your Dinner Also...Are You Feeling Sick Or Something?" He Placed His Hand On My Forehead...

"No Viren...I'm Okay..." I Said While Sitting Up.

"Okay! But Why Did You Go To Your Friend's Place?"

I Was Silent, I Didn't Wanted To Say Anything, Just Wanted To Stay Calm And Hug Someone. So I Tightened The Grip Over Him.

He Pulled Apart Glanced At Me For A While. Than He Just Hugged Me Back.

"Worried About How Are You Gonna Bid Adieu To Your Family?" He Said While He's Hand Roamed My Hairs.

"Yes. Very Much..." I Said Almost Breaking Down.

"Ssshhh...Calm Down Jeevika. Please. Relax. You Can Meet Them Whenever You Want Hainnaa? Then Why Are You Getting Upset?"

"I Don't Know...But I Just Feel So..."

"It's Okay...I Understand...Just Calm Down Now...?"

I Had Stopped Crying By Now...But Still Rested My Head On Viren's Torso.

"Viren...How Did You Know Why I Was Sad? I Didn't Share It With You?"

"Jeevika...Well If You Can Take Care Of Me Even When You're Far, I Can't Even Understand You!?"

"Ahaan!" 😊 "I Love You"

"Really Now? ...A Few Hours Ago When I Called Somebody, That Somebody Sadi 'I Hate You!!' So When Did This Hate Turn Into Love?"

I Hit Him Lightly On His Arms "Shut Up Mr. Vadhera! And Now Get Out Of My Room! What If Someone Sees You Here?"

"What If Someone Sees Me Here? Huh?!? I'm You Fiance And You're My Soon To Be Wife...What If We Stay In One Room!? What's So Bad In It Hmm?"

"Can You Just Stop All Your Dirty Thoughts And Get Out Of The Room!?"

"What Dirty Thoughts? And There's No Way I'm Going Out! I've Seen You After One Whole Month!" He Said Making His Grip Firm Over My Waist.

He Placed A Kiss On My Forehead Again And We Were Off For The Night.

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Sorry For Short Update! 🤢

Take Care All!! 😊

Edited by Protego_Maxima - 10 years ago

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millee18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

res <3
#unres
I m first...
yippeee...
I loved it...
my favorite story frm all of urs..
it's so so so phenomenal
u wrote brilliantly
plzzz do cont soon

Edited by millee18 - 11 years ago

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Hajra

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Awwwieee virika are so defying cute

And Riddhi you know it's one of my favourite story

I loved the update

Their understanding ❤️

You've portrait it beautifully

Cont wait got the next update please update soon

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sumayyah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

res
unres
soo gud
but short
amazing
loved it total
fabulous
superb
thnx for the pm
continue soon

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sushmakryan

@sushmakryan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

awesome update how viren care about jeevika and she get out my room so cute continue soon thanks for the pm

Edited by arshiasushma - 11 years ago

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aayushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

yup it was too short
but was gr8
god how can u write so well
its perfectly amazing
viren knows jeevika's feelings very nicely even she didnt told him
love the bonding
aww jeevika is sad
it was just amazingly written u give us all funny+emotions update
just flawless
plz make it big from next time
i really want to read more n more
continue soon
thank u for the update😊